Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFDY3NFZTE1G96B1QCRTDRS

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1m 55s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
I fumbled the third deadbolt, the one that always stuck, and hauled the door open, a half-squeezed lemon in one hand, ready to chew out Eva for forgetting her keys again. She’d run out ten minutes prior to stock up on salt and iron filings, said she’d spotted Evan’s beat-up Ford Fiesta parked three streets over, and we needed to reinforce the wards before he tracked her here. The lemon dripped sour juice down my left wrist, seeping into the thin fabric of my hoodie, and it wasn’t until I lifted my head that I realised the man on the threshold wasn’t Eva. Platinum blond hair, slicked back so tight it pulled at the roots of his sideburns. A tailored charcoal suit, no wrinkle in the trousers, no smudge on the polished leather boots. An ivory-handled cane planted firm in the centre of the hallway, the carved raven at its handle glinting in the strip light from the landing. Lucien Moreau. The man who’d left a crumpled scrap of notebook paper on my kitchen counter two months prior, scrawled in his sharp, slanted handwriting: I can’t put you in danger. Don’t look for me. I hadn’t heard from him since. I gripped the lemon hard enough for the rind to split. “You’ve got the wrong flat.” “I don’t.” His voice was low, rough around the edges from the Marseille accent he never quite lost, and one heterochromatic eye, the warm amber one, flicked past my shoulder to the tabby cat that trotted out of the flat’s front room to rub against his boot. Ptolemy, Eva’s overgrown barn cat that hated every stranger that crossed the threshold, was purring so loud I could hear it from the door. “Eva borrowed three grimoires from me last month. I came to collect them. And to talk to you.” I stepped back, unable to block the door forever when the couple that ran the curry house below trundled past with a stack of takeaway boxes, side-eyeing the stranger in the suit. I hauled the door shut behind him, slamming each deadbolt home one by one, the loud clicks echoing off the walls lined with stacked books and scrolls. Eva’s flat was never less than cluttered, every surface covered in half-written notes, yellowed parchment, mugs of cold tea that had been left to stew for days. The smell of garam masala and cumin seeped up through the floorboards, thick enough to cling to my clothes, and I wiped the leftover lemon juice off my wrist, the crescent scar there peeking out from the sleeve of my hoodie for half a second. I saw Lucien’s eyes lock on it. He’d traced that scar once, late one night in his flat in Shoreditch, his thumb brushing the raised skin while he asked me how I’d gotten it. I’d told him about falling off my bike at ten, splitting my wrist open on a rusted drain, and he’d laughed, said I’d always been reckless, even then. That night felt like a lifetime ago. “Eva’s not due back for another twenty minutes. You can wait, but I’m not letting you leave with those grimoires unless she says so. She’s been poring over them for weeks.” I nodded at the stack of leather-bound books on the coffee table, their spines cracked and stained with old ink. “You can put your cane down. No one’s going to stab you in Eva’s living room.” He didn’t move the cane. He leaned his weight on it slightly, his boots sinking into the threadbare rug that covered the floorboards, and shrugged out of his suit jacket, draping it over the arm of the lumpy sofa. “I’m not here for the grimoires first, Rory. I’m here to warn you. Evan turned up at Golden Empress last Tuesday, asked Yu-Fei where you lived. Said he was your brother, here to collect an old box of things you’d left at your parents’.” I froze mid-step toward the kettle, my hand brushing the cold ceramic. I’d moved to London to get away from Evan. I’d changed my number, deleted all my social media, taken a job that didn’t list my name anywhere public, and I’d thought I’d escaped him. The first time he’d hit me, it had been over a forgotten dinner reservation. The last time, it had been because I’d tried to leave. I’d fled Cardiff in the middle of the night, Eva waiting down the street with a boot full of my clothes, and I’d never looked back. “How do you know that?” My voice came out sharper than I meant it, and I turned to face him, my arms crossed over my chest. “You vanished. You didn’t answer a single text, you didn’t leave a number, you acted like I never existed. And suddenly you’re keeping tabs on who comes into my work? That’s rich.” “I couldn’t stay away.” He stepped forward, the cane tapping once on the floor, and his black eye, the one that always looked like it held smoke, fixed on mine. “There was a coven of blood witches after me that month. They’d killed a contact of mine in Paris, taken her daughter to get to me. I couldn’t let them get their hands on anyone that mattered to me. I couldn’t let them get their hands on you. Leaving was the only way to keep you safe.” “Safe?” I laughed, and it came out raw, hurt. “I was safe until Evan turned up. I was fine until I had to look over my shoulder every time I left my flat. You left me alone to deal with that, Lucien. You got to play the mysterious martyr, and I got to sit in my tiny room above Silas’ bar, wondering what I’d done to make you leave. That’s not safe. That’s abandoned.” He closed the gap between us, and I could smell his cologne, sandalwood and old cigar smoke, the same scent that had clung to my sheets for weeks after he left. He lifted a hand, brushed a strand of black hair that had fallen in my face behind my ear, and his palm lingered on my cheek, warm and calloused from years of handling the blade hidden in his cane. “I’m sorry. I thought if I stayed away, you’d never have to deal with anything worse than late delivery shifts and Eva’s terrible cooking. I was wrong. I want to fix that. I want to help you with Evan. I want to stay.” I leaned into his touch, my eyes burning, and for a second all the anger, all the hurt, melted away. I’d missed him. I’d missed the way he listened to me rant about the wasted years I spent on pre-law, the way he brought me hot chocolate from the corner shop down the street from my flat every Sunday, the way he laughed at my terrible jokes about Cardiff’s terrible weather. I’d missed us. I lifted a hand to rest on his wrist, and I opened my mouth to say I wanted that too, when a loud, heavy bang shook the front door. The deadbolts rattled in their frames. Ptolemy bolted from the window, hissing, and hid under the sofa. A voice I’d spent a year trying to forget boomed through the wood, thick with the Cardiff valley accent I’d grown up with, drunk and angry and all too familiar. “Rory? I know you’re in there. I saw the light turn on. You can’t hide from me forever.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1252
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1252
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"flicked"
2"echoing"
3"traced"
4"weight"
5"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences43
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences43
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences52
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1252
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount911
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Evan2
Ford1
Fiesta1
Moreau1
Marseille1
Ptolemy2
Lucien2
Shoreditch1
London1
Cardiff3
Sunday1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Evan"
2"Fiesta"
3"Moreau"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Shoreditch"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a lifetime ago"
1"looked like it held smoke, fixed on mine"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1252
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"traced that scar"
69.89% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean78.25
std30.88
cv0.395
sampleLengths
0103
197
216
389
4131
569
667
783
897
958
1087
1174
12113
13103
1447
1518
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences43
matches
0"been left"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs162
matches
0"was purring"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount918
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.023965141612200435
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0010893246187363835
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences52
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences52
mean24.08
std15.21
cv0.632
sampleLengths
031
137
235
315
416
525
62
729
84
96
1011
115
1247
1324
1418
1532
1627
1727
1845
197
2027
2128
227
2351
2416
255
2634
2744
2812
299
3025
3114
3211
3326
3426
3532
3630
3757
389
3965
4031
4139
4243
4320
443
4548
463
4729
486
4911
29.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3269230769230769
totalSentences52
uniqueOpeners17
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences42
matches
0"I fumbled the third deadbolt,"
1"She’d run out ten minutes"
2"I hadn’t heard from him"
3"I gripped the lemon hard"
4"His voice was low, rough"
5"I stepped back, unable to"
6"I hauled the door shut"
7"I saw Lucien’s eyes lock"
8"He’d traced that scar once,"
9"I’d told him about falling"
10"I nodded at the stack"
11"He didn’t move the cane."
12"He leaned his weight on"
13"I froze mid-step toward the"
14"I’d moved to London to"
15"I’d changed my number, deleted"
16"I’d fled Cardiff in the"
17"My voice came out sharper"
18"He stepped forward, the cane"
19"I laughed, and it came"
ratio0.643
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences42
matches
0"I fumbled the third deadbolt,"
1"She’d run out ten minutes"
2"The lemon dripped sour juice"
3"Platinum blond hair, slicked back"
4"A tailored charcoal suit, no"
5"An ivory-handled cane planted firm"
6"The man who’d left a"
7"I hadn’t heard from him"
8"I gripped the lemon hard"
9"His voice was low, rough"
10"Ptolemy, Eva’s overgrown barn cat"
11"I stepped back, unable to"
12"I hauled the door shut"
13"Eva’s flat was never less"
14"The smell of garam masala"
15"I saw Lucien’s eyes lock"
16"He’d traced that scar once,"
17"I’d told him about falling"
18"That night felt like a"
19"I nodded at the stack"
ratio0.976
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The man who’d left a crumpled scrap of notebook paper on my kitchen counter two months prior, scrawled in his sharp, slanted handwriting: I can’t put you in dan…"
1"Ptolemy, Eva’s overgrown barn cat that hated every stranger that crossed the threshold, was purring so loud I could hear it from the door."
2"I stepped back, unable to block the door forever when the couple that ran the curry house below trundled past with a stack of takeaway boxes, side-eyeing the st…"
3"Eva’s flat was never less than cluttered, every surface covered in half-written notes, yellowed parchment, mugs of cold tea that had been left to stew for days."
4"He leaned his weight on it slightly, his boots sinking into the threadbare rug that covered the floorboards, and shrugged out of his suit jacket, draping it ove…"
5"I’d changed my number, deleted all my social media, taken a job that didn’t list my name anywhere public, and I’d thought I’d escaped him."
6"He closed the gap between us, and I could smell his cologne, sandalwood and old cigar smoke, the same scent that had clung to my sheets for weeks after he left."
7"He lifted a hand, brushed a strand of black hair that had fallen in my face behind my ear, and his palm lingered on my cheek, warm and calloused from years of h…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"I laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.143
75.3840%