Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFDYQ5HS65JK0YQ2J05XW0P

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The second deadbolt wouldn't turn. Aurora put her shoulder into it, the cool brass digging into her palm. The scent of stale curry from the flat below crept under the door, a thick, greasy whisper in the narrow hallway. “Come on,” she muttered, twisting the key with a sharp jerk. It gave with a metallic shriek. She slotted the last bolt home and leant her forehead against the peeling paint. Silence. A heavy, listening sort of quiet that pressed in on her ears. The kind of quiet that followed a storm. Her flat felt different since she’d returned. Books still toppled in precarious stacks from every surface, scrolls tied with faded ribbon spilling from a cardboard box by the sofa. Eva’s research. A chaotic, scholarly nest that always smelled of old paper and Earl Grey. But tonight, the air tasted thin. Charged. She’d felt it the moment she’d stepped in, a prickle at the nape of her neck that had nothing to do with the damp London chill. She pushed off the door and scanned the living room. Nothing moved. Ptolemy, Eva’s fat tabby, was a fluffy lump asleep on a pile of vellum. Normal. So why did the space between her shoulder blades itch? A floorboard groaned in the bedroom. Rory’s breath stilled. She moved without thinking, her worn trainers silent on the threadbare carpet. Her hand closed around the first solid object she reached—a heavy, brass-backed bookend shaped like a griffin. Cold and solid in her grip. She rounded the doorway. And stopped. He stood by the window, a dark silhouette against the grimy glass and the sodium-orange glow of Brick Lane. Impeccable charcoal suit, not a crease out of place. Platinum hair slicked back from a face that could have been carved from marble, if marble had one amber eye and one black. Lucien Moreau held a thin, leather-bound journal loosely in one gloved hand. Eva’s journal. The sight of him stole the air from her lungs, replaced by a hot, familiar ache. It had been eight months. Eight months since she’d slammed a door in his face and sworn she’d never see him again. “Security’s still a joke,” he said, his voice a low, French-accented rumble that seemed to vibrate in the small room. He didn’t turn. “Three deadbolts and a cat. I’m insulted.” “What the hell are you doing here, Lucien?” The name tasted like rust and old fury on her tongue. She lowered the bookend, but didn’t put it down. He finally turned. The heterochromatic eyes swept over her, taking in the faded band t-shirt, the smudge of engine grease on her cheek from a bike repair, the defensive set of her jaw. A faint, unreadable smile touched his lips. “You look tired, Rory.” “Answer the question.” “Eva’s missing.” He held up the journal. “This is the third time this month she’s vanished without a word. Not even a cryptic text. That’s not like her.” The protective spike in her chest dulled the edge of her anger. Eva. Her best friend, her saviour, the one who’d dragged her out of Cardiff and into this mad, secret world. “She’s on a dig. Suffolk. Some Anglo-Saxon burial site. She told me.” “She told you a lie.” He moved towards the desk, his ivory-handled cane making a soft tap-tap on the floorboards. He laid the journal down. “The dig was cancelled three weeks ago. Funding dried up. I checked.” “And you just happened to be checking up on my friends? How thoughtful.” The sarcasm was a shield. Seeing him here, in Eva’s space, felt like a violation. He was a creature of sleek city shadows and whispered deals, not cramped flats that smelled of take-away. “I check on everyone who owes me a favour. Eva owes several.” He gestured to a scroll half-unfurled on the desk. It showed a complex, circular symbol she didn’t recognise. “This is her current project. Not Anglo-Saxon. It’s Avarian. My father’s realm.” The word ‘Avaros’ hung between them, heavy and dangerous. His demon heritage. The part of him she’d tried, and failed, to ignore. “So she’s researching demons. That’s her job. She’s a folklorist.” “She’s researching a way to sever a binding.” His amber eye seemed to glow in the dim light. “A specific binding. One tied to a bloodline.” The penny dropped, cold and sharp in her gut. “Yours.” “The Moreau line. A… familial obligation. Old magic.” He tapped the cane against the floor. “Someone wants to cut the tie. Permanently. And they’ve hired a specialist to do it. A specialist who doesn’t leave loose ends.” “And you think Eva is a loose end?” “I think she found something she shouldn’t have. And now she’s gone.” He finally closed the distance between them. The scent of him hit her—sandalwood, cold rain, and something darker, like embers. It triggered a cascade of memories she’d fought to bury: the safety of his arms, the devastating hurt of his betrayal. “I think you might be next.” She refused to step back. Let him see her flinch. “Why? I’m just a delivery girl.” “A delivery girl who lives in the flat of the missing researcher, who is the only person Eva trusts with her work.” His gaze dropped to the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, visible where her sleeve had ridden up. “And who has a rather unique… resonance.” Her hand jerked down, covering the scar. A childhood accident, they’d always said. But in this world, accidents were rarely just accidents. “You don’t get to come here and talk about my ‘resonance’. Not after what you did.” The smile vanished. For a second, the polished fixer slipped, and she saw something raw and weary in his eyes. “What I did, I did to protect you.” “You lied to me. You used me as bait in your little underworld games and you *lied*.” “I omitted. There’s a difference.” “The difference is I trusted you!” The words burst out, loud in the quiet flat. On the sofa, Ptolemy lifted his head, blinked, and went back to sleep. Lucien was still for a long moment. He reached into his inner jacket pocket, not for a weapon, but for a slim silver cigarette case. He didn’t open it. Just held it, his thumb tracing the engraving. “Trust is a luxury in my world, Aurora. One I couldn’t afford. But my need to keep you breathing was not a lie.” He used her full name. He never did that. “What do you want, Lucien?” “Your help. You have access to her notes, her digital trails. You know her patterns. I have resources she doesn’t. We find her, we stop whoever this is.” He finally opened the case, took out a cigarette, but didn’t light it. “And then you can go back to hating me.” The offer hung there, practical and dangerous. Find Eva. Work with the one person who’d shattered her fledgling belief that this new life could be safe, could be simple. The man who haunted her quieter moments. She should say no. Slap the cigarette from his hand and throw him out. But the image of Eva, stubborn and brilliant, stumbling into something too big, flashed in her mind. Eva, who’d given her a home when she had none. “If I help,” she said, her voice steady now, cold. “It’s for Eva. Not for you. And you stay out of my head. No charming silences, no cryptic warnings. We work, and we’re done.” “Agreed.” He placed the unlit cigarette between his lips. A concession. She’d never seen him smoke. “Where did she keep her backup drives?” Rory moved past him, their shoulders almost brushing. She felt the heat of him, a stark contrast to the chilled air of the flat. She knelt by the ancient, wheezing desktop computer in the corner and pulled a external hard drive from a hollowed-out copy of *Beowulf*. “Here. But she encrypted everything. Triple layer.” He took the drive, his gloved fingers brushing hers. A jolt, small and electric, shot up her arm. She snatched her hand back. “I’ll take care of it.” He pocketed the drive. “I’ll be in touch. Keep the deadbolts locked. All three.” He turned to leave, a shadow detaching itself from the room. At the doorway, he paused. “Rory.” “What?” He didn’t look back. “It’s good to see you. Even like this.” Then he was gone, the soft click of the front door closing behind him as final as a lock snapping shut. Rory stood in the sudden, absolute silence. The flat felt emptier than before, his presence still clinging to the air like expensive cologne. On the sofa, Ptolemy stretched and began to purr, oblivious. She looked down at her hand. The one he’d touched. It trembled, just once. Not from fear. From a terrifying, treacherous flicker of relief.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The name tasted like [like]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.311
leniency0.622
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.044
96.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1476
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1476
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"marble"
count2
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"complex"
count1
10
word"resonance"
count2
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"shattered"
count1
13
word"stark"
count1
14
word"chilled"
count1
15
word"electric"
count1
16
word"trembled"
count1
17
word"treacherous"
count1
18
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"silence"
2"chaotic"
3"charged"
4"chill"
5"scanned"
6"marble"
7"familiar"
8"unreadable"
9"complex"
10"resonance"
11"tracing"
12"shattered"
13"stark"
14"chilled"
15"electric"
16"trembled"
17"treacherous"
18"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
91.38% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1474
ratio0.001
matches
0"lied"
1"Beowulf"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1048
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Earl1
Grey1
London1
Eva8
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
French-accented1
Cardiff1
Seeing1
Ptolemy3
Rory3
persons
0"Earl"
1"Grey"
2"Eva"
3"Moreau"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"rumble that seemed to vibrate in the small room"
1"tasted like rust and old fury on her tong"
2"felt like a violation"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.678
wordCount1474
matches
0"not for a weapon, but for a slim silver cigarette case"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean28.9
std17.97
cv0.622
sampleLengths
039
152
277
337
46
542
62
765
838
930
1028
1144
123
1328
1444
1537
1646
1742
1822
1910
2026
2110
2237
238
2459
2516
2648
2738
2828
2917
305
3128
3260
339
345
3550
3636
3741
3834
3923
4047
417
4223
4319
4417
451
4612
4721
4833
4917
98.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"been carved"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences140
ratio0.014
matches
0"Her hand closed around the first solid object she reached—a heavy, brass-backed bookend shaped like a griffin."
1"The scent of him hit her—sandalwood, cold rain, and something darker, like embers."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1031
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"thin, leather-bound journal"
1"low, French-accented rumble"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02521823472356935
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005819592628516004
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean10.53
std7.41
cv0.704
sampleLengths
05
113
221
311
46
514
61
712
88
97
1022
112
1213
136
141
1526
1610
172
1814
191
2010
216
223
2312
2417
256
264
272
2819
299
3023
3112
322
3316
345
3517
3620
373
387
3919
409
413
4230
437
444
453
467
4721
4812
491
58.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.37857142857142856
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners53
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"Just held it, his thumb"
1"Then he was gone, the"
ratio0.02
28.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences100
matches
0"she muttered, twisting the key"
1"It gave with a metallic"
2"She slotted the last bolt"
3"Her flat felt different since"
4"She’d felt it the moment"
5"She pushed off the door"
6"She moved without thinking, her"
7"Her hand closed around the"
8"She rounded the doorway."
9"He stood by the window,"
10"It had been eight months."
11"he said, his voice a"
12"He didn’t turn."
13"She lowered the bookend, but"
14"He finally turned."
15"He held up the journal"
16"Her best friend, her saviour,"
17"He moved towards the desk,"
18"He laid the journal down."
19"He was a creature of"
ratio0.48
50.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences100
matches
0"The second deadbolt wouldn't turn."
1"Aurora put her shoulder into"
2"The scent of stale curry"
3"she muttered, twisting the key"
4"It gave with a metallic"
5"She slotted the last bolt"
6"A heavy, listening sort of"
7"The kind of quiet that"
8"Her flat felt different since"
9"Books still toppled in precarious"
10"A chaotic, scholarly nest that"
11"She’d felt it the moment"
12"She pushed off the door"
13"Ptolemy, Eva’s fat tabby, was"
14"A floorboard groaned in the"
15"Rory’s breath stilled."
16"She moved without thinking, her"
17"Her hand closed around the"
18"She rounded the doorway."
19"He stood by the window,"
ratio0.82
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He was a creature of sleek city shadows and whispered deals, not cramped flats that smelled of take-away."
1"Work with the one person who’d shattered her fledgling belief that this new life could be safe, could be simple."
2"Eva, who’d given her a home when she had none."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice steady now, cold"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.044
84.3211%