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Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFE4QHHHXMZWDNHYRTC9SH7
Run Details
Model:
Stealth: Healer Alpha
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
23.1s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
88.56%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
34.21%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
85.32%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
96.84%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
0.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
68.65%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
47.40%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
83.33%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
43.33%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
26.67%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
41.67%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
91.18%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
80.2386%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
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The third deadbolt refused to
turn.
Aurora’s fingers slicked on the
cold brass.
A second, harder jiggle, and
the stubborn mechanism finally surrendered with a grating clunk. “Silas, if you’re drunk again, I swear to—”
The door swung inward on
a sliver of hallway light, and the breath died in her throat. Not Silas. Not a neighbour. Not any of the low-life patrons from the bar below.
Lucien Moreau filled the narrow
doorframe, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate despite the late hour. One hand rested on the
familiar
ivory handle of his cane, the other braced against the doorjamb, trapping her.
The heterochromatic gaze, amber and
black, swept past her into the cluttered flat before locking onto hers.
He smelled of cold night
air, expensive cologne, and the faint, metallic tang that always clung to him—the scent of ozone before a lightning strike. “Rory,”
he said, the name a
smooth, low vibration. Not a question. A claiming.
She gripped the door handle
behind her, her knuckles white. “The shop’s closed.”
Her voice came out steadier
than she felt. “Even for ghosts.”
A corner of his mouth
twitched. Not quite a smile. “I am not a ghost. Merely… overdue for a visit.” He moved to step inside. She didn’t budge. The space between them crackled, thick with three years of
unspoken
accusations and a pull that still made the hairs on her arms stand up. “You don’t get to just—” she started. “I do.”
He applied the slightest pressure
to the door, and her grip, weakened by shock, slipped.
He was inside, the door
closing behind him with a soft, definitive *
click
*. The triple deadbolts, now engaged,
felt like a cage
. “We have a problem that concerns
us
both. And you have been exceedingly difficult to locate.”
Her flat felt smaller, the
chaotic
stacks of Eva’s research notes and occult scrolls closing in.
Ptolemy, the tabby, leaped from
a precarious teetering pile of books, tail flicking.
He wound once around Lucien’s
ankles before retreating to the safety of the sofa, a low growl rumbling in his chest. “You could have called,”
she said, turning to face
him fully.
She wore worn jeans and
a thin black jumper, her feet bare on the cool laminate.
He was a sculpture of
expensive restraint in her living room. The contrast was a physical ache. “Telephones are for amateurs and lovers.”
He tapped the ivory handle
of his cane. “And you, *
ma chérie
*, are neither. Not anymore.” The barb found its mark.
She crossed her arms, the
crescent scar on her left wrist a pale line against her skin. “What do you want, Lucien?” He didn’t answer immediately.
Instead, he glided—there was no
other word for it—past her, his presence sucking the oxygen from the room.
He examined a chaotic desk
buried under papers, his gloved fingers hovering over a diagram of interlocking circles and sigils. “Eva’s research. Still unfinished, I see. She leaves holes a lorry could drive through.” “She’s getting close.” Defensiveness flared, hot and sharp. “Closer than your kind ever wanted.” He turned, his expression
unreadable
. “My kind? You paint with a broad brush, Rory. I am half-Avarosian. My mother was human. I understand nuance. Eva does not. Her ‘close’ will get her killed.” The words landed like stones in a still pond. The fear she’d been suppressing for weeks, a cold knot beneath her ribs, tightened. “Why are you here?”
she whispered, the fight draining
out. “I received word this evening.”
He moved toward the grimy
window overlooking the neon-lit chaos of Brick Lane. “A collector in the City, a Mr. Silas Thorne, has acquired a rather specific artefact. A clay tablet, Babylonian. Cuneiform
etched
with protective wards that have been… inverted.” Eva had been looking for that tablet. It was the key to her latest theory, the missing piece. “And?” Aurora’s heart hammered against her ribs. “And Thorne is not a scholar. He is a broker. A middleman.” Lucien glanced back at her, his amber eye seeming to glow in the dim light. “He has a buyer. Not academic. Not curious. Hungry.” “Who?” “That is the problem.” He moved to the centre of the room, his cane tapping a slow, deliberate rhythm on the floor. “The buyer’s agents have already made their approach. Thorne, being a creature of commerce, has set an auction. Private. Invitational only. Tomorrow night.” “You want me to steal it.” The realisation wasn’t a question. It was a cold splash of dread. The last time she’d done a job with Lucien, she’d left with more scars than the one on her wrist and a hollow space in her chest where trust used to be. “I want *
us
* to retrieve it.” He corrected
softly
, closing the distance between them in two strides. He smelled of that dangerous ozone scent again. “You are the only person in London who has read Eva’s notes, who understands the ward sequence on the tablet. I am the only person who can get
us
an invitation to Thorne’s party.” “There will be others. Your people. Your competitors.” She hated how her gaze dropped to his lips, full and curved in that perennial, knowing almost-smile. Hated the jolt it sent through her. “Which is
precisely
why I require your particular brand of quick, out-of-the-box thinking.” He was closer now. The heat of him radiated, a
stark
contrast to the flat’s
chill
. “Thorne’s auction is held in his penthouse above his gallery in Mayfair. Biometric security. Pressure-sensitive floors. Magical wards on the doors.” “You’ve already been casing it.” “Always.” He reached out,
not to touch her, but to pluck a specific scroll from a pile beside her head
. The movement brought him so near she could see the flecks of gold in his amber iris. “The wards respond to intent. Malicious intent triggers an alarm. But clever intent… curious intent… that often goes unnoticed.” She remembered his hands guiding hers over a blueprint once, his breath on her neck, explaining the weak point in a security grid. The memory was vivid, visceral. She stepped back, bumping into the desk. Pens clattered to the floor. “Why me? Truly?” She hated the waver in her voice. “Because Thorne trusts me as a
potential
buyer. He will never suspect my associate of being a part-time delivery girl with a penchant for breaking and entering.” The insult
was delivered
without inflection, a simple statement of fact. “And because, Rory…” He waited until her bright blue eyes met his again. “Because the last time we worked together, you did not hesitate. You did not falter. You saw the pattern no one else saw and you led
us
out alive. I need that mind. I need that nerve. Again.” The appeal was
not to her heart, but to her pride
.
To the part of her
that had revelled in the adrenaline, in outsmarting ancient traps and supernatural enforcers. The part she’d buried under university textbooks and delivery schedules. “And if I say no?” He unbuttoned his suit jacket, a slow, deliberate motion. From an inner pocket, he withdrew a small, glossy photograph and placed it on the desk beside her hand. It was a surveillance shot. Grainy, taken from a distance. Eva, her face pale with worry, hunched over a table in a small, sunlit café. She
was staring
at her phone, unaware. “Eva is getting close,” Lucien said, his voice dropping to a murmur that slid under her skin. “And when she gets close, she becomes visible. To everyone. This was taken this morning. By one of the buyer’s proxies. They are watching her.” The cold knot in Aurora’s chest turned to ice. The world narrowed to the grainy image of her friend’s face, the
weight
of Lucien’s words, and the undeniable, awful truth. He hadn’t come just for the tablet. He’d come because Eva’s life was now on the line, and he was the only one who knew it, the only one with the connections to mitigate the threat. He
was offering
a lifeline. And he knew, with that infuriating certainty, that she would have to take it. Her gaze lifted from the photo to his face. The amusement
was gone
, replaced by a
grave
intensity
. He
was not trying
to seduce her. He
was not playing
a game. This was business. The deadliest kind. “Fine,” she breathed, the word tasting like ash. “But I have terms.” A
flicker
of something—relief? respect?—crossed his features. “Of course you do.” “You don’t go near Eva. You don’t contact her. I handle that.” “Agreed.” “And the payout. For the tablet. It goes to me. To help her.” “Naturally.” He buttoned his jacket again, the image of professionalism restored. “The auction is tomorrow night at nine. I will send a car at seven. Dress for a cocktail party. Try not to look like you intend to rob the host.” He turned and walked to the door, his movements fluid and silent. His hand rested on the knob. “And Rory?” She didn’t answer, her body rigid. He glanced back, that
unreadable
look in his mismatched eyes once more. “It is good to see you. Even under such… grim circumstances.” He
was gone
. The
click
of the deadbolts turning from the outside
echoed
in the sudden,
oppressive
silence
. Aurora stood frozen in the middle of her
chaotic
living room. The photograph lay on her desk. The tabby, Ptolemy, jumped up beside it, purring obliviously. The scent of expensive cologne and ozone lingered in the air, a ghost of the man who had just blown her
carefully
constructed
life apart. She picked up the photo. Eva’s worried face stared back.
Then she turned to her
laptop, pushed aside a stack of Eva’s notes, and
began to
type. Search terms: *
Silas Thorne gallery Mayfair security system
*. *
Babylonian ward inversion counter-spells
*. *
Cocktail dress, practical shoes
*. The flat was silent, but inside her, a storm
was gathering
. The old adrenaline, the deadly, exhilarating rhythm of the game,
was already beginning
to thrum in her veins. He was right. She had not hesitated then. And she wouldn’t now. Not when Eva was in the crosshairs. A soft *
ping
* from her phone on the sofa. She picked it up. A new message from an unknown number. One line. *Wear the black sheath. It has pockets for the micro-tools.* Lucien. Already
anticipating
her next move. A shiver, equal parts dread and that old,
familiar
pull,
traced
its way
down her spine
. The game was on.
created_at
"2026-03-11T21:51:43.184Z"
3/11/2026, 9:51:43 PM
model
"openrouter/healer-alpha"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
475
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
22985
tokens_prompt
4556
tokens_completion
3160
native_tokens_prompt
4155
native_tokens_completion
2669
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
420
native_tokens_cached
14
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0
router
(null)
provider_responses
(null)
user_agent
"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer
(null)
api_type
"completions"
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upstream_id
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total_cost
0
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Stealth"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
19
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Lucien glanced back [back]"
1
"He corrected softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences
51
tagDensity
0.373
leniency
0.745
rawRatio
0.105
effectiveRatio
0.078
88.56%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1748
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"softly"
count
1
1
adverb
"precisely"
count
1
2
adverb
"truly"
count
1
3
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
highlights
0
"softly"
1
"precisely"
2
"truly"
3
"carefully"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
34.21%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1748
totalAiIsms
23
found
0
word
"familiar"
count
2
1
word
"unspoken"
count
1
2
word
"chaotic"
count
3
3
word
"unreadable"
count
2
4
word
"etched"
count
1
5
word
"stark"
count
1
6
word
"chill"
count
1
7
word
"potential"
count
1
8
word
"weight"
count
1
9
word
"grave"
count
1
10
word
"intensity"
count
1
11
word
"flicker"
count
1
12
word
"echoed"
count
1
13
word
"oppressive"
count
1
14
word
"silence"
count
1
15
word
"constructed"
count
1
16
word
"anticipating"
count
1
17
word
"traced"
count
1
18
word
"down her spine"
count
1
highlights
0
"familiar"
1
"unspoken"
2
"chaotic"
3
"unreadable"
4
"etched"
5
"stark"
6
"chill"
7
"potential"
8
"weight"
9
"grave"
10
"intensity"
11
"flicker"
12
"echoed"
13
"oppressive"
14
"silence"
15
"constructed"
16
"anticipating"
17
"traced"
18
"down her spine"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
125
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
125
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
154
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
39
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
8
markdownWords
29
totalWords
1744
ratio
0.017
matches
0
"click"
1
"ma chérie"
2
"us"
3
"Silas Thorne gallery Mayfair security system"
4
"Babylonian ward inversion counter-spells"
5
"Cocktail dress, practical shoes"
6
"ping"
7
"Wear the black sheath. It has pockets for the micro-tools."
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
12
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
28
wordCount
1238
uniqueNames
11
maxNameDensity
0.57
worstName
"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Eva"
discoveredNames
Silas
2
Moreau
1
Eva
7
Lucien
7
Brick
1
Lane
1
Hated
1
Aurora
4
Ptolemy
2
Thorne
1
Mayfair
1
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Eva"
2
"Lucien"
3
"Aurora"
4
"Ptolemy"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
2
"Thorne"
3
"Mayfair"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
88
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"felt like a cage"
85.32%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
2
per1kWords
1.147
wordCount
1744
matches
0
"not to touch her, but to pluck a specific scroll from a pile beside her head"
1
"not to her heart, but to her pride"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
154
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
66
mean
26.42
std
18.01
cv
0.681
sampleLengths
0
27
1
8
2
17
3
15
4
76
5
14
6
24
7
20
8
33
9
7
10
55
11
50
12
44
13
22
14
27
15
56
16
14
17
33
18
23
19
10
20
46
21
18
22
7
23
36
24
1
25
45
26
50
27
59
28
32
29
50
30
5
31
56
32
40
33
10
34
41
35
10
36
38
37
39
38
5
39
28
40
32
41
42
42
66
43
19
44
37
45
12
46
11
47
12
48
1
49
13
96.84%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
125
matches
0
"was delivered"
1
"was gone"
2
"was gone"
0.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
6
totalVerbs
180
matches
0
"was staring"
1
"was offering"
2
"was not trying"
3
"was not playing"
4
"was gathering"
5
"was already beginning"
68.65%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
5
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
4
totalSentences
154
ratio
0.026
matches
0
"He smelled of cold night air, expensive cologne, and the faint, metallic tang that always clung to him—the scent of ozone before a lightning strike."
1
"Instead, he glided—there was no other word for it—past her, his presence sucking the oxygen from the room."
2
"A flicker of something—relief?"
3
"respect?—crossed his features."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1246
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
38
adverbRatio
0.030497592295345103
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.0072231139646869984
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
154
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
154
mean
11.32
std
7.88
cv
0.696
sampleLengths
0
6
1
7
2
14
3
8
4
17
5
2
6
3
7
10
8
15
9
19
10
17
11
25
12
9
13
3
14
2
15
10
16
11
17
3
18
6
19
4
20
10
21
5
22
3
23
25
24
7
25
17
26
13
27
9
28
16
29
16
30
13
31
21
32
11
33
16
34
11
35
6
36
14
37
8
38
5
39
17
40
5
41
4
42
18
43
20
44
14
45
8
46
6
47
5
48
28
49
9
47.40%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
12
diversityRatio
0.33116883116883117
totalSentences
154
uniqueOpeners
51
83.33%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
3
totalSentences
120
matches
0
"Instead, he glided—there was no"
1
"Then she turned to her"
2
"Already anticipating her next move."
ratio
0.025
43.33%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
53
totalSentences
120
matches
0
"He smelled of cold night"
1
"he said, the name a"
2
"She gripped the door handle"
3
"Her voice came out steadier"
4
"He moved to step inside."
5
"She didn’t budge."
6
"He applied the slightest pressure"
7
"He was inside, the door"
8
"Her flat felt smaller, the"
9
"He wound once around Lucien’s"
10
"she said, turning to face"
11
"She wore worn jeans and"
12
"He was a sculpture of"
13
"He tapped the ivory handle"
14
"She crossed her arms, the"
15
"He didn’t answer immediately."
16
"He examined a chaotic desk"
17
"He turned, his expression unreadable."
18
"she whispered, the fight draining"
19
"He moved toward the grimy"
ratio
0.442
26.67%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
104
totalSentences
120
matches
0
"The third deadbolt refused to"
1
"Aurora’s fingers slicked on the"
2
"A second, harder jiggle, and"
3
"The door swung inward on"
4
"Lucien Moreau filled the narrow"
5
"The heterochromatic gaze, amber and"
6
"He smelled of cold night"
7
"he said, the name a"
8
"She gripped the door handle"
9
"Her voice came out steadier"
10
"A corner of his mouth"
11
"He moved to step inside."
12
"She didn’t budge."
13
"The space between them crackled,"
14
"He applied the slightest pressure"
15
"He was inside, the door"
16
"The triple deadbolts, now engaged,"
17
"Her flat felt smaller, the"
18
"Ptolemy, the tabby, leaped from"
19
"He wound once around Lucien’s"
ratio
0.867
41.67%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
120
matches
0
"To the part of her"
ratio
0.008
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
42
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"To the part of her that had revelled in the adrenaline, in outsmarting ancient traps and supernatural enforcers."
1
"The scent of expensive cologne and ozone lingered in the air, a ghost of the man who had just blown her carefully constructed life apart."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
19
uselessAdditionCount
5
matches
0
"she said, turning to face him fully"
1
"she whispered, the fight draining out"
2
"Lucien glanced back, his amber eye seeming to glow in the dim light"
3
"He moved, his cane tapping a slow, deliberate rhythm on the floor"
4
"He buttoned, the image of professionalism restored"
91.18%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"she whispered (whisper)"
1
"He corrected softly (correct)"
2
"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences
51
tagDensity
0.118
leniency
0.235
rawRatio
0.5
effectiveRatio
0.118
80.2386%