Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFE5TNFK0THWARKB5872210

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Duration:
25.8s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest buzzed against the London drizzle, its light bleeding onto the wet pavement. Rory pushed through the door, the scent of stale beer and old wood wrapping around her. The place was a time capsule—maps and black-and-white photos papered the walls, the bar top worn smooth in front of the stools. She needed a drink. A shift at Yu-Fei’s had left her shoulders aching from the weight of carrier bags and the smell of soy sauce clung to her jacket. She slid onto a stool at the far end, away from the two suited men hunched over their whiskeys. The bartender, a new face with a pierced eyebrow, nodded at her. “What’ll it be?” “Gin and tonic, please. Small.” She placed her hands on the bar, the crescent scar on her left wrist catching the low light. She traced it with her thumb, a nervous habit from a childhood she could barely remember. A throat cleared beside her. “Still takes it with lime, I bet.” The voice was a stone dropped into a still pond. Rory’s head snapped to the right. The man sitting one stool over had been in shadow, watching the football match on the muted television above the back bar. He turned on his stool now, his hazel eyes catching the neon glow. The face was older, mapped with deeper lines, but the architecture was unmistakable. The grey-streaked auburn hair was cut shorter, the beard neatly trimmed, but it was the same sharp gaze that had once dissected her every choice during law tutorials. “Silas?” The word left her mouth on a breath. “In the flesh.” He smiled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. He lifted a hand, and a silver signet ring glinted on his right finger. “Though you can call me Si. Everyone does.” “You’re…” She faltered. The man she remembered was 21, perpetually restless, his mind always three moves ahead in a game no one else could see. This man was settled, solid. He leaned slightly on his left leg, a stiffness in the posture she didn’t recall. “You own this place?” “I do.” He gestured to the room. “Picked it for the décor. Reminded me of old briefing rooms.” The bartender set her drink down. She pushed it toward the center of the bar, closer to him. “Lime wedge, extra. Just like I always ordered.” “You didn’t answer.” Silas picked up his own glass—neat amber liquid, no ice. “You still take it with lime, Rory?” “I haven’t changed that much.” She reached for the drink, her fingers brushing the damp glass. “What are you doing here? I thought you were… I don’t know. Somewhere else. You just vanished after second year.” “Life has a habit of interrupting plans.” He took a slow sip. “I found other work. Less… academic.” “What work?” “Consulting.” He said it with a finality that was a door slamming shut. “You’re the one who disappeared. Eva said you’d gone to London after… after Cardiff.” “She worried.” Rory’s jaw tightened. She thought of Evan’s shadow stretching across their small flat, the way his words had left bruises no one could see. “I gave her reason to.” “You left.” “I left.” She met his gaze. The neon sign painted a green slash across his cheekbone. “It was necessary.” Silas nodded, his eyes holding hers. There was no pity in them, only a recognition. He’d seen things, too. She’d always known that about him. “Necessary things rarely feel good.” The silence stretched. The muted roar of the football crowd from the television was a poor substitute for conversation. She noticed the way his left hand rested on his thigh, not on the bar. “You’re hurt,” she said. Not a question. “An old injury.” He didn’t elaborate. He swirled the last of his whisky in the glass. “Your father. He’s still practicing?” The shift was so abrupt she blinked. “Yes. Still in Cardiff. Still in his chambers, buried in case law.” She’d just spoken to him on the phone last night. His voice had been tight with the same familiar disappointment she’d carried in her backpack all through university. “He thinks I’m wasting my life.” “Is that what you think?” She looked down at her hands, resting on the worn oak. She’d spent the afternoon weaving through traffic, her legs ached, her phone was full of delivery addresses. “I think it’s a life. It’s mine.” “It is.” He leaned forward, the motion causing him to wince slightly. He hid it well, but she caught the flicker. “I saw you once, about a year ago. You were running, crossing the street near Charing Cross. You had a stack of those insulated bags on your back. I almost called out.” “But you didn’t.” “You were moving too fast. Looked like you were outrunning something.” He set his empty glass down with a definitive click. “Then I saw the car you were dodging, and I thought, well, she’s always been good at that.” The barb was light, but it landed. She remembered a hundred times he’d watched her carve a new path through a problem, a crowd, a conversation. “Outrunning is what I’m good at, apparently.” He turned his signet ring on his finger. A slow, deliberate motion. “I opened this place three years ago. It’s a quiet life. Mostly.” “Mostly?” “Old friends drop in. People with memories. People with needs for discretion.” He glanced at the two men in suits, who had finished their drinks and were settling their tab. “The city still has shadows, Rory. You know that.” She did. She’d lived in one. One of the suited men approached Silas as he left. He nodded, a quiet acknowledgment passing between them. The man’s eyes flicked to Rory, curious, before he pushed out into the rainy night. “A customer?” Rory asked. “A friend. A man who appreciates a place where the lights are low and the conversations are lower.” He signaled the bartender for another drink, a silent question in his glance toward her. She shook her head. Her gin and tonic sat untouched, the lime wedge slowly sinking into the clear liquid. “You live close by?” he asked. “Above a bar,” she said, a wry smile touching her lips. “Not this one. Two streets over. The rent is reasonable.” “And you like living above a bar? The noise? The comings and goings?” “It’s anonymous. I like anonymous.” He accepted his fresh glass. “Anonymous has its uses. But it’s also a cage. A comfortable one, but a cage all the same.” She bristled. “Says the man who owns a bar plastered with the past.” “I’m not hiding from it.” He took a drink. “I’m curating it. There’s a difference. You tell me about your day, Rory. The delivery. What was the hardest part?” She wanted to refuse, to deflect. But his gaze was steady, waiting. “The hardest part?” She thought of the third-floor flat, the elderly woman who’d ordered a single meal and thanked her with a trembling hand. The fifth-floor office where a young man had shouted at her for being ten minutes late. The rain. “The hardest part is the doors. You knock on them, and you don’t know who’s on the other side. It could be anything. Anyone.” “And you knock anyway.” “I have to.” “Yes.” He nodded. “That’s the job. Knock anyway.” He fell silent, watching the condensation trail down the side of his glass. “I had a job once. Knocking on doors. Sometimes kicking them down. It changes the way you look at every door you ever see again.” She finally picked up her drink, the cold glass a shock against her palm. “Is that what this is? The bar? A way to look at doors differently?” “It’s a way to be behind them. For a change.” He leaned back, and the effort pulled at his left leg again. He saw her watching. “Prague. A long time ago. A door didn’t open the way it was supposed to. My knee was on the other side of the hinge.” She absorbed it. The unspoken things were heavier in the air: the years of silence, the lives lived in parallel, the diverging paths from a common, dusty starting point. “You were always so certain about things. At uni. The way you saw the world, it was all… patterns. Systems.” “The world is a system. A messy, broken, beautiful one.” He finished his second drink. “People are the variable. The part that shifts. You, Rory. You were supposed to be the barrister. Following your father’s footsteps into the courtroom.” “You were supposed to be a professor. The youngest at the university, they said.” He gave a short, dry laugh. “Plans. They’re like maps of cities you never visit. You end up in a different place entirely, and you have to learn the streets by walking them.” Her phone vibrated in her pocket. A notification from the delivery app. A new order waiting. She didn’t pull it out. She could feel the weight of the city waiting outside the door—the wet streets, the anonymous flat, the endless knocking. “You should go,” he said, reading her posture. “The city’s calling.” She slid from the stool, her legs stiff. She pulled a ten-pound note from her pocket and placed it on the bar, far more than the drink cost. He pushed it back toward her. “My hospitality. Consider it an… overdue overdue.” She hesitated, then tucked the note back into her pocket. “It was good to see you, Si.” “It was something to see you, Rory.” He remained seated, watching her. “The scar. On your wrist. It’s still there.” Her fingers went to it, involuntarily. “Some marks stay.” “They do.” His hazel eyes were unreadable in the low light. “Knock anyway.” She nodded, a gesture that felt too small for the space between them. She turned and walked toward the door, her reflection a ghost in the dark windows between the old photographs. The green neon sign pulsed as she pushed into the rain, the noise of Soho swallowing the quiet of The Raven’s Nest behind her. She didn’t look back. She knew he was still watching, cataloging, curating.
created_at"2026-03-11T21:52:19.133Z" 3/11/2026, 9:52:19 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She’d just [just]"
1"He leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.372
leniency0.744
rawRatio0.069
effectiveRatio0.051
91.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1704
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1704
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"comfortable"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"variable"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"unreadable"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"eyebrow"
2"traced"
3"silence"
4"familiar"
5"flicker"
6"flicked"
7"comfortable"
8"unspoken"
9"variable"
10"footsteps"
11"vibrated"
12"could feel"
13"unreadable"
14"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1701
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1057
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.47
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
London1
Yu-Fei1
Rory5
Evan1
Silas3
Soho1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1701
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean26.58
std20.77
cv0.782
sampleLengths
087
131
23
339
45
57
692
79
833
949
1018
1126
1220
1336
1418
152
1627
1731
182
1919
2030
2134
227
2321
2453
255
2635
2753
283
2939
3033
3124
321
3339
346
3533
364
3752
386
3921
4013
415
4223
4313
4429
4578
464
473
4846
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs171
matches
0"were settling"
1"was still watching"
86.47% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences152
ratio0.02
matches
0"The place was a time capsule—maps and black-and-white photos papered the walls, the bar top worn smooth in front of the stools."
1"“You didn’t answer.” Silas picked up his own glass—neat amber liquid, no ice."
2"She could feel the weight of the city waiting outside the door—the wet streets, the anonymous flat, the endless knocking."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1067
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02155576382380506
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.00937207122774133
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean11.19
std7.4
cv0.662
sampleLengths
020
116
222
34
425
519
612
73
823
916
105
117
1210
136
1422
1513
1613
1728
189
1911
2014
218
223
2322
245
2515
264
277
2811
296
3012
318
3213
337
3416
3520
3612
376
382
3913
4014
415
4221
435
442
456
4610
473
486
499
39.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3026315789473684
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount62
totalSentences96
matches
0"She needed a drink."
1"She slid onto a stool"
2"She placed her hands on"
3"She traced it with her"
4"He turned on his stool"
5"He smiled, but it didn’t"
6"He lifted a hand, and"
7"He leaned slightly on his"
8"He gestured to the room"
9"She pushed it toward the"
10"She reached for the drink,"
11"He took a slow sip"
12"He said it with a"
13"She thought of Evan’s shadow"
14"She met his gaze"
15"He’d seen things, too."
16"She’d always known that about"
17"She noticed the way his"
18"He didn’t elaborate"
19"He swirled the last of"
ratio0.646
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences96
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory pushed through the door,"
2"The place was a time"
3"She needed a drink."
4"A shift at Yu-Fei’s had"
5"She slid onto a stool"
6"The bartender, a new face"
7"She placed her hands on"
8"She traced it with her"
9"A throat cleared beside her."
10"The voice was a stone"
11"Rory’s head snapped to the"
12"The man sitting one stool"
13"He turned on his stool"
14"The face was older, mapped"
15"The grey-streaked auburn hair was"
16"The word left her mouth"
17"He smiled, but it didn’t"
18"He lifted a hand, and"
19"The man she remembered was"
ratio0.958
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The grey-streaked auburn hair was cut shorter, the beard neatly trimmed, but it was the same sharp gaze that had once dissected her every choice during law tuto…"
56.03% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She reached, her fingers brushing the damp glass"
1"He leaned, the motion causing him to wince slightly"
2"she said, a wry smile touching her lips"
3"He leaned back, and the effort pulled at his left leg again"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She faltered (falter)"
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.09
leniency0.179
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.026
80.7690%