Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFECXCB86NQ0AMB4RV1JB1G

Run Details

Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.000878
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Floodlights swung on swivel heads as Harlow stepped onto debris-strewn concrete. The platform beneath Camden smelled of ozone and rotting wood. Dust motes danced in the light. Her watch on the left wrist clicked. Ten minutes past six. She carried the weight of another piece of evidence in her mind. The body lay on the tracks. A man. Tucked into a heap of his coat. Harlow knelt. She propped her elbows on the cold rails. Her shadow stretched long across the rusted metal. The light reflected in her brown eyes. "There’s no blood here," Harlow said. She lifted the corner of the coat. The stain was dry. It held a matte finish, like old oil. "Trace elements show lead," a voice said. Eva Kowalski knelt on the edge of a blast shield. Red curls bounced under a grey sky. Green eyes looked behind thick yellow rims. She pulled a leather satchel forward. Books spilled onto the platform. "Lead from the building," Harlow replied. Eva shook a hand. She lifted the toothpick sharpness of a knife. She touched the skin. It smelled sharp. "It smells like copper." "Rust," Harlow said. She stood. She wiped dust from her knees. "Meteorite fragments?" Spotted the compass. It sat on the table. Brass casing. Small scratches. Verdigris spread across one side. "Veil market?" Eva asked. She nodded. She reached into the satchel. "The compass is here," Harlow said. She picked it up. The needle hummed. It spun. "Wait," Eva said. "It’s not aiming north." Harlow looked. The needle pointed at the tunnel entrance. "South," Eva said. "The tunnel leads to the market." "Or just a dead end," Harlow said. She tightened the grip on the handle. The patina was worn from handling. She walked to the body. The man lay motionless. "Corpse," Harlow said. It was confused. "He’s not a corpse." Eva knelt. "I said he’s dead." Harlow stepped back. She pulled the flashlight. The beam shook. Light hissed into the body’s neck. "Look at the neck." The skin was whiter than a ghost. The flesh didn’t move. "Chlorosis," Eva said. "Pre-existing condition." "It’s not chlorosis." Harlow scratched her jaw. "The skin is still warm." "Temperature is high." "She didn’t die here." "Who did?" Harlow pointed at the tunnel entrance. "I need to block the mouth." "Please, Quinn." Eva flinched. "Do not rush this." "She’ll want to sell." Eva shifted her stance. She held the flashlight tighter. "She needs to leave." "Where?" "Market." Harlow kicked the rail. The wall rattled. "Market is underground." "It’s not underground tonight." "Prove it." Eva reached into the bag. She pulled out a book. She covered it with papers. "Look at the ink." Harlow leaned in. Her boots clicked on metal. "Glow." "Not glow." "Maybe." "It’s ink." "Paper is bleached." "Eva, I don't need this." Eva placed the compass back into the satchel. "It points north." "It points nowhere." "It points to the door." Harlow grabbed the flashlight. She turned. The body lay behind her. The flashlight pointed at the tracks. Blackness waited. "Go," Eva said. "Where?" "The Veil Market," Eva said. "It moves." Harlow stepped over the body. The boots clicked. "I'm not moving." "You must." "What do you know?" "About dead men." Harlow stopped. She turned. Her face was sharp. "I killed him," Harlow said. "No," Eva said. "He did not die." Harlow lowered the light. The beam shone into the dark. "Then where is his body?" "It went." "Where?" Eva stood. She touched her glasses. "There is no place." "Then what is he?" Harlow looked at the dead man. "He’s gone." "Look at this." Eva pointed. Harlow leaned in. Her finger hovered. "What?" "The compass." Harlow held it. The needle spun. "It's pointing to the station." Harlow dropped the flashlight. It hit the ground. "It’s a lie." "It’s not a lie." Harlow knocked the satchel away. Books, papers. All scattered on the tracks. "Pick them up," Harlow said. "I will." "Why." "Because." Harlow stepped back. "This is wrong." "What is wrong." "The compass." Eva walked. She stopped. The red hair tucked behind the ear. "It’s the only tool." "Tool." "Compass." "Tool falls." Harlow walked to the edge. The platform rumbled. "It’s not falling." "Then it’s human." "It’s the market." "The market is not here." Eva sat. She dropped the compass. "It is." Harlow looked. The needle wavered. It stilled. "It’s open." Harlow picked up the phone. Her hand shook. "Who." "Who?" "Who is it." "Quinn." Harlow hung up. The sound stopped. "Who called." Eva stepped out. "Market." Harlow grabbed the gun. "Market is not real." "It is." Harlow stepped forward. The gun did not waver. "I am here." "Market is open." Harlow looked down. The tracks ran into the dark. "It is not a trap." "Trap is open." "Open." "Open." Harlow watched. The shadows moved. She shifted her weight. "It’s not a trap." Eva stepped closer. The red hair swayed. "It’s a door." Harlow grabbed the coat. She threw it at the body. "Get it." "Get it." Harlow turned. The flashlight clicked off. "Where." "Out." Harlow stepped to the edge. She looked down. The platform. The tracks. The dark. "Open." "Open." Harlow turned. The gun was heavy. "I’m out." "Out." Harlow walked. She stepped over the tracks. "Wait." "Wait." Eva stood. The compass lay on the ground. "It’s not gone." "It’s gone." "Not gone." "Gone." Harlow grabbed the book. She pulled it. The cover slid open. "Read it." "I cannot." "Read." "Open it." Harlow read. The print was small. "Where is it." "I do not know." "Speak." "Truth." "Ben." "Ben who." "The station owner." Harlow nodded. "He is not." "He is dead." "Alive." Eva stepped forward. "Kill him." "No." "Why." "Because." "Stop." "No." Harlow turned. She faced the dark. "It is." Eva sat. She closed the book. "It is." Harlow walked. The gun lowered. "Wait." Harlow stopped. "What." Eva stood. "It’s open." Harlow turned. "Market." "Market." Harlow walked. She moved forward. The flashlight beam bent. She looked. Her breath fogged. "It’s not." "Market." Harlow turned. "Wait." "Wait." She looked at the compass. "It points." "North." Harlow stepped forward. "Market." Eva smiled. Her teeth were white. "It’s open." Harlow decided to leave. She walked to the edge. "Market." Eva stood. "It’s not." Harlow turned. "It’s a trap." "It’s not." Harlow looked. The light flickered. "It’s a trap." Eva stepped forward. The hair bobbed. "It is not." "It is a."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences156
tagDensity0.109
leniency0.218
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1061
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1061
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"carried the weight"
count1
1
word"wavered"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"carried the weight"
1"wavered"
2"weight"
3"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences180
matches
0"was confused"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences180
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences319
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen12
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1061
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions81
wordCount689
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity7.55
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity12
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow52
Camden1
Eva27
Kowalski1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Camden"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1061
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences319
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs127
mean8.35
std7.94
cv0.951
sampleLengths
065
125
26
319
47
535
66
723
813
917
104
117
1215
137
149
159
1620
179
183
197
202
214
2216
234
2411
255
2612
273
284
292
3012
3112
3215
3335
349
352
3611
3711
388
3919
403
411
427
4320
448
455
467
4715
483
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences180
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs177
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences319
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount690
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"behind thick yellow rims."
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.007246376811594203
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences319
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences319
mean3.33
std1.89
cv0.569
sampleLengths
011
110
26
37
44
512
66
72
87
92
108
118
127
136
147
154
168
177
1810
197
207
216
225
236
244
258
264
273
284
293
302
316
322
333
345
352
362
375
384
392
405
416
424
433
442
453
464
472
487
493
40.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats29
diversityRatio0.22884012539184953
totalSentences319
uniqueOpeners73
27.78% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"All scattered on the tracks."
ratio0.008
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences120
matches
0"Her watch on the left"
1"She carried the weight of"
2"She propped her elbows on"
3"Her shadow stretched long across"
4"She lifted the corner of"
5"It held a matte finish,"
6"She pulled a leather satchel"
7"She lifted the toothpick sharpness"
8"She touched the skin."
9"It smelled sharp."
10"She wiped dust from her"
11"It sat on the table."
12"She reached into the satchel."
13"She picked it up."
14"She tightened the grip on"
15"She walked to the body."
16"It was confused."
17"She pulled the flashlight."
18"She held the flashlight tighter."
19"She pulled out a book."
ratio0.333
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount114
totalSentences120
matches
0"Floodlights swung on swivel heads"
1"The platform beneath Camden smelled"
2"Dust motes danced in the"
3"Her watch on the left"
4"She carried the weight of"
5"The body lay on the"
6"She propped her elbows on"
7"Her shadow stretched long across"
8"The light reflected in her"
9"She lifted the corner of"
10"The stain was dry."
11"It held a matte finish,"
12"a voice said"
13"Eva Kowalski knelt on the"
14"She pulled a leather satchel"
15"Books spilled onto the platform."
16"Eva shook a hand."
17"She lifted the toothpick sharpness"
18"She touched the skin."
19"It smelled sharp."
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences4
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences156
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.205
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.3501%