Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFEEEE8AXAZ5Y8P7XTM5EAT

Run Details

Duration:
8m 45s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Nvidia

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the arch of ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove. The night air smelled of damp earth and wildflowers that bloomed despite the hour. Her boots crunched on soft moss. The pendant against her chest gave a faint throb of warmth, like a heartbeat caught in silver. She had come because the pulse had grown stronger each day, pulling her toward this hidden place. She paused, eyes scanning the clearing. Nothing moved except the slow sway of blossoms in a breeze she could not feel. Aurora advanced, the pendant held like a shield. The figure stayed motionless, but the air around it thickened, resisting her advance. She felt a pressure on her chest, as if the grove itself pressed toward the center, exerting force on her. She gritted her teeth, advancing, each step sending a pulse of warmth from the pendant that met the cold emanating from the figure. A whisper curled around her ear, a sound like paper tearing. Aurora jerked to an upright position, eyes wide. The whisper formed words she failed to catch, syllables that slipped loose prior to them settling. Aurora spun, scanning the trees. Nothing moved except the occasional sway of a branch that protested the wind. Aurora pressed her lips. “Who are you?” The pendant flared, casting a crimson wash over the moss. A chuckle, low and indistinct, rose from the moss. Aurora’s shoulders tightened. She snapped her head toward the sound, but the grove offered only shadows, moonlight filtering through the canopy. She pressed the pendant to her chest, feeling its heat spread like a small fire. Aurora tightened her jaw. “Show yourself.” Her voice edged with tension. The pendant’s glow flared for a heartbeat and dimmed. Silence returned, thicker than it had been. Aurora lowered her weapon. She had no weapon besides a small knife for cutting parcel strings—and let her hand rest on the hilt. She closed her eyes, listening. The night held its breath. A faint clicking sounded, like insects tapping on stone, but the rhythm was wrong, irregular, as if something counted steps. She opened her eyes and saw a flicker of movement at the edge of her vision, a shape that melted into the trunk of an oak as she looked at it. Her pulse quickened. She swallowed, mouth dry. The pendant warmed, a steady throb syncing with the faint clicking. She retreated a step, followed by another step, hoping to put distance between herself and whatever watched. The ground beneath her feet felt uneven, as if the moss had shifted during her inattention. She stopped, her chest thumped against her ribs. It brushed the pendant, and a shock of icy fire shot towards Aurora’s arm. Her breath hitched. She dropped the pendant to the moss. The gem rolled, its glow dimming to a faint ember. The figure leaned, its breath a whisper of decay that curled around her face. Aurora scrambled to retrieve the pendant, her nails scraping against stone. Her vision swam, the grove spinning as if the world tilted. She grasped the warm metal, feeling the pulse strengthen, a frantic beat that matched her own. The figure withdrew, its form dissolving into mist that seeped into the standing stones. Silence fell, heavy and absolute, the sole sound being the ragged rasp of her breathing. She clutched the pendant to her chest, eyes scanning the grove for any sign of movement. The wildflowers swayed, indifferent to the terror that had passed. The night felt colder, the stars sharper. Aurora knew she had touched something ancient, something that refused intruders. She turned and began the long walk toward the standing stones, the pendant’s warmth a steady compass guiding her home.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount622
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount622
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"throb"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count4
3
word"scanning"
count3
4
word"whisper"
count3
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"quickened"
count1
highlights
0"throb"
1"warmth"
2"pulse"
3"scanning"
4"whisper"
5"tension"
6"silence"
7"flicker"
8"quickened"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"world had stopped"
count1
highlights
0"as if the world tilted"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences53
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords621
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount616
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Aurora11
persons
0"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.607
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount621
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
13.58% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs9
mean69
std13.63
cv0.198
sampleLengths
093
164
270
365
491
559
648
767
864
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs121
matches(empty)
88.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences53
ratio0.019
matches
0"She had no weapon besides a small knife for cutting parcel strings—and let her hand rest on the hilt."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount617
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.006482982171799027
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0016207455429497568
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences53
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences53
mean11.72
std5.94
cv0.507
sampleLengths
018
114
26
317
417
56
615
78
813
920
1023
1111
128
1316
145
1513
164
1713
189
193
2018
2115
224
237
249
257
264
2719
285
295
3020
3131
323
334
3411
3517
3616
378
3814
393
407
4110
4214
4311
4411
4516
4614
4715
4816
4910
38.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.18867924528301888
totalSentences53
uniqueOpeners10
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.96% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences53
matches
0"Her boots crunched on soft"
1"She had come because the"
2"She paused, eyes scanning the"
3"She felt a pressure on"
4"She gritted her teeth, advancing,"
5"She snapped her head toward"
6"She pressed the pendant to"
7"Her voice edged with tension"
8"She had no weapon besides"
9"She closed her eyes, listening."
10"She opened her eyes and"
11"Her pulse quickened."
12"She swallowed, mouth dry."
13"She retreated a step, followed"
14"She stopped, her chest thumped"
15"It brushed the pendant, and"
16"Her breath hitched."
17"She dropped the pendant to"
18"Her vision swam, the grove"
19"She grasped the warm metal,"
ratio0.415
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences53
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the arch"
1"The night air smelled of"
2"Her boots crunched on soft"
3"The pendant against her chest"
4"She had come because the"
5"She paused, eyes scanning the"
6"Nothing moved except the slow"
7"Aurora advanced, the pendant held"
8"The figure stayed motionless, but"
9"She felt a pressure on"
10"She gritted her teeth, advancing,"
11"A whisper curled around her"
12"Aurora jerked to an upright"
13"The whisper formed words she"
14"Aurora spun, scanning the trees."
15"Nothing moved except the occasional"
16"Aurora pressed her lips."
17"The pendant flared, casting a"
18"A chuckle, low and indistinct,"
19"Aurora’s shoulders tightened."
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She felt a pressure on her chest, as if the grove itself pressed toward the center, exerting force on her."
1"She gritted her teeth, advancing, each step sending a pulse of warmth from the pendant that met the cold emanating from the figure."
2"The whisper formed words she failed to catch, syllables that slipped loose prior to them settling."
3"A faint clicking sounded, like insects tapping on stone, but the rhythm was wrong, irregular, as if something counted steps."
4"She opened her eyes and saw a flicker of movement at the edge of her vision, a shape that melted into the trunk of an oak as she looked at it."
5"The figure leaned, its breath a whisper of decay that curled around her face."
6"She grasped the warm metal, feeling the pulse strengthen, a frantic beat that matched her own."
7"Aurora knew she had touched something ancient, something that refused intruders."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
75.1962%