| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 622 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 622 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throb" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "quickened" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "world had stopped" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "as if the world tilted" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 621 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.71% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 616 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 1.79 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.607 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 621 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 13.58% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 9 | | mean | 69 | | std | 13.63 | | cv | 0.198 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 93 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 91 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 67 | | 8 | 64 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.95% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 53 | | ratio | 0.019 | | matches | | 0 | "She had no weapon besides a small knife for cutting parcel strings—and let her hand rest on the hilt." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 617 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 4 | | adverbRatio | 0.006482982171799027 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0016207455429497568 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 53 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 53 | | mean | 11.72 | | std | 5.94 | | cv | 0.507 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 38.68% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.18867924528301888 | | totalSentences | 53 | | uniqueOpeners | 10 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.96% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots crunched on soft" | | 1 | "She had come because the" | | 2 | "She paused, eyes scanning the" | | 3 | "She felt a pressure on" | | 4 | "She gritted her teeth, advancing," | | 5 | "She snapped her head toward" | | 6 | "She pressed the pendant to" | | 7 | "Her voice edged with tension" | | 8 | "She had no weapon besides" | | 9 | "She closed her eyes, listening." | | 10 | "She opened her eyes and" | | 11 | "Her pulse quickened." | | 12 | "She swallowed, mouth dry." | | 13 | "She retreated a step, followed" | | 14 | "She stopped, her chest thumped" | | 15 | "It brushed the pendant, and" | | 16 | "Her breath hitched." | | 17 | "She dropped the pendant to" | | 18 | "Her vision swam, the grove" | | 19 | "She grasped the warm metal," |
| | ratio | 0.415 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the arch" | | 1 | "The night air smelled of" | | 2 | "Her boots crunched on soft" | | 3 | "The pendant against her chest" | | 4 | "She had come because the" | | 5 | "She paused, eyes scanning the" | | 6 | "Nothing moved except the slow" | | 7 | "Aurora advanced, the pendant held" | | 8 | "The figure stayed motionless, but" | | 9 | "She felt a pressure on" | | 10 | "She gritted her teeth, advancing," | | 11 | "A whisper curled around her" | | 12 | "Aurora jerked to an upright" | | 13 | "The whisper formed words she" | | 14 | "Aurora spun, scanning the trees." | | 15 | "Nothing moved except the occasional" | | 16 | "Aurora pressed her lips." | | 17 | "The pendant flared, casting a" | | 18 | "A chuckle, low and indistinct," | | 19 | "Aurora’s shoulders tightened." |
| | ratio | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt a pressure on her chest, as if the grove itself pressed toward the center, exerting force on her." | | 1 | "She gritted her teeth, advancing, each step sending a pulse of warmth from the pendant that met the cold emanating from the figure." | | 2 | "The whisper formed words she failed to catch, syllables that slipped loose prior to them settling." | | 3 | "A faint clicking sounded, like insects tapping on stone, but the rhythm was wrong, irregular, as if something counted steps." | | 4 | "She opened her eyes and saw a flicker of movement at the edge of her vision, a shape that melted into the trunk of an oak as she looked at it." | | 5 | "The figure leaned, its breath a whisper of decay that curled around her face." | | 6 | "She grasped the warm metal, feeling the pulse strengthen, a frantic beat that matched her own." | | 7 | "Aurora knew she had touched something ancient, something that refused intruders." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |