| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.609 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1378 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.57% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1378 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "could feel" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "resonated" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 185 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 185 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 194 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 29 | | totalWords | 1378 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "This is the boundary" | | 1 | "It is not what I feel." | | 2 | "The Fae Courts, once, a place of magic and shadows, is now one place of riddles and prophetic sight." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Now was not one of them to make an exception, she told herself." |
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| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 76 | | wordCount | 1266 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 3 | | Rory | 19 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Veil | 7 | | Earth | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Isolde | 14 | | Fae | 7 | | Courts | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Irreverent | 1 | | Shade | 3 | | Self | 1 | | Wild | 1 | | Card | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Veil" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Shade" |
| | globalScore | 0.75 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 54.86% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.451 | | wordCount | 1378 | | matches | | 0 | "neither interest nor" | | 1 | "not the blue of the sky above London, but a deep violet, as if the sun had died" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 194 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 65 | | mean | 21.2 | | std | 25.12 | | cv | 1.185 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 108 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 93 | | 4 | 74 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 74 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 73 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 238 | | matches | | 0 | "was glowing" | | 1 | "was not thinking" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 194 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1273 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.016496465043205028 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006284367635506678 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 194 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 194 | | mean | 7.1 | | std | 5.57 | | cv | 0.785 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 26.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 45 | | diversityRatio | 0.19072164948453607 | | totalSentences | 194 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 41.93% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "Usually, it was invisible." | | 1 | "Only a gateway." |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 16.23% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed through the inner" | | 1 | "It was not the hallowed" | | 2 | "Her left hand clutched a" | | 3 | "It was a gift of" | | 4 | "It was cold to the" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes did not" | | 6 | "They watched the caw of" | | 7 | "They stepped forward, their tread" | | 8 | "She could see the boundary" | | 9 | "She needed the purple glow" | | 10 | "It was a medium-sized gem" | | 11 | "They walked forward." | | 12 | "Her silver hair moved in" | | 13 | "She had no memory of" | | 14 | "*It is not what I" | | 15 | "Her lavender eyes were directed" | | 16 | "She did not turn." | | 17 | "She was not moving." | | 18 | "She watched the leaves." | | 19 | "It felt heavy, but nonexistent." |
| | ratio | 0.509 | |
| 7.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 144 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "The cold London evening had" | | 1 | "She pushed through the inner" | | 2 | "It was not the hallowed" | | 3 | "Aurora’s breath fogged in the" | | 4 | "Her left hand clutched a" | | 5 | "Isolde had not asked questions" | | 6 | "It was a gift of" | | 7 | "It was cold to the" | | 8 | "The shade of the ghost" | | 9 | "Their violet eyes did not" | | 10 | "They watched the caw of" | | 11 | "They stepped forward, their tread" | | 12 | "The Veil is the barrier" | | 13 | "The stones prevented it from" | | 14 | "She could see the boundary" | | 15 | "She needed the purple glow" | | 16 | "It was a medium-sized gem" | | 17 | "The leaves of the standing" | | 18 | "They walked forward." | | 19 | "Her silver hair moved in" |
| | ratio | 0.906 | |
| 62.89% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "Now was not one of" | | 1 | "To her, it was a" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 67.67% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed through the inner gate of Richmond Park, past the dregs of a pretension that claimed to be a park but was mostly paved with anxiety and gravel, and a…" | | 1 | "The shade of the ghost figure was tall, draped in a silhouette that made the skyline thin and jossa disorbient." | | 2 | "Her silver hair moved in the wind that did not touch them, time rapped the edges of their steps." | | 3 | "The grey had turned to a light that was not the blue of the sky above London, but a deep violet, as if the sun had died and another moon rose to fill the space." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.609 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |