Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
56
technicalSentenceCount
16
matches
0
"Lucien's heterochromatic eyes, one molten amber, one pitch black, locked on hers, and the familiar tang of sandalwood and burnt ozone that clung to his half-dem…"
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"The last time he'd been in her space, he'd left a crumpled ten-pound note for coffee on her kitchen counter and a note scrawled in his looping French script tha…"
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"Ptolemy hissed, arching his back, and bolted under the coffee table, his claws skittering on the floorboards."
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"Lucien's jaw tightened, the line of his mouth thinning, and he pushed the door a fraction further, enough that Rory could see the split in his lower lip, the da…"
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"Lucien's hand tightened around the ivory handle of his cane, the hilt that hid a thin blade inside, and Rory's gaze snapped from his face to the shadow, then to…"
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"She yanked Lucien inside by the lapel of his suit, slamming the door so hard a stack of grimoires toppled from the bookshelf behind it, and shot the three deadb…"
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"Eva warded it against anyone who means the people inside harm."
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"She'd only shown that scar to three people: Eva, her mum, and Lucien, the night they'd kissed in the back of his car after he pulled her out of a bar fight that…"
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"She'd told him about the childhood bike crash that left it there, about lying to her parents and saying she'd fallen in the park, when really she'd tried to run…"
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"The scar had felt like a badge of stupidity until Lucien brushed his thumb over it and said it looked like a tiny moon, like something that belonged to someone …"
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"Lucien's voice cut through her thoughts, sharp, raw, nothing like the cool, collected fixer she'd met two years prior when he'd come into the Golden Empress to …"
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"She uncrossed her arms, letting her left wrist fall to her side, the crescent scar visible in the space heater's glow, and stepped toward him, until she was clo…"
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"She lifted her hand, brushing her thumb over the split in his lip, the skin rough and split, and Lucien leaned into the touch, his hand coming up to wrap around…"
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"Lucien's voice was barely a whisper, his thumb brushing the scar on her wrist, over and over, like he was memorizing its shape."
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"She leaned in, her forehead resting against his, and for a second there was nothing but the hum of the space heater, the smell of curry drifting up from the sho…"
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"It was everything she'd wanted for six weeks, all the anger and hurt and longing tangled into one, and Lucien's arms wrapped around her waist, pulling her close…"