Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFEHHY71FV4S3VHGVBHTN3P

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Duration:
20.3s
Cost:
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Provider:
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Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt turned with a metallic click that echoed in the cramped hallway. Aurora Carter pulled the door open, her mind already on the delivery manifest for Yu-Fei, and the words died in her throat. Lucien Moreau filled the frame. The scent of him arrived first—bergamot, old leather, and something like night air before rain. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the tailored charcoal suit immaculate despite the damp October chill clinging to his platinum hair. One amber eye, one black, fixed on her with an intensity that pinned her to the warped floorboards. “Rory,” he said. The name was a weight in his French-accented English, a name he’d had no right to use for months. She gripped the door until her knuckles whitened. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched. “The service entrance is round back. For deliveries.” “I’m not here for the Golden Empress.” Her gaze flickered past him, down the narrow staircase spiralling into the curry-haunted dimness of Brick Lane. No one else. Just him and the rain-glossed night at his back. She tried to swing the door shut. His cane tip jammed the gap. Not forcefully, just immovably. A quiet, absolute statement. “May I?” He didn’t wait for her assent, using his free hand to press the door gently wider. His presence was a slow, deliberate invasion. He stepped inside, bringing the chill and his scent into the warmth of her space, and closed the door behind him. The three deadbolts she’d thrown clicked into their housings with finality. She backed away until her shoulders met the stacks of Eva’s research scrolls. “This isn’t a good idea.” “Was any of it?” He surveyed the chaos of the flat—a battleground of books and half-eaten meals, the tabby cat’s food bowl empty by the sink. His gaze didn’t rush. It catalogued, assessed, filed away. “Your friend’s place?” “My place.” “Semantics.” He moved further in, his cane tapping a soft, rhythmic beat on the cluttered rug. He stopped by the mismatched armchair, running a gloved finger along its frayed arm. “You look well.” “You look like you belong in a magazine spread for villains,” she shot back, the old reflex kicking in. She crossed her arms, the motion pulling her jumper’s sleeve up to reveal the scar. A stupid, childish mark. It felt raw under his gaze. A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Typecasting.” He unbuttoned his suit jacket, a slow, precise movement, and draped it over the back of the chair. Underneath, a fitted charcoal waistcoat hugged his torso. He looked deceptively relaxed, a predator at rest. “You haven’t been answering your phone.” “I changed the number.” “I know.” He didn’t reach for a phone. He didn’t need to. “Eva was concerned. Yu-Fei mentioned you’ve been avoiding the evening shifts. Singular focus on the daylight rounds. Almost as if you’re trying to be… predictable.” Rory’s breath hitched. He’d been watching. Of course he had. “My life’s none of your business anymore. That was the deal.” “Aurora.” He used her full name now, a different kind of weight. “There is no ‘deal’ when the terms are unilateral. You fled a conversation. You didn’t conclude one.” The air thickened. She could feel the heat rising in her cheeks. “What was there to conclude? You wanted something I couldn’t give. I wanted things you wouldn’t. The math was simple.” “Love is rarely algebra.” He circled her slowly, his path dictated by the piles of books and discarded cups. He stopped by the window, looking down at the rain-slicked street. “The question isn’t what we wanted. The question is what we need. And what I need, Rory, is for you to listen.” She didn’t want to listen. She wanted him gone. She wanted to pretend the last six months—since she’d walked out of his Kensington flat, leaving her key on the marble island—hadn’t happened. But the room was too small. He was too present. The ghost of his touch, the taste of his mouth, the sharp, thrilling danger he carried in his pocket—it all rushed back, a flood she’d thought she’d dammed. “Then talk,” she said, her voice low. “And leave.” He turned from the window. The streetlamp below cast his heterochromatic eyes into sharp relief, the amber one almost glowing, the black one a void. “Two days ago, a courier for the Avaros Collective was found in a dumpster behind King’s Cross. His throat was cut. Very cleanly. Professional.” A cold thread wound through her stomach. Avaros. The demon realm his father hailed from. A place of ruthless bargains and darker currency. “What’s that got to do with me?” she asked, though her pulse had begun a frantic, familiar rhythm. “He was carrying a ledger. Encrypted. My sources say it contained names. Contacts within the city. Whispers of a coming… renegotiation.” Lucien pushed off the window, advancing a step. “Your name was in it, Rory. Under ‘Carter, A. Asset. Vulnerable.’” The blood drained from her face. “That’s insane. I’m a delivery driver.” “You’re the daughter of Brendan Carter. A barrister who prosecuted a certain Avaros-backed smuggling ring ten years ago. You’re the woman who broke away from an abusive relationship with a man who had… unusual appetites and connections.” He was closer now, close enough that she could see the fine stitching on his waistcoat, the faint stubble along his jaw. “You’re the woman who walked out on me. And in this world, that makes you both a liability and a potential pawn.” “So you’re what? My guardian angel?” The laugh that escaped her was brittle. “You, who traffics in secrets and sells souls for a price?” “I’m the only one who can navigate the shadows closing in around you.” His voice dropped, a rough, intimate register that vibrated in her chest. “I tried to give you space. To see if you’d come to your senses. But space has turned you into a sitting duck.” He reached out, his fingers hovering near her wrist, not touching. The air between his fingertips and her skin felt electric, charged with memory. “You ran from Evan. You ran from me. Who do you run to now, Rory? When the things that truly lurk in the dark start to notice you?” She snatched her arm back, cradling the scarred wrist against her chest. “I manage.” “How?” The question was sharp, genuinely curious. “By living above a curry house and delivering kung pao chicken? By pretending the world isn’t teetering on a precipice you can’t see?” The flat felt suddenly airless. Every object, every surface covered in Eva’s esoteric research, seemed to whisper warnings she’d been ignoring. The cryptic symbols, the references to binding rituals, the maps of ley lines Eva drew over London—they hadn’t just been academic. She’d dismissed it as obsession. Now, standing in the presence of a man who was half-demon, the obsession felt terrifyingly practical. “What do you want from me, Lucien?” Her voice was barely a whisper, stripped of its defensiveness. He closed the final distance between them. He didn’t touch her, but his presence was a physical pressure, a heat source. He smelled of rain and bergamot and danger. “I want you to stop being a fool.” His gaze dropped to her mouth, then back to her eyes. “I want you to understand that whatever was between us doesn’t evaporate because you declare it finished. The bond you cut has frayed ends. And those ends are being pulled by things you do not want to encounter.” He lifted his hand again, and this time he did brush her wrist. His thumb traced the crescent scar, a touch so light it was more a memory of a touch. His skin was warm, calloused. “And,” he said, his voice a low rumble that went through her bones, “I want you to open your eyes. Because Ptolemy is staring at us from behind the bookshelf, and he looks like he’s about to start a war.” Rory’s gaze snapped to the right. In the narrow gap between the towering shelves, two green eyes glinted. The tabby cat was hunched, his back arched, a low, guttural growl vibrating in his chest. Not at her. At Lucien. A deep, animal fury. She looked back at Lucien. His expression hadn’t changed, but something in his heterochromatic eyes had shifted—a flicker of cold appraisal, of recognition. “And since when,” he murmured, his thumb still resting on her pulse point, “has Eva’s cat ever hissed at anyone?”
created_at"2026-03-11T21:58:43.43Z" 3/11/2026, 9:58:43 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He moved further [further]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.409
leniency0.818
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.045
82.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1418
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slowly"
2"very"
3"truly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1418
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"chill"
count2
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"predator"
count1
8
word"predictable"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"marble"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count2
13
word"familiar"
count1
14
word"potential"
count1
15
word"pawn"
count1
16
word"navigate"
count1
17
word"vibrated"
count1
18
word"electric"
count1
19
word"charged"
count1
20
word"whisper"
count2
21
word"encounter"
count1
22
word"traced"
count1
23
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"chill"
2"intensity"
3"weight"
4"flickered"
5"warmth"
6"rhythmic"
7"predator"
8"predictable"
9"could feel"
10"marble"
11"stomach"
12"pulse"
13"familiar"
14"potential"
15"pawn"
16"navigate"
17"vibrated"
18"electric"
19"charged"
20"whisper"
21"encounter"
22"traced"
23"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1411
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount921
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.43
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Yu-Fei1
Moreau1
October1
French-accented1
English1
Brick1
Lane1
Eva3
Underneath1
Kensington1
Lucien4
London1
Rory2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"October"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
5"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Kensington"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like night air before rain"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1411
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean32.81
std18.4
cv0.561
sampleLengths
035
15
254
322
424
57
636
714
857
918
1038
112
1233
1344
1449
154
1637
1721
1829
1932
2052
2170
229
2349
2423
2518
2640
2712
2881
2924
3048
3152
3214
3330
3463
3517
3629
3757
3836
3940
4043
4123
4220
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"was hunched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs151
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences115
ratio0.052
matches
0"The scent of him arrived first—bergamot, old leather, and something like night air before rain."
1"“Was any of it?” He surveyed the chaos of the flat—a battleground of books and half-eaten meals, the tabby cat’s food bowl empty by the sink."
2"She wanted to pretend the last six months—since she’d walked out of his Kensington flat, leaving her key on the marble island—hadn’t happened."
3"The ghost of his touch, the taste of his mouth, the sharp, thrilling danger he carried in his pocket—it all rushed back, a flood she’d thought she’d dammed."
4"The cryptic symbols, the references to binding rituals, the maps of ley lines Eva drew over London—they hadn’t just been academic."
5"His expression hadn’t changed, but something in his heterochromatic eyes had shifted—a flicker of cold appraisal, of recognition."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount936
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03311965811965812
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009615384615384616
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean12.27
std9.19
cv0.749
sampleLengths
013
122
25
315
421
518
63
719
88
98
108
117
1217
133
149
157
166
174
184
1918
207
2121
2211
2313
245
2526
264
275
283
292
3016
3114
323
3319
3415
354
366
378
3819
398
408
416
424
438
444
4525
463
473
484
4911
51.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3652173913043478
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners42
75.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"Just him and the rain-glossed"
1"Of course he had."
ratio0.023
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences88
matches
0"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
1"She gripped the door until"
2"Her gaze flickered past him,"
3"She tried to swing the"
4"His cane tip jammed the"
5"He didn’t wait for her"
6"His presence was a slow,"
7"He stepped inside, bringing the"
8"She backed away until her"
9"He surveyed the chaos of"
10"His gaze didn’t rush."
11"It catalogued, assessed, filed away."
12"He moved further in, his"
13"He stopped by the mismatched"
14"she shot back, the old"
15"She crossed her arms, the"
16"It felt raw under his"
17"He unbuttoned his suit jacket,"
18"He looked deceptively relaxed, a"
19"He didn’t reach for a"
ratio0.568
16.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences88
matches
0"The deadbolt turned with a"
1"Aurora Carter pulled the door"
2"Lucien Moreau filled the frame."
3"The scent of him arrived"
4"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
5"The name was a weight"
6"She gripped the door until"
7"The crescent scar on her"
8"Her gaze flickered past him,"
9"She tried to swing the"
10"His cane tip jammed the"
11"A quiet, absolute statement."
12"He didn’t wait for her"
13"His presence was a slow,"
14"He stepped inside, bringing the"
15"The three deadbolts she’d thrown"
16"She backed away until her"
17"He surveyed the chaos of"
18"His gaze didn’t rush."
19"It catalogued, assessed, filed away."
ratio0.886
56.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Now, standing in the presence"
ratio0.011
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"One amber eye, one black, fixed on her with an intensity that pinned her to the warped floorboards."
1"Now, standing in the presence of a man who was half-demon, the obsession felt terrifyingly practical."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, her voice low"
1"she asked, though her pulse had begun a frantic, familiar rhythm"
2"he said, his voice a low rumble that went through her bones,"
3"he murmured, his thumb still resting on her pulse point,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.227
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.045
79.7274%