Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFEHKVCRRFFEVF8GXWZNY1X

Run Details

Duration:
2m 19s
Cost:
$0.012259
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first thing that hit Harlow when she climbed down the rusted service stairs leading to the abandoned Camden Tube station was copper. Thick, coppery blood, sharp enough to cut through the mildew and burnt ozone that clung to every tiled surface. She stepped over a cracked chunk of platform edge, her boots silent on the concrete, and the uniformed officers loitering by the murder scene peeled back like rotting wallpaper. Eighteen years on the force gave her that effect, the same military bearing that had her holding her spine straight enough to rest a textbook on, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair lying flat against her skull, the scuffed leather watch on her left wrist ticking in time with the distant drip of a leaky pipe. She’d spent three months hunting this market. The Veil Market, the underground black market beat cops whispered about only when they thought no brass was listening, that sold things that never showed up on any police report. She’d traded a seized cask of faerie wine for a bone entry token two weeks prior, planned to bring a raid team in at the end of the week. Now she was here for a murder. She paused ten feet from the body, a man in a grease-stained leather apron, his face pressed into the concrete so only the white of one bloodshot eye showed. Maeve, the CSU lead who’d worked half a dozen homicides with her, knelt beside the fresh chalk outline she’d drawn, her gloved fingers prodding the victim’s clenched fist. No forced entry, Quinn. The steel door at the top of these stairs? City records say it got welded shut three days ago, part of the council’s plan to board up abandoned Tube stops before the winter tourist rush. No pried metal, no scrapes, not even a scratch on the lock. The only other access is the old tunnel to Kentish Town, caved in fifty yards down. No one’s been in or out of this space except us. Harlow’s sharp jaw tightened. That was the first crack in the story. She scanned the platform, the splintered crates of shattered glass lining the walls, the half-folded canvas stall collapsed near the tunnel mouth, its oak frame split clean through. Maeve stood, wiping her hands on her jeans, and nodded at the victim’s temperature strip. Twelve hours old, max. Rigor hasn’t set in fully. How does a man get locked in a sealed concrete box for three days, turn up dead only half a day ago? It doesn’t add up. Harlow didn’t answer. She scanned the small crowd until she spotted Eva Kowalski, pressed against the far tile wall, her round glasses slipping down a freckled nose, the strap of her worn leather satchel digging into her shoulder, curly red hair falling into her face. Harlow had found Eva six months prior, digging through the British Museum’s restricted archives, chasing reports of the same unexplained supernatural deaths that had taken her partner, DS Morris, three years prior. Eva held a master’s in Ancient History from Oxford, knew the unreadable sigils carved into the wall of Morris’ murder scene that every forensics expert in the city had dismissed as graffiti. Harlow had pulled her in as a civilian consultant, paid her out of her own pocket to chase loose ends, and this market was the first lead that tied back to the string of strange deaths plaguing London. Eva tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear, her nervous tell, and pushed off the wall, stepping around a uniformed officer who glared at her for veering too close to his radio. She stopped beside Harlow, her gaze locking on a thin, glowing silver crack in the tunnel wall that Harlow hadn’t even noticed, seeping into concrete like melted tin. You didn’t drag me out here for a regular stabbing, did you? No. Harlow nodded at the victim’s fist, the one Maeve had prodded. He’s clutching something. Eva leaned in, pushing her glasses back up her nose. That’s a Veil Compass. I’ve only read about them. Shade artisans make them, sell exclusively at the Veil Market. The needle points to the nearest supernatural rift or portal. See the verdigris on the brass casing? The sigils etched into the face are protective wards, keep the user from getting shredded by interdimensional drift. Maeve scoffed, crossing her arms. Interdimensional drift? What is this, a bad sci-fi movie? We’ve got a dead guy, and you’re spouting magic compass nonsense? The market doesn’t pick a new location and move stock in vans. Eva’s voice didn’t rise, didn’t waver, she stared at Maeve like the woman was the one spouting lies. It travels through a rift, a tear between this world and the in-between that lets it pop up in a new abandoned spot every full moon. That entry door you say was welded shut? It doesn’t lock with bolts. It seals itself automatically when the rift starts to relocate, to keep random looters from wandering in mid-move. If the rift collapses mid-transfer, that seal stays locked. Everyone and everything that didn’t cross through gets trapped here. That’s why no one got in or out. The market never left. Harlow pushed past Maeve, kneeling beside the victim to pry his clenched fist open. The small brass compass fell into her gloved palm, heavy and cold, its needle spinning in wild, tight circles that never settled on a single direction. CSU techs lifted cameras to snap photos, but Harlow barely noticed, her gaze snagging on the stab wound peeking out from the victim’s apron. A thin, silver-tinged burn ringed the edges of the puncture, identical to the mark she’d seen on Morris’ chest when they pulled his body from the Thames three years prior. Every forensics expert in the city had told her that mark was impossible, that no chemical, no knife, no fire could leave that precise, glowing silver edge. She’d dismissed the only witness account of a “tall, clawed man” running from the dock as a drunk’s ramblings, let the case go cold because she couldn’t believe in things that didn’t fit in a police report. She wouldn’t make that mistake again. The needle’s supposed to point at the nearest rift. Harlow turned the compass over, running her thumb over the sigils on its back. Why’s it spinning? If the rift collapsed, it has nothing to lock onto. Eva knelt beside her, catching her slipping satchel before it could dump its load of books onto the concrete, and pulled out a dog-eared grimoire, flipping to a tabbed page. If someone destabilized the rift on purpose, blew it apart while half the market was still crossing, they could trap anyone they wanted inside, kill them before anyone even knew the market was stuck. That wound on his chest? If the killer used a silver blade, that burn would form instantly. Silver burns anything tied to the in-between, but it leaves that mark on humans too, for 12 hours before it fades. Maeve called from the body’s other side, pulling a thick leather wallet stuffed with cash from the victim’s apron pocket. Robbery’s off the table. He’s got thousands in untraceable notes, a stack of bone tokens just like yours, Quinn. Nothing’s missing. Killer didn’t want money. Harlow’s gaze flicked to the tile a foot from the body, where a set of three deep, clawed gouges faded even as she watched, the concrete smoothing over like they’d never existed. No CSU tech had spotted them. No one but her had been watching the ground close enough to catch the flash of the marks before they vanished. She leaned forward, pressing her gloved palm to the spot, and it was smooth, unblemished, no trace of the violence that had scored it half a day prior. They wanted the market trapped. They wanted this man dead, and anyone else who got stuck here with him. Eva’s finger stabbed at a line of handwritten text in her grimoire, her face pale. If a rift is collapsed with enough force, it leaves a residual pinprick portal open for exactly 24 hours. Only big enough for one person to cross through. The killer got out 12 hours ago, right after he stabbed this vendor. The main door’s sealed to everyone else, but he can cross back through that tiny portal any time he wants. He can come back. Harlow slipped the compass into an evidence bag, zipping it shut, and turned to Maeve, her voice sharp enough to cut steel. Pull every man we have out of here in the next hour. Seal the service stairs with concrete, post a 24/7 armed guard, no one gets in, no one gets out. Call the chief, tell him this is a toxic mold biohazard, that we need it contained before spores spread to the Camden high street. Lie if you have to, but no one comes near this station until I say so. Maeve opened her mouth to argue, but Harlow’s stare cut her off. She nodded, turning to bark orders, herding officers and CSU techs toward the stairs, packing up gear in a rush. Eva stayed, her satchel slung over her shoulder, staring at the silver crack in the tunnel wall, the faint glow of the residual portal bleeding into the dark. You really think he’ll come back? Harlow looked down at the body, at the fading silver edge of the stab wound, at the Veil Compass in its evidence bag, its needle still spinning even through the plastic. She’d missed her chance to catch Morris’ killer once. She wouldn’t miss it again. I hope he does.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1608
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1608
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"scanned"
count2
1
word"shattered"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"tinged"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"shattered"
2"unreadable"
3"etched"
4"tinged"
5"flicked"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count2
highlights
0"clenched fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
1"starts to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1608
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1575
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow15
Camden2
Tube2
Veil4
Market2
Quinn2
Kentish1
Town1
Eva9
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
Morris1
Ancient1
History1
Oxford1
London1
Maeve9
Compass2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Tube"
2"Market"
3"Quinn"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
6"Museum"
7"Morris"
8"Maeve"
9"Compass"
places
0"Camden"
1"Veil"
2"Kentish"
3"Town"
4"British"
5"Ancient"
6"Oxford"
7"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.622
wordCount1608
matches
0"No one but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"make that mistake"
1"leaves that mark"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean69.91
std50.39
cv0.721
sampleLengths
0199
157
278
355
435
5147
662
712
815
964
1025
11118
12164
1326
14112
1541
16110
1780
1893
1932
2034
2145
224
84.62% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences102
matches
0"got welded"
1"get locked"
2"was welded"
3"was stuck"
4"got stuck"
5"is collapsed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs273
matches
0"was listening"
1"was still crossing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences102
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount524
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same unexplained supernatural deaths"
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.022900763358778626
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.013358778625954198
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean15.76
std10.95
cv0.694
sampleLengths
023
119
229
355
47
530
629
77
829
928
104
119
1226
1312
1416
1511
164
178
1828
1915
204
215
2222
234
243
2542
2632
2732
2838
2934
3028
3112
321
3311
343
3510
364
375
3810
3910
407
4118
425
432
447
4511
4612
4718
4826
498
57.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.38235294117647056
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners39
33.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Only big enough for one"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences99
matches
0"She stepped over a cracked"
1"She’d spent three months hunting"
2"She’d traded a seized cask"
3"She paused ten feet from"
4"She scanned the platform, the"
5"It doesn’t add up."
6"She scanned the small crowd"
7"She stopped beside Harlow, her"
8"You didn’t drag me out"
9"He’s clutching something."
10"I’ve only read about them."
11"We’ve got a dead guy,"
12"It travels through a rift,"
13"It doesn’t lock with bolts."
14"It seals itself automatically when"
15"She’d dismissed the only witness"
16"She wouldn’t make that mistake"
17"He’s got thousands in untraceable"
18"She leaned forward, pressing her"
19"They wanted the market trapped."
ratio0.273
76.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences99
matches
0"The first thing that hit"
1"She stepped over a cracked"
2"She’d spent three months hunting"
3"The Veil Market, the underground"
4"She’d traded a seized cask"
5"She paused ten feet from"
6"Maeve, the CSU lead who’d"
7"The steel door at the"
8"City records say it got"
9"The only other access is"
10"Harlow’s sharp jaw tightened."
11"That was the first crack"
12"She scanned the platform, the"
13"Maeve stood, wiping her hands"
14"Rigor hasn’t set in fully."
15"It doesn’t add up."
16"Harlow didn’t answer."
17"She scanned the small crowd"
18"Harlow had found Eva six"
19"Eva held a master’s in"
ratio0.768
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences99
matches
0"Now she was here for"
1"If the rift collapses mid-transfer,"
2"If the rift collapsed, it"
3"If someone destabilized the rift"
4"If the killer used a"
5"If a rift is collapsed"
ratio0.061
62.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Maeve, the CSU lead who’d worked half a dozen homicides with her, knelt beside the fresh chalk outline she’d drawn, her gloved fingers prodding the victim’s cle…"
1"Harlow had found Eva six months prior, digging through the British Museum’s restricted archives, chasing reports of the same unexplained supernatural deaths tha…"
2"Eva tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear, her nervous tell, and pushed off the wall, stepping around a uniformed officer who glared at her for veering to…"
3"She stopped beside Harlow, her gaze locking on a thin, glowing silver crack in the tunnel wall that Harlow hadn’t even noticed, seeping into concrete like melte…"
4"CSU techs lifted cameras to snap photos, but Harlow barely noticed, her gaze snagging on the stab wound peeking out from the victim’s apron."
5"She leaned forward, pressing her gloved palm to the spot, and it was smooth, unblemished, no trace of the violence that had scored it half a day prior."
6"Eva stayed, her satchel slung over her shoulder, staring at the silver crack in the tunnel wall, the faint glow of the residual portal bleeding into the dark."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.1211%