Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFEMB6CHY3KD5TSV9CM56JS

Run Details

Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.001029
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above the door flickered, casting a sickly pulse on the wet pavement. Aurora pulled her jacket tight against the evening chill. The air smelled of stale gin and damp wool. She pushed the glass door open, the bell above jarring a quiet note into the hum of the shop. The room inside was dark, save for the overhead bulbs that buzzed like angry insects. Maps covered the walls from floor to ceiling. A spider hung from the ceiling fork. Silas stood behind the bar. He didn't look up when she entered. He was polishing a glass, his movements precise, counted. "Rough night?" Aurora asked. The movement stopped. The glass turned slowly. Silas came into focus from the shadows. His grey-streaked hair hung heavy against his forehead. The silver signet ring sat heavy on his right hand. He leaned against the wood, his left leg shifting slightly to compensate. "Delivery traffic is lower," Silas said. "Prices have gone up though." Aurora stepped closer. She recognized the tension that made the air feel thin. She was twenty-five, fresh out of her probation in the rain. "You aren't serving me," Aurora said. "You're drinking." Silas picked up a bottle of water and set it down. "Myself." "You look different." Silas wiped down the rim of another bottle. "Time does that." "Or practice." Silas tilted his head. His eyes were hazy. That was the change. The man in the reflection used to be steady. The eyes in the glass now had the look of someone watching a crime scene unfold everywhere they looked. "I live above this place," Aurora said. "I should have walked in sooner." "I knew you were coming." "You could have called." "I couldn't afford to." Aurora hated the explanation. It hung between them like smoke. She was used to logic. Her father had been a barrister, her mother a teacher. She knew how these things worked. This was not logic. This was a memory they both carried. "I had the scar." She pointed at her wrist. A small crescent-shaped mark. "You've hidden it." "It's easier. I don't touch my skin much." Silas walked around the bar. His left leg stumbled for a second. He didn't correct the stumble. He let it happen. The limp was the taste of his own age. "I remember the rain," Silas said. "In Madrid. Two hundred years ago." "In Prague. Three hundred. Long time," Silas said. Aurora turned to the back wall where the monthly prices were posted. The lighting here made the rakes on the character look like a jagged edge. "You haven't changed," Rory said. Silas turned to face her. "You have." "I am twenty-five." "You were twenty-four when we left." "I came back." "What do you want?" Aurora flinched. The question hit harder than the greeting. She expected to find a friend. She found a stranger in the same suit. "Rent is due," Silas said. "You pay the landlord in cash." "I have money." "In the bank." "Where?" "In the back room." Aurora stepped around the rest of the patrons. The two cinema posters on the wall looked like eyes watching her. "How do you know where that key is?" Rory asked. "I left it on the counter." "Put it back." Silas raised his hand. It was not a demand. It was a warning. "Tell me why you're here." Silas moved to the end of the bar. The wood under his hand was cool to the touch. He didn't look like he expected an answer. "To see if you still remember." "Remember what." "That I didn't lose it." Silas stopped. He stared at the bar, at the empty bottles. "You forget a lot." "I learned how to forget." "Is that what you're trying to tell me? You're trying to tell me nothing." Silas looked down at the scar on his hand. He traced the line with his thumb. "I know why you took the job." "You mean at the delivery place." "You mean at the bar." "It's not for the job. I keep the apartment." "That room above is yours." "I need a place." "You need to be seen." Aurora looked at him. The dim light reflected in his eyes. He looked like a statue. The one that doesn't move in the museum. "You're not the same." "I'm not the same." "Who is?" Silas turned back to the counter. He opened a drawer. The sound was sharp, metallic. "I am the one who walks out." "You walk out." "I come back." Aurora felt the weight of the silence settle on her. It was a physical thing. It pressed on her chest. She felt her scar itch. The urge to undress her skin moved. She wanted to show him. "You said you couldn't." "I couldn't." "Let me help." "No." "Why." "I have a key." Silas leaned over. "You don't know me anymore." "You never changed." "Did I say that?" "Yes." "Then I'm not the same." Silas pulled the drawer out. He reached inside. His hand touched something metal. He lifted it up. It was a small object. A token. "You should have asked." Aurora reached out. Her hand stopped just short. "Did you remember," Aurora asked. "I didn't forget." "Then why." "I'm tired." The doorbell rang. A shadow moved past the glass. It wasn't Silas. It wasn't Aurora. The light cut through the gloom and landed on the two figures behind the bar. "I have a new shift at the Golden Empress," Aurora said. "And I have debt to pay." "Is that right?" "No." Silas stepped away from the counter. He wanted to stop her. He wanted to show her the back room. He wanted to show her the lock. He wanted to show her the truth. "You can take the rent." "I have the money." "Where is it." "In the bank." "Where." "London." "Who owns it?" Silas turned back to her. The grey streaks in his beard caught the light. "You haven't changed." "I liked that." "Right." Silas smoothed the paper on the counter. He was trying to make it clean. He was trying to make it end. "We should go." "Where." "Home." "No." "Home." Silas did not move. "I am not going home." Silas looked at him. The eyes were clear now. The ice had melted. "You're tired." "I'm done." "Doing what." "Nothing." Silas finished the cleaning. He set the bottle down. "I have a meeting." "Who is with you." "No one." "You're not alone." Silas picked up his coat. He didn't put it on. He kept the weight of the cold on his skin. "Will you come." "With whom." "With me." Aurora looked at the door. The neon light in the corner flicked. The darkness moved differently. "I don't think so." "Good." "Right." Silas walked to the door. He opened it. The cold air rushed in. He didn't stop to look back. He stepped out. Aurora stood. She stood alone in the shadows. The quiet room swallowed her. The green neon on the ceiling hummed. The buzz of the lights went on. She didn't speak. She heard the bell. She didn't move. She looked at the place where the jar sat on the shelf. She understood the look in his eyes. She understood the silence. She understood the door closed behind him. The room was dark again. She walked to the counter. She touched the metal. The soft sound of metal on wood was the only noise. She heard nothing. She breathed. The air was too thin. She exhaled. She waited for the sound of footsteps. The waiting stretched through the floor. She turned to the back room. The light from the hallway was gone. She stood still. She looked down at her hand. The scar was purple. She pulled back the jacket. The scar was deep. She pulled the sleeve back. The scar was there. She turned to the door. The door was closed. She opened it. The hallway was empty. The hallway was dark. She stepped inside. The hallway was cold. She stopped. She looked down. The door was shut. She closed her eyes. She opened them. The hallway was empty. She turned back. The green neon was flickering. She held her breath. The silence was loud. She let out the air. She stepped forward. She stepped back. She turned around. The hallway was gone. The door was open. She stopped. She listened. She heard nothing. She moved forward. The door was closed. She opened it. The room was dark. The room was quiet. Aurora stepped inside. The floor was cold. The floor was wet. She put her foot on it. The floor was hard. She put her other foot on it. The floor was cold. She walked forward. She stopped. She heard a sound. She looked down. The floor was dry. She turned around. The hallway was empty. She stepped back. She closed the door. The room was dark. The room was quiet. She heard nothing. She stepped forward. The door was open. She turned back. The hallway was empty. She closed the door. The room was dark. The door was closed. She stood in the room. She breathed. She exhaled. She heard nothing. She waited. The silence was long. She turned around. The door was closed. The room was dark. She stood still. She looked down. The floor was cold. The hallway was empty. She turned around. The hallway was dark. She closed the door. The room was quiet. She stood still. She looked down. The floor was cold. The hallway was empty. She turned around. The door was closed. The room was dark. She stood still. She looked down. The floor was cold. The hallway was empty. She turned around. The door was closed. The room was dark. She stood still. She looked down. The floor was cold. The hallway was empty. She turned around. The door was closed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences105
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.229
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1647
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1647
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"silence"
count4
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
2"chill"
3"tension"
4"traced"
5"weight"
6"silence"
7"gloom"
8"flicked"
9"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of the silence"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences249
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences249
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences342
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1647
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1265
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity2.13
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Aurora18
Silas27
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.433
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like eyes watching her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1647
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences342
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs246
mean6.7
std8.77
cv1.31
sampleLengths
082
121
24
344
411
524
68
711
81
93
1011
112
1240
1313
145
154
164
1742
1813
193
208
2130
226
236
248
2526
265
277
283
296
303
314
3223
3311
343
353
361
374
3820
3916
403
4113
425
4326
446
452
465
4715
485
4914
99.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences249
matches
0"was used"
1"were posted"
2"was gone"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs281
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was trying"
2"was trying"
3"was flickering"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences342
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1268
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped mark."
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.02444794952681388
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00473186119873817
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences342
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences342
mean4.82
std2.76
cv0.573
sampleLengths
015
19
29
319
415
58
67
75
87
99
104
113
124
137
148
1510
1612
176
185
193
2010
2111
226
232
2411
251
263
278
283
292
304
314
324
339
3419
357
366
375
384
394
404
416
425
4310
446
454
467
479
484
493
29.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats71
diversityRatio0.13742690058479531
totalSentences342
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences225
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount108
totalSentences225
matches
0"She pushed the glass door"
1"He didn't look up when"
2"He was polishing a glass,"
3"His grey-streaked hair hung heavy"
4"He leaned against the wood,"
5"She recognized the tension that"
6"She was twenty-five, fresh out"
7"His eyes were hazy."
8"It hung between them like"
9"She was used to logic."
10"Her father had been a"
11"She knew how these things"
12"She pointed at her wrist"
13"His left leg stumbled for"
14"He didn't correct the stumble."
15"He let it happen."
16"She expected to find a"
17"She found a stranger in"
18"It was not a demand."
19"It was a warning."
ratio0.48
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount225
totalSentences225
matches
0"The green neon above the"
1"Aurora pulled her jacket tight"
2"The air smelled of stale"
3"She pushed the glass door"
4"The room inside was dark,"
5"Maps covered the walls from"
6"A spider hung from the"
7"Silas stood behind the bar."
8"He didn't look up when"
9"He was polishing a glass,"
10"The movement stopped."
11"The glass turned slowly."
12"Silas came into focus from"
13"His grey-streaked hair hung heavy"
14"The silver signet ring sat"
15"He leaned against the wood,"
16"Aurora stepped closer."
17"She recognized the tension that"
18"She was twenty-five, fresh out"
19"Silas picked up a bottle"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences225
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences105
tagDensity0.105
leniency0.21
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.0764%