Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFEMCQWDCN505T3FKS09Z7W

Run Details

Duration:
2m 29s
Cost:
$0.012469
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven’s Nest bleeds through rain-streaked glass, painting the bar’s scuffed Formica counter the color of unripe limes. Rory hauled her delivery jacket off, the waterproof fabric still dripping from the last run of the night, and slung it over the coat rack by the stairs leading up to her flat. Her left wrist caught on a rusted hook, the crescent scar there stinging for half a second—13 years old, she’d flown over the handlebars of a borrowed bike on Cardiff’s Penarth Promenade, Maeve screaming behind her as they’d both crashed into a rail, the metal slicing deep into Rory’s skin before they’d laughed so hard they cried into their 99p ice creams an hour later. She rubbed the scar flat, then crossed to the bar. Silas didn’t look up from the pint glass he polished with a frayed linen cloth, just pushed a cold cider across the wood, the bottle condensing into dark rings on the Formica. His auburn hair, streaked with the same grey that laced his neatly trimmed beard, fell over his hazel eyes, and he shifted his weight, the faint limp from his old knee injury settling into his good leg as he leaned against the bar. It was 11:17 on a Tuesday, the Nest only half full, a handful of regulars huddled in the back booth playing cards, the jukebox humming a low Patti Smith track that cut through the rain lashing the windows. The bell above the front door jingled. A woman stumbled in, shaking rain off the shoulders of a frayed charcoal wool coat, her boots caked in the same Soho gutter sludge that coated Rory’s delivery van tires. She’d once had hair the color of summer wheat, long enough to sit on, the kind that turned gold if you left it out in the sun for ten minutes. Now it was cut to a sharp pixie, dyed the same jet black as Rory’s own, and a thin pale scar sliced through her left jaw, running from the corner of her mouth to her earlobe. She wiped her nose on the sleeve of her coat, crossed to the bar in three quick strides, and leaned against the counter three seats down from Rory. “Whiskey neat. Whatever’s the cheapest that doesn’t taste like paint thinner.” Rory froze mid-sip of her cider. She’d know that voice anywhere, the rough Cardiff lilt that softened around the edges when she was tired, the way she bit the end of the first word of any order like she was scared someone would rush her. Maeve O’Connell. The girl she’d shared a flat with for three years in Cardiff, the girl who’d mapped their joint future on the back of their kitchen door in red marker: Rory passes bar, Maeve gets pupillage, buy a cottage in the Brecon Beacons, adopt two greyhounds, retire at 60 to write terrible romance novels. They’d spoken once, three years prior, a 47-second phone call where Rory had hung up mid-sentence, scared Evan was listening outside her hotel room, and she’d never reached out again. She’d thought Maeve was still in Cardiff, still arguing cases in the Crown Court, still living the life they’d planned. Maeve waited for Silas to set the glass down in front of her, then lifted it to her mouth, and Rory said it, quiet enough that only she could hear. “Maeve.” The woman choked on her whiskey, coughing so hard her eyes watered, and she spun on the bar stool, her hand flying to the scar on her jaw like she was trying to hide it. When she saw Rory, her face went white, the freckles that used to dust her nose standing out against the pale skin. “Rory?” She breathed the name like it was a curse, like she’d never thought she’d say it again. She stood up, took two steps forward, like she was going to hug her, then stopped, her hands falling to her sides, the tension between them thick enough to cut with the bar knife Silas kept by the tap handles. “What the fuck are you doing in London?” Rory set her cider down, the bottle clinking loud enough that Silas glanced up, then went back to polishing glasses, giving them space. “I moved here three years ago. Right after I left Cardiff.” She nodded at the empty seat next to her. “Sit down. Please.” Maeve hesitated, then grabbed her whiskey glass and crossed to the seat, dropping into it hard enough that the wood groaned. She set the glass down, and Rory saw her hands were shaking, the nails cracked and stained with ink, nothing like the perfectly manicured nails Maeve used to keep for court, the ones she’d paid 20 quid a month to get filled. “I thought you’d… I don’t know. I thought you’d disappeared off the face of the earth. Eva wouldn’t tell me shit. Said you asked her not to give anyone your address. I thought you hated me.” Rory flinched. She’d never thought anyone would think that. “I didn’t hate you. I couldn’t—Evan found me once, outside the university library in Cardiff. He broke my phone, threatened to show up at your flat if I left him. I was scared he’d hurt anyone who knew where I was. I cut everyone off to keep you safe.” She lifted her left wrist, pushed the sleeve of her sweater up to show the crescent scar, then another one, a thin pale line that ran along her forearm, hidden under clothes most days. “He left that. The night before I left. I couldn’t let him find any of you.” Maeve’s breath caught. She reached out, like she was going to touch the scar, then pulled her hand back, her knuckles white around her whiskey glass. “I didn’t know any of that. I thought you just bailed. On me, on us, on everything we planned.” She laughed, a rough, bitter sound, and gestured at her own face, at the scar on her jaw. “I quit the pupillage six months after you left. My mom got lung cancer. I moved to Liverpool to take care of her. Lived in a tiny flat above a corner shop, worked night shifts at a supermarket to pay her medical bills. She died last spring. I just moved to London last week. Got a job at a bookstore in Camden. Never touched a law book again.” Rory stared at her. The Maeve she remembered would rather have died than quit law. She’d stayed up three nights straight studying for the bar exam, dragged Rory to mock trials, cried when she got the letter offering her the pupillage, the two of them drinking cheap prosecco on their kitchen floor at 2am. “You quit?” “Didn’t have a choice. No one else to take care of her. And after she died, I couldn’t go back. The whole thing felt like a lie, like I was playing a part that wasn’t mine anymore.” Maeve nodded at Rory, at the delivery jacket crumpled by the door, at the Golden Emperor logo peeking out of the pocket of her sweater, the restaurant she worked for. “What about you? You ever take the bar? Deliver Chinese food now? That’s a far cry from the barrister your dad always wanted you to be.” Rory picked at the label on her cider bottle, the paper peeling off in thin strips. “I never took the bar. Couldn’t stand the thought of all that rules, all that posturing, after everything Evan put me through. I work part time at the restaurant, live in the flat above this bar. It’s enough. It’s safe. That’s all I care about anymore.” She nodded at the old map of Cardiff that hung on the wall behind the bar, the one she’d found in a flea market a year after moving to London, the one she’d asked Silas to hang up so she could see it every day. “I still think about that kitchen door. The red marker. The cottage in the Brecon Beacons. I thought about it a lot when I was running, when I was scared. That was the first thing I ever had that felt like a future I got to choose.” Silas moved down the bar to pour a beer for one of the regulars, giving them a minute of quiet, the jukebox switching to an old Cat Power track, the rain still lashing the windows. Maeve’s eyes filled with tears, the first one spilling over and running down her cheek, and she wiped it away with the back of her hand, rough, like she was angry at herself for crying. “I thought about that too. I wrote it on the wall of my Liverpool flat. In the same red marker. Went out and bought a pack just to do it. I thought I was the only one who still cared.” “I never stopped caring.” Rory reached across the bar, laid her hand on top of Maeve’s, and Maeve didn’t pull away. Her hand was calloused, warm, the same hand that had patched Rory up after the bike crash, that had held her hair back when she was sick after a bad first date, that had helped her pack the first time she tried to leave Evan. “I’m sorry I left without saying goodbye. I’m sorry I missed all of it. Your mom’s sickness, you moving, everything. I should have trusted you to have my back. I was just scared.” “I’m sorry I didn’t look harder for you. I was angry. I thought you chose to leave me behind. I should have known you’d never do that.” Maeve squeezed her hand, the scar on her jaw glinting in the green neon light, and for a second Rory could see the 12-year-old girl she’d crashed bikes with, the 19-year-old girl she’d moved to Cardiff with, all the years in between layered on top of the woman sitting in front of her. “We got time to make it right, right? The cottage, the greyhounds, all of it? We’re not too old. We’re not too broken.” Rory looked at the map of Cardiff pinned to the wall, at Silas wiping glasses in the corner, at Maeve’s hand under hers, and for the first time in three years she didn’t feel like she was running. She took a sip of her cider, the cold fizz burning down her throat, and nodded. “We got time.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1746
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1746
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"lilt"
2"tension"
3"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
88.77% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences46
matches
0"was scared"
1"was angry"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences60
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen91
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1745
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount1234
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Maeve"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Formica2
Cardiff7
Penarth1
Promenade1
Maeve15
Rory21
Tuesday1
Patti1
Smith1
Soho1
Brecon1
Beacons1
Evan2
Crown1
Court1
Silas7
Golden1
Emperor1
London1
Cat1
Power1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Maeve"
3"Rory"
4"Patti"
5"Smith"
6"Beacons"
7"Evan"
8"Court"
9"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Soho"
2"Brecon"
3"Crown"
4"Golden"
5"London"
globalScore0.649
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1745
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"know that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean79.32
std47.43
cv0.598
sampleLengths
0130
1113
27
3124
411
5150
630
71
857
966
1046
1199
12108
13131
1456
1593
16154
17110
1899
19103
2054
213
82.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences46
matches
0"was tired"
1"get filled"
2"was calloused"
69.92% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs205
matches
0"was listening"
1"was trying"
2"were shaking"
3"was running"
95.24% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences60
ratio0.017
matches
0"Her left wrist caught on a rusted hook, the crescent scar there stinging for half a second—13 years old, she’d flown over the handlebars of a borrowed bike on Cardiff’s Penarth Promenade, Maeve screaming behind her as they’d both crashed into a rail, the metal slicing deep into Rory’s skin before they’d laughed so hard they cried into their 99p ice creams an hour later."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1243
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.029766693483507644
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003218020917135961
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences60
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences60
mean29.08
std20.72
cv0.713
sampleLengths
022
133
265
310
432
543
638
77
830
930
1036
1128
1211
136
1439
152
1653
1730
1820
1930
201
2135
2222
2318
2440
258
2623
2720
283
2921
3042
3136
322
337
3483
3516
363
3723
3837
3968
404
4111
4239
432
4467
4526
4616
4791
4847
4935
47.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences60
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
29.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences44
matches
0"Her left wrist caught on"
1"She rubbed the scar flat,"
2"His auburn hair, streaked with"
3"It was 11:17 on a"
4"She’d once had hair the"
5"She wiped her nose on"
6"She’d know that voice anywhere,"
7"They’d spoken once, three years"
8"She’d thought Maeve was still"
9"She breathed the name like"
10"She stood up, took two"
11"She nodded at the empty"
12"She set the glass down,"
13"She’d never thought anyone would"
14"She lifted her left wrist,"
15"She reached out, like she"
16"She laughed, a rough, bitter"
17"She’d stayed up three nights"
18"She nodded at the old"
19"Her hand was calloused, warm,"
ratio0.477
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences44
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"Rory hauled her delivery jacket"
2"Her left wrist caught on"
3"She rubbed the scar flat,"
4"Silas didn’t look up from"
5"His auburn hair, streaked with"
6"It was 11:17 on a"
7"The bell above the front"
8"A woman stumbled in, shaking"
9"She’d once had hair the"
10"She wiped her nose on"
11"Rory froze mid-sip of her"
12"She’d know that voice anywhere,"
13"The girl she’d shared a"
14"They’d spoken once, three years"
15"She’d thought Maeve was still"
16"Maeve waited for Silas to"
17"The woman choked on her"
18"She breathed the name like"
19"She stood up, took two"
ratio0.955
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"Now it was cut to"
ratio0.023
27.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"A woman stumbled in, shaking rain off the shoulders of a frayed charcoal wool coat, her boots caked in the same Soho gutter sludge that coated Rory’s delivery v…"
1"The girl she’d shared a flat with for three years in Cardiff, the girl who’d mapped their joint future on the back of their kitchen door in red marker: Rory pas…"
2"The woman choked on her whiskey, coughing so hard her eyes watered, and she spun on the bar stool, her hand flying to the scar on her jaw like she was trying to…"
3"When she saw Rory, her face went white, the freckles that used to dust her nose standing out against the pale skin."
4"Her hand was calloused, warm, the same hand that had patched Rory up after the bike crash, that had held her hair back when she was sick after a bad first date,…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She breathed (breathe)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.182
81.6650%