| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.35% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1370 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1370 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "sanctuary" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "magnetic" | | 10 | "clandestine" | | 11 | "reminder" | | 12 | "shimmered" | | 13 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 114 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 97.70% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked like a broken toy.不合格." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1370 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1288 | | uniqueNames | 22 | | maxNameDensity | 0.7 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Harlow | 9 | | Quinn | 7 | | Hyde | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Corner | 1 | | Tomás | 1 | | Herrera | 4 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Camden | 2 | | Underground | 1 | | Met | 1 | | King | 1 | | Cross | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Herranza | 1 | | Veil | 3 | | Market | 2 | | Herrmans | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Tomás" | | 3 | "Herrera" | | 4 | "Raven" | | 5 | "King" | | 6 | "Cross" | | 7 | "Saint" | | 8 | "Christopher" | | 9 | "Herranza" | | 10 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Hyde" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Corner" | | 4 | "Soho" | | 5 | "Met" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 9.55% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "city that seemed to generate its own heat, heat from something elemental and unnatural" | | 1 | "looked like parchment" | | 2 | "looked like a broken toy.不合格" | | 3 | "looked like a shift in the minerals forge" | | 4 | "felt like a bone that had been hunted" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.73 | | wordCount | 1370 | | matches | | 0 | "not concrete, but a mural of something older, something" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 40.29 | | std | 25.67 | | cv | 0.637 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 102 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 78 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 68 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 70 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 52 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 74 | | 29 | 87 | | 30 | 58 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 10 |
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| 96.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "was printed" | | 1 | "was rusted" | | 2 | "been hunted" |
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| 74.21% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 212 | | matches | | 0 | "was chasing" | | 1 | "was running" | | 2 | "wasn't just running" | | 3 | "was like holding" |
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| 47.62% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "The London night did not wash out the grime of the day; it only layered it in a viscous sediment of rain and diesel." | | 1 | "Her right hand was steady on the pommel of the gun; her left wrist creaked slightly as she moved." | | 2 | "The damp of the city was heavy; the air here was rusted, smelling of ozone and burning copper." | | 3 | "He wasn't just running from the law; he was running from the things that lived in the dark." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1294 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.02472952086553323 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008500772797527048 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 11.42 | | std | 7.29 | | cv | 0.639 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 35.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.26666666666666666 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 36.22% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "She was chasing a ghost" | | 1 | "He bolted when the green" | | 2 | "He was moving east." | | 3 | "She could feel the weight" | | 4 | "Her right hand was steady" | | 5 | "She glanced at it." | | 6 | "It was a cheap, durable" | | 7 | "It was the rhythm." | | 8 | "He entered the damp throat" | | 9 | "It wasn’t a regular station." | | 10 | "He could see her now." | | 11 | "He turned, and the movement" | | 12 | "They had dirt on each" | | 13 | "He wasn't just running from" | | 14 | "He looked like a broken" | | 15 | "He kept his voice low," | | 16 | "She could see the heat" | | 17 | "It was like holding a" | | 18 | "she replied, her voice neurotic" | | 19 | "She didn't let the flash" |
| | ratio | 0.459 | |
| 45.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The London night did not" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn moved through" | | 2 | "The circumstances were officially documented" | | 3 | "She was chasing a ghost" | | 4 | "The figure ahead was Tomás" | | 5 | "He bolted when the green" | | 6 | "Quinn didn't lower her weapon." | | 7 | "The 9mm felt light, a" | | 8 | "The rain sheeted down, blurring" | | 9 | "Herrera wasn't headed toward the" | | 10 | "He was moving east." | | 11 | "The suspect went north, toward" | | 12 | "Quinn hammered the pavement, her" | | 13 | "She could feel the weight" | | 14 | "Her right hand was steady" | | 15 | "The worn leather of her" | | 16 | "She glanced at it." | | 17 | "It was a cheap, durable" | | 18 | "It was the rhythm." | | 19 | "Herrera disappeared beneath a low" |
| | ratio | 0.829 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "To stay and wait was" | | 1 | "To follow Herranza meant entering" | | 2 | "If she stepped through that" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 68.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The figure ahead was Tomás Herrera, his broad shoulders hunched into a posture that read twelve-year-old cautionary tale." | | 1 | "The 9mm felt light, a finite warning in a city that seemed to generate its own heat, heat from something elemental and unnatural." | | 2 | "Herrera disappeared beneath a low brick archway that served as a service entrance to the old subway tunnels beneath King's Cross." | | 3 | "Through the bars, the walls were not concrete, but a mural of something older, something that looked like parchment." | | 4 | "There were no specific magical wards marking the tunnel, but there was a faint hum, a residual energy that curled her wrist fur." | | 5 | "Harlow stepped onto the platform, ignoring the sound of her boot hitting the wet floor." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow said, the words cutting through the space" | | 1 | "she replied, her voice neurotic but hardened" |
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| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |