| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.346 | | leniency | 0.692 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2057 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "precisely" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2057 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "could feel" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "predictable" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "raced" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "furrowed" | | 12 | "vibrated" | | 13 | "traced" | | 14 | "reminder" | | 15 | "resolve" | | 16 | "otherworldly" | | 17 | "flickered" | | 18 | "familiar" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" | | 2 | "the weight of her words" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 82 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2078 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1252 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.88 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 6 | | Quinn | 11 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 2 | | Veil | 4 | | Market | 3 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Compass | 1 | | Eva | 9 | | Morris | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Market" | | 3 | "Kowalski" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "sheen that seemed to soak into the stone rather than stain it" | | 1 | "as if completing a circuit" | | 2 | "ether that seemed to seep into her skin" | | 3 | "looked like translations of ancient scrip" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.481 | | wordCount | 2078 | | matches | | 0 | "not only her analytical mind but also a willingness to step into the unknown, into the very r" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 40.92% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 79.92 | | std | 23.44 | | cv | 0.293 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 112 | | 1 | 91 | | 2 | 97 | | 3 | 73 | | 4 | 113 | | 5 | 79 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 89 | | 9 | 75 | | 10 | 85 | | 11 | 89 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 94 | | 14 | 86 | | 15 | 87 | | 16 | 92 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 84 | | 19 | 82 | | 20 | 78 | | 21 | 79 | | 22 | 107 | | 23 | 90 | | 24 | 65 | | 25 | 99 |
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| 45.79% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "was illuminated" | | 1 | "been dropped" | | 2 | "was embroidered" | | 3 | "been opened" | | 4 | "was disturbed" | | 5 | "been briefed" | | 6 | "was cracked" | | 7 | "been paused" | | 8 | "been forged" | | 9 | "been ignored" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.135 | | matches | | 0 | "She could feel the chill of the forgotten tunnels seeping through the thin wool of her coat, but her focus was the faint glow that pulsed from a recessed doorway on the far wall — a doorway that led into the Veil Market, a place that existed only when the city’s pulse slowed enough to slip into the shadows." | | 1 | "Quinn knelt, feeling the coolness of the stone through her gloved hand, and noted the precise angle of the wound — clean, almost surgical, as if a blade of pure light had sliced through flesh without resistance." | | 2 | "She ran a gloved finger along the edge of the wound; it was as smooth as polished steel, with no ragged edges, no bruising beyond the point of entry." | | 3 | "It was embroidered with a symbol — an interlocking triangle and circle, the same sigil that marked the protective casing of the Veil Compass." | | 4 | "“ — for what?” Quinn asked, the words snapping like a drill sergeant’s bark." | | 5 | "Footprints — small, shallow, almost birdlike — ran from the body to a narrow stairwell that led upward, toward an exit marked by a faded sign: “Exit → Platform 13.” The footprints stopped abruptly before a narrow vent, as though the person who made them had decided the path was no longer viable." | | 6 | "“He’s a placeholder. The real target is the portal. The body was staged to create a narrative that a human life was lost here, but the truth is that the chaos that unfolded was something else entirely. The wound isn’t from a weapon; it’s from a source of energy that cuts through matter. The spatter pattern isn’t blood at all — it’s residual ether, the byproduct of a supernatural tear.”" | | 7 | "“The wound’s edges are too clean for any mortal blade. The blood isn’t blood; it’s a manifestation of the portal’s energy, frozen in time like a photograph. The person who placed this — whoever they are — wanted to send a message to whoever was chasing it, perhaps to someone who’d been hunting the same secret for years.”" | | 8 | "She remembered the night DS Morris had disappeared — how his watch had stopped at twelve, as if time itself had been paused." | | 9 | "“And we’ll find whoever’s pulling the strings. This isn’t just a crime scene; it’s a gateway. And in mysteries that intertwine the mundane with the otherworldly, the smallest detail can be the key that unlocks the whole thing.”" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1087 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.025758969641214352 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010119595216191352 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 28.08 | | std | 18.81 | | cv | 0.67 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 61 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 53 | | 35 | 46 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 48 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 81 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 83 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 80 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 50.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.35135135135135137 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "She could feel the chill" | | 1 | "She was here because the" | | 2 | "She ran a gloved finger" | | 3 | "she said, pulling a ragged" | | 4 | "It was embroidered with a" | | 5 | "Its needle, usually a steadfast" | | 6 | "She lifted the compass gently," | | 7 | "She turned her gaze to" | | 8 | "She knelt again, this time" | | 9 | "It was a fragment, curved" | | 10 | "She traced a finger along" | | 11 | "She remembered the night DS" | | 12 | "She reached into her satchel" | | 13 | "She stood, the weight of" | | 14 | "she declared, her resolve as" | | 15 | "She felt the familiar surge" |
| | ratio | 0.271 | |
| 2.37% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped onto" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" | | 2 | "She could feel the chill" | | 3 | "The market itself was a" | | 4 | "She was here because the" | | 5 | "Quinn’s eyes landed on a" | | 6 | "Eva Kowalski’s freckled face was" | | 7 | "Eva whispered, her voice trembling" | | 8 | "Harlow cut in, her voice" | | 9 | "The body lay face‑down on" | | 10 | "The skin was pallid, the" | | 11 | "Quinn knelt, feeling the coolness" | | 12 | "She ran a gloved finger" | | 13 | "Eva’s hand hovered over the" | | 14 | "she said, pulling a ragged" | | 15 | "It was embroidered with a" | | 16 | "“ — for" | | 17 | "Eva swallowed, her nervous habit" | | 18 | "Quinn glanced at the brass" | | 19 | "Its needle, usually a steadfast" |
| | ratio | 0.915 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 19 | | matches | | 0 | "She could feel the chill of the forgotten tunnels seeping through the thin wool of her coat, but her focus was the faint glow that pulsed from a recessed doorwa…" | | 1 | "Enchanted trinkets hummed in glass jars, vials of liquid that shimmered with an inner light, and whispered rumors sold in hushed tones." | | 2 | "She was here because the police tape stretched across the entrance like a warning, and a single, polished brass compass lay on a broken table at the center, its…" | | 3 | "Eva Kowalski’s freckled face was illuminated by the lantern light, her eyes darting between the compass and a dark shape lying in a puddle of spilled liquid." | | 4 | "The skin was pallid, the blood pooling around the neck a dark, almost black sheen that seemed to soak into the stone rather than stain it." | | 5 | "Quinn knelt, feeling the coolness of the stone through her gloved hand, and noted the precise angle of the wound — clean, almost surgical, as if a blade of pure…" | | 6 | "It was embroidered with a symbol — an interlocking triangle and circle, the same sigil that marked the protective casing of the Veil Compass." | | 7 | "Its needle, usually a steadfast arrow pointing north, now hovered erratically, its tip trembling as if caught in an invisible current." | | 8 | "She turned her gaze to the floor, scanning the uneven grains of dust and ash that covered the tiles." | | 9 | "Quinn’s mind raced through the details of the case she’d been briefed on: DS Morris’s death three years ago, the inexplicable circumstances that had left the te…" | | 10 | "The market moved locations every full moon, a temporal shift that made it impossible to predict where it would appear." | | 11 | "It was a fragment, curved and pitted, the surface etched with the same protective sigils that adorned the compass’s casing." | | 12 | "As she lifted it, a faint, almost imperceptible hum seemed to rise from it, resonating with the same low frequency that had vibrated through the compass’s needl…" | | 13 | "The hum grew louder when she pressed the bone to the sigil on the compass’s back, as if completing a circuit." | | 14 | "The memory tightened the knot of her jaw, sharpening the focus that had been forged through years of military precision and three decades of relentless investig…" | | 15 | "She reached into her satchel and pulled out a weathered notebook, its pages filled with inked sketches of sigils and marginalia that looked like translations of…" | | 16 | "The lanterns flickered as a gust of cold air swept through the tunnel, as if the market itself sensed the presence of someone who understood its hidden rules." | | 17 | "The compass’s needle steadied for a heartbeat, pointing directly at a sealed archway that had previously been ignored." | | 18 | "She felt the familiar surge of purpose that had carried her through countless investigations, and knew that the next step would require not only her analytical …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow murmured, more to herself than to Eva" | | 1 | "Harlow interrupted, her detective’s mind already cataloguing the possibilities" | | 2 | "Quinn said, her voice low but firm" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Harlow murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Quinn whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Harlow interrupted (interrupt)" | | 4 | "she declared (declare)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0.625 | | effectiveRatio | 0.385 | |