| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.73% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1170 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1170 | | totalAiIsms | 37 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "shattered" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "wavering" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "quivered" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "aligned" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "resonated" | | 11 | "crystal" | | 12 | "otherworldly" | | 13 | "resolve" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "anticipation" | | 16 | "fleeting" | | 17 | "tapestry" | | 18 | "magnetic" | | 19 | "radiant" | | 20 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | | |
| 3.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1170 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 1170 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.68 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 8 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Compass | 1 | | Eva | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Kowalski" | | 3 | "Compass" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "shape that seemed to mark a doorway" | | 1 | "as if reacting to an unseen pulse" | | 2 | "passage that seemed to breathe with anticipation" | | 3 | "tone that seemed to vibrate the very marrow of her bones" | | 4 | "glow that seemed to tear at the veil between worlds" | | 5 | "glow that seemed to tear at the veil between worlds" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 33.43 | | std | 26.34 | | cv | 0.788 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 96 | | 1 | 74 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 71 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 62 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 76 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 77 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 208 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.49% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "The concentric circles are not random; they are a map." | | 1 | "We must be careful; the market does not give answers without cost." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1170 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 9 | | adverbRatio | 0.007692307692307693 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003418803418803419 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 72.35% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 16.25 | | std | 5.38 | | cv | 0.331 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 26.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.1527777777777778 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 11 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped onto the platform," | | 1 | "She knelt beside a small" | | 2 | "She felt a faint vibration" | | 3 | "She pressed the needle, watching" | | 4 | "It’s not a rift in" | | 5 | "She aligned her gaze with" | | 6 | "She set the compass on" | | 7 | "She held it to the" | | 8 | "It’s trying to communicate." | | 9 | "She stepped toward the figure," | | 10 | "She pressed the shard against" | | 11 | "She stepped back, eyes tracking" | | 12 | "We must be careful; the" | | 13 | "She inhaled, the scent of" | | 14 | "She accepted the offering, feeling" | | 15 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 16 | "She spoke a single word," |
| | ratio | 0.236 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn pushed open" | | 1 | "She stepped onto the platform," | | 2 | "The air tasted of iron" | | 3 | "A single lamp flickered overhead," | | 4 | "The pipe was empty, but" | | 5 | "Eva Kowalski lingered near a" | | 6 | "She knelt beside a small" | | 7 | "The compass casing bore a" | | 8 | "The needle quivered, pointing toward" | | 9 | "The pattern suggests a ritual." | | 10 | "Quinn crouched, fingers tracing the" | | 11 | "The liquid was thicker than" | | 12 | "She felt a faint vibration" | | 13 | "The stain formed concentric circles," | | 14 | "The circles intersected at a" | | 15 | "The needle points to the" | | 16 | "Eva lifted the compass, turning" | | 17 | "She pressed the needle, watching" | | 18 | "The sigils surrounding the outline" | | 19 | "It’s not a rift in" |
| | ratio | 0.986 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "The pipe was empty, but the surrounding wall was smeared with a dark, viscous stain that clung to the stone like tar." | | 1 | "She knelt beside a small brass object half buried in the muck, the Veil Compass resting there as if left behind in haste." | | 2 | "The stain formed concentric circles, each ring offset, as if drawn with deliberate intent." | | 3 | "The sigils surrounding the outline matched symbols from the archival notes she had studied, markings that indicated a crossing point between worlds." | | 4 | "The crack was wider than a finger, yet an unseen energy pulsed from it, a silent rhythm that resonated through her bones." | | 5 | "She set the compass on the ground, its face catching a stray beam of light, the protective sigils glowing green." | | 6 | "The pieces arranged themselves into a grid when followed along the lines of the stain, forming a pattern that matched the concentric circles above." | | 7 | "She held it to the lamplight, watching the runes flare, revealing a hidden symbol that mirrored the one etched on the compass face." | | 8 | "The market beyond breathed, its unseen currents stirring, ready to test the resolve of anyone who dared cross." | | 9 | "Quinn felt the compass vibrate in her palm, the needle twitching as if reacting to an unseen pulse." | | 10 | "The glow intensified, spiraling outward, illuminating a narrow passage that seemed to breathe with anticipation." | | 11 | "The pouch contained a fragment of the original rift, a piece that could seal or shatter depending on use." | | 12 | "The figure stepped forward, hand raised, humming resonating with a low tone that seemed to vibrate the very marrow of her bones." | | 13 | "Eva watched, eyes widening, as the light intensified, flooding the corridor with a radiant glow that seemed to tear at the veil between worlds." | | 14 | "Eva watched, eyes widening, as the light intensified, flooding the corridor with a radiant glow that seemed to tear at the veil between worlds." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |