Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFF1T9BNAYYZ1Y61K2NDSX4

Run Details

Duration:
45.4s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Nvidia

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Eva pushed the door of The Raven's Nest open, the green neon buzzing overhead casting a soft glow on the worn wooden floor. She paused near the entrance, letting the scent of ale and old paper settle in her lungs. Rory: “You look like you’ve got a map in your head and no idea where to start.” Eva: “I’m just looking for a quiet corner. The conference downstairs got too loud.” Rory: “The back booth is free. Silas keeps it for those who need to think.” Eva: “Thanks. I’ll take it.” Rory slid a glass of water across the bar, the condensation catching the light. She leaned against the polished surface, her straight shoulder‑length black hair falling over one ear, the crescent scar on her left wrist catching a glint as she moved. Eva: “It’s been a while, Rory. Six years? Maybe seven.” Rory: “Seven. You left Cardiff the day after the train strike.” Eva: “I remember. You were packing your bag, eyes fixed on the platform.” Rory: “I was trying not to think about the flat above Silas’. About the bar.” Eva: “You ended up here, then. Above the Nest.” Rory: “Below the sign, actually. I deliver for the Golden Empress. Takes me through Soho every evening.” Eva: “You still run? I thought you’d be in a courtroom by now.” Rory: “I took the pre‑law route, then switched. Delivery keeps my feet on the ground.” Eva: “And your mind?” Rory: “Sharp enough to notice when a customer’s order is off by a digit.” Eva let out a low laugh, the sound echoing off the brick walls lined with old maps. She tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, her hazel eyes scanning the room. Eva: “I never imagined you’d be behind a bar instead of a briefcase.” Rory: “I imagined you’d be teaching literature at a university, not negotiating mergers.” Eva: “Life has a way of rewriting plans.” Rory: “Or erasing them.” A silence settled, thick as the amber liquid in the glasses nearby. Eva traced the rim of her water glass with a fingertip, feeling the faint grooves left by countless patrons. Eva: “Do you ever wonder what would’ve happened if we’d stayed in Cardiff? If I hadn’t taken that internship in London?” Rory: “I wonder if you’d have heard my mother’s voice reading Welsh lullabies to you on rainy afternoons.” Eva: “I remember those. The way she’d hum low, the words slipping like silk.” Rory: “She used to say the language carried the hills inside it.” Eva: “And your father? The barrister who argued cases with a calm that could steady a courtroom?” Rory: “He still does. He calls every Sunday, asks if I’ve eaten properly.” Eva: “Mine passed two years ago. Cancer. Quick, cruel.” Rory’s gaze drifted to the scar on her wrist, the small crescent catching the dim light. She pressed her thumb against it, feeling the ridge of old tissue. Rory: “I got this when I was eight, falling off the garage roof while trying to retrieve a kite.” Eva: “You always were the one climbing where others feared.” Rory: “Fear was a luxury I couldn’t afford after Evan.” Eva’s brow tightened, the memory of that name surfacing like a shadow. Eva: “He made you leave. Took more than just your trust.” Rory: “He took the sense that safety was a place you could return to.” Eva: “You built a new safety here, among the maps and photographs.” Rory: “Silas gave me a job behind the bar when I needed one. He never asked why I left Cardiff.” Eva: “He sees more than most.” Rory: “He sees the limp in his own leg and the quiet in a person’s eyes.” Eva: “You’ve kept that quiet, Rory. It’s different now.” Rory: “Quiet isn’t empty. It’s full of things unsaid.” Eva: “Like the regret of not seeing you sooner?” Rory: “Like the regret of thinking I could outrun the past by moving cities.” Eva: “You didn’t outrun it. You carried it.” Rory: “I carry it in the way I check each delivery address twice, in the way I flinch when a door slams too hard.” Eva: “And in the way you still notice the scar on your wrist when the light hits just right.” Rory lifted her left hand, turning it so the scar caught the neon green, a thin silver line against her skin. Eva: “It’s a reminder.” Rory: “Of what I survived, not what I lost.” A server slid a plate of fish and chips toward them, the batter crackling softly. Rory picked up a piece, the crispness audible in the hushed bar. Eva: “You still eat like you’re fueling for a run.” Rory: “Fueling for whatever comes next.” Eva: “Do you ever think about going back to law?” Rory: “Sometimes, when I’m stacking boxes in the restaurant’s back room, I feel the pull of arguments, of weighing evidence.” Eva: “And then?” Rory: “Then I remember the weight of a briefcase, the way it drags on your shoulder after a long day.” Eva: “Your shoulders look lighter now.” Rory: “Maybe because I’m not carrying expectations.” Eva: “Or maybe because you’ve learned to set them down.” Rory: “Setting them down doesn’t mean forgetting them.” Eva: “No. It means making room for other things.” Rory: “Like the smell of rain on Soho streets after a shift.” Eva: “Or the sound of Silas humming old jazz tunes while he polishes the glasses.” Rory: “He says the notes keep the memories from getting stale.” Eva: “Do you think we’ll ever find the place where we belong?” Rory: “Belonging isn’t a place. It’s the moment you stop searching for it.” Eva smiled, a small curve that didn’t reach her eyes fully. Eva: “I used to think belonging was a destination you reached after enough miles.” Rory: “Now I think it’s the pause between breaths, the second you realize you’re exactly where you need to be.” The bar’s door opened again, a gust of cool air stirring the scattered newspapers on a nearby table. A newcomer slipped in, ordering a whiskey, his boots thudding against the floor. Rory glanced over, noting the way he hesitated before speaking to Silas. Eva: “You still watch people like that?” Rory: “Habit. It’s how I learned to read a room before I could read a contract.” Eva: “And you still read them well.” Rory: “Only when I’m not distracted by my own thoughts.” Eva: “What are you thinking about now?” Rory: “About the kite I lost as a kid, the one that tangled in the garage rafters.” Eva: “You never got it back.” Rory: “No. But I learned to tie a stronger string.” Eva’s eyes softened, the neon light painting her face in shades of green and gold. Eva: “Maybe that’s what we’ve been doing all these years—tying stronger strings, even when we can’t see the kite.” Rory: “Or learning to fly without one.” They fell into a comfortable silence, the murmur of conversation around them blending with the low hum of the refrigerator behind the bar. Eva reached for her glass, the condensation cool against her palm. Rory lifted hers, the liquid catching the light in a brief sparkle. Eva: “To the strings we’ve tied.” Rory: “And to the flights we’ve yet to take.” Their glasses met, a soft clink that seemed to echo against the old maps on the wall, a sound that lingered just long enough to remind them that time, while relentless, could also be gentle in the spaces between heartbeats. Eva: “I should get back to the conference. My talk starts in an hour.” Rory: “Go on. I’ll be here, wiping down the bar, waiting for the next delivery.” Eva stood, smoothing her coat, the fabric whispering against her legs. She paused at the doorway, looking back one last time. Eva: “Take care of yourself, Rory.” Rory: “You too, Eva. Stay curious.” Eva slipped out, the door closing with a muted thud. Rory exhaled, the breath forming a faint cloud in the cool air near the neon sign. She turned back to the bar, her fingers brushing the scar on her wrist as she reached for a cloth, ready to begin the next shift.
created_at"2026-03-11T22:07:36.247Z" 3/11/2026, 10:07:36 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.041
leniency0.081
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"comfortable"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"glint"
1"echoing"
2"scanning"
3"silence"
4"traced"
5"silk"
6"reminder"
7"weight"
8"comfortable"
9"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1366
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions96
wordCount538
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity8.92
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity14.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Eva48
Rory45
Silas1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences28
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"clink that seemed to echo against the old maps on the wall, a sound that lingered just long enough to remind them that time, while relentless, could also be gentle in the spaces between heartbeats"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1366
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean16.07
std10.99
cv0.684
sampleLengths
040
117
214
315
45
542
610
711
813
915
109
1130
1215
134
1414
1532
1613
1713
1843
1921
2018
2114
2212
2317
2413
259
2628
2719
2810
2910
3012
3111
3214
3312
3420
356
3616
379
389
399
4014
418
4224
4319
4421
454
469
4727
4810
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs72
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences99
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount538
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.016728624535315983
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0037174721189591076
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean13.8
std6.17
cv0.447
sampleLengths
023
117
217
314
415
55
614
728
810
911
1013
1115
129
1330
1415
154
1614
1717
1815
1913
2013
2124
2219
2321
2418
2514
2612
2717
2813
299
3016
3112
3219
3310
3410
3512
3611
3714
3812
3920
406
4116
429
439
449
4514
468
4724
4819
4921
42.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.0707070707070707
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners7
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences28
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences28
matches
0"She paused near the entrance,"
1"She leaned against the polished"
2"She tucked a strand of"
3"She pressed her thumb against"
4"They fell into a comfortable"
5"Their glasses met, a soft"
6"She paused at the doorway,"
7"She turned back to the"
ratio0.286
13.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount25
totalSentences28
matches
0"Eva pushed the door of"
1"She paused near the entrance,"
2"Rory slid a glass of"
3"She leaned against the polished"
4"Eva let out a low"
5"She tucked a strand of"
6"Eva traced the rim of"
7"Rory’s gaze drifted to the"
8"She pressed her thumb against"
9"Eva’s brow tightened, the memory"
10"Rory lifted her left hand,"
11"A server slid a plate"
12"Rory picked up a piece,"
13"Eva smiled, a small curve"
14"The bar’s door opened again,"
15"A newcomer slipped in, ordering"
16"Rory glanced over, noting the"
17"They fell into a comfortable"
18"Eva reached for her glass,"
19"Rory lifted hers, the liquid"
ratio0.893
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences28
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A newcomer slipped in, ordering a whiskey, his boots thudding against the floor."
1"Their glasses met, a soft clink that seemed to echo against the old maps on the wall, a sound that lingered just long enough to remind them that time, while rel…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva slipped out, the door closing with a muted thud"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.6346%