Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFF477Y65RC148N3WTA6TP4

Run Details

Duration:
9m 36s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Nvidia

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora slipped through the ring of oak stones and stepped onto the mossy floor of the grove. Night air smelled of damp earth and sweet crushed petals. Wildflowers glowed under the moon their colors deep as bruised wine. She pulled the collar of her jacket close and felt the weight of the heartstone pendant against her skin. It throbbed a soft pulse that matched the beat in her throat. She had come because the pendant grew warm whenever a Hel portal stirred nearby. Old rumors whispered that the grove hid a thin spot between worlds a place where the veil wore thin. She needed to know if the stories held any truth. Her boots sank into the spongy ground. She paused listening. The usual night chorus of crickets and owls was absent. Instead a low hum filled the space like the resonance of a distant bell struck underwater. She frowned tilting her head to catch the source. Nothing moved in the clearing except the sway of flowers that seemed to breathe on their own. She lifted her wrist and stared at the scar that curled like a tiny moon. The skin there felt tighter than usual as if pulled by an invisible thread. She pressed the pendant to the scar and felt a faint shiver run up her arm. "Anything?" she asked the pendant voice low. The gem flared a brief flash of crimson that lit the underside of her chin. Then it dimmed to its usual glow. She turned scanning the perimeter. The standing stones loomed like sentinels their surfaces etched with moss and lichen. Between them shadows pooled deeper than the night allowed. She swore she saw a flicker at the edge of her vision—a shape that resembled a stag antlers tangled with vines but when she turned fully the clearing held only grass and stone. A chill brushed her neck not from wind but from the sensation of being watched. She swallowed the sound loud in the stillness. She pulled out her phone tapped the screen and watched the battery icon blink at twelve percent. She pressed it to her ear and heard only static a white hiss that rose and fell like breath. "Hello?" she said voice echoing oddly as if spoken inside a hollow tube. No answer came back. She lowered the phone and slipped it back into her pocket. She decided to walk the perimeter keeping her hand on the pendant for reassurance. Each step sank into the earth releasing a sigh of damp moss. The hum grew louder now accompanied by a soft tapping like fingers drumming on hollow wood. She turned her head toward the sound but saw nothing but the sway of blossoms. Time felt strange. Her watch showed ten minutes had passed since she entered yet the sky overhead seemed unchanged the moon hanging low as if stuck. She glanced at the pendant again its glow pulsed in rhythm with the tapping each flash a brief heartbeat of light. She stopped near a cluster of white flowers that seemed to emit their own luminescence. She knelt fingertips brushing the petals. They were cool yet a warmth rose from them seeping into her skin. A whisper slipped through the air not a word but a feeling like the sigh of someone exhaling just beyond hearing. She whispered back "Who's there?" The flowers trembled releasing a puff of silver pollen that drifted upward and vanished before it could touch the ground. The tapping ceased for a moment then resumed closer now as if the source had moved to stand behind her. She sprang up her heart knocked against her ribs. She spun eyes scanning the darkness. The grove appeared unchanged the stones silent the flowers still. Yet the air pressed against her skin heavy and thick like wool soaked in rain. She took a breath and forced herself to speak to break the tension. "I'm not afraid" she said voice steady despite the prickle at her spine. The words hung then were swallowed by the hum. A soft chuckle low and melodic seemed to ripple from the ground itself. It was not laughter but a sound like stones grinding together dry and ancient. She clenched her fists nails biting into her palms. She lifted the pendant and held it aloft. The crimson light flared brighter casting long shadows that danced across the moss. In the shifting light she thought she saw movement at the base of the nearest stone—a ripple as if the stone itself breathed. She stepped closer the pendant leading the way. The stone surface felt warm under her fingertips thrumming with a low vibration. She pressed her ear to the rock and heard a faint murmur a language made of clicks and sighs that she could not decipher. A sudden gust swept through the clearing bending the flowers sideways. In that instant the pendant's glow snapped out plunging the grove into near darkness. Only the moon offered a thin silver rim around the standing stones. She felt the temperature drop her breath forming a small cloud that hung before disappearing. She whispered "Stay with me." The pendant remained dark its warmth gone. She fumbled in her pocket for a flashlight found it and clicked it on. The beam cut a narrow cone of light revealing the mossy floor and the bases of the stones. Nothing moved within the beam except the occasional flutter of a moth drawn to the light. She swept the light around the clearing. The beam caught on something glinting near the farthest stone—a small object half buried in the earth. She moved toward it her heart pulsed in her chest. As she neared the light flickered the battery weakening. She knelt and brushed away loose soil. Her fingers closed around a smooth piece of bone pale and curved like a rib. It was warm to the touch pulsing faintly with the same rhythm she felt in the pendant. She lifted it and the bone seemed to hum a vibration that traveled up her arm and into her teeth. She froze. The bone was not animal its shape was deliberate and symmetrical beyond natural expectation. It resembled a fragment of something larger perhaps a rib from a creature that never existed on this world. A soft rustle came from behind her. She did not turn. Instead she whispered "Show yourself." The rustle stopped. The humming in the bone ceased. The pendant still dark felt cold against her chest. She rose bone clutched in her fist. The moonlight caught the edge of the stone behind her and for a split second she saw a silhouette pressed flat against the rock—a figure tall and jointed beyond human proportion head elongated like a skull wrapped in flesh. It did not move it simply watched. She swallowed the taste of copper on her tongue. She lifted the bone and pointed it toward the figure. The pendant still dark gave no reaction. "What do you want?" she said. The figure did not answer. Instead the stone behind it seemed to ripple as if the surface were water. A thin column of mist rose from the rock curling upward and forming a shape that resembled a doorway its edges flickering like candle flame. She felt a pull an invitation that made her skin prickle. She stepped back bone tight in her grip. The mist thickened the doorway widening to reveal a glimpse beyond—a landscape of twisted trees with black leaves a sky stained violet and a low horizon where lights pulsed like distant hearts. She inhaled the air tasting of iron and damp stone. She knew with a certainty that settled in her gut that crossing that threshold would change something fundamental. She also knew that staying would mean whatever watched would not leave her alone. She glanced at the pendant one last time. Its surface remained dull but a faint warmth began to seep from the chain spreading up her neck like a slow tide. "Not tonight" she whispered. The figure shifted its head tilting. The mist shuddered the doorway collapsing into a spray of droplets that fell to the moss in silence. The bone in her hand gave a final throb and then went still cold as stone. She turned and walked back toward the standing stones each step echoing in the quiet. The hum faded leaving only the night's natural sounds—the distant call of an owl the soft rustle of leaves in a breeze that now seemed genuine. She paused at the threshold of the grove looked back one more time. The clearing appeared ordinary again a ring of stones and flowers under the moon. Yet she felt the weight of the bone remaining in her pocket a reminder that something had touched her and left a mark. She slipped the bone into her pocket adjusted her jacket and stepped out of the grove the pendant warm against her skin.
created_at"2026-03-11T22:08:55.053Z" 3/11/2026, 10:08:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She whispered back [back]"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1497
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1497
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"resonance"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count2
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"sentinels"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count2
11
word"pulsed"
count3
12
word"warmth"
count3
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count1
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"glinting"
count1
17
word"flickered"
count1
18
word"silence"
count1
19
word"throb"
count1
20
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"throbbed"
2"pulse"
3"resonance"
4"scanning"
5"loomed"
6"sentinels"
7"etched"
8"flicker"
9"chill"
10"echoing"
11"pulsed"
12"warmth"
13"whisper"
14"trembled"
15"tension"
16"glinting"
17"flickered"
18"silence"
19"throb"
20"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
55.90% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences115
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1491
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions1
wordCount1473
uniqueNames1
maxNameDensity0.07
worstName"Hel"
maxWindowNameDensity0
worstWindowName(null)
discoveredNames
Hel1
persons(empty)
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"flowers that seemed to breathe on their own"
1"seemed unchanged the moon hanging low as if stuck"
2"flowers that seemed to emit their own luminescence"
3"appeared unchanged the stones silent the flowers still"
4"seemed genuine"
5"appeared ordinary again a ring of stones and flowers under the moon"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.012
wordCount1491
matches
0"not from wind but from the sensation of being watched"
1"not a word but a feeling like the sigh of someone exhaling just beyond hear"
2"not laughter but a sound like stones grinding together dry"
79.71% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences115
matches
0"whispered that the"
1"crossing that threshold"
2"knew that staying"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean35.5
std18.81
cv0.53
sampleLengths
069
143
262
345
47
522
660
759
813
915
1057
1147
1255
135
1440
1540
1613
1713
1836
1953
2045
2152
225
2355
2443
2559
2635
2716
2818
2953
3026
316
3244
3351
3442
3530
364
3724
3816
3941
4050
4122
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"were swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs258
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences115
ratio0.052
matches
0"She swore she saw a flicker at the edge of her vision—a shape that resembled a stag antlers tangled with vines but when she turned fully the clearing held only grass and stone."
1"In the shifting light she thought she saw movement at the base of the nearest stone—a ripple as if the stone itself breathed."
2"The beam caught on something glinting near the farthest stone—a small object half buried in the earth."
3"The moonlight caught the edge of the stone behind her and for a split second she saw a silhouette pressed flat against the rock—a figure tall and jointed beyond human proportion head elongated like a skull wrapped in flesh."
4"The mist thickened the doorway widening to reveal a glimpse beyond—a landscape of twisted trees with black leaves a sky stained violet and a low horizon where lights pulsed like distant hearts."
5"The hum faded leaving only the night's natural sounds—the distant call of an owl the soft rustle of leaves in a breeze that now seemed genuine."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1479
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"symmetrical beyond natural expectation."
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.02636916835699797
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.005409060175794456
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean12.97
std6.54
cv0.505
sampleLengths
017
110
211
319
412
514
619
710
87
93
1010
1116
129
1317
1415
1514
1616
177
1815
197
205
2113
229
2333
2415
258
2617
2719
2813
294
3011
3114
3212
3316
3415
353
3623
3721
3815
396
4013
4121
425
4320
4420
459
466
4710
4815
4913
33.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.23478260869565218
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences111
matches
0"Instead a low hum filled"
1"Then it dimmed to its"
2"Only the moon offered a"
3"Instead she whispered"
4"Instead the stone behind it"
ratio0.045
10.99% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences111
matches
0"She pulled the collar of"
1"It throbbed a soft pulse"
2"She had come because the"
3"She needed to know if"
4"Her boots sank into the"
5"She paused listening."
6"She frowned tilting her head"
7"She lifted her wrist and"
8"She pressed the pendant to"
9"she asked the pendant voice"
10"She turned scanning the perimeter."
11"She swore she saw a"
12"She swallowed the sound loud"
13"She pulled out her phone"
14"She pressed it to her"
15"she said voice echoing oddly"
16"She lowered the phone and"
17"She decided to walk the"
18"She turned her head toward"
19"Her watch showed ten minutes"
ratio0.523
18.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences111
matches
0"Aurora slipped through the ring"
1"Night air smelled of damp"
2"Wildflowers glowed under the moon"
3"She pulled the collar of"
4"It throbbed a soft pulse"
5"She had come because the"
6"She needed to know if"
7"Her boots sank into the"
8"She paused listening."
9"The usual night chorus of"
10"She frowned tilting her head"
11"Nothing moved in the clearing"
12"She lifted her wrist and"
13"The skin there felt tighter"
14"She pressed the pendant to"
15"she asked the pendant voice"
16"The gem flared a brief"
17"She turned scanning the perimeter."
18"The standing stones loomed like"
19"She swore she saw a"
ratio0.883
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.01% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences73
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"It throbbed a soft pulse that matched the beat in her throat."
1"The skin there felt tighter than usual as if pulled by an invisible thread."
2"The gem flared a brief flash of crimson that lit the underside of her chin."
3"Her watch showed ten minutes had passed since she entered yet the sky overhead seemed unchanged the moon hanging low as if stuck."
4"She stopped near a cluster of white flowers that seemed to emit their own luminescence."
5"She felt the temperature drop her breath forming a small cloud that hung before disappearing."
6"She lifted it and the bone seemed to hum a vibration that traveled up her arm and into her teeth."
7"A thin column of mist rose from the rock curling upward and forming a shape that resembled a doorway its edges flickering like candle flame."
8"She felt a pull an invitation that made her skin prickle."
9"She knew with a certainty that settled in her gut that crossing that threshold would change something fundamental."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"She whispered back (whisper)"
1"She whispered (whisper)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
67.4023%