| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She whispered back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1497 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.48% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1497 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "resonance" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "sentinels" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "echoing" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "trembled" | | 15 | "tension" | | 16 | "glinting" | | 17 | "flickered" | | 18 | "silence" | | 19 | "throb" | | 20 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.90% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1491 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 1 | | wordCount | 1473 | | uniqueNames | 1 | | maxNameDensity | 0.07 | | worstName | "Hel" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0 | | worstWindowName | (null) | | discoveredNames | | | persons | (empty) | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 2.94% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "flowers that seemed to breathe on their own" | | 1 | "seemed unchanged the moon hanging low as if stuck" | | 2 | "flowers that seemed to emit their own luminescence" | | 3 | "appeared unchanged the stones silent the flowers still" | | 4 | "seemed genuine" | | 5 | "appeared ordinary again a ring of stones and flowers under the moon" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.012 | | wordCount | 1491 | | matches | | 0 | "not from wind but from the sensation of being watched" | | 1 | "not a word but a feeling like the sigh of someone exhaling just beyond hear" | | 2 | "not laughter but a sound like stones grinding together dry" |
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| 79.71% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "whispered that the" | | 1 | "crossing that threshold" | | 2 | "knew that staying" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 35.5 | | std | 18.81 | | cv | 0.53 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 59 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 55 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 59 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 53 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 44 | | 33 | 51 | | 34 | 42 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 41 | | 40 | 50 | | 41 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 258 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "She swore she saw a flicker at the edge of her vision—a shape that resembled a stag antlers tangled with vines but when she turned fully the clearing held only grass and stone." | | 1 | "In the shifting light she thought she saw movement at the base of the nearest stone—a ripple as if the stone itself breathed." | | 2 | "The beam caught on something glinting near the farthest stone—a small object half buried in the earth." | | 3 | "The moonlight caught the edge of the stone behind her and for a split second she saw a silhouette pressed flat against the rock—a figure tall and jointed beyond human proportion head elongated like a skull wrapped in flesh." | | 4 | "The mist thickened the doorway widening to reveal a glimpse beyond—a landscape of twisted trees with black leaves a sky stained violet and a low horizon where lights pulsed like distant hearts." | | 5 | "The hum faded leaving only the night's natural sounds—the distant call of an owl the soft rustle of leaves in a breeze that now seemed genuine." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1479 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "symmetrical beyond natural expectation." |
| | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.02636916835699797 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005409060175794456 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 12.97 | | std | 6.54 | | cv | 0.505 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 33.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.23478260869565218 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead a low hum filled" | | 1 | "Then it dimmed to its" | | 2 | "Only the moon offered a" | | 3 | "Instead she whispered" | | 4 | "Instead the stone behind it" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 10.99% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the collar of" | | 1 | "It throbbed a soft pulse" | | 2 | "She had come because the" | | 3 | "She needed to know if" | | 4 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 5 | "She paused listening." | | 6 | "She frowned tilting her head" | | 7 | "She lifted her wrist and" | | 8 | "She pressed the pendant to" | | 9 | "she asked the pendant voice" | | 10 | "She turned scanning the perimeter." | | 11 | "She swore she saw a" | | 12 | "She swallowed the sound loud" | | 13 | "She pulled out her phone" | | 14 | "She pressed it to her" | | 15 | "she said voice echoing oddly" | | 16 | "She lowered the phone and" | | 17 | "She decided to walk the" | | 18 | "She turned her head toward" | | 19 | "Her watch showed ten minutes" |
| | ratio | 0.523 | |
| 18.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 98 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora slipped through the ring" | | 1 | "Night air smelled of damp" | | 2 | "Wildflowers glowed under the moon" | | 3 | "She pulled the collar of" | | 4 | "It throbbed a soft pulse" | | 5 | "She had come because the" | | 6 | "She needed to know if" | | 7 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 8 | "She paused listening." | | 9 | "The usual night chorus of" | | 10 | "She frowned tilting her head" | | 11 | "Nothing moved in the clearing" | | 12 | "She lifted her wrist and" | | 13 | "The skin there felt tighter" | | 14 | "She pressed the pendant to" | | 15 | "she asked the pendant voice" | | 16 | "The gem flared a brief" | | 17 | "She turned scanning the perimeter." | | 18 | "The standing stones loomed like" | | 19 | "She swore she saw a" |
| | ratio | 0.883 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 45.01% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "It throbbed a soft pulse that matched the beat in her throat." | | 1 | "The skin there felt tighter than usual as if pulled by an invisible thread." | | 2 | "The gem flared a brief flash of crimson that lit the underside of her chin." | | 3 | "Her watch showed ten minutes had passed since she entered yet the sky overhead seemed unchanged the moon hanging low as if stuck." | | 4 | "She stopped near a cluster of white flowers that seemed to emit their own luminescence." | | 5 | "She felt the temperature drop her breath forming a small cloud that hung before disappearing." | | 6 | "She lifted it and the bone seemed to hum a vibration that traveled up her arm and into her teeth." | | 7 | "A thin column of mist rose from the rock curling upward and forming a shape that resembled a doorway its edges flickering like candle flame." | | 8 | "She felt a pull an invitation that made her skin prickle." | | 9 | "She knew with a certainty that settled in her gut that crossing that threshold would change something fundamental." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She whispered back (whisper)" | | 1 | "She whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |