| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1422 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 12.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1422 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "beacon" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "profound" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "echo" | | 11 | "down her spine" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "rhythmic" | | 15 | "chilling" | | 16 | "gleaming" | | 17 | "cacophony" | | 18 | "oppressive" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 167 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 167 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 170 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.30% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 12 | | markdownWords | 78 | | totalWords | 1422 | | ratio | 0.055 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove needs you. The stones mark the way. Come alone." | | 1 | "Tick-tock. Tick-tock." | | 2 | "here" | | 3 | "Tick-tock. Tick-tock." | | 4 | "…not alone… found you… little spark…" | | 5 | "rippled" | | 6 | "The carrier. The blooded. You carry the key." | | 7 | "You are the key. The lock is old. It grows thin." | | 8 | "They are not yours to save, little spark. They are ours. The debt is old. The harvest comes." | | 9 | "But you… you are a curiosity. A soul that walked here willingly. Such a rare treat." | | 10 | "Run." | | 11 | "crack" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1399 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.79 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 11 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Grove | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 77.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to shift when she wasn’t looking directly at them" | | 1 | "as if trying to escape a deep well" | | 2 | "felt like fingers, reaching, grabbing" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.516 | | wordCount | 1422 | | matches | | 0 | "Not at the edges this time, but right before her" | | 1 | "not a mechanism, but a pool of absolute blackness inside" | | 2 | "Not just the one, but dozens" | | 3 | "Not walked, but flowed, the ground shrinking beneath it" | | 4 | "not for her throat, but for the glowing stone" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 35.55 | | std | 23.98 | | cv | 0.674 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 84 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 78 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 70 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 85 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 50 | | 24 | 51 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 53 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 42 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 63 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 35 | | 38 | 44 | | 39 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | | |
| 81.48% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 225 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t looking" | | 1 | "wasn’t warning" | | 2 | "wasn’t coming" | | 3 | "was coming" |
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| 58.82% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 170 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "The transition wasn’t a step; it was a fold." | | 1 | "One moment, the familiar scents of damp earth and distant traffic; the next, a wall of fragrance so heavy it coated her tongue." | | 2 | "The light overhead didn’t cast proper shadows; they pooled at the base of stones like spilled ink, but her own shadow stretched long and thin before her, impossibly ahead." | | 3 | "The lid didn’t open; it dissolved into a shimmer of silver dust, revealing not a mechanism, but a pool of absolute blackness inside." | | 4 | "One moment it was by the stone; the next, it was a yard away, the cold radiating from it in waves." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1408 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same eerie white flowers." | | 1 | "long, three-fingered hand" | | 2 | "faint, sickly green light." |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.028409090909090908 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004971590909090909 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 170 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 170 | | mean | 8.36 | | std | 5.79 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 26.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 40 | | diversityRatio | 0.2411764705882353 | | totalSentences | 170 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 47.28% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the boughs, twisted into" | | 1 | "Such a rare treat.*" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "It had never done that" | | 1 | "She’d followed the instructions." | | 2 | "She pushed through." | | 3 | "She took a step onto" | | 4 | "It yielded too softly, like" | | 5 | "Her voice came out a" | | 6 | "It didn’t echo." | | 7 | "She was alone." | | 8 | "She told herself she was" | | 9 | "She pressed forward, towards the" | | 10 | "Her own voice sounded foreign," | | 11 | "It wasn’t a clock." | | 12 | "It was organic, like a" | | 13 | "She could turn back." | | 14 | "She could bolt for the" | | 15 | "She took a steadying breath" | | 16 | "She rounded a colossal oak," | | 17 | "It wasn’t warning her of" | | 18 | "It coalesced, drawing in the" | | 19 | "It had no face, just" |
| | ratio | 0.248 | |
| 55.74% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 114 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "The stone was warm under" | | 1 | "That wasn’t right." | | 2 | "The deep crimson pendant at" | | 3 | "It had never done that" | | 4 | "She’d followed the instructions." | | 5 | "A note, slipped under her" | | 6 | "*The Grove needs you." | | 7 | "The stones mark the way." | | 8 | "Yu-Fei had just shaken his" | | 9 | "A summons she couldn’t ignore." | | 10 | "The air between the two" | | 11 | "That was the threshold." | | 12 | "She pushed through." | | 13 | "The transition wasn’t a step;" | | 14 | "Honeysuckle and something sweeter, cloying," | | 15 | "Wildflowers bloomed in a riot" | | 16 | "The Fae Grove." | | 17 | "The silence hit her next." | | 18 | "A profound, waiting silence that" | | 19 | "The pendant’s pulse quickened, a" |
| | ratio | 0.809 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Not for a standing stone in Richmond Park at gone midnight, slick with dew that should have been ice-cold." | | 1 | "A chorus of whispers, a rustling of dry grasses that formed almost-words on the edge of hearing." | | 2 | "It had no face, just a smooth, ovoid surface that reflected the grove in distorted, funhouse mirror sweeps." | | 3 | "A hand, pale and skeletal, fingers clawing at the air as if trying to escape a deep well." | | 4 | "The Heartstone flared, a nova of crimson light that made the faceless entity flinch back." | | 5 | "The skeletal hand was flung back into the box, which snapped shut, its silver surface now glowing with a faint, sickly green light." | | 6 | "There was no impact, only a deafening *crack* of sound, a flash of red and white light, and a force that threw her backwards." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 1 | "Rory said, her fingers tightening on the stone" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |