Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFF7D8ZYXKC7YTGSTK8WJXN

Run Details

Duration:
59.6s
Cost:
$0.000949
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked. Three metallic deadlocks yielded against the lock cylinder, each one surrendering a fraction of the invitation. The heavy oak door groaned on its hinges. Cold London air would have bit through the gap, but the street was dry and fog misted the bricks. Aurora stepped back, letting the frame shift on the track. She registered the key turning in the second after she had pulled the chain. Someone was there. Eva wasn't home. Ptolemy stood on the banister of the landing, tail twitching. He was a tabby cat with white paws and ears too broad for his skull. The floor creaked under a shift of weight. The scent of dirt and expensive soap cut through the smell of curry from the shop below. Aurora turned. She caught the platinum hair against the dim glass of the window. The spark at the corner of his mouth was the same as it had been years ago. Lucien stepped inside. The room swayed. The corridor books clattered to the table. A stack of scrolls knocked against the aggressive heat of the radiator. His cane was high and ivory, the handle tight enough to cut glass. He wore the suit like armor. Charcoal wool on the shoulders, pressed perfectly. He ignored the rain on the floor. He did not look at her shoes. He looked at her. "I heard you were in London." His voice was smooth like cold tea. Aurora didn't move closer. Her bag on the sofa was a half-unpacked heap of delivery jackets and legal papers. "You didn't knock." "You own the door you walk through." Lucien lifted his cane from the floor. He tapped it once against the grain of the wood. "I suppose I can come back later." "No." Aurora crossed her arms. The scar on her left wrist flexed tight against her skin. She hated touching that bruise in anger. "It was a mistake for me to come." He kept his hand inside his jacket pocket. He looked toward the kitchen tray. "I thought we could resolve the contract." "We did not have a contract." The bookshelf rattled a little above them as she sneezed. Ptolemy meowed. Lucien stared at the cat. "I heard you were killing yourself on delivery routes." Lucien moved to the table. He put the cane down near his feet. "You smell like grease and cabbage water." Aurora laughed. It came dry, sharp. "Move." "Why did you leave me?" He spread his hands. The hands were clean. "I didn't leave you." Aurora said. Her gaze dropped to the floor. "I left for my job." "You left for me." Lucien stepped closer. His heterochromatic eyes were wide and dark. One amber and one black. "No." She pushed past the table. Her hip grazed the edge of the shelf. Books slid on the floor. "I left because it was not real." "Nothing here is real." Lucien stepped around the bookshelf. Fog of breath rose in the draft. He circled her until he was close enough to feel the heat from the body. "Where do you want me to go?" Her eyes flicked toward the window. "Go home." "I am not going home." He grabbed her elbow. The skin was cool. "Too dangerous to sleep there." "She works down below." Lucien looked at the cat. "Ptolemy is too noisy." Aurora pulled back. "Stop." He stopped. The distance between them filled with air. Static built and made the hair rise. "I did not tell you I knew about the demon." Aurora's breath hitched. She knew Lucien knew about some things. She didn't know everything. "He knows now." Lucien said. He looked down at her lips. Aurora wiped her hand against the table. The wood was rough. "He knows now." "I am not a threat." Lucien placed his hand on the table. The ring on the finger was heavy. "I want to spend time with you." "You want to spend time with me." Aurora crossed the room. "We broke up." "I was not ready to lose you." Lucien opened the jacket. He stepped forward. "I am not ready for you now. We need to stay together." "We broke." Aurora grabbed his sleeve. Her mouth was dry. "Now is not the time." "You are right." Lucien faced her. His eyes were wide. "I did not come for advice." Aurora stepped back. The space was narrow. The wall was near her shoulder. Lucien leaned in. His breath brushed her neck. "I told you I would not forget." "You didn't tell me anything." Aurora's voice lowered. "I tell you enough." Lucien's fingers reached for her hair. He tugged. "It is not enough." "Let go." "I don't want to let go." Aurora lifted her chin. She stared into the uneven pupil of his face. "I want you to move." "I am not moving." Lucien said. He stepped forward. The cat sat on the table. The shadow of the paper moved down the wall. "We will not be happy here." Aurora said. "We will be happy." "Lucien." Aurora stopped. Her breath was visible. "You are a demon." "I am a fixer." Lucien showed a hand. The skin was pale. A bit of the claw was visible. Aurora looked. She did not look away. "You are a demon." "I am a demon." Lucien took her hand. His fingers curled around her. The weight of his hand was heavy. It felt real. It felt cold. "Put me down." Aurora whispered. "I will let go." Lucien moved back. He put the cane in his pocket. "I don't want to be put down." Aurora said. Lucien smiled. The smile was not a smile of victory. It was a smile of the man who knew the truth. "I told you I would not let you go." Aurora looked at the door. The alleyway was open. It smelled like rain and smoke. "I did not come here for a fight." "I know." "Then do not leave." "I will not leave." Lucien turned to the radio. It hummed on the table. The air in the room had cooled. The scent of coffee and wood was gone. Lucien's presence filled the small kitchen. "I will move you." "I don't want that." "I will move you." Lucien stepped closer. "To a place I can protect you from." "I don't want to be protected." "Life is not safe." "I know that." Aurora turned her back. The scar on her wrist was hidden by her sleeve. She saw the reflection of her eyes in the small mirror on the shelf. "I will stay." Lucien said. The voice was deep and heavy. "I need to pack." "I will do it." Lucien moved to the sofa. He began to pull her bag to the side. "Lucien." Aurora stopped. "I know you are tired." He walked past her. "I will clean." "I don't want you to clean." "Clean." He lifted the bag. Aurora stepped forward. Her hands were empty. The room was quiet. She saw the movement in his face. The muscles in the jaw tightened. "Why are you here?" Aurora said. "Because I cannot find you anywhere." He looked at her. The amber eye was bright. "You are the only one who can do this job." Aurora looked at the cat. The cat stared back. "I am not a tool." "You are not a tool." Lucien reached down to the floor. "I am a tool." Aurora looked at him. "What do you mean?" "I am a tool." Lucien looked up. He did not speak. "We are tools." "No." He rubbed his thumb against the ring. "I am not." Lucien stepped away. He placed the cane against the window. "I am not." He stepped closer. He stood very close. "We are both broken." "I am not broken." "Then fix me." "I will not fix you." "Fix me." He lifted his chin. Aurora took a breath. The air felt cool. Her hand moved. She stepped forward. "Don't say that again." "Say what?" "That you are broken." "I am broken." "Then I will break you." Lucien looked at her. His face was blank. "I will not break you." "Then you are not fixed." "I am fixed." "Then show me." Aurora moved closer. She leaned in. Her mouth was open. Lucien stared at her. "Do not." She looked back. "Do not start." "I will not start." Lucien said. "We are not here." "I know." "I do not know what to do." "I know." Aurora turned. She looked at the bookshelf. The books were heavy. The floor was cold. "I will stay." Lucien said. "I know." "I will pack." "I know." The room stayed quiet. They stood apart. Aurora looked at him. He looked at her. "I will do it." Lucien nodded. "I will pack." Aurora nodded back. She put her hand on the door knob. The wood was warm. "Open." Lucien said. She turned. "Aurora." "Yes." "Stay." "I will not." "Then go." She stopped. Her eyes were still on the knob. "I will stay." "Stay." "I am not going." Lucien nodded. He moved to the door. He knocked three times. "I will stay." Lucien said. He opened the door. The hallway was empty. The air was cold. The fog moved in. "I will stay." He turned back. Aurora looked at him. She walked past. She left the door shut. She locked it. The silence filled the room. The cat sat. Aurora turned back. Lucien stood in the corner. He was still. "I said open." Aurora moved the door again. It slid. "I said stay." Lucien said. "I said go." Lucien moved. He took a step forward. The cane was in the air again. "Stay." Aurora said. "Stay." He said. They stood still. Aurora looked at the hallway. The books were on the floor. The dust coated the air. "I said go." "He said stay." "He said go." "He said stay." "I said go." "He said go." "He said stay." Aurora pulled her hand. Her fingers were tight. She opened the door. The rain hit the glass. "I will go." She stepped back. Lucien watched her. He did not move. "I will not go." He said. She turned her face. The light was gone. "Go." "We are together." "We are not." "Yes." Aurora closed the door. The deadbolts clicked. Two of three locks. I cannot decide. I will not decide.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags54
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Lucien stepped around [around]"
1"Lucien moved back [back]"
2"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences144
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.042
94.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"resolve"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"resolve"
2"flicked"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences226
matches
0"e in anger"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences226
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences315
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1721
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions81
wordCount1148
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity3.4
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
London1
Aurora38
Ptolemy2
Fog1
Lucien39
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Fog"
3"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like rain and smoke"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1721
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences315
matches
0"touching that bruise"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs173
mean9.95
std9.03
cv0.908
sampleLengths
056
114
23
328
425
531
63
755
811
913
1022
1131
1223
1329
1423
1529
167
1713
1817
1919
2026
2131
2215
2318
2413
254
2626
2714
2811
2914
3026
3114
3226
3315
3416
3521
367
378
3816
392
406
4118
429
4315
448
454
4611
4719
487
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences226
matches
0"was gone"
1"was hidden"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs240
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences315
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1149
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.020887728459530026
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008703220191470844
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences315
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences315
mean5.46
std3.23
cv0.591
sampleLengths
03
116
28
319
410
514
63
73
810
915
108
1117
122
1312
1417
153
163
177
1812
1913
206
217
227
237
244
2513
264
2715
283
2914
3010
317
325
3311
347
3516
366
377
3816
392
405
4114
428
437
442
454
461
479
484
496
36.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats41
diversityRatio0.15555555555555556
totalSentences315
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences194
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount83
totalSentences194
matches
0"She registered the key turning"
1"He was a tabby cat"
2"She caught the platinum hair"
3"His cane was high and"
4"He wore the suit like"
5"He ignored the rain on"
6"He did not look at"
7"He looked at her."
8"His voice was smooth like"
9"Her bag on the sofa"
10"He tapped it once against"
11"She hated touching that bruise"
12"He kept his hand inside"
13"He looked toward the kitchen"
14"He put the cane down"
15"It came dry, sharp."
16"He spread his hands"
17"Her gaze dropped to the"
18"His heterochromatic eyes were wide"
19"She pushed past the table"
ratio0.428
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount190
totalSentences194
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked."
1"The heavy oak door groaned"
2"Aurora stepped back, letting the"
3"She registered the key turning"
4"Someone was there."
5"Eva wasn't home."
6"Ptolemy stood on the banister"
7"He was a tabby cat"
8"The floor creaked under a"
9"The scent of dirt and"
10"She caught the platinum hair"
11"The spark at the corner"
12"Lucien stepped inside."
13"The room swayed."
14"The corridor books clattered to"
15"A stack of scrolls knocked"
16"His cane was high and"
17"He wore the suit like"
18"Charcoal wool on the shoulders,"
19"He ignored the rain on"
ratio0.979
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences194
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags54
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences144
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.014
82.1838%