Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFF7J0CPHB50BQW7QZ3SQ42

Run Details

Duration:
2m 36s
Cost:
$0.013475
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory twisted the third deadbolt on Eva’s front door, cold steel scraping the crescent scar on her left wrist. The barometer had dropped that morning, and the old injury ached like it always did when rain loomed. She’d been holed up in Eva’s Brick Lane flat for three days, Eva herself chasing leads north of the Thames on a coven that had been shaking down local shopkeepers, and the steady pounding on the wood had led her to assume Eva had forgotten her keys, too harried to dig them out of the overflowing tote slung over her shoulder. She wrenched the door open. Lucien stood on the step, the smell of jasmine and burnt ozone clinging to his tailored charcoal suit, his platinum blond hair slipped loose from its usual slicked-back style to fall in a thin strand over his black eye. The amber one glinted, the way it always did when he’d expended energy, and a shallow cut sliced through his jaw, crusted with half-dried blood. His ivory-handled cane dug into the step’s lintel, the weight of his body leaning into it like his leg ached. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, lifted his head from the stack of grimoires piled by the door and hissed, his back arching like he’d spotted a feral dog straying too close to his food bowl. What the fuck are you doing here? Rory’s voice came out sharper than she intended, the edge of eight months of unspoken anger cutting through the shock of seeing him on her doorstep. She’d spent the first three months after he vanished checking her phone every ten minutes, checking the seats of her delivery scooter every time she stepped out of the Golden Empress, lingering at the bar of Silas’ every night for an hour after her shift ended, waiting for him to turn up like he always had, a cigarette tucked behind his ear, that half-smile tugging at his mouth when he spotted her. She’d cried once, drunk on cheap rosé in Eva’s bathtub, and called him every name she could think of, then cried harder because she’d still have let him in if he knocked. Now he was here, and all she could feel was the old hurt coiling in her chest, tight as a fist. I need a place to lay low for 48 hours. Lucien’s voice was lower than she remembered, rough around the edges, like he’d been yelling for hours. He lifted a hand to brush the hair out of his eyes, and she spotted the bruise blooming black across his knuckles. A rival crew out of Croydon came for my stash of intel. They know I have ties to this block. They won’t think to look for me here. Eva’s flat isn’t a safe house for you to hide in when your little supernatural underworld games go wrong. She gripped the edge of the door, ready to slam it in his face, but her gaze snagged on the way his weight shifted, like he couldn’t hold himself up much longer. The cut on his jaw wasn’t the only injury; a dark stain bloomed across the left side of his suit, seeping through the fabric slow and dark, the same shade she recognized from the nights she’d patched up Eva after witch brawls. That was blood. No one’s coming after you. They don’t know you exist to them. He paused, his throat bobbing like he was forcing the words out. I never told them about you. Never told anyone. I made sure of it. That’s why I left. The words hung in the air, thick as the smell of garlic and fenugreek that seeped up through the flat’s floorboards, the curry house below wrapping them in its constant scent. Rory’s grip on the door loosened. She’d spent eight months wondering why he’d left, why he’d vanished with nothing but a crumpled note that read Don’t look for me, no explanation, no warning, just gone. She’d convinced herself he’d gotten bored, that she was just a fling, a human girl who delivered dumplings for a living that he’d toyed with for a few weeks before moving on to someone more interesting, someone who fit into his world of demons and spies and hidden blades. You left because you didn’t want them to find me. She said it flat, not a question, because it all clicked into place: the way he’d never brought anyone around her, the way he’d always walked three steps behind her when they left his flat, scanning the street like he waited for someone to jump out. The night he vanished, she’d found a broken glass on his kitchen floor, a shard stuck in the window frame, like someone had thrown it through the glass. She’d thought he’d had a fight with a client, but it hadn’t been that. It had been someone coming for him, and he’d run to keep her safe. I had a contract on my head. Anyone close to me was fair game. His cane slipped a little on the step, and he caught himself on the doorframe, his hand brushing hers for half a second. The contact sent a jolt up her arm, the same spark she’d felt the first time he’d kissed her outside Silas’ bar, rain falling on their shoulders, his hand cupping her jaw like she was something fragile. I couldn’t let them hurt you. I’d rather you hate me than be dead. She stepped back from the door, leaving the gap wide enough for him to step through, and Ptolemy bolted from the grimoires, darting under the bed in the back bedroom, his tail puffed up. The flat was small, every surface stacked with Eva’s books and scrolls and research notes, stacks lining the walls, teetering precariously over the lumpy couch that served as Rory’s bed when she stayed over. A half-empty mug of tea sat on the coffee table, next to a stack of Rory’s delivery manifests from the Golden Empress, the ink smudged from where she’d spilled soy sauce on them the week before. Get inside before someone sees you. She shut the door behind him, sliding the three deadbolts back into place one by one, the metal clicking loud in the quiet of the flat. When she turned around, he was leaning against the wall by the door, his eyes closed, like he was grateful to be off his feet. The bloodstain on his suit had spread, seeping through the fabric to drip a small dark drop onto the scuffed wooden floor. You’re shot. She crossed the room in three steps, reaching for the button on his suit jacket to undo it, her fingers brushing the cool fabric. He flinched away from her touch for half a second, then let her push the jacket off his shoulders, it falling to the floor in a heap. The bullet grazed his side, the entry wound raw and bleeding, his shirt stuck to the skin around it. I have a first aid kit under the kitchen sink. Eva keeps it stocked for when she comes home brawling with witches. I can patch myself up. He pushed off the wall, but his leg gave out under him, and she caught him, her shoulder under his arm to hold his weight up, the heat of his body seeping through his shirt into her skin. He ran warmer than any human, the half-demon blood in his veins burning hot, the same way it had the night they’d spent together in his flat, his hands roaming over her skin, his breath hot against her neck. She led him to the couch, lowering him down onto the lumpy cushions, and he winced as his side hit the fabric. Shut up. You can barely stand. She turned to walk to the kitchen, yanking the cabinet under the sink open to grab the red first aid kit, the plastic clattering as she hauled it out. When she came back, he was staring at the stack of her delivery manifests on the coffee table, his finger brushing the edge of the top one, the Golden Empress’s logo printed in gold ink at the top. You still work at the restaurant. It wasn’t a question, just a statement, like he’d been checking in on her even from far away. She knelt down in front of the couch, setting the first aid kit on the floor, and unscrewed the cap of the antiseptic, the sharp smell cutting through the curry scent lingering in the air. I never had anywhere else to go. She ripped the hem of his shirt up, exposing the raw wound on his side, the bullet grazing just deep enough to bleed, not deep enough to kill, but enough to leave a scar. She poured the antiseptic over the wound, and he hissed, his hand fisting in the couch’s cushion, his knuckles white. Eva let me crash here after I left Evan. Said it was safer than my flat above Silas’ for a while. Evan found me once, showed up at the bar, screaming, broke a window. Silas kicked him out, but Eva insisted I lay low here for a bit. I know. He said it quiet, so quiet she almost missed it. She froze, the gauze in her hand hovering over the wound. What do you mean, you know? I had Silas send me a report every week. Made sure you were okay. Paid him to keep an eye on Evan, make sure he never got within a block of you. He lifted his head, his amber and black eyes meeting hers, no lies in them, just the raw truth of everything he’d done for her, everything he’d never told her. I paid for the new window at the bar, too. Evan didn’t pay for the damage. I did. Didn’t want you to have to pick up the bill. She stared at him, the gauze slipping from her hand to fall to the floor. All the anger she’d carried for eight months, all the hurt, all the what-ifs, melted away in that second, because he’d never left her. He’d never stopped looking out for her. He’d just been too scared to put her in danger, to let anyone know she was his, because that would have made her a target. She’d thought he’d abandoned her, but he’d been protecting her this whole time. Why didn’t you just tell me? Her voice cracked, the tears she’d held back for months pricking at her bright blue eyes, a tear slipping down her cheek. I hated you for eight months. I thought you got bored of me. I thought you just left because I wasn’t good enough for your world. You’re too good for my world. He lifted a hand to cup her jaw, his thumb brushing the tear off her skin, his skin warm against hers. All the people in it are liars and killers and thieves. I didn’t want you to have to be part of that. I wanted you to just be Rory, the girl who delivered dumplings, who laughed too loud at bad rom-coms, who drew constellations on the fogged-up windows of her scooter when it rained. I wanted you to be safe. I don’t want to be safe if it means you’re not in my life. She leaned into his touch, her hand covering his where it rested on her jaw, her fingers lacing through his. The crescent scar on her wrist pressed against his knuckles, the old ache fading, like it knew he was there, that he was home. Rain started to fall outside, hitting the flat’s window, the sound of cars splashing through Brick Lane’s puddles distant, just the two of them in the small space, the smell of curry and antiseptic wrapping around them. I’m here now. He pulled her up onto the couch with him, her head resting on his uninjured shoulder, his arm wrapping around her waist to hold her close, like he was scared she’d vanish if he let go. I can make it right. I can stay. If you want me to. I want you to. She tilted her head up to kiss him, his lips soft against hers, the taste of mint and cigarette smoke clinging to them, the same taste she’d remembered for eight months, the kiss she’d dreamed of a hundred times since he left. He kissed her back, his hand tangling in her straight, shoulder-length black hair, holding her tight, like he was making up for all the time they lost, all the days they spent apart, all the things they never got to say. Ptolemy peeked out from the bedroom, hissing soft, but neither of them noticed, too wrapped up in each other, the complicated past melting away, the future finally within reach.
created_at"2026-03-11T22:10:44.377Z" 3/11/2026, 10:10:44 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2137
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2137
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pounding"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pounding"
2"weight"
3"unspoken"
4"could feel"
5"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences117
matches
0"was grateful"
1"was scared"
81.81% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences117
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2137
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount2080
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.58
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva12
Brick2
Lane2
Thames1
Golden3
Empress3
Croydon1
Don1
Ptolemy3
Rory6
Evan4
Silas2
You5
persons
0"Eva"
1"Empress"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
6"You"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Thames"
3"Golden"
4"Croydon"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.468
wordCount2137
matches
0"not deep enough to kill, but enough to leave a scar"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences117
matches
0"dropped that morning"
1"bored, that she"
74.54% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean82.19
std33.77
cv0.411
sampleLengths
0103
1117
27
3151
410
567
696
742
8115
9112
1088
11104
1279
1394
14104
1573
1659
17109
1829
1990
2084
2154
2287
2395
2452
25116
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences117
matches
0"been holed"
1"shot"
2"was scared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs372
matches
0"was forcing"
1"was staring"
2"was making"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences117
ratio0.009
matches
0"The cut on his jaw wasn’t the only injury; a dark stain bloomed across the left side of his suit, seeping through the fabric slow and dark, the same shade she recognized from the nights she’d patched up Eva after witch brawls."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount292
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.0273972602739726
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean18.26
std13.67
cv0.749
sampleLengths
019
118
261
35
439
525
620
733
87
926
1072
1132
1221
1310
1417
1522
1612
178
188
1919
2032
2142
223
235
247
2512
266
273
285
294
3031
316
3229
3349
3410
3546
3628
3714
3814
397
407
4123
4237
436
448
4534
4634
4736
486
4926
38.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.28205128205128205
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount68
totalSentences113
matches
0"She’d been holed up in"
1"She wrenched the door open."
2"His ivory-handled cane dug into"
3"She’d spent the first three"
4"She’d cried once, drunk on"
5"I need a place to"
6"He lifted a hand to"
7"They know I have ties"
8"They won’t think to look"
9"She gripped the edge of"
10"They don’t know you exist"
11"He paused, his throat bobbing"
12"I never told them about"
13"I made sure of it."
14"She’d spent eight months wondering"
15"She’d convinced herself he’d gotten"
16"You left because you didn’t"
17"She said it flat, not"
18"She’d thought he’d had a"
19"It had been someone coming"
ratio0.602
21.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount99
totalSentences113
matches
0"Rory twisted the third deadbolt"
1"The barometer had dropped that"
2"She’d been holed up in"
3"She wrenched the door open."
4"Lucien stood on the step,"
5"The amber one glinted, the"
6"His ivory-handled cane dug into"
7"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, lifted his"
8"Rory’s voice came out sharper"
9"She’d spent the first three"
10"She’d cried once, drunk on"
11"I need a place to"
12"Lucien’s voice was lower than"
13"He lifted a hand to"
14"A rival crew out of"
15"They know I have ties"
16"They won’t think to look"
17"Eva’s flat isn’t a safe"
18"She gripped the edge of"
19"The cut on his jaw"
ratio0.876
88.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences113
matches
0"Now he was here, and"
1"If you want me to."
ratio0.018
35.23% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences73
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, lifted his head from the stack of grimoires piled by the door and hissed, his back arching like he’d spotted a feral dog straying too clos…"
1"He paused, his throat bobbing like he was forcing the words out."
2"The words hung in the air, thick as the smell of garlic and fenugreek that seeped up through the flat’s floorboards, the curry house below wrapping them in its …"
3"She’d convinced herself he’d gotten bored, that she was just a fling, a human girl who delivered dumplings for a living that he’d toyed with for a few weeks bef…"
4"The flat was small, every surface stacked with Eva’s books and scrolls and research notes, stacks lining the walls, teetering precariously over the lumpy couch …"
5"She crossed the room in three steps, reaching for the button on his suit jacket to undo it, her fingers brushing the cool fabric."
6"He ran warmer than any human, the half-demon blood in his veins burning hot, the same way it had the night they’d spent together in his flat, his hands roaming …"
7"When she came back, he was staring at the stack of her delivery manifests on the coffee table, his finger brushing the edge of the top one, the Golden Empress’s…"
8"I wanted you to just be Rory, the girl who delivered dumplings, who laughed too loud at bad rom-coms, who drew constellations on the fogged-up windows of her sc…"
9"She leaned into his touch, her hand covering his where it rested on her jaw, her fingers lacing through his."
10"He kissed her back, his hand tangling in her straight, shoulder-length black hair, holding her tight, like he was making up for all the time they lost, all the …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.3642%