Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFF81VSKYQK5A1H34FR1B54

Run Details

Duration:
2m 29s
Cost:
$0.013323
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain stuck to the Raven's Nest's front window like crushed sequins, turning the bar's green neon sign into a bleeding smear that colored every old map and faded photograph tacked to the walls. It was 11:47 PM, last call had rung ten minutes prior, and the only patrons left were Aurora Carter, Silas Blackwood, and a pair of tourists who’d passed out in the back booth over half-empty pints of lager. Aurora peeled her waterproof delivery jacket off, the cuffs soaked through from hauling a stack of dumplings and fried rice to a Covent Garden flat ten minutes earlier, and slung it over the stool next to the bar. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair, cut the month before at a cheap salon on Old Compton Street, stuck to the back of her neck, and she swiped a hand across it to tug it loose. Silas didn’t look up from wiping down the bar’s oak surface, his auburn hair streaked with the same grey that threaded through his neatly trimmed beard, but he pushed a bottle of cold pear cider across the wood to her, the cap already popped. His silver signet ring glinted in the neon light as he pulled his hand back, and Aurora heard the faint drag of his left foot, the limp from an old knee injury, as he stepped around the end of the bar to stack empty glasses in the dishwasher. The brass bell above the door jingled. A man stepped in, shaking rain off a charcoal wool coat too thin for London’s November chill, his scuffed leather boots squelching on the frayed doormat stitched with the Raven’s Nest’s logo. He brushed a strand of brown hair out of his eyes, and Aurora was mid-sip of cider when she locked eyes with him. The bottle stopped halfway to her mouth. She knew that jawline, the faint gap between his two front teeth, the way he tilted his head when he scanned a room like he was searching for a familiar face. Six years. She hadn’t seen that face in six years, not since she’d packed a duffel in the middle of a Cardiff night, left a half-scrawled note on her kitchen counter, and driven west to London, cutting off every number that wasn’t her childhood friend Eva’s or her parents’ to keep her abusive ex Evan from tracking her. “Rory?” The name landed soft, like he was scared to say it too loud and scare her off. No one in London called her Rory. Silas called her Carter. Yu-Fei, owner of the Golden Empress restaurant where she delivered, called her Aurora. Regulars at the bar tossed around Laila as a dumb joke about the light in her full name. Only the old crew, the people who knew her before Evan, before the running, called her Rory. She set the cider down. Her fingers curled around the edge of the bar, hard enough that her knuckles whitened. Jamie O’Connell. The boy she’d snuck into Cardiff University’s law library with after hours, who’d taught her to steal pints of Guinness from his dad’s Penarth pub, who she’d booked a one-way Berlin flight with in 2017, the tickets costing them half their student loan money, the plan to work at a community legal aid clinic and rent a flat with a balcony overlooking the Spree. That Jamie. He crossed the bar, slow, like she was a skittish cat that might bolt if he moved too fast. Silas, who’d paused by the dishwasher to watch the exchange, nodded once at Aurora, a quiet question in his hazel eyes, the same gaze that always picked up on tension before she named it herself. She shook her head, minutely, to signal she was fine, and he grabbed his own bottle of single malt, the good stuff he only drank after closing, and limped toward the hidden back room, the bookshelf door clicking shut behind him, leaving them alone except for the snoring tourists in the rear. Jamie stopped on the other side of the bar, his coat still dripping onto the scuffed floorboards. She spotted the scar first, a thin white line slicing through the left side of his jaw, ending at the corner of his mouth. She would’ve missed it if she hadn’t spent three years of her life memorizing every freckle and line on that face. “What happened to your face?” Her voice came out rougher than she intended, like she’d swallowed a handful of gravel. She hadn’t spoken about anything that mattered to anyone but Silas and Eva in years, and the words felt stiff, untested. “Car crash. 2019. T-boned on the M4 coming home from a friend’s wedding. Spent three days in the hospital. Docs said it could’ve been worse.” He shrugged out of his coat, draped it over a nearby stool, and Aurora noticed the crisp navy suit under it, a starched white collared shirt, no nose ring. He’d worn a silver hoop through his left nostril for as long as she’d known him, the accessory he’d refused to remove for his high school graduation photos, the one his dad had screamed at him for ruining family portraits. “You took the nose ring out.” “Had to. Started teaching high school history in Bristol three years ago. Headmaster said it was unprofessional. Bought a cheap wedding band to keep the parent creeps away, same reason. Can’t be the teacher kids trust if I look like I spent my twenties sneaking into pubs, I guess.” He leaned his forearms on the bar, and Aurora tugged the sleeve of her grey hoodie down further, yanking the fabric over the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, the one from the childhood tree fall she’d never outgrown. She never let anyone new see it. It felt like a window into the girl she used to be, the one that climbed oak trees to rescue stray cats, booked cross-continental flights on a whim, and thought she could rewrite every unfair law she’d ever watched her barrister dad fight. Jamie’s eyes flicked to her wrist, and she knew he saw the movement, knew what she was hiding. “I still have the tickets,” he said. The line hit her like a punch to the sternum, hard enough that she had to suck in a sharp breath. The Berlin tickets. The ones they’d printed out and taped to her old Cardiff flat’s fridge, the ones they were supposed to use in October 2018, two months after she’d fled. “Kept them in a box under my bed. Every time I moved, I packed that box first. Never threw them away. I thought you bailed. Thought you got into that LSE masters program, decided you were too busy for our dumb Berlin plan. I thought you ghosted us.” “I didn’t ghost you.” The words came out sharp, and she lifted her hand, tugged the hoodie sleeve up to bare the crescent scar to him, let him look at the mark that tied them to that 12-year-old pair of kids who’d promised they’d never let anything split them up. “Evan happened. You remember him? The guy I started dating in 2017? He wasn’t the person he said he was. Broke my laptop when I tried to submit my LSE application. Threatened to hurt my dad if I told anyone what he was doing. Said he’d find me no matter where I ran. I couldn’t tell any of you. I was scared.” She picked up her cider, took a long sip to stop her throat from closing up, and the green neon caught the scar, turning its pale pink skin a faint, bruised blue. Jamie’s face softened, the hard line of his jaw loosening, and Aurora saw the regret bloom in his eyes, the same regret that sat heavy in her chest every time she passed a law book in a shop window, every time she logged into her old student email and found a 5-year-old message from the legal aid clinic she’d applied to work at in Berlin. “I didn’t know. Eva sent a text three months after you left, said you were safe, that’s all. I spent years thinking I’d pushed the Berlin plan too hard, that you didn’t want to be my friend anymore. I should’ve checked. Should’ve come looking. I’m sorry.” “You couldn’t have found me if you tried. Silas got me a new driver’s license, a new bank account, hid me up here. Evan’s in prison now, got arrested for assaulting another girl two years ago. I don’t have to run anymore. But it’s too late for the plan, isn’t it? I’m not that girl anymore. I deliver dumplings for a Chinese restaurant in Soho, I live above this bar, I haven’t read a law book in five years. You’re a teacher. You got the life we planned, just… you did it without me.” She laughed, a sharp, bitter sound, and the snoring tourists in the back rumbled louder, filling the silence for a beat. Jamie shook his head, reached across the bar, and set his palm warm against the back of her hand, his thumb brushing the edge of her scar. “The plan didn’t have an expiration date. I’m in London for a job interview, teaching at a Camden comprehensive. I was gonna take it, move here next month. Berlin’s still there. We could go in the summer. Book new tickets. I still want to go. I never stopped wanting to go with you.” Aurora looked down at their hands, at the frayed edge of the Prague map pinned to the wall behind the bar, the one Silas had brought back from his own botched mission, the edges worn thin from years of quiet staring. The rain still lashed the window, the neon still bleeded green over every surface, and for the first time in six years, the weight of the time she’d lost didn’t feel like a chain. It felt like a starting line.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1663
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1663
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"scanned"
2"familiar"
3"tension"
4"flicked"
5"silence"
6"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences50
matches
0"was scared"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences50
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences57
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen115
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1663
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1255
uniqueNames28
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Aurora10
Carter2
Silas6
Blackwood1
Covent1
Garden1
Old1
Compton1
Street1
London3
November1
Cardiff3
Eva2
Rory2
Golden1
Empress1
Laila1
Evan1
University1
Guinness1
Penarth1
Berlin3
Spree1
Jamie6
October1
Prague1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"November"
7"Eva"
8"Rory"
9"Laila"
10"Evan"
11"University"
12"Jamie"
places
0"Covent"
1"Garden"
2"Old"
3"Compton"
4"Street"
5"London"
6"Cardiff"
7"Berlin"
8"October"
9"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
33.72% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a window into the girl she us"
1"felt like a starting line"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1663
matches(empty)
49.71% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"knew that jawline"
1"seen that face"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean69.29
std45.57
cv0.658
sampleLengths
0145
192
2158
31
476
588
6106
762
85
936
1094
116
12138
1318
147
1552
1648
17112
1897
1946
20115
2127
2253
2381
91.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences50
matches
0"was scared"
1"were supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was searching"
1"was hiding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences57
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount764
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"over half-empty pints"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.02225130890052356
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002617801047120419
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences57
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences57
mean29.18
std22.93
cv0.786
sampleLengths
034
138
238
335
444
548
67
732
823
97
1031
112
1256
131
1417
157
164
1713
1818
1917
205
2115
222
2364
242
2519
2635
2752
2817
2924
3021
315
3215
3321
3454
3540
366
3788
387
3943
4018
417
4221
433
4428
4548
4650
4762
4832
4965
64.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.42105263157894735
totalSentences57
uniqueOpeners24
72.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"Only the old crew, the"
ratio0.022
28.70% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences46
matches
0"It was 11:47 PM, last"
1"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair,"
2"His silver signet ring glinted"
3"He brushed a strand of"
4"She knew that jawline, the"
5"She hadn’t seen that face"
6"She set the cider down."
7"Her fingers curled around the"
8"He crossed the bar, slow,"
9"She shook her head, minutely,"
10"She spotted the scar first,"
11"She would’ve missed it if"
12"Her voice came out rougher"
13"She hadn’t spoken about anything"
14"He shrugged out of his"
15"He’d worn a silver hoop"
16"He leaned his forearms on"
17"She never let anyone new"
18"It felt like a window"
19"She picked up her cider,"
ratio0.478
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences46
matches
0"The rain stuck to the"
1"It was 11:47 PM, last"
2"Aurora peeled her waterproof delivery"
3"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair,"
4"Silas didn’t look up from"
5"His silver signet ring glinted"
6"The brass bell above the"
7"A man stepped in, shaking"
8"He brushed a strand of"
9"The bottle stopped halfway to"
10"She knew that jawline, the"
11"She hadn’t seen that face"
12"The name landed soft, like"
13"Silas called her Carter."
14"Yu-Fei, owner of the Golden"
15"Regulars at the bar tossed"
16"She set the cider down."
17"Her fingers curled around the"
18"The boy she’d snuck into"
19"He crossed the bar, slow,"
ratio0.957
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"It was 11:47 PM, last call had rung ten minutes prior, and the only patrons left were Aurora Carter, Silas Blackwood, and a pair of tourists who’d passed out in…"
1"The boy she’d snuck into Cardiff University’s law library with after hours, who’d taught her to steal pints of Guinness from his dad’s Penarth pub, who she’d bo…"
2"She spotted the scar first, a thin white line slicing through the left side of his jaw, ending at the corner of his mouth."
3"Jamie’s face softened, the hard line of his jaw loosening, and Aurora saw the regret bloom in his eyes, the same regret that sat heavy in her chest every time s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.167
81.2209%