Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFF9R9X3GF53Q40K0V5HW2A

Run Details

Duration:
2m 12s
Cost:
$0.012611
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the smudged windows of The Raven’s Nest, the bar’s distinctive green neon sign bleeding lime into the Soho pavement below. The last of the after-work crowds had filtered out an hour prior, leaving only a pair of lost tourists nursing whiskeys in the front booth and Rory, who’d stayed late to help Silas close up after her flat’s boiler gave out for the third time that month. She wiped a ring of stale beer off the linoleum of the back booth, straight shoulder-length black hair falling into her face, and brushed it back with her left wrist. The small crescent scar there caught the glow of the amber string lights strung above the bar, a faint silver line against her skin. Silas stacked pint glasses behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the same low light, his left leg propped on a low stool to ease the ache of his old knee injury. He twisted the silver signet ring on his right hand as he wiped down the tap lines, the old maps and black-and-white photographs lining the walls casting long shadows across the empty floor. “Boiler guy can’t make it till tomorrow,” he called across the space, his voice rough from years of yelling over bar chatter. “You can crash on the back room couch. It’s got clean blankets.” Rory nodded, already expecting it. Her landlord was useless, and she’d spent the last three nights huddled under two duvets in her own freezing flat. Another night on a couch wouldn’t kill her. The door’s brass bell jingled, cutting through the Chet Baker track spinning on the jukebox. Silas called that last orders were in 15 minutes, and the figure that stepped inside shook rain off a tailored wool coat, her boots squelching on the doormat. “Just need one,” she said, her voice warm, familiar in a way Rory couldn’t place. “Got stuck in the rain after a conference at the Temple. Missed the last tube.” She started toward the bar, then paused mid-step, her dark brown eyes locking on Rory. She blinked, like she couldn’t believe what she was seeing. “Aurora Carter? Is that you?” Rory’s hand froze around the rag in her fist. No one called her that, not her full first name, not outside of the stilted monthly calls she endured with her parents. She stood, wiping her damp palms on the thighs of her jeans, where a smudge of soy sauce from a spilled lunch order at Golden Empress had stained the fabric that afternoon. She would have passed this woman on the street and never recognized her. The Elin Jones she’d known, her first-year university roommate in Cardiff, had dyed her hair neon pink for their first college party, stolen a dozen tubs of mint chocolate chip ice cream from the campus cafeteria, and snuck Rory out of the dorm to see a Stereophonics gig at the Cardiff International Arena. The woman in front of her had chestnut hair pulled into a tight bun, wore a navy blazer sharp enough to cut paper, and pearl studs in her ears. But those eyes, the same eyes that had stayed up with Rory for three nights straight after her first breakup, that had carried her half a mile to the A&E when she’d fallen off a Barry Island pier at 16, they were the same. “Elin?” Rory said, her voice cracking a little. Elin crossed the space in three steps, and they hugged awkwardly at first, both scared to hold on too tight, like the other might vanish if they squeezed too hard. When they pulled back, Silas had set two glasses of the Welsh cider he kept stocked just for Rory on their booth table, and he limped back to the far end of the bar to give them space, leaving them alone with the hum of the jukebox and the rain. They slid into opposite sides of the booth, the vinyl creaking under their weight. Elin twisted a thin silver wedding band around her left index finger as she lifted her cider, taking a small sip. “I didn’t know you lived in London. No one heard from you for six months after you left Cardiff. Your dad called my mom, crying, said he didn’t know if you were even alive.” Rory’s jaw tightened. She picked at a loose thread on the booth’s seat, her fingernail catching on the frayed fabric. “I’ve been here three years. Moved right after I left.” She paused, then lifted her chin, the words coming out before she could stop them. “I was dating Evan Moore. You remember him? The guy I met in my first torts class.” Elin’s face fell. She remembered Evan, the charming pre-law student who’d won Rory over with expensive coffee and promises of a perfect life together, who’d started isolating her from their friend group within six months. “I remember. What happened?” “He broke my phone the night I left. Slammed my head into the kitchen cabinet after I tried to break up with him. Eva drove up from Swansea that night, helped me pack my car. I didn’t tell anyone. I was ashamed. Thought everyone would say I was stupid, that I’d ruined the perfect legal career my dad mapped out for me, all for some guy who couldn’t keep his hands to himself.” Rory’s throat burned, and she took a long drink of cider to wash the taste of the old shame away. She hadn’t said those words out loud to anyone but Silas, not even Eva had heard her admit how deep the shame had run. Elin reached across the table, her cold hand covering Rory’s. “That’s not stupid. That’s never your fault. I wish you’d called me. I would have come. I would have helped you hide, or fight him, or whatever you needed. I thought you just… forgot about all of us. That you had this amazing new life in London and didn’t need the old crew from Cardiff anymore.” A wet laugh burst out of Rory. She wiped a stray tear off her cheek with the back of her hand, the crescent scar glinting again. “Me? I deliver Chinese food for a restaurant in Chinatown. I live in the flat above this bar. I spend most nights bleeding radiators or fixing my broken bike or picking up extra shifts to pay rent. The only legal thing I’ve done in three years is take a free employment law class at City Lit last semester, just for fun. I didn’t tell my dad. He’d blow a gasket if he knew I wasted the tuition he paid for pre-law. I thought you had the perfect life. You were the one who was gonna move to Paris, open your own gallery, paint murals on the sides of buildings. What the hell are you doing as a barrister?” Elin’s face crumpled. She wiped a tear off her own cheek, tucking a stray strand of rain-wet hair behind her ear. “Dad got lung cancer, my third year of art school. The NHS covered most of his treatment, but the private meds, the trips to Cardiff for scans, someone had to pay. Mom was working three part-time jobs to keep the house. I couldn’t keep buying canvases and paint when he needed new oxygen tanks. I transferred to law the next semester. It paid the bills. It still pays the bills. I’m a junior barrister at a family law firm in the City. I got married last year to a guy I met in bar school. He’s nice. He can’t name my favorite painting, though. He works 60 hours a week, forgets my birthday half the time. I haven’t painted a single canvas in four years. I walk past the Tate Modern on my way to work every day and I can’t go in. If I look at a tube of oil paint, I’ll break down. I have the perfect life everyone wanted for me, and I hate it most days.” They sat in silence for a long minute, the tourists finishing their whiskeys and leaving, the bell jingling as they headed out into the rain. Silas stayed in the back, pretending to sort through stock to give them space. Rory thought of the four years that had slipped between them, both of them too ashamed to reach out, both convinced the other had gotten everything they’d ever wanted, while they’d been left with the scraps. They’d both become the people they swore they’d never be: Rory, the girl who’d hated pre-law, was the only one who still snuck back to it for fun, and Elin, the girl who’d hated law more than anything, had built her entire life around it. They’d swapped places, and lost each other in the swap. Elin checked her phone, the screen lighting up with a dozen missed texts from her husband. She stood, pulling her wool coat back on, and scribbled her number on a napkin, sliding it across the table to Rory. Rory did the same, her handwriting scrawled under Elin’s, scared she’d lose it if she didn’t write it down right then. “Court date at 9 AM tomorrow,” Elin said, pausing at the door. She hesitated, then turned back, her smile soft, the same smile she’d had when they were 16, waiting outside the A&E to get Rory’s wrist stitched up. “We have to do this again. Before another four years pass. Before we wake up and we’re 60, and we still haven’t had that paint class I signed up for, or that law conversion course you’ve been too scared to take.” Rory blinked, surprised. She hadn’t told anyone about the law conversion course she’d been daydreaming about, hadn’t even admitted it to herself. She nodded, clutching the napkin in her fist. “Yeah. Soon.” Elin left, the bell jingling behind her, the glow of the green neon sign swallowing her as she stepped onto the wet pavement. Silas limped out of the back room, sliding another full glass of cider across the table to Rory, his signet ring glinting as he set it down. “Old friend?” he said, leaning against the bar. Rory folded the napkin, tucking it into her jacket pocket, the paper crinkling under her fingers. She wiped the last of the tears off her cheeks, the weight of the four lost years settling soft in her chest, not heavy anymore, just there, a reminder that she wasn’t the only one who’d lost parts of herself along the way. “Yeah,” she said, lifting her cider. “The best one I ever had. I just found her again.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She paused then [then]"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.45
leniency0.9
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.1
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1772
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1772
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"perfect"
count4
3
word"glinting"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"perfect"
3"glinting"
4"silence"
5"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen171
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1772
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
57.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1184
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.86
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Rory22
Silas7
Chet1
Baker1
Golden1
Empress1
Elin11
Jones1
Cardiff2
Stereophonics1
International1
Arena1
Barry1
Island1
Welsh1
Evan1
Eva1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Chet"
4"Baker"
5"Empress"
6"Elin"
7"Jones"
8"Evan"
9"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
3"International"
4"Arena"
5"Barry"
6"Island"
globalScore0.571
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1772
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean84.38
std50.26
cv0.596
sampleLengths
0123
1100
276
360
4202
588
669
762
839
9117
1066
11144
12191
13130
1459
1580
1632
1750
188
1959
2017
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"been left"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs196
matches
0"was seeing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences69
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1192
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.026845637583892617
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0041946308724832215
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean25.68
std26.13
cv1.017
sampleLengths
022
147
230
324
433
533
622
712
85
920
108
1115
1228
1315
1430
1510
165
179
1822
1932
2013
2153
2229
2344
248
2530
2650
2714
2821
2934
303
3117
3225
3317
343
3532
364
3793
3824
3910
4056
417
4219
43118
443
4518
46170
4725
4814
4936
56.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.391304347826087
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences58
matches
0"She wiped a ring of"
1"He twisted the silver signet"
2"he called across the space,"
3"Her landlord was useless, and"
4"she said, her voice warm,"
5"She started toward the bar,"
6"She blinked, like she couldn’t"
7"She stood, wiping her damp"
8"She would have passed this"
9"They slid into opposite sides"
10"She picked at a loose"
11"She paused, then lifted her"
12"She remembered Evan, the charming"
13"She hadn’t said those words"
14"She wiped a stray tear"
15"She wiped a tear off"
16"They sat in silence for"
17"They’d both become the people"
18"They’d swapped places, and lost"
19"She stood, pulling her wool"
ratio0.448
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences58
matches
0"Rain lashed the smudged windows"
1"The last of the after-work"
2"She wiped a ring of"
3"The small crescent scar there"
4"Silas stacked pint glasses behind"
5"He twisted the silver signet"
6"he called across the space,"
7"Rory nodded, already expecting it."
8"Her landlord was useless, and"
9"Another night on a couch"
10"The door’s brass bell jingled,"
11"Silas called that last orders"
12"she said, her voice warm,"
13"She started toward the bar,"
14"She blinked, like she couldn’t"
15"Rory’s hand froze around the"
16"She stood, wiping her damp"
17"She would have passed this"
18"The Elin Jones she’d known,"
19"The woman in front of"
ratio0.948
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The last of the after-work crowds had filtered out an hour prior, leaving only a pair of lost tourists nursing whiskeys in the front booth and Rory, who’d staye…"
1"Silas called that last orders were in 15 minutes, and the figure that stepped inside shook rain off a tailored wool coat, her boots squelching on the doormat."
2"She remembered Evan, the charming pre-law student who’d won Rory over with expensive coffee and promises of a perfect life together, who’d started isolating her…"
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he called, his voice rough from years of yelling over bar chatter"
1"Rory said, her voice cracking a little"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.8552%