Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFFEAYDB200EHYTXQ3MTDQ3

Run Details

Duration:
43.2s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest bled a sickly glow onto the wet pavement. Inside, the air was thick with the smell of stale beer, lemon polish, and old paper. Rory Carter stood just inside the door, letting her eyes adjust. The place hadn’t changed. Same dark wood, same walls crammed with sepia-toned photographs of strangers and curling maps of empires that no longer existed. A low murmur of conversation thrummed under the clink of glasses. She made for the far end of the bar, her worn sneakers silent on the sticky floor. The bartender, a young man with a jawline too sharp for his face, gave her a half-nod. She was halfway through ordering a pint of bitter when a voice, weathered like the leather of the barstools, cut through the noise. “The usual, Finn. And whatever she’s having.” Rory’s spine went rigid. She knew that voice, mapped its gravelly depths from a hundred late-night conversations in this very spot. She turned, her hand still resting on the cold, damp bar. Silas Blackwood sat in the corner booth, half-swallowed by shadow. He looked… carved. The auburn in his hair had surrendered to a distinguished grey at the temples, and the lines around his hazel eyes had deepened into canyons. He wore a simple wool jumper, his hands—still large, still capable-looking—wrapped around a glass of amber liquid. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the low light. “Silas,” she said. It wasn’t a question. “Rory.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Or is it Laila now? I lose track.” She ignored the barb, ignored the history it packed into two words. She picked up her pint, the glass weeping in her palm, and walked to his booth. The leather sighed as she slid in opposite him. Up close, she saw the slight, permanent tension in his left leg, the way he held it at an angle. “You’re limping worse,” she said. “Knees don’t care for nostalgia. Or damp weather.” He took a slow sip. “You look well. Hard.” “Delivery work will do that to you.” She met his gaze. His eyes were still sharp, still assessing. They’d once been her compass. Now they felt like a mirror showing her a version of herself she’d tried to bury. “You’re still here.” “The bar doesn’t run itself. People still need to talk, and still need a place to do it where no one important is listening.” He studied her face, the straight fall of her black hair, the faint, crescent-shaped scar visible on her left wrist as she gripped the glass. “You left.” “I had to.” “You fled. There’s a difference.” His voice was quiet, without judgment, which somehow made it worse. “Eva called me. Worried sick. Said you’d just… vanished from the flat. Left everything but a bag of clothes.” The pint was bitter on her tongue. She remembered that night—the panic, the sound of Evan’s key in the lock, the sheer animal need to be gone. She’d used the emergency cash Silas had insisted she keep, the one tucked into a hollowed-out copy of *The Spy Who Came In From the Cold*. “She shouldn’t have bothered you.” “You were my responsibility.” “I was twenty-three. Your *protegee*. Not your responsibility.” The old resentment, bright and hot, flickered to life. He’d trained her, yes. Taught her how to see patterns, how to listen to the spaces between words, how to disappear. But he’d also stood by, all those quiet warnings about Evan, when she’d been too stupid to listen. “You let me make my own mistakes.” “And you made a spectacular one.” He didn’t flinch from her glare. “But you also got yourself out. That was the part of the training that stuck.” They sat in silence for a minute, the bar’s noise a distant sea. On the wall behind Silas, a photograph showed a younger him, no limp, arm slung around a woman with fierce eyes, both of them squinting into a sun that wasn’t English. “You’re still doing it,” he said, finally. “The work.” It wasn’t a question. Of course he knew. He always knew. “Some of it. The parts that don’t ask for a name.” She thought of the packages she sometimes ferried for Yu-Fei Cheung, the ones that felt a fraction too heavy, the addresses that were always vacant lots or anonymous service entrances. It was a long way from Silas’s world of state secrets, but it kept her sharp. It kept her moving. “Mostly, I’m just a girl on a moped with a thermal bag full of kung pao chicken.” “Don’t.” His voice was firm. “Don’t diminish it. Survival is its own kind of intelligence work.” She laughed, a short, sharp sound. “Is that what you tell yourself about this place? Hiding in plain sight?” “I’m not hiding. I’m observing. There’s a difference.” He traced a ring of condensation on the table. “Your mother writes to me. Did you know that? Twice a year. Christmas and your birthday. Updates.” The bitterness in her mouth had nothing to do with the beer. “What does she say?” “That you call. That you’re safe. That your father still won’t say your name.” He paused. “She sends clippings. Your graduation, though you didn’t walk. A mention in the London Gazette for a case your father won. She’s proud. And she’s terrified.” Rory looked down at her hands. The crescent scar was pale against her skin, a permanent reminder of a fall from a tree when she was seven, of her father catching her, of his voice saying, *Steady on, Rory. Steady on.* He hadn’t said her name in four years. “I can’t go back to that,” she whispered. “The life he had planned. The law, the right address, the right people. Evan was part of that world. He was… acceptable.” “Evan was a predator who saw a bright, malleable girl and wanted to own her. Your father’s blindness doesn’t excuse yours.” She flinched. “I know that now.” “Do you? Because you’re still running. From Cardiff, from Evan, from your own name. You live above a bar and deliver food and occasionally play courier for ghosts. What’s the endgame, Rory?” The question hung in the air, thick and oppressive. She had no answer. There was only the next day, the next delivery, the next safe, anonymous night. “What about you?” she countered, pushing back. “This is your endgame? Listening to drunks and living in the past?” She gestured at the maps, the photos. “This whole place is a monument to who you were. To Prague, to the life you lost. You’re not observing, Silas. You’re marinating.” His jaw tightened. For a second, she saw the flicker of the old field agent, the man who could kill with a library book or a smile. Then it was gone, replaced by a weariness that went bone-deep. “Perhaps,” he conceded. He finished his drink, the ice rattling. “But I made a choice. I chose a quiet corner. You’re just… between storms. There’s a difference.” The young bartender, Finn, appeared. “Another round, Mr. Blackwood?” Silas shook his head, his eyes locked on Rory. “No. I think we’re done.” He reached into his jumper pocket and placed a small, folded piece of paper on the table, sliding it toward her with one finger. It was a card, plain white, with a phone number written in black ink. “What’s this?” “A name. A real one. Someone who needs a discreet package moved from London to Edinburgh. No questions, good pay. A step up from wontons.” He held up a hand before she could protest. “Not for me. For you. You’re better than this, Rory. You always were.” She stared at the card. It felt like a key, or a leash. She couldn’t tell which. The weight of his expectation, the echo of their shared past, pressed down on her. “I don’t need your charity. Or your missions.” “It’s not charity. It’s a referral. You can take it or leave it. But for God’s sake, make a choice. Stop drifting.” He began to slide out of the booth, his bad leg stiff. He paused, halfway out, looking down at her. The green neon from outside caught one side of his face, throwing the other into deep shadow. “She also said, your mother, that she leaves your light on. Every night.” He didn’t wait for a response. He turned and walked away, his limp more pronounced as he headed for the back of the bar, toward the bookshelf that led to his hidden room, his world of secrets. He didn’t look back. Rory sat alone in the booth. The noise of the bar rushed back in, filling the space he’d left. On the table, the white card seemed to glow in the dim light. Her pint was warm and flat. She picked up the card, ran her thumb over the crisp edge of the paper, then tucked it into the pocket of her jacket. She didn’t know if she would call. She didn’t know if she was running toward something or just away from this moment, from the sight of Silas’s receding back and the unbearable image of a light left on in a house she could no longer call home. She finished the bitter dregs of her beer, the taste of regret and old friendship coating her tongue, and left the money on the table, next to the empty glass.
created_at"2026-03-11T22:14:26.525Z" 3/11/2026, 10:14:26 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.34
leniency0.68
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1579
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1579
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"depths"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"predator"
count1
7
word"oppressive"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"depths"
1"tension"
2"flickered"
3"silence"
4"traced"
5"reminder"
6"predator"
7"oppressive"
8"flicker"
9"weight"
10"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences93
matches
0"was bitter"
96.77% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords14
totalWords1577
ratio0.009
matches
0"The Spy Who Came In From the Cold"
1"protegee"
2"Steady on, Rory. Steady on."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1076
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Evan2
Silas6
Spy1
Came1
English1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Rory6
Finn1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
6"Yu-Fei"
7"Cheung"
8"Rory"
9"Finn"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a mirror showing her a versio"
1"felt like a key, or a leash"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1577
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"knew that voice"
1"remembered that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean32.85
std22.32
cv0.679
sampleLengths
078
157
27
332
467
57
617
757
85
917
1042
1151
123
1335
1453
155
164
1763
1827
1944
209
2111
2278
2316
2419
2534
2616
2742
2849
2930
3021
316
3232
3327
3449
3538
3627
379
3814
3938
402
4147
4232
438
4472
4541
4662
4777
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs171
matches
0"was running"
96.40% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences123
ratio0.016
matches
0"He wore a simple wool jumper, his hands—still large, still capable-looking—wrapped around a glass of amber liquid."
1"She remembered that night—the panic, the sound of Evan’s key in the lock, the sheer animal need to be gone."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1088
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"faint, crescent-shaped scar"
1"next safe, anonymous night."
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.034926470588235295
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003676470588235294
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean12.82
std9.39
cv0.732
sampleLengths
016
116
211
34
420
511
617
717
823
97
104
1117
1211
1310
142
151
1625
1717
1812
193
204
219
228
2312
2416
259
2620
275
2813
294
3011
317
325
3316
343
3549
362
373
3816
3919
407
4120
4226
435
444
4517
464
4717
4818
497
49.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.35772357723577236
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners44
78.43% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"Of course he knew."
1"Then it was gone, replaced"
ratio0.024
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences85
matches
0"She made for the far"
1"She was halfway through ordering"
2"She knew that voice, mapped"
3"She turned, her hand still"
4"He wore a simple wool"
5"It wasn’t a question."
6"She ignored the barb, ignored"
7"She picked up her pint,"
8"He took a slow sip"
9"She met his gaze"
10"His eyes were still sharp,"
11"They’d once been her compass."
12"He studied her face, the"
13"His voice was quiet, without"
14"She remembered that night—the panic,"
15"She’d used the emergency cash"
16"He’d trained her, yes."
17"He didn’t flinch from her"
18"They sat in silence for"
19"he said, finally"
ratio0.576
36.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences85
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory Carter stood just inside"
2"The place hadn’t changed."
3"A low murmur of conversation"
4"She made for the far"
5"The bartender, a young man"
6"She was halfway through ordering"
7"Rory’s spine went rigid."
8"She knew that voice, mapped"
9"She turned, her hand still"
10"Silas Blackwood sat in the"
11"The auburn in his hair"
12"He wore a simple wool"
13"The silver signet ring on"
14"It wasn’t a question."
15"A ghost of a smile"
16"She ignored the barb, ignored"
17"She picked up her pint,"
18"The leather sighed as she"
19"He took a slow sip"
ratio0.847
58.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Now they felt like a"
ratio0.012
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"On the wall behind Silas, a photograph showed a younger him, no limp, arm slung around a woman with fierce eyes, both of them squinting into a sun that wasn’t E…"
1"Then it was gone, replaced by a weariness that went bone-deep."
2"He turned and walked away, his limp more pronounced as he headed for the back of the bar, toward the bookshelf that led to his hidden room, his world of secrets…"
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, finally"
1"He began, his bad leg stiff"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he conceded (concede)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.08
86.5537%