Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFFF09A3QAKDGA5KG1MT97M

Run Details

Duration:
2m 8s
Cost:
$0.001195
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lock clicks back into place. The bolt slides away. The door opens. Lucien stands there. He takes up the space. A frame of shadow. The air smells of wet wool and old paper. Rory keeps her hand on the frame. Her nails dig into the wood. He steps inside. The floorboards creak. A cat jumps from the sofa. It watches. Ptolemy. The tabby. It arches its back. Rory ignores the cat. She looks at Lucien. He smells like rain and the city outside. *You shouldn’t be here.* The words leave her throat raw. She touches the back of her neck. He did not know the key was lost. He found it. He did not know the handle turned. He pushed it open. Lucien turns the bag in his hand. The material makes a sound. Plastic creaks against the knuckles. He puts it down on the rug. *Where you been.* *Silas needed me.* Silas. The name of the owner of the bar. The place she works. The place that connects her to him in the bone of her shoulder. Rory moves. Her heel scrapes the door frame. She wants to leave. She does not. *He didn’t know you were here.* *He does not know that.* Lucien walks closer. He stops. He does not breach the circle of her personal space. He stands. He looks at the stacks of books. Notes. Scrolls. The fire burns the edges of the paper. *I am not here to help.* *You are here to look me in the eye.* She touches the bookshelf. Her fingers run along the spine. Leather feels rough under her skin. The words inside remind her of what she has. It is a secret. It is a burden. It is alive. Lucien hands her something. A key. It hangs off a string. It is cold. *Take it.* She takes it from his palm. Her skin meets metal. It feels heavy. It is small. *It opens the thing in the basement.* *The basement.* She knew the place. She knew the machine. She knew the sound. The hum that shakes the floor. The vibration that travels up the heels of her shoes. *I need to go back.* *Don’t.* *You told me you weren’t part of this.* *Part of what.* She looks up. She tracks his eyes. One amber. One black. They switch when the light hits. They do not say the name. They do not say the reason. *The city burned loud.* *It was a dream.* *It was not.* Lucien leans his cane against the door. The ivory handle stays dry. It holds the weight of the blade. He checks his pocket. He pulls a phone out. The screen lights up. He doesn't answer it. He turns it over. *Everything is connected.* *We are broken.* Rory sits on the floor. The bookshelf groans. Her height drops. The chair is behind her. The wood creaks under the pressure. *If you help me, I am yours.* *If you help you, you are mine.* The words collide. They bounce. They fly. They do not stop. Lucien steps closer. The floor buckle. His foot makes a mark on the dust. *You are not a monster.* *I am not a saint.* He reaches out. A finger. A single finger touches the back of her hand. The scar. The crescent on the wrist. It bruises. He does not pull back. He keeps the touch. It stays. It stays near. *It is not fair.* *Fair does not exist.* He turns. He walks to the window. The blinds are closed. He opens them a crack. Grey light pours in. Snow starts. It hits the glass. It melts. *Watch it.* She watches. The flakes stick to the frame. They melt. They run down the panes. *He is coming.* *Who.* *The man.* Rory stands. She grips the chair. The metal is cold. It slides down her palm. She realizes she does not care. She cares only for the cold. *Forget him.* *He paid.* Lucien turns. He points toward the door. *Leave.* She does. She moves. Her boots make sound. They echo. The sound travels. *Wait.* He stops. She stops. They are close. The heat between them burns. *Why did you wait.* He looks at the cat. Ptolemy watches. The cat blinks. *For the money.* *For the name.* Rory breathes in. The room smells of rain. She breathes out. The fog rolls. *Buy time.* *Buy peace.* Lucien takes her hand. He pulls her to him. Close enough to breathe the same air. *Do not speak ill.* *Do not speak truth.* She feels his heart. It beats fast. A drum in the chest. It thumps. She hears the sound. It vibrates in her rib case. *Rory.* *Lucien.* The names stick in her mouth. They taste sharp. They taste of iron. *We need a plan.* *We need a place.* He pulls back. He hands her the book. The cover is dark. It hides the words inside. *Here.* She opens the first page. Ink swirls. The letters hide. They form a code. *What does it mean.* *It means you are alive.* Rory looks at the table. The glass is broken. The shards catch the light. She steps over them. She walks to the exit. *Where is it.* *London.* *We are safe.* *No.* The light goes out. The room goes dark. The candle flickers. It leaves a shadow. Rory stops. She listens. The hum stops. The silence grows loud. It fills the space. *He is here.* *Who.* *Silas.* Lucien turns. He checks the door. He keeps the blade hidden inside the cane. *Go.* *No.* *Leave.* *Stay.* They stand. They face the darkness outside. The snow falls. It silences the city. It covers the streets. It covers the ground. Lucien reaches for her. He pulls her coat. He fixes the collar. He does not let go. *For tonight.* *For as long as it takes.* They wait. The darkness grows. The hum returns. It vibrates through the floor. Rory hears it. It feels in the bottom of her spine. *What does it do.* *It calls.* *What calls.* *It knows you are here.* *She knows.* Rory looks at the book. The pages turn. The ink stays. It holds the flame. It does not burn. *Turn it.* She turns the key. It clicks. The door opens to the basement. The light goes on down there. It glows yellow. *Go.* *How.* *Down.* Lucien moves to the doorway. He holds the beam. It stays open. He waits. *Go.* *Rory.* She hesitates. The floor here. It is hard. It does not hold. It slips. *Go.* *Why.* *Because I said.* She turns. She looks at him. He looks tired. The snow lights his hair. *Stay.* *Go.* She steps back. She faces the door. The light waits. The fire burns down in the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1127
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1127
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"echo"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences294
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences294
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences294
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen13
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans76
markdownWords223
totalWords1127
ratio0.198
matches
0"You shouldn’t be here."
1"Where you been."
2"Silas needed me."
3"He didn’t know you were here."
4"He does not know that."
5"I am not here to help."
6"You are here to look me in the eye."
7"Take it."
8"It opens the thing in the basement."
9"The basement."
10"I need to go back."
11"Don’t."
12"You told me you weren’t part of this."
13"Part of what."
14"The city burned loud."
15"It was a dream."
16"It was not."
17"Everything is connected."
18"We are broken."
19"If you help me, I am yours."
20"If you help you, you are mine."
21"You are not a monster."
22"I am not a saint."
23"It is not fair."
24"Fair does not exist."
25"Watch it."
26"He is coming."
27"Who."
28"The man."
29"Forget him."
30"He paid."
31"Leave."
32"Wait."
33"Why did you wait."
34"For the money."
35"For the name."
36"Buy time."
37"Buy peace."
38"Do not speak ill."
39"Do not speak truth."
40"Rory."
41"Lucien."
42"We need a plan."
43"We need a place."
44"Here."
45"What does it mean."
46"It means you are alive."
47"Where is it."
48"London."
49"We are safe."
50"No."
51"He is here."
52"Who."
53"Silas."
54"Go."
55"No."
56"Leave."
57"Stay."
58"For tonight."
59"For as long as it takes."
60"What does it do."
61"It calls."
62"What calls."
63"It knows you are here."
64"She knows."
65"Turn it."
66"Go."
67"How."
68"Down."
69"Go."
70"Rory."
71"Go."
72"Why."
73"Because I said."
74"Stay."
75"Go."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1127
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien13
Silas3
Rory12
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.923
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1127
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences294
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs117
mean9.63
std10.87
cv1.129
sampleLengths
047
137
24
335
424
53
63
741
86
95
1034
116
129
1336
1414
152
1616
177
182
1928
205
211
228
233
2429
254
264
273
2840
293
303
3122
327
337
3425
355
365
3737
384
394
4028
412
4215
433
441
452
4627
472
482
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences294
matches
0"is connected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs260
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences294
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1127
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.008873114463176575
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001774622892635315
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences294
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences294
mean3.83
std1.97
cv0.513
sampleLengths
06
14
23
33
45
54
69
77
86
93
103
116
122
131
142
154
164
174
188
194
206
217
228
233
247
254
267
275
285
297
303
313
321
338
344
3513
362
376
384
393
406
415
423
432
4410
452
467
471
481
498
26.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats69
diversityRatio0.17006802721088435
totalSentences294
uniqueOpeners50
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences214
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount121
totalSentences214
matches
0"He takes up the space."
1"Her nails dig into the"
2"He steps inside."
3"It arches its back."
4"She looks at Lucien."
5"He smells like rain and"
6"*You shouldn’t be here.*"
7"She touches the back of"
8"He did not know the"
9"He found it."
10"He did not know the"
11"He pushed it open."
12"He puts it down on"
13"Her heel scrapes the door"
14"She wants to leave."
15"She does not."
16"*He didn’t know you were"
17"*He does not know that.*"
18"He does not breach the"
19"He looks at the stacks"
ratio0.565
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount198
totalSentences214
matches
0"The lock clicks back into"
1"The bolt slides away."
2"The door opens."
3"Lucien stands there."
4"He takes up the space."
5"A frame of shadow."
6"The air smells of wet"
7"Rory keeps her hand on"
8"Her nails dig into the"
9"He steps inside."
10"The floorboards creak."
11"A cat jumps from the"
12"It arches its back."
13"Rory ignores the cat."
14"She looks at Lucien."
15"He smells like rain and"
16"*You shouldn’t be here.*"
17"The words leave her throat"
18"She touches the back of"
19"He did not know the"
ratio0.925
70.09% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences214
matches
0"*If you help me, I"
1"*If you help you, you"
2"*Because I said.*"
ratio0.014
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences3
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The place that connects her to him in the bone of her shoulder."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.1880%