| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She gestured vaguely [vaguely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.483 | | leniency | 0.966 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 92.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1289 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1289 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "glint" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "measured" | | 3 | "encounter" | | 4 | "chaotic" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "tension" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "unspoken" | | 14 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1282 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 772 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 0.78 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 41.30% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "wool that seemed to swallow the light, brushed against the stacked scrolls lining the wall" | | 1 | "not quite a smile" |
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| 43.99% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.56 | | wordCount | 1282 | | matches | | 0 | "not to touch her, but to gesture toward the window" | | 1 | "not just from fear but from a fierce, reluctant hope" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.18% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 45.79 | | std | 20.52 | | cv | 0.448 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 73 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 65 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 59 | | 13 | 67 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 80 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 81 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 59 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 86 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 51 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.64% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "was already stirring" | | 1 | "were beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 66 | | ratio | 0.076 | | matches | | 0 | "He stepped inside, the scent of sandalwood and something sharper—ozone, perhaps—trailing behind him." | | 1 | "One amber eye flickered to the crescent scar on her left wrist; the other, black as polished obsidian, swept over the room with a quick, assessing glance." | | 2 | "The ledger she’d hidden was more than a collection of symbols; it was a safeguard she’d sworn to protect after a night when Lucien had shown her how easily power could corrupt." | | 3 | "The city beyond Brick Lane was already stirring—delivery bikes rattling over cobblestones, a distant siren wailing, the smell of spiced curry drifting up from the shop below." | | 4 | "Outside, the city awoke, unaware that within the cramped flat above a curry house, two souls were beginning to rewrite the fragile threads of their past—one wary word, one tentative touch at a time." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 589 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.027164685908319185 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0050933786078098476 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 66 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 66 | | mean | 19.42 | | std | 10.93 | | cv | 0.563 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 46 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 48 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 46 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 51.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 66 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "She blinked at the figure" | | 1 | "she asked, voice low enough" | | 2 | "He stepped inside, the scent" | | 3 | "His coat, a charcoal wool" | | 4 | "he said, his voice smooth," | | 5 | "She gestured vaguely at the" | | 6 | "He glanced at a leather‑bound" | | 7 | "Her cheeks warmed." | | 8 | "She crossed her arms, the" | | 9 | "He lowered the cane, the" | | 10 | "She remembered how Lucien had" | | 11 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 12 | "He stepped closer, the distance" | | 13 | "She lifted her chin, eyes" | | 14 | "He smiled then, a genuine," | | 15 | "He paused, his amber eye" | | 16 | "She remembered the warmth of" | | 17 | "she asked, her tone softer" | | 18 | "He lowered his voice, the" | | 19 | "She let out a breath" |
| | ratio | 0.64 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open before" | | 1 | "She blinked at the figure" | | 2 | "she asked, voice low enough" | | 3 | "He stepped inside, the scent" | | 4 | "His coat, a charcoal wool" | | 5 | "he said, his voice smooth," | | 6 | "Rory swallowed, the memory of" | | 7 | "She gestured vaguely at the" | | 8 | "Lucien’s lips twitched, not quite" | | 9 | "He glanced at a leather‑bound" | | 10 | "Her cheeks warmed." | | 11 | "She crossed her arms, the" | | 12 | "He lowered the cane, the" | | 13 | "The words hung between them," | | 14 | "Rory’s gaze dropped to the" | | 15 | "She remembered how Lucien had" | | 16 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 17 | "Lucien’s jaw tightened." | | 18 | "He stepped closer, the distance" | | 19 | "She lifted her chin, eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.94 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory’s gaze dropped to the scar on her wrist, the tiny crescent a reminder of the childhood accident that had taught her to hide pain behind a calm exterior." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 1 | "He paused, his amber eye softening" | | 2 | "she asked, her tone softer now, though the edge remained" | | 3 | "she said, her voice steady despite the flutter in her chest" | | 4 | "He glanced, his black eye reflecting the morning light" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.207 | | leniency | 0.414 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |