Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFFK4PESH86N1CS05X53PZV

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Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Nvidia

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow Quinn pressed her back against the cold brick of The Raven’s Nest, the green neon sign above the door buzzing faintly. Rain had turned the Soho streets into a mirror, each puddle catching the flicker of passing headlights and the distant hum of traffic. She wiped the water from her brow with the back of her glove, felt the weight of her worn leather watch against her wrist, and scanned the crowd. A figure slipped from the shadowed doorway, shoulders hunched, a dark curl of hair plastered to his forehead. The scar on his left forearm caught the light—a thin, pale line that ran from wrist to elbow. Around his neck hung a Saint Christopher medallion, its silver dull beneath the rain. Tomás Herrera. She knew his name from the files, knew he had once stitched wounds for the NHS before the cost of his compassion stripped his license. He moved with a purpose that matched her own, but his steps were hurried, as if he chased something unseen. Harlow’s jaw tightened, the sharp line of it catching the neon glow. She pushed off the wall, her boots splashing in a shallow gutter, and fell into stride behind him. “You think you can vanish in the rain?” Her voice was low, edged with the steel of years on the force. She did not wait for an answer, merely let the words hang in the damp air. Tomás glanced over his shoulder, his warm brown eyes flickering with something between surprise and irritation. “You’re wasting your time, Quinn.” He spoke without breaking pace, his tone flat, the words sharp as the scar on his arm. The chase pulled them down Dean Street, past shuttered shops whose windows reflected the neon green of the bar’s sign like wounded eyes. Harlow’s military precision guided her movements; she kept her center low, her eyes flicking between the suspect’s back and the slick cobblestones ahead. Each step sent a spray of water upward, a brief halo that vanished before it could settle. A sudden turn into a narrow alley forced her to shorten her stride. The walls closed in, brick slick with moisture, the scent of damp stone and old oil thick in the air. Tomás darted ahead, his boots echoing off the walls, the medallion at his throat catching a glint of the distant streetlamp. “You never learned when to stop,” Harlow said, her voice a short bark. She could feel the rain soaking through her coat, the chill seeping into her bones, but her focus remained razor‑sharp. She noted the way his left arm moved, the scar flexing with each stride, the way his fingers brushed the medallion as if seeking comfort. They burst onto a wider thoroughfare, the rain intensifying, turning the road into a river of reflected light. Double‑decker buses lumbered past, their tires throwing up sheets of water that slapped the pavement. Harlow’s gaze flicked to a side entrance half hidden beneath a graffiti‑tagged archway—a forgotten service door that led down, down into the belly of the city. Tomás veered toward it, his hand reaching into the pocket of his coat. A flash of bone white caught her eye—a token, small and roughly carved, shaped like a crescent. She recognized it instantly: the bone token required for entry into the Veil Market, the underground black market that migrated with every full moon, rumored to lie beneath the abandoned Camden tube station. Her heart hammered, not from fear but from the old, familiar surge that had driven her through countless pursuits. She remembered Morris, his laughter cut short three years ago by something she still could not name—something that had slipped through the cracks of the natural world and taken him without warning. The memory was a cold weight in her chest, a reminder that some doors opened onto places where her badge meant little. Tomás slipped through the service door, disappearing into darkness. Harlow paused at the threshold, rain dripping from the brim of her cap, the neon green of the bar’s sign bleeding into the gloom beyond. She could hear the distant drip of water echoing down a stairwell, the faint murmur of voices far below, a low hum that seemed to rise from the stone itself. She lifted her gloved hand, felt the smooth curve of the bone token still clutched in Tomás’s fist as he vanished. The token pulsed faintly, as if responding to some unseen rhythm. She knew the market moved; tonight it rested beneath Camden, its entrance guarded by nothing more than a whisper of bone and a promise of forbidden knowledge. Her training screamed to follow, to apprehend the suspect before he could disappear into a world where the laws she swore to uphold held no sway. Her instincts, honed by years on the force, warned her that the underground was a labyrinth of shadows, that stepping inside could mean losing herself to the same unknown that had taken Morris. She inhaled, the scent of wet earth and rust filling her lungs, and let the rain wash over her face. The decision lay before her like a fork in a dark road—one path led back to the safety of the station, to backup and procedure; the other led down into the unknown, where the Veil Market traded in enchantments and secrets, where a bone token was the only key. Harlow Quinn stepped forward, her boot finding the first slick step, and began the descent. The rain above faded, replaced by the cool, still air of the subterranean passage. She did not look back. She moved with the same military precision that had guided her through a dozen night pursuits, her eyes adjusting to the dim light, her hand resting lightly on the butt of her service pistol—just in case. The tunnel stretched ahead, its walls slick with condensation, the distant sound of dripping water marking the passage of time. Somewhere far below, the Veil Market waited, its stalls hidden behind curtains of shadow, its dealers trading in things that defied explanation. And somewhere in that darkness, Tomás Herrera moved, his scar catching the faint glow of whatever lay ahead, his medallion a small, steady beacon against the gloom. She pressed on, each step a quiet affirmation that she would see this through, whatever waited in the depths below. The choice was made; the chase continued beneath the city, where rain could not reach and where the only light came from the tokens and the secrets they unlocked.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1090
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1090
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count2
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count2
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"beacon"
count1
14
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"weight"
2"scanned"
3"echoing"
4"glint"
5"could feel"
6"chill"
7"flicked"
8"familiar"
9"reminder"
10"gloom"
11"pulsed"
12"whisper"
13"beacon"
14"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences52
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences52
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1084
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1065
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Tomás"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn2
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera2
Dean1
Street1
Veil3
Market3
Camden2
Morris2
Tomás7
Harlow7
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Herrera"
5"Market"
6"Morris"
7"Tomás"
8"Harlow"
places
0"Soho"
1"Dean"
2"Street"
3"Veil"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"something between surprise and irritation"
1"as if seeking comfort"
2"hum that seemed to rise from the stone itself"
3"as if responding to some unseen rhythm"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.923
wordCount1084
matches
0"not from fear but from the old, familiar surge"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
9.58% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean60.22
std11.05
cv0.184
sampleLengths
073
177
250
337
438
563
654
758
859
963
1073
1164
1259
1359
1469
1570
1669
1749
91.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences52
matches
0"were hurried"
1"was made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs166
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences52
ratio0.173
matches
0"The scar on his left forearm caught the light—a thin, pale line that ran from wrist to elbow."
1"Harlow’s military precision guided her movements; she kept her center low, her eyes flicking between the suspect’s back and the slick cobblestones ahead."
2"Harlow’s gaze flicked to a side entrance half hidden beneath a graffiti‑tagged archway—a forgotten service door that led down, down into the belly of the city."
3"A flash of bone white caught her eye—a token, small and roughly carved, shaped like a crescent."
4"She remembered Morris, his laughter cut short three years ago by something she still could not name—something that had slipped through the cracks of the natural world and taken him without warning."
5"She knew the market moved; tonight it rested beneath Camden, its entrance guarded by nothing more than a whisper of bone and a promise of forbidden knowledge."
6"The decision lay before her like a fork in a dark road—one path led back to the safety of the station, to backup and procedure; the other led down into the unknown, where the Veil Market traded in enchantments and secrets, where a bone token was the only key."
7"She moved with the same military precision that had guided her through a dozen night pursuits, her eyes adjusting to the dim light, her hand resting lightly on the butt of her service pistol—just in case."
8"The choice was made; the chase continued beneath the city, where rain could not reach and where the only light came from the tokens and the secrets they unlocked."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1071
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.01680672268907563
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008403361344537815
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences52
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
91.20% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences52
mean20.85
std7.88
cv0.378
sampleLengths
022
123
228
318
418
514
62
725
820
912
1018
1121
1216
1316
1422
1523
1623
1717
1813
1920
2021
2113
2220
2325
2418
2515
2626
2713
2817
2933
3019
3132
3222
339
3425
3530
3621
3711
3827
3926
4033
4120
4249
4315
4414
455
4636
4720
4822
4927
42.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.28846153846153844
totalSentences52
uniqueOpeners15
65.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"Somewhere far below, the Veil"
ratio0.02
47.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences51
matches
0"She wiped the water from"
1"She knew his name from"
2"He moved with a purpose"
3"She pushed off the wall,"
4"Her voice was low, edged"
5"She did not wait for"
6"He spoke without breaking pace,"
7"She could feel the rain"
8"She noted the way his"
9"They burst onto a wider"
10"She recognized it instantly: the"
11"Her heart hammered, not from"
12"She remembered Morris, his laughter"
13"She could hear the distant"
14"She lifted her gloved hand,"
15"She knew the market moved;"
16"Her training screamed to follow,"
17"Her instincts, honed by years"
18"She inhaled, the scent of"
19"She did not look back."
ratio0.431
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences51
matches
0"Harlow Quinn pressed her back"
1"Rain had turned the Soho"
2"She wiped the water from"
3"A figure slipped from the"
4"The scar on his left"
5"She knew his name from"
6"He moved with a purpose"
7"Harlow’s jaw tightened, the sharp"
8"She pushed off the wall,"
9"Her voice was low, edged"
10"She did not wait for"
11"Tomás glanced over his shoulder,"
12"He spoke without breaking pace,"
13"The chase pulled them down"
14"Harlow’s military precision guided her"
15"Each step sent a spray"
16"A sudden turn into a"
17"The walls closed in, brick"
18"Tomás darted ahead, his boots"
19"Harlow said, her voice a"
ratio0.941
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"Tomás darted ahead, his boots echoing off the walls, the medallion at his throat catching a glint of the distant streetlamp."
1"She noted the way his left arm moved, the scar flexing with each stride, the way his fingers brushed the medallion as if seeking comfort."
2"Double‑decker buses lumbered past, their tires throwing up sheets of water that slapped the pavement."
3"Harlow’s gaze flicked to a side entrance half hidden beneath a graffiti‑tagged archway—a forgotten service door that led down, down into the belly of the city."
4"She recognized it instantly: the bone token required for entry into the Veil Market, the underground black market that migrated with every full moon, rumored to…"
5"Her heart hammered, not from fear but from the old, familiar surge that had driven her through countless pursuits."
6"She remembered Morris, his laughter cut short three years ago by something she still could not name—something that had slipped through the cracks of the natural…"
7"Harlow paused at the threshold, rain dripping from the brim of her cap, the neon green of the bar’s sign bleeding into the gloom beyond."
8"She could hear the distant drip of water echoing down a stairwell, the faint murmur of voices far below, a low hum that seemed to rise from the stone itself."
9"The token pulsed faintly, as if responding to some unseen rhythm."
10"Her instincts, honed by years on the force, warned her that the underground was a labyrinth of shadows, that stepping inside could mean losing herself to the sa…"
11"She moved with the same military precision that had guided her through a dozen night pursuits, her eyes adjusting to the dim light, her hand resting lightly on …"
12"Somewhere far below, the Veil Market waited, its stalls hidden behind curtains of shadow, its dealers trading in things that defied explanation."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow said, her voice a short bark"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
64.9475%