Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFFK5Q14WCQ74KAVDSS3XJF

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2m 26s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open. Lucien stepped inside, his heels silent on the threadbare carpet. His cane brushed the edge of a coat rack, a thin whisper of ivory against wood. He tilted his head, eyes flickering amber‑black over the room. "You left the flat on a night when the city breathed fire." She turned, lungs shallow, heart hammering. "You left a note on the kitchen table, a folded mess of paper that smelled of burnt toast." Her finger traced the scar on her wrist, a crescent moon of old pain. "I didn't know you'd come back." His smile was thin, a line of steel wrapped in silk. "Circumstance has a habit of rearranging the board." She set the mug down, porcelain clinking against the chipped tile. "You still carry that cane. Does the blade still cut?" He lifted the cane, letting the light catch the silver tip. "It cuts deeper now, especially when it pierces secrets." A tense silence draped the room, air thick with unsmoked cigarettes and old perfume. She lifted the edge of a silk scarf, fingers trembling. "The night we argued, you said you'd never return." "You said you'd never leave." She laughed, a brittle sound that cracked the air. "We were both wrong." He moved closer, his perfume a faint hint of citrus and sandalwood, a scent that haunted her. "You thought you could hide the truth behind a delivery run." She crossed her arms, the fabric of her black sweater pulling tight over her shoulders. "I was delivering more than noodles; I was delivering a promise." He lifted a hand, his fingertips grazing the air where her wrist scar lay. "That promise broke, Rory." She flinched, eyes flashing bright blue. "It broke because you stole it." His jaw tightened, amber eye narrowing. "I stole nothing but the truth you refused to see." The silence stretched, broken only by the creak of the building settling. Her breath hitched, a shaky gasp that seemed to echo in the cramped kitchen. "You always liked to play with fire, Lucien." He chuckled, a low rumble that vibrated the metal of his watch. "And you liked to dance in the flames, believing you could control the heat." She stepped back, the floorboards groaning under her weight. "You think you can manipulate people, but you forget one thing." He arched a brow, the black eye catching the dim light. "What's that?" She pointed at the small brass key hanging on the hook by the door. "This key opens more than the front door; it opens a secret." A sudden clatter erupted from the hallway, a metal tray toppling onto the floor. Two masked figures slipped in, their silhouettes quick and eager. She flinched, her hand flying to the scar on her wrist, as if it could shield her. "You didn’t think I'd be alone?" Lucian's eyes narrowed, his hand slipping toward the concealed blade. "Your timing is impeccable, isn’t it?" One of the intruders lunged, a knife flashing in his hand. Lucien’s cane snapped, the thin blade extending with a soft hiss. He slashed, the steel slicing through the air, catching the intruder's wrist. The intruder screamed, a high-pitched sound that shattered the quiet. She grabbed a nearby kettle, pouring boiling water onto the attacker's face. Steam hissed, a cloud of white enveloping their vision. Lucien ducked, his coat fluttering, and shoved the intruder toward the window. The intruder crashed through the pane, shards scattering like glass rain. She lifted her mug, the ceramic warm against her palm, and flung it at the second intruder. The mug shattered against the wall, shards scattering like tiny stars. "Enough!" Lucien barked, voice cutting through the chaos. He thrust his cane forward, the blade meeting the intruder's throat with a wet thud. The attacker choked, hands fluttering uselessly. She stared, mouth half-open, as the intruder collapsed onto the carpet, blood staining the fibres. The room fell silent, the only sound a faint drip from the broken window. Lucien lowered his cane, eyes scanning the shadows. "Who sent you?" No answer came, only the soft hiss of the city outside, rain pattering against the glass. She turned back to Lucien, her bright blue eyes wide, searching. "You knew they'd come." He nodded, his silver hair catching the faint light. "Your past always follows you, Rory." She swallowed, throat dry, heart pounding. "You always knew when to arrive, always at the right moment." He stepped closer, his presence filling the narrow room. "Time has a way of circling back, forcing us to face what we left unfinished." She felt the heat of the earlier argument rise again, cheeks flushing. "You always had a way of making me feel both seen and invisible." Lucien's lips twitched, a hint of a smile touching the corner. "You always made me wonder if I could trust the fire or the ash." The door behind them slammed shut, a heavy thud reverberating through the walls. A cold draft swept in, scattering a few loose pages from the scattered research notes on the table. She reached out, fingers brushing the edge of a paper, its edge torn. "It's a map," she whispered, her voice barely audible. "A map of something we both thought we'd buried." Lucien's amber eye glinted, his black eye darkened. "Then perhaps we should follow it together." She inhaled sharply, a cold breath that fogged the air. "But at what cost?" He placed a hand on the back of her neck, the touch deliberate, lingering. "The cost is always higher when love is the currency." A sudden crack echoed from the hallway, a door slamming open further. Another figure slipped in, dragging a battered suitcase behind them. She felt a shiver run down her spine, the scar on her wrist throbbing. "You have a habit of arriving when the world collapses." The newcomer froze, eyes locking onto Aurora, then flicking to Lucien. His voice was a growl, low and feral. "Lucien, you promised." Lucien's hand tightened around his cane, his grip firm. "Promises are forged in blood, especially when they involve you." She watched the tension coil like a spring, every muscle taut. The room held its breath, the only sound a faint humming of the refrigerator. She raised her voice, steady and fierce. "We can't keep running, Lucien. Not forever." Lucien's eyes softened, the amber light catching the rim of his watch. "But you always loved a chase, didn't you?" A sudden tremor rattled the floorboards, a low groan that seemed to come from the building itself. The ceiling tiles cracked, dust drifting down like grey snow. She stared at the ceiling, her mind racing, heart racing faster. Lucien's hand tightened, his grip now a vice. He spoke, voice low and steady. "I never promised safety." Their eyes locked, a storm of emotions flickering between them. Outside, sirens wailed, growing louder, closer. A metallic clang rang out from the hallway, a sound of metal striking metal. She felt the cold bite of steel against her throat, breath caught in her throat. The scene froze, a heartbeat suspended, as the new intruder raised a pistol. The barrel gleamed ominously, the muzzle pointing directly at Lucien's chest. She stared, eyes fixed on the weapon, a cold sweat prickling her skin. Lucien's lips formed a silent word, a promise perhaps, or a warning. The gunman laughed, a cruel sound that echoed in the cramped flat. He whispered, "It's over, Lucien. This time, there is no escape." She felt the cold metal against her cheek, a pressure that threatened to crush her resolve. Her mind raced, trying to find a way out, a way to protect him, to protect herself. The chapter ended as the trigger squeaked, a moment hanging on a razor's edge, waiting for the next breath.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.073
leniency0.146
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1297
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1297
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"silk"
count2
3
word"porcelain"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"dance"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count2
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"pounding"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count2
13
word"down her spine"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"racing"
count2
16
word"resolve"
count1
17
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"traced"
2"silk"
3"porcelain"
4"silence"
5"echo"
6"vibrated"
7"dance"
8"weight"
9"shattered"
10"scanning"
11"pounding"
12"echoed"
13"down her spine"
14"tension"
15"racing"
16"resolve"
17"raced"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"room fell silent"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The room fell silent"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences85
matches
0"felt a shiver"
75.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1297
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount964
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien14
Aurora1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.774
windowScore0.667
89.76% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"gasp that seemed to echo in the cramped kitchen"
1"groan that seemed to come from the building itself"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1297
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
60.53% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean20.92
std7.57
cv0.362
sampleLengths
04
136
212
36
418
514
66
719
821
920
1033
115
1213
1328
1426
1518
1612
1716
1826
198
2026
2120
2213
2326
2424
2523
2616
2734
2831
2923
3028
3129
3229
3311
3416
3515
3615
3717
3824
3925
4025
4131
4231
4315
4414
4524
4622
4724
4822
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
96.40% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences123
ratio0.016
matches
0"\"I was delivering more than noodles; I was delivering a promise.\""
1"\"This key opens more than the front door; it opens a secret.\""
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount966
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"ceramic warm against her"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.020703933747412008
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009316770186335404
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
78.28% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean10.54
std3.65
cv0.346
sampleLengths
04
110
216
310
412
56
618
714
86
911
108
1111
1210
1311
149
1514
1610
179
185
199
204
2117
2211
2315
2411
2514
264
276
286
296
3010
3112
3214
338
3412
3514
369
3711
3811
392
4014
4112
4214
4310
4417
456
4610
476
4811
4911
48.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.25203252032520324
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences84
matches
0"His cane brushed the edge"
1"He tilted his head, eyes"
2"She turned, lungs shallow, heart"
3"Her finger traced the scar"
4"His smile was thin, a"
5"She set the mug down,"
6"He lifted the cane, letting"
7"She lifted the edge of"
8"She laughed, a brittle sound"
9"He moved closer, his perfume"
10"She crossed her arms, the"
11"He lifted a hand, his"
12"She flinched, eyes flashing bright"
13"His jaw tightened, amber eye"
14"Her breath hitched, a shaky"
15"He chuckled, a low rumble"
16"She stepped back, the floorboards"
17"He arched a brow, the"
18"She pointed at the small"
19"She flinched, her hand flying"
ratio0.536
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences84
matches
0"The door swung open."
1"Lucien stepped inside, his heels"
2"His cane brushed the edge"
3"He tilted his head, eyes"
4"She turned, lungs shallow, heart"
5"Her finger traced the scar"
6"His smile was thin, a"
7"She set the mug down,"
8"He lifted the cane, letting"
9"A tense silence draped the"
10"She lifted the edge of"
11"She laughed, a brittle sound"
12"He moved closer, his perfume"
13"She crossed her arms, the"
14"He lifted a hand, his"
15"She flinched, eyes flashing bright"
16"His jaw tightened, amber eye"
17"The silence stretched, broken only"
18"Her breath hitched, a shaky"
19"He chuckled, a low rumble"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He moved closer, his perfume a faint hint of citrus and sandalwood, a scent that haunted her."
1"She flinched, her hand flying to the scar on her wrist, as if it could shield her."
2"The intruder screamed, a high-pitched sound that shattered the quiet."
3"She stared at the ceiling, her mind racing, heart racing faster."
4"She felt the cold metal against her cheek, a pressure that threatened to crush her resolve."
5"The chapter ended as the trigger squeaked, a moment hanging on a razor's edge, waiting for the next breath."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Lucien barked, voice cutting through the chaos"
1"she whispered, her voice barely audible"
76.83% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Lucien barked (bark)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"He whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.073
leniency0.146
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.146
71.3720%