Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFFR8E1KYFAAP4AVPYDC1M2

Run Details

Duration:
1m 58s
Cost:
$0.011335
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of the Raven's Nest bleeds through the smudged front window, painting the rain-slicked Soho pavement lime. Inside, the air smells like burnt pretzels and stale bourbon, walls lined with frayed maps of European capitals, black-and-white photos of men in parkas huddled on a snowy Prague street corner half-hidden behind a stack of beer coasters. Silas leans on the oak bar, his left leg shifted an inch back to take weight off his bad knee, a silver signet ring glinting as he polishes a pint glass with a rag that’s seen better decades. Rory drops her Golden Empress delivery backpack by the foot of a bar stool, the straps slipping off one shoulder, her left wrist brushing the counter as she pulls herself up. The crescent scar on the skin there catches the low string light strung above the taps, faint as a moon sliver. She finished her last run ten minutes prior, dropped an order of pork dumplings and chow mein to a group of gallery owners three blocks over, her socks still squelching inside scuffed white sneakers. Silas slides a Guinness across the bar, foam sloshing over the edge onto a coaster printed with a raven midflight. Only you could turn a 20-minute delivery into a 45-minute detour to pet every stray cat on Oxford Street. Rory snorts, peeling the label off a bottle of dill pickles set out for bar snacks. They were hungry. One had a limp. I couldn’t leave him. The bell above the front door jangles, cold rain wind whipping in, sending a stack of napkins sliding off the end of the bar. A woman shakes water off the hood of her black wool coat, her face turned away as she fumbles to lock an umbrella, her brown hair cut into a sharp chin-length bob, no streaks of neon, no silver studs along the curve of her ear that Rory remembered from the girl she grew up with. The woman turns to head for the only empty booth at the back, and her eyes lock on Rory’s. Rory’s beer stops halfway to her mouth. That’s Eva Marlow, her next-door neighbor in Cardiff, the girl who taught her to steal pears from the retired farmer’s orchard at the end of their street, who’d sat with her in Cardiff General’s A&E when she crashed her dad’s old BMX and carved that crescent into her wrist on the bike’s rusted handlebar. They hadn’t seen each other in three years. Not since Rory texted her from a Cardiff service station, sobbing, Evan had broken her phone, had grabbed her arm hard enough to leave a bruise that lasted two weeks, and Eva had written back come to London, I’ll send you the train fare, and then the number went dead. Rory had called every line she had for her, showed up at the flat Eva had listed on her Instagram, and found a retired nurse who’d lived there for 12 years. She’d thought Eva ghosted her, that she’d left her hanging when she needed her most. Now Eva’s boots scuff the wooden floor as she walks towards the bar, not looking away. Rory sets her beer down, her palm flat on the worn oak. You still drink Guinness. I thought you’d switched to something fancy. Aperol spritz or whatever. Rory’s jaw unclenches a little. She’d recognize that thick Cardiff lilt, the way she drew the end of sentences up like a question, anywhere. You still lie about being fine. I see that too. Eva huffs a laugh that doesn’t reach her eyes, and pulls out the stool next to Rory’s, shrugging her coat off to drape over the chair’s back. Silas looks up from wiping the bar, nods once, and Eva orders a gin and tonic, no lime. The same order she used to beg for at the shitty pub back in Cardiff, when they’d sneak in with fake IDs at 17. It’s the only thing that hasn’t changed. Silas slides the glass over, then retreats to the far end of the bar to give them space, his limp quiet as he moves to drop a bowl of pretzel nuggets in front of the two backpackers loitering in the corner. Eva twists the thin gold wedding ring on her left finger, over and over, the same nervous tick she had as a kid, when she’d twist the cuff of her hoodie until the seam ripped before admitting she’d messed up. You’re living above the bar? I asked around, after I got your text. The landlord said the girl above the Nest stays out of trouble, pays her rent on time. That sounded like you. You asked around? You could have called. Could have texted. I thought you died. I thought Evan found you or something, that’s how quiet you went. Eva’s glass clinks hard against the bar as she sets it down, her knuckles white. I didn’t want you to see me. Not like this. Back when we were 19, you crashed that BMX, I sat with you in A&E for four hours, I promised I’d never leave you hanging. Then your mom died, and I got the tattoo apprenticeship in Manchester, and I bailed. I didn’t come to the funeral. I couldn’t face you, because I chose a stupid apprenticeship over the only person who’d ever had my back. Then three years ago, you texted me, scared out of your mind, needing me, and I couldn’t do it. I couldn’t be the person you needed again, because I’d already failed you once. I moved to London six months after that, got a job at a marketing firm, got married, did all the things I swore I’d never do, because it was easier than being the girl who left her best friend when she needed her most. I built a whole new life so I wouldn’t have to look at the part of me that hurt you. Rory stares at her, the crescent scar on her wrist burning. She’d carried that anger for three years, that sharp, heavy hurt that Eva had abandoned her when she was running from the worst thing that had ever happened to her. She’d imagined a hundred reasons: Eva was dead, Eva was in trouble, Eva hated her. Never this. Never that Eva had been too ashamed to show up. Eva pulls a crumpled photo out of her leather work wallet, slides it across the bar. It’s them, 16, covered in pear juice, sitting on the roof of Eva’s childhood house in Cardiff, Rory’s left wrist wrapped in a neon pink bandage, Eva’s hair dyed electric blue, holding up a middle finger to the camera. I carry that everywhere. I never stopped thinking about you. I saw the Golden Empress sticker on your backpack when I walked in, and I knew. I’d googled the restaurant a week prior, worked up the courage to walk in and ask for you. I couldn’t do it. I came here tonight to wait out the rain, and I walked straight into you. Silas’s voice carries soft from the back of the bar, not intrusive, just a warning. Last call in ten. Rory picks up the photo, runs her thumb over the crease down the middle, the fold Eva had made a hundred times just to pull it out and look at it. Evan’s in jail. He got arrested for assaulting another girl, a year after I left Cardiff. I didn’t need you to save me. I just needed you to be there. I would have come. If you’d told me you were scared, I would have shown up at your flat, no questions asked. I failed you too. I stopped calling after a dozen tries. I assumed the worst. I never stopped to think you were hurting too. Eva’s eyes glisten, and she swipes at a tear before it can smudge the matte black mascara she’s wearing, the kind of fancy, expensive product the old Eva, who wore only smudged eyeliner she stole from Boots, would have never bothered with. I bought a ticket to Cardiff last month. I was going to show up at your dad’s house, ask for your number. I got off the train, and I turned right back around, got on the next train to London. I was too scared you’d tell me to go to hell. I would have. If I was you, I’d tell me to go to hell. What’s your number now? Rory pulls her phone out of her windbreaker pocket, unlocks it, shoves it across the bar. I still have the same one. Text me when you get home. I want to meet you for coffee tomorrow. Not here, not in some bar where we’re both scared to say what we mean. At that café in Covent Garden we used to tape photos of to our bedroom walls, the one with the lemon tarts. We used to say we’d sit there all day, eating them and writing stupid songs. Eva types her number into Rory’s contacts, her hands steady now. I’ll buy two lemon tarts. I owe you three years of them. I’ll show up early. I won’t bail. She pulls her coat on, slings her work bag over her shoulder, pauses at the door to look back. Rory lifts her Guinness in a toast. Eva does the same with her half-full gin and tonic, then pushes out into the rain. Silas walks back over to the bar, leans against it, nods at the door swinging shut behind her. That girl carry a lot of weight. Same as you. Rory tucks the crumpled photo into her wallet, slings her delivery backpack over one shoulder, and turns for the stairs that lead to her flat above the bar. The rain taps against the stairwell window, the bar’s green neon glowing bright against the dark street below. For the first time in three years, the heavy, unspoken guilt she’d carried, the part of her that wondered if she’d been wrong to stop reaching out, if she’d been as bad at being a friend as Eva had, lifts a little. Time piles things up, she thinks, fumbling for her flat key. You don’t even notice the weight until you run into someone who knew you when you had nothing to carry.
created_at"2026-03-11T22:19:51.63Z" 3/11/2026, 10:19:51 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"glinting"
2"lilt"
3"electric"
4"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences113
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1721
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions88
wordCount1721
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity1.34
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Soho1
European1
Prague1
Golden2
Empress2
Guinness3
Oxford1
Street1
Rory17
Eva23
Marlow1
Cardiff8
General1
Evan3
London3
Instagram1
Manchester1
Boots1
Covent1
Garden1
Silas6
You6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Marlow"
5"General"
6"Evan"
7"Silas"
8"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Oxford"
3"Street"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
6"Manchester"
7"Covent"
8"Garden"
globalScore0.832
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1721
matches(empty)
78.17% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences113
matches
0"carved that crescent"
1"crashed that BMX"
2"carried that anger"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean81.95
std68.11
cv0.831
sampleLengths
095
1106
219
327
4291
515
634
7157
834
926
10187
11123
1263
1319
14107
15107
1692
1730
1860
1910
20119
92.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences113
matches
0"seen"
1"got married"
2"got arrested"
3"were scared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs300
matches
0"was running"
1"were hurting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences113
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1730
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.025433526011560695
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.003468208092485549
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean15.23
std12.19
cv0.801
sampleLengths
019
138
238
331
421
534
620
719
816
93
104
114
1224
1355
1419
157
1654
178
1850
1931
2015
2116
2212
234
247
254
265
2719
286
294
3027
3118
3224
337
3441
3540
365
378
3817
394
403
414
423
434
4412
4515
467
473
4825
4915
28.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.2831858407079646
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners32
89.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences112
matches
0"Only you could turn a"
1"Then your mom died, and"
2"Then three years ago, you"
ratio0.027
27.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences112
matches
0"She finished her last run"
1"They were hungry."
2"I couldn’t leave him."
3"They hadn’t seen each other"
4"She’d thought Eva ghosted her,"
5"You still drink Guinness."
6"I thought you’d switched to"
7"She’d recognize that thick Cardiff"
8"You still lie about being"
9"I see that too."
10"It’s the only thing that"
11"You’re living above the bar?"
12"I asked around, after I"
13"You asked around?"
14"You could have called."
15"I thought you died."
16"I thought Evan found you"
17"I didn’t want you to"
18"I didn’t come to the"
19"I couldn’t face you, because"
ratio0.482
49.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences112
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"Silas leans on the oak"
2"Rory drops her Golden Empress"
3"The crescent scar on the"
4"She finished her last run"
5"Silas slides a Guinness across"
6"Rory snorts, peeling the label"
7"They were hungry."
8"I couldn’t leave him."
9"The bell above the front"
10"A woman shakes water off"
11"The woman turns to head"
12"Rory’s beer stops halfway to"
13"That’s Eva Marlow, her next-door"
14"They hadn’t seen each other"
15"Rory had called every line"
16"She’d thought Eva ghosted her,"
17"Rory sets her beer down,"
18"You still drink Guinness."
19"I thought you’d switched to"
ratio0.821
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences112
matches
0"Now Eva’s boots scuff the"
1"If you’d told me you"
2"If I was you, I’d"
ratio0.027
54.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Silas leans on the oak bar, his left leg shifted an inch back to take weight off his bad knee, a silver signet ring glinting as he polishes a pint glass with a …"
1"That’s Eva Marlow, her next-door neighbor in Cardiff, the girl who taught her to steal pears from the retired farmer’s orchard at the end of their street, who’d…"
2"Eva huffs a laugh that doesn’t reach her eyes, and pulls out the stool next to Rory’s, shrugging her coat off to drape over the chair’s back."
3"I moved to London six months after that, got a job at a marketing firm, got married, did all the things I swore I’d never do, because it was easier than being t…"
4"She’d carried that anger for three years, that sharp, heavy hurt that Eva had abandoned her when she was running from the worst thing that had ever happened to …"
5"Eva’s eyes glisten, and she swipes at a tear before it can smudge the matte black mascara she’s wearing, the kind of fancy, expensive product the old Eva, who w…"
6"Rory tucks the crumpled photo into her wallet, slings her delivery backpack over one shoulder, and turns for the stairs that lead to her flat above the bar."
7"For the first time in three years, the heavy, unspoken guilt she’d carried, the part of her that wondered if she’d been wrong to stop reaching out, if she’d bee…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.2255%