Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFFTTCSWC4P7H4J226V3F2S

Run Details

Model:
Stealth: Healer Alpha
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
18.7s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Evaluation summary

Score Evaluator
Details Link
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags (details)
82.09% AI-ism adverb frequency (details)
100.00% AI-ism character names (details)
100.00% AI-ism location names (details)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency (details)
100.00% Cliché density (details)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell) (details)
100.00% Filter word density (details)
100.00% Gibberish response detection (details)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse (details)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) (details)
75.82% Name drop frequency (details)
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing (details)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse (details)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) (details)
100.00% Paragraph length variance (details)
100.00% Passive voice overuse (details)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse (details)
43.19% Em-dash & semicolon overuse (details)
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload) (details)
100.00% Repeated phrase echo (details)
100.00% Sentence length variance (details)
51.16% Sentence opener variety (details)
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts (details)
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts (details)
46.67% Subject-first sentence starts (details)
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts (details)
49.69% Technical jargon density (details)
41.67% Useless dialogue additions (details)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) (details)
72.4095% Overall

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air inside the grove felt heavier, thicker, like it had weight and texture. Aurora pushed through the final curtain of hanging willow-like branches, the silvery leaves parting with a whisper of sound, and stepped onto soft, springy moss. Behind her, Nyx flowed through the same boundary, their shadow-form condensing from the mist between the leaves to stand solid beside her. “Stay sharp,” Rory murmured, her hand drifting to the small of her back where the cold moonsilver of Isolde’s blade rested against her spine. A canopy of ancient oaks interlaced high above, their bark the color of bone. Through the gaps, the sky was not blue but a deep, velvety purple, streaked with slow-moving rivers of gold. There was no sun, yet light radiated from everywhere and nowhere, bathing the clearing in a soft, shadowless glow. The silence was profound, broken only by the distant, crystalline chime of water and the rustle of the group’s own movements. Rory took a step. The moss underfoot was impossibly soft, yet she felt no give. She knelt, pressing her palm flat against it. It was cool and dry, not damp like normal moss. “Feels like velvet stretched over stone.” Nyx extended a hand-like tendril of darkness. It brushed the surface, and the moss shimmered where they touched, its color deepening to a vibrant emerald for a heartbeat before fading back. “It reacts. Not to life, but to… intent.” Their whisper was barely audible, carried on the air itself. Rory scanned their surroundings. Wildflowers she couldn’t name dotted the mossy floor in clusters, their petals unfurled. They ranged from sapphire blues to a red so deep it was nearly black, each glowing faintly from within. No bees or insects hummed around them. The flowers were perfectly still, untouched by any breeze, yet their colors seemed to swirl and pulse in time with the golden rivers in the sky. She reached out, fingers hovering over a bloom that looked like frosted crystal. A warmth radiated from it, a gentle, living heat that had no source. She pulled her hand back, a shiver tracing her vertebrae. They moved deeper, following the pull of the chiming sound. The grove wasn’t large, but the geography felt wrong, folded in on itself. They’d walk a straight line for a minute only to find the same cluster of red-black flowers on their left again. Rory glanced over her shoulder. The entry curtain of branches was gone, replaced by an identical thicket. She swallowed, the taste of ozone and wild honey on her tongue. “Time.” Nyx nodded, a slow, fluid motion of their head. “It loops. It drifts. It stutters.” Ahead, the chiming grew louder, a melodic, metallic song. It led them to a central spring. Water bubbled up from a fissure in a flat, grey stone, not into a pool, but upward in a self-contained, spiraling column that defied gravity. The water was perfectly clear, and within its twisting flow, motes of light drifted like captured stars. The spring’s song was complex, layered. Rory felt a vibration in her bones, a resonance that spoke of stillness and patience. Nyx’s form wavered, shrinking as they drew nearer. “It’s… pure. Unbound. The magic here has no covenant, no contract. It simply is.” Rory felt the Heartstone Pendant warm against her sternum, a faint, pulsing throb that matched the rhythm of the spring’s song. It was pointing her toward something, or reacting to the ambient power. She pressed a hand to her chest, a gesture of grounding. A path of flat, white stones circled the spring. They followed it, Rory’s boots making no sound. As she walked, she noticed the air held no scent of soil or decay, only the clean, ozone-kissed smell of the spring and the honey-warmth of the flowers. On the third circuit of the spring, the path widened and led to the grove’s true heart: three oaks, their trunks fused at the base, rising from the moss like natural pillars. Between them, the air shimmered, not with heat, but with a distortion, like looking through ancient, flawed glass. It was a tear, a rift—a piece of the Veil, thin and visible even to Rory’s mundane sight. The pendant grew hot. “That’s it,” Rory breathed. A portal. Not to a place of gluttony like Dymas, but somewhere else. The shimmer bled colors at its edges, sickly greens and bruised purples, a stark contrast to the grove’s serene beauty. “The wound in the world,” Nyx stated, their voice dropping an octave. “It hums with Hel’s hunger. Not wide enough to cross, but enough to leak.” Rory stepped closer. The distorted air felt abrasive against her skin, like fine grit. She could hear a low, guttural sound from the other side—a collective, echoing growl that vibrated in her teeth. The Heartstone burned now, a focused heat. Isolde hadn’t lied. This place was a nexus, a fragile point where the Veil was worn thin. “The Seer said she guards this place. She’s not here.” Rory’s gaze swept the area again. The three oaks, the spring, the path, the endless, beautiful, silent flowers. Nothing. “She is,” Nyx whispered, and gestured with a limb toward the central spring. Rory looked. In the clear, upward-flowing column of water, a reflection stared back—not of her face, but of the grove itself. And in that reflection, seated with her back against the largest oak, was Isolde Varga. Her silver hair pooled around her like liquid moonlight, and her pale lavender eyes were open, watching them. She made no footprints on the moss in the water’s image. A sharp intake of breath escaped Rory. She turned to the actual tree. Solid, ancient, bark-covered wood. She reached out and her hand phased halfway through, the sensation like plunging her arm into cold, static electricity. She recoiled. “The Seer exists in the moment she first entered and the moment she will leave,” Nyx explained, their form slowly beginning to fade at the edges, growing more insubstantial. “She is always here, and never here. A fixed point in the flow. The grove protects its own.” Rory looked from the empty tree to the reflection in the spring, where Isolde’s image tilted her head, a faint, enigmatic smile playing on her lips. The spring’s chiming song swelled, filling the grove, and Rory understood. This was not just a place. It was a sanctuary, a pocket of reality held in stasis by a half-fae’s exile, its heart guarded by a woman who existed between seconds. The wonder was a kind of prison. The alien beauty was a defense. And the thin, growling tear in the Veil at its center was the very thing she’d come to find.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1117
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slowly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1117
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"profound"
count1
4
word"crystalline"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count2
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"crystal"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count2
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"complex"
count1
13
word"resonance"
count1
14
word"wavered"
count1
15
word"throb"
count1
16
word"stark"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count1
18
word"vibrated"
count1
19
word"enigmatic"
count1
20
word"sanctuary"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"whisper"
2"silence"
3"profound"
4"crystalline"
5"velvet"
6"shimmered"
7"scanned"
8"pulse"
9"crystal"
10"warmth"
11"tracing"
12"complex"
13"resonance"
14"wavered"
15"throb"
16"stark"
17"echoing"
18"vibrated"
19"enigmatic"
20"sanctuary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1114
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.82% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1011
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Nyx7
Isolde4
Rory15
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Veil3
Dymas1
Varga1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Rory"
3"Heartstone"
4"Pendant"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.758
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like frosted crystal"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches7
per1kWords6.284
wordCount1114
matches
0"not blue but a deep, velvety purple, streaked with slow-moving rivers of"
1"Not to life, but to… intent"
2"not into a pool, but upward in a self-contained, spiraling column"
3"not with heat, but with a distortion, like looking through ancient, flawed glas"
4"Not to a place of gluttony like Dymas, but somewhere else"
5"Not wide enough to cross, but enough to leak"
6"not of her face, but of the grove itself"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean50.64
std29.77
cv0.588
sampleLengths
061
124
273
339
449
5105
674
715
879
922
1044
11113
124
1337
1426
1557
1629
1713
1865
1938
2047
21100
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs153
matches
0"was pointing"
43.19% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences86
ratio0.035
matches
0"It was a tear, a rift—a piece of the Veil, thin and visible even to Rory’s mundane sight."
1"She could hear a low, guttural sound from the other side—a collective, echoing growl that vibrated in her teeth."
2"In the clear, upward-flowing column of water, a reflection stared back—not of her face, but of the grove itself."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1023
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"clean, ozone-kissed smell"
1"endless, beautiful, silent flowers."
2"Solid, ancient, bark-covered wood."
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.033235581622678395
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010752688172043012
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean12.95
std7.31
cv0.565
sampleLengths
014
125
222
324
414
519
619
721
84
911
108
1110
126
137
1424
1518
164
1713
1819
197
2026
2113
2213
2310
2410
2513
2621
275
2812
2912
301
319
326
339
347
3525
3617
376
3815
398
4014
4121
4212
4311
449
458
4628
4732
4818
4918
51.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3488372093023256
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences75
matches
0"She knelt, pressing her palm"
1"It was cool and dry,"
2"It brushed the surface, and"
3"Their whisper was barely audible,"
4"They ranged from sapphire blues"
5"She reached out, fingers hovering"
6"She pulled her hand back,"
7"They moved deeper, following the"
8"They’d walk a straight line"
9"She swallowed, the taste of"
10"It led them to a"
11"It was pointing her toward"
12"She pressed a hand to"
13"They followed it, Rory’s boots"
14"It was a tear, a"
15"She could hear a low,"
16"Her silver hair pooled around"
17"She made no footprints on"
18"She turned to the actual"
19"She reached out and her"
ratio0.28
46.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences75
matches
0"The air inside the grove"
1"Aurora pushed through the final"
2"Rory murmured, her hand drifting"
3"A canopy of ancient oaks"
4"The silence was profound, broken"
5"Rory took a step."
6"The moss underfoot was impossibly"
7"She knelt, pressing her palm"
8"It was cool and dry,"
9"Nyx extended a hand-like tendril"
10"It brushed the surface, and"
11"Their whisper was barely audible,"
12"Rory scanned their surroundings."
13"Wildflowers she couldn’t name dotted"
14"They ranged from sapphire blues"
15"The flowers were perfectly still,"
16"She reached out, fingers hovering"
17"A warmth radiated from it,"
18"She pulled her hand back,"
19"They moved deeper, following the"
ratio0.827
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"It brushed the surface, and the moss shimmered where they touched, its color deepening to a vibrant emerald for a heartbeat before fading back."
1"Water bubbled up from a fissure in a flat, grey stone, not into a pool, but upward in a self-contained, spiraling column that defied gravity."
2"Rory felt a vibration in her bones, a resonance that spoke of stillness and patience."
3"Rory felt the Heartstone Pendant warm against her sternum, a faint, pulsing throb that matched the rhythm of the spring’s song."
4"She could hear a low, guttural sound from the other side—a collective, echoing growl that vibrated in her teeth."
5"It was a sanctuary, a pocket of reality held in stasis by a half-fae’s exile, its heart guarded by a woman who existed between seconds."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx stated, their voice dropping an octave"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory breathed (breathe)"
2"Nyx stated (state)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"Nyx explained (explain)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.769
72.4095%