Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFFY80VW5EG25Z4NM0TBZNZ

Run Details

Duration:
35.3s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Nvidia

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the edge of the grove. The air tasted of wet moss and something metallic, like old coins left in rain. She pulled the Heartstone pendant from her coat and felt its faint throb against her palm, a warm pulse that seemed to sync with the beat of her own throat. The grove lay bathed in a sickly moonlight that filtered through the canopy, casting long, thin bars of silver across the ferns. Wildflowers glowed with an inner light, their petals unfurling despite the night. She had come because the pendant had grown hot earlier, a sign that a Hel portal stirred nearby. Her mission was simple: locate the source, note any shift, return before the hollow hours swallowed her whole. She moved along the mossy path, each step sinking slightly into the soft earth. The usual night chorus of crickets and distant owls was missing. Instead, a low hum vibrated from the ground, a sound that felt more like a breath than a vibration. She paused, listening. The hum rose and fell in a pattern that did not match any wind she knew. A rustle came from her left, too deliberate to be a small animal. She turned her head, eyes scanning the underbrush. Nothing moved where she looked, yet the sensation of being watched pressed against her skin like a cold hand. She swallowed, the sound loud in her ears. She lifted the pendant higher, its crimson gem catching the moonlight and throwing a faint scarlet glow onto the nearby stones. The glow made the standing stones appear to shift, their edges blurring as if they breathed. She blinked, trying to clear the vision, but the stones remained solid, their surfaces etched with runes she could not read. A soft sigh slipped from the darkness ahead, not a sigh of wind but of something that seemed to exhale. Aurora’s heart hammered against her ribs, but she forced herself to stay still. She whispered to the pendant, hoping it would answer. "Show me." The pendant’s glow intensified for a heartbeat, then dimmed. The hum in the ground grew louder, now accompanied by a faint clicking, like stones being tapped together. She took another step forward, her boot sinking into a patch of earth that felt unnaturally warm. From the corner of her eye, a shape flickered—a tall, slender figure wrapped in shadows that clung to its form like smoke. She snapped her gaze toward it, but the figure was gone, replaced only by the swaying of ferns that had not moved a moment before. The air grew thicker, each inhalation tasting of iron and rust. She pressed her back against the nearest standing stone, feeling its rough surface through her coat. The stone vibrated faintly, as if something pulsed within it. She closed her eyes, focusing on the rhythm of her own breath, trying to separate her fear from the grove’s own heartbeat. When she opened her eyes, the grove had changed. The wildflowers no longer glowed with their inner light; instead, they hung limp, their petals turned a dull ash color. The moonlight seemed thinner, as though a veil had been drawn across the sky. The hum had ceased, replaced by an oppressive silence that pressed on her ears. A whisper slipped through the silence, not from any direction she could pinpoint, but from within her own mind. It was not a voice she recognized, yet it felt familiar, like a half‑remembered lullaby from childhood. "Stay." She jerked her head up, eyes wide. The pendant lay cold against her skin, its glow extinguished. She fumbled for the clasp, her fingers trembling. The metal was slick with something that was not sweat. She stood, the grove suddenly too quiet, too still. Every leaf hung motionless, every branch held its breath. She took a step back, then another, feeling the ground give way slightly under her weight, as if the earth itself were trying to pull her down. A soft crack sounded behind her, like a twig breaking under weight that should not be there. She did not turn. She could not. The sensation of eyes on her neck tightened, a pressure that made her scalp prickle. She whispered again, this time not to the pendant but to the emptiness around her. "Why here?" No answer came. The silence stretched, thick and heavy, until it felt like a physical weight on her chest. She felt the urge to run, to bolt back toward the safety of Silas’ bar and the familiar clatter of glasses below. Yet her feet remained rooted, as if the grove had claimed them. She closed her eyes once more, inhaling the damp earth, the metallic tang, the faint scent of something rotting just beyond perception. When she opened them, the standing stones loomed taller, their runes now glowing a dull red that pulsed in time with her own heartbeat. She took a final step forward, her hand reaching out to touch the nearest stone. The moment her fingertips met the cold surface, a wave of cold washed over her arm, not from the stone but from the air itself, as if the grove exhaled a breath of frost. Her breath fogged in front of her, a sight impossible in the mild night air. She stared at her own breath, then at the stone, then at the darkness beyond the clearing. The feeling of being watched had not faded; it had settled, a constant low thrum that matched the pulse she could feel in her throat. She stood there, alone in the heart of the Fae Grove, the pendant dark against her skin, the night holding its breath, and the certainty that she was not alone settling like a shroud over her senses. She did not move, she did not speak, she simply waited, listening to the silence that now seemed to watch her back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount988
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount988
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"vibrated"
count2
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count2
7
word"oppressive"
count1
8
word"silence"
count4
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count2
11
word"weight"
count3
12
word"loomed"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"throb"
1"pulse"
2"vibrated"
3"scanning"
4"etched"
5"flickered"
6"pulsed"
7"oppressive"
8"silence"
9"whisper"
10"familiar"
11"weight"
12"loomed"
13"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
50.69% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appear to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords987
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions4
wordCount973
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.1
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity0
worstWindowName(null)
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Hel1
Fae1
Grove1
persons(empty)
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"pulse that seemed to sync with the beat of her own throat"
1"something that seemed to exhale"
2"seemed thinner as though a veil had been drawn across the sky"
3"felt like a physical weight on her ches"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords4.053
wordCount987
matches
0"not a sigh of wind but of something"
1"not from any direction she could pinpoint, but from within her own mind"
2"not to the pendant but to the emptiness around her"
3"not from the stone but from the air itself, as if the grove exhaled a breath of fro"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
87.05% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean42.91
std19.51
cv0.455
sampleLengths
060
170
263
348
458
542
62
744
858
948
1057
1136
121
1335
1445
1539
1615
172
1853
1946
2049
2157
2259
88.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences62
matches
0"being tapped"
1"was gone"
2"been drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs161
matches
0"were trying"
10.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences65
ratio0.046
matches
0"From the corner of her eye, a shape flickered—a tall, slender figure wrapped in shadows that clung to its form like smoke."
1"The wildflowers no longer glowed with their inner light; instead, they hung limp, their petals turned a dull ash color."
2"The feeling of being watched had not faded; it had settled, a constant low thrum that matched the pulse she could feel in her throat."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount751
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"watched pressed against her"
1"lay cold against her"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02796271637816245
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009320905459387484
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean15.18
std7.46
cv0.491
sampleLengths
015
115
230
322
412
518
618
714
811
919
103
1116
1213
138
1419
158
1621
1716
1821
1920
2013
219
222
239
2418
2517
2622
2725
2811
2916
3010
3122
329
3320
3414
3514
3619
3717
381
397
4010
418
4210
439
449
4527
4617
474
483
4915
40.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.26153846153846155
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners17
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Instead, a low hum vibrated"
ratio0.016
32.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences62
matches
0"She pulled the Heartstone pendant"
1"She had come because the"
2"Her mission was simple: locate"
3"She moved along the mossy"
4"She paused, listening."
5"She turned her head, eyes"
6"She swallowed, the sound loud"
7"She lifted the pendant higher,"
8"She blinked, trying to clear"
9"She whispered to the pendant,"
10"She took another step forward,"
11"She snapped her gaze toward"
12"She pressed her back against"
13"She closed her eyes, focusing"
14"It was not a voice"
15"She jerked her head up,"
16"She fumbled for the clasp,"
17"She stood, the grove suddenly"
18"She took a step back,"
19"She did not turn."
ratio0.468
8.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences62
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the ancient"
1"The air tasted of wet"
2"She pulled the Heartstone pendant"
3"The grove lay bathed in"
4"Wildflowers glowed with an inner"
5"She had come because the"
6"Her mission was simple: locate"
7"She moved along the mossy"
8"The usual night chorus of"
9"She paused, listening."
10"The hum rose and fell"
11"A rustle came from her"
12"She turned her head, eyes"
13"Nothing moved where she looked,"
14"She swallowed, the sound loud"
15"She lifted the pendant higher,"
16"The glow made the standing"
17"She blinked, trying to clear"
18"A soft sigh slipped from"
19"Aurora’s heart hammered against her"
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
38.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She pulled the Heartstone pendant from her coat and felt its faint throb against her palm, a warm pulse that seemed to sync with the beat of her own throat."
1"The grove lay bathed in a sickly moonlight that filtered through the canopy, casting long, thin bars of silver across the ferns."
2"She closed her eyes, focusing on the rhythm of her own breath, trying to separate her fear from the grove’s own heartbeat."
3"A soft crack sounded behind her, like a twig breaking under weight that should not be there."
4"The sensation of eyes on her neck tightened, a pressure that made her scalp prickle."
5"The moment her fingertips met the cold surface, a wave of cold washed over her arm, not from the stone but from the air itself, as if the grove exhaled a breath…"
6"The feeling of being watched had not faded; it had settled, a constant low thrum that matched the pulse she could feel in her throat."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
69.4782%