Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFG78CJGYVZ8BBACKFPMB6E

Run Details

Duration:
23.3s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest bled a sickly light onto the wet pavement. Rory pulled her collar tighter, the damp chill of the October night seeping into her bones. She pushed through the heavy oak door, escaping the drizzle. The air inside was warm and thick with the scent of old wood, malt, and a faint, sweet hint of pipe tobacco. It was a place that swallowed sound; the low murmur of conversation, the clink of a glass, all of it absorbed by the walls papered with old maps and shadowed photographs. She went to the bar, the worn brass rail cool under her palms. “What can I get you?” The voice was gravelly, familiar. Rory looked up into hazel eyes that were suddenly, shockingly, familiar. The man behind the bar had a neatly trimmed beard, grey threading through the auburn. He stood with a slight, uneven weight on his left leg. A silver signet ring caught the dim light on his right hand. “Silas,” she breathed, the name feeling foreign and yet perfectly shaped in her mouth. A slow smile spread across his face, crinkling the corners of his eyes. “Rory Carter. As I live and breathe. I thought you’d vanished off the face of the earth.” “Almost,” she said, managing a small smile of her own. “Just… busy. Getting lost.” He nodded, his gaze sweeping over her—the black hair now cut to her shoulders, the professional poise she’d learned to wear. “You look different. Settled.” She flinched internally. Settled was the last word. “Life changes you. You look the same, mostly. Just more distinguished.” He chuckled, a low, dry sound. “Distinguished. That’s a polite way of saying old. I’ll take it. What are you drinking?” “Just a pint. Whatever’s on tap.” He drew a Guinness with practiced ease, the dark liquid settling. He placed it in front of her. “On the house. For old times.” She took a long sip, the bitter stout grounding her. “So this is you now? The Raven’s Nest? It’s… very you.” “It pays the bills. And it’s quiet.” He wiped down a spot on the bar that was already clean. “What about you? Your mother calls my sister sometimes, you know. Jennifer still worries.” Rory stared into the creamy head of her pint. “I’m fine. I work. I have a flat.” She gestured vaguely upward. “It’s above a bakery.” “And?” Silas leaned on the bar, his look direct, the old intelligence-agent stare cutting through her casual dismissal. “That’s not the story, Rory. Your dad told me you’d left Evan. He said you fled to London.” The name was a stone dropped into the still pool of her composure. The scar on her left wrist, hidden under her sleeve, seemed to prickle. “Dad shouldn’t have gossip.” “It’s not gossip when you’re the only thing your parents talk about. They’re terrified.” “I’m fine,” she repeated, the words tasting like ash. She took another drink, needing the burn. “I left. I survived. London happened.” “What did London do? Besides give you a bar to sleep above?” She met his gaze. “It gave me work. And distance.” She paused, watching him. He wasn’t just the bar owner anymore. The shrewd, observant man was still there, beneath the auburn beard. “Why are you really asking?” “Because I remember the girl who wanted to study art history and got talked into Pre-Law at Cardiff. I remember the girl who had a fire in her that her father, for all his love, couldn’t bank. And I’m looking at a woman who looks like she’s memorized a manual on how to walk without leaving a mark.” The accuracy of it stole her breath. She set her glass down. “You see too much.” “It was my job, once. Noticing the things people try to hide.” He nodded at her wrist, though her sleeve covered it. “The scar is still there?” She reflexively covered the spot with her other hand. “Some things stay.” “And other things don’t. I heard you didn’t finish your degree.” “I finished enough of it. Got the piece of paper that makes people assume you have a plan.” She shrugged, a jerky, defensive motion. “I deliver food now. For Yu-Fei Cheung. It’s honest.” “Honest is good.” Silas took a slow breath, his eyes holding hers. “But it’s not what you wanted. Is it, Rory?” “What I wanted is a luxury. What I needed was to get out.” The words came out sharper than she intended. She softened her tone. “I needed to be somewhere Evan couldn’t find me. Somewhere his name and his family’s money didn’t open every door. London is big enough to get lost in.” “And did you get lost?” “Sometimes, on purpose. It’s quiet. In the delivery van, with the city noise in the windows. No one expects you to talk. They just want their curry. It’s simple.” He was silent for a long moment, polishing the signet ring on his chest. “Your father is a proud man. He blames himself.” “He shouldn’t.” “Parents do. They look at the path they pointed you on, and when you fall off it, they think they handed you the wrong map.” Rory’s throat tightened. She’d had that exact thought, staring at her pre-law textbooks in her cramped bedroom in Cardiff, the sound of Evan’s car pulling up outside like a tightening wire. “Maybe they did hand the wrong map. But I’m the one who had to walk it into a swamp.” “And out the other side?” Silas asked, his voice quiet. She didn’t have an answer for that. She looked around the bar. At the faded maps of places he’d probably been. At the black-and-white photos of crowds and landmarks, moments frozen in time. “Why did you do it? All of it. MI6, the whole thing. And then… this.” She gestured at the quiet room. He followed her gaze. “Because after Prague, the only thing I wanted was a place where nothing was at stake. Where the only risk was a bad hangover. A bar is a good front. People come, they talk, they leave. No one gets hurt. Usually.” “You became a spy because you wanted to help people, didn’t you?” He gave a faint, sad smile. “Young idealism. I thought I could make a difference, untangle knots from the outside. Then you learn the knots are in the wiring, and you can’t pull one without shorting out something else.” He tapped the bar top. “So you retreat. You pour drinks. You watch people like you and Rory Carter walk in, carrying the whole weight of their choices in their eyes.” His words settled on her, heavy and accurate. She felt seen, uncomfortably so. “And what do you see when you look at me, Silas?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “What does the spymaster see?” He was quiet for so long she thought he wouldn’t answer. Then he leaned forward slightly. “I see a survivor,” he said. “Who is very, very tired of surviving. I see someone who traded one cage—a nice one, with Evan—for a much smaller, lonelier one. A flat above a bakery. A delivery job. All of it built to be invisible. You didn’t just leave London, Rory. You left the world.” The truth of it hung in the air between them, raw and unvarnished. Her eyes burned. She looked down, tracing the condensation ring her glass left on the polished wood. “He said I’d amount to nothing without him,” she said, the confession escaping before she could stop it. “That I was too stubborn, too flighty. That my father’s pride and my mother’s softness made me useless. And for a while… I believed it. Why do you think I took the delivery job? No one looks at a delivery person. You’re just a pair of hands dropping off food. It’s the perfect disguise.” “But it’s not a life.” “It’s safe.” “Is it?” Silas pressed gently. “You’re living in a bar run by a retired spy, sleeping above a bakery. You think Evan, with his resources, wouldn’t eventually check every low-profile address in Soho?” A cold dread trickled down her spine. She hadn’t let herself think that far. “He’s moved on. He’s married now. To some lawyer’s daughter. They have a baby.” “And his pride? His need to have what he considers *his*? Does that have an expiration date?” She had no answer. She finished her pint, the dregs bitter on her tongue. The silence stretched, but it wasn’t empty. It was filled with all the things they weren’t saying—the years of unspoken fear, the regret over paths not taken, the ghost of the girl she’d been. “You should finish your degree,” Silas said suddenly. “Not for the paper. For you. Go study something useless. Art history. Mythology. Something with no connection to law or leverage or power plays. Remind yourself what you were curious about before anyone tried to teach you to be practical.” She laughed, a short, startled sound. “That’s impractical advice.” “I’m retired. Practicality is for people still in the field.” He pushed himself upright, wincing slightly as his left leg took the strain. “You can start by getting some sleep. You look like you haven’t seen a proper bed in a week.” “It’s been three days,” she muttered, rubbing her eyes. “The flat above the bakery. The spare room in the back is for staff. It’s quiet, it’s private, and no one will look for you there. Take it for the night. Or a week.” She looked at him, at the offer sitting simply on the bar between them. It wasn’t charity. It was another piece of the network, a safe house for a friend in need. The kind of offer that only came from someone who understood what it meant to be looking over your shoulder. “You don’t have to do that,” she said. “I know.” He started gathering glasses. “But I’m going to. Consider it a down payment on you figuring out what you’re actually curious about.” She stood, her legs stiff. The bar felt different now—not just a place, but a node in a map she hadn’t known existed. She reached into her pocket, pulling out a few crumpled notes. “The pint was on the house,” he said, waving the money away. “I know.” She put the notes down anyway. “But the advice wasn’t. And the room.” He picked up the money, considered it, then slipped it into the register. “Fair enough. Room is that door. Through the bookshelf. Don’t trip on the step.” She nodded, her throat tight again. She walked toward the back, her hand brushing the spines of old volumes on espionage and cartography. The door was almost invisible in the shadowed alcove. She turned back. “Silas.” He looked up from wiping the bar. “Thank you. For seeing me.” He held her gaze for a beat. “Always.” She stepped into the quiet darkness of the hidden room, the door clicking softly shut behind her, sealing out the world but not the questions it had left behind.
created_at"2026-03-11T22:28:03.103Z" 3/11/2026, 10:28:03 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Silas pressed gently [gently]"
2"Silas said suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.325
leniency0.649
rawRatio0.12
effectiveRatio0.078
67.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1852
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count3
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
5
adverb"slightly"
count2
6
adverb"gently"
count1
7
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"perfectly"
2"very"
3"really"
4"barely above a whisper"
5"slightly"
6"gently"
7"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1852
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"practiced ease"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"familiar"
2"weight"
3"practiced ease"
4"whisper"
5"tracing"
6"perfect"
7"down her spine"
8"silence"
9"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
96.77% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences93
filterMatches
0"look"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1847
ratio0.001
matches
0"his"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount896
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
October1
Rory4
Guinness1
Silas5
Cardiff1
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.541
wordCount1847
matches
0"not just a place, but a node in a map she hadn’t known existed"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean26.39
std17.25
cv0.654
sampleLengths
042
166
210
349
414
530
614
725
819
921
106
1124
1221
1333
1425
1536
1630
1714
1822
1912
2037
2158
2216
2327
2412
2511
2633
2721
2853
295
3029
3123
322
3325
3450
3510
3654
3745
3812
3970
4013
4124
4216
4354
4430
4572
465
472
4833
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"was filled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs156
matches
0"weren’t saying"
63.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences144
ratio0.028
matches
0"It was a place that swallowed sound; the low murmur of conversation, the clink of a glass, all of it absorbed by the walls papered with old maps and shadowed photographs."
1"He nodded, his gaze sweeping over her—the black hair now cut to her shoulders, the professional poise she’d learned to wear."
2"It was filled with all the things they weren’t saying—the years of unspoken fear, the regret over paths not taken, the ghost of the girl she’d been."
3"The bar felt different now—not just a place, but a node in a map she hadn’t known existed."
99.11% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount902
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03547671840354767
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.02106430155210643
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean12.83
std10.03
cv0.782
sampleLengths
016
116
210
322
431
513
610
711
815
911
1012
1114
1213
1317
1410
154
1621
174
183
195
2011
216
2215
236
2411
257
266
2710
2811
2919
3014
319
3212
334
3418
3518
3613
3713
384
3914
409
417
426
4312
444
4510
467
4711
485
4958
44.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2777777777777778
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners40
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Then he leaned forward slightly."
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount61
totalSentences91
matches
0"She pushed through the heavy"
1"It was a place that"
2"She went to the bar,"
3"He stood with a slight,"
4"she breathed, the name feeling"
5"she said, managing a small"
6"He nodded, his gaze sweeping"
7"She flinched internally."
8"He chuckled, a low, dry"
9"He drew a Guinness with"
10"He placed it in front"
11"She took a long sip,"
12"He wiped down a spot"
13"She gestured vaguely upward"
14"she repeated, the words tasting"
15"She took another drink, needing"
16"She met his gaze."
17"She paused, watching him"
18"He wasn’t just the bar"
19"She set her glass down."
ratio0.67
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences91
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory pulled her collar tighter,"
2"She pushed through the heavy"
3"The air inside was warm"
4"It was a place that"
5"She went to the bar,"
6"The voice was gravelly, familiar"
7"Rory looked up into hazel"
8"The man behind the bar"
9"He stood with a slight,"
10"A silver signet ring caught"
11"she breathed, the name feeling"
12"A slow smile spread across"
13"she said, managing a small"
14"He nodded, his gaze sweeping"
15"She flinched internally."
16"He chuckled, a low, dry"
17"He drew a Guinness with"
18"He placed it in front"
19"She took a long sip,"
ratio0.956
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"It was a place that swallowed sound; the low murmur of conversation, the clink of a glass, all of it absorbed by the walls papered with old maps and shadowed ph…"
1"She’d had that exact thought, staring at her pre-law textbooks in her cramped bedroom in Cardiff, the sound of Evan’s car pulling up outside like a tightening w…"
45.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He nodded, though her sleeve covered it"
1"Silas asked, his voice quiet"
2"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"she said, the confession escaping before she could stop it"
98.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"Silas pressed gently (press)"
3"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.312
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.104
80.6093%