Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFG91EQN6J9R8QCAFVW2VT0

Run Details

Duration:
51.6s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The steel door groaned against its frame as Quinn descended the final steps into the old Camden station. The air turned wet and cool, carrying mineral breath from the tunnel throat beyond. Her flashlight carved a pale column through dust that hung in curtains, settling on faded posters advertising destinations no longer reachable by this line. Platform 4 hadn't seen a train in thirty years. Sergeant Okonkwo met her at the bottom of the stairs. He was a broad man with a shaved head and a patchy attempt at a beard, his high-visibility vest muddy from the knees down. "Detective Quinn. Thanks for coming so fast." "Cut the pleasantries. What have you got?" He led her along the platform edge, his boots crunching on broken tile. "Patrol unit responded to a tip about squatters. Found a body in the disused tunnel section, about two hundred metres in. Male, mid-thirties, no identification. No signs of a struggle, but—" "But what?" "His eyes are open. Been dead maybe twelve hours, according to the pathologist on standby. No wounds. No needle marks that she could find. He's just… lying there." Quinn said nothing. She kept her torch fixed on the rails ahead, watching the light split and scatter over oxidized iron. The tunnel mouth gaped like a wound in the concrete wall, dark beyond the reach of the crime scene unit's floodlamps. She ducked under the yellow tape and followed Okonkwo into the tunnel. The unit had set up temporary lighting, harsh white that turned everything flat and surgical. A man lay on his back between the tracks, arms at his sides, palms up. His clothes were clean — a dark coat, pressed slacks, leather shoes. Not the attire of someone squatting in an abandoned Tube tunnel. His face was angular, sharp cheekbones, a mouth slightly parted as though he'd been mid-sentence when whatever happened took him. Quinn crouched beside the body. The man's eyes were indeed open, brown irises staring at nothing. She leaned closer, angling her light across the sclera. No burst blood vessels. No petechial hemorrhaging. She checked his neck for bruising, his wrists for ligature marks. Nothing. "Pathologist's preliminary?" Quinn asked. "She said cardiac arrest. Cause pending full exam, but that's her guess." Okonkwo shrugged. "No tox screen yet, obviously." Quinn stood and surveyed the immediate area. The ground around the body was undisturbed. No drag marks. No scuffing. He'd either lain down deliberately or been placed here with considerable care. "Crime scene's been processed?" "Photos taken. We've bagged the immediate area. There's not much to bag — no wallet, no phone, no keys. Even his coat pockets are empty." Quinn swept her torch along the tunnel walls. Brick and grime and nothing else. She turned the beam downward and stopped. A dark circle on the concrete, about the diameter of a dinner plate, directly beneath where the body lay. Not blood — it was too uniform, too black. She crouched again and touched the edge with her gloved fingertip. It came away clean. Not a spill. A burn mark, or something close to it. "Okonkwo. This ring on the ground. Was it noted?" He peered over her shoulder. "Must have missed it with the lighting angles. Could be old water damage or—" "Water damage doesn't look like this. It's too precise." She followed the circle's edge with her light. The surface within it was slightly concave, as though whatever had made it had pressed down with even, focused heat. She checked beneath the body's torso. The coat was singed at the lower back, a matching discoloration that she hadn't noticed in the flat overhead light. "Help me roll him." They turned the body carefully onto its side. The back of the coat was scorched in a perfect circle, the fabric beneath fused to the skin. Quinn peeled the burnt material away with her forceps. Beneath, the skin wasn't charred — it was smooth, pale, and marked with a pattern of concentric rings that faded from deep red at the centre to nothing at the perimeter. "What is that?" Okonkwo asked. "I don't know." She photographed it from multiple angles, then checked the ground where his back had rested. More of the dark circle, fused now with the pattern on his skin, connecting body and earth like a seal. She lowered herself to eye level with the tunnel floor, examining the concrete between the rails. Fine cracks radiated outward from the circle's edge, hairline fractures in otherwise solid ground. Whatever had produced the mark hadn't merely sat on the surface. It had gone down. Into the substructure. Into the earth itself. Quinn straightened and walked further into the tunnel, away from the body. The crime scene unit had set their perimeter two metres beyond the remains, assuming nothing else was relevant. She kept going, flashlight sweeping the walls and floor. Thirty metres in, she found the second mark. It was smaller, the size of a coin, burnt into the brick at roughly chest height. She leaned in. Within the circle, etched with impossible delicacy, was a symbol — three interlocking crescents radiating from a central point. The brick beneath it was warm to the touch, even through her glove. "Okonkwo. Get your arse over here." He jogged down the tunnel, flashlight bobbing. "What have you got?" "Look at this. Brick is still warm." He pressed his palm to the wall. "Heating pipe behind it?" "There are no heating pipes in a decommissioned tunnel. And pipes don't leave marks like this." She stepped back and swept her torch along the wall, revealing a trail of identical symbols at irregular intervals, each burned into the brick at the same height. They led deeper into the tunnel, around a curve, out of sight. Okonkwo scratched the back of his neck. "Squatter art? Someone with a blowtorch?" "Someone with a blowtorch doesn't etch microscopic sigils into masonry without cracking it. And someone with a blowtorch doesn't produce a body with no cause of death lying in a scorch mark that's still radiating heat after twelve hours." He looked at her. "You think this is connected to that underground market nonsense? The one DI Henderson keeps filing reports about?" "I think DI Henderson is a desk jockey who's never set foot in a place like this." Quinn kept her torch fixed on the trail of symbols. "And I think our John Doe came here for a reason, went deeper than this tunnel section, and died on his way back out." She turned to Okonkwo. "I want this entire tunnel mapped. Every symbol, every mark. And I want to know what's around that curve." "The fire brigade's been through this tunnel for clearance. They said it terminates at a collapse, two hundred metres further in. Sealed since the nineties." "Fire brigade doesn't look for etchings in brick." Quinn was already walking. "Stay here. Secure the body." Around the curve, the air changed. It grew warmer, and the dust settled. The symbols on the walls increased in frequency, overlapping now, layering on top of each other in a dense script that Quinn's flashlight couldn't fully resolve. She slowed, examining each one. The crescent motif repeated, but variations appeared — spirals, geometric shapes that hurt the eye if she looked too long, lines that seemed to shift when viewed from different angles. She stopped. A door. Not an official maintenance hatch or an emergency exit — a door set into the tunnel wall, wooden, with iron hinges that had no business existing in a Victorian-era Underground station. It was closed. The wood was old, dark, and marked with the same concentric ring pattern she'd found on the body. Quinn pressed her ear to the door. Nothing. She tried the handle. It turned, but the door didn't open — something on the other side held it fast. She leaned her weight into it. It budged an inch, then stopped. The gap revealed a rush of warm air and a smell she couldn't place — herbs and smoke and something metallic. She pulled out her phone. No signal. Not unusual underground, but the timing felt pointed. Quinn stepped back and studied the door. The frame was set flush against the brick, but the mortar around it was wrong — too new, too clean. Someone had installed this recently, or replaced it. She crouched and examined the threshold. Scraping on the concrete, fresh. The door had been opened within the last day. She photographed everything, then retraced her steps to the body. Okonkwo stood guard, arms folded, looking uncomfortable. "There's a door. Non-standard. Installed in the tunnel wall past the curve." "A door. In a sealed tunnel." "I want it opened." "With respect, Detective, we need a warrant for anything past the crime scene perimeter. Especially if there's an unknown structure involved." Quinn stared at him. He wasn't wrong, and he knew she knew it. "Then get me a warrant. Fast-tracked. Use the unidentified body as grounds — whatever killed him may be behind that door, and whatever's behind that door could kill someone else." Okonkwo nodded and headed for the stairs. Quinn stayed with the body, crouching once more beside the man with no name. She studied his face. No fear. No pain. The expression was one of expectation — of someone who believed they were about to receive something. She reached into his coat's inner pocket, the one the unit had somehow overlooked. Her fingers found a small brass compass, cold and heavy, its face etched with protective sigils that matched the symbols on the tunnel walls. The needle spun lazily as she held it, then steadied, pointing not north but deeper into the tunnel. Toward the door. The patina of verdigris on the casing caught the floodlamp light. Someone had crafted this with care. Someone who understood what they were making. Quinn closed her hand around the compass and stood. DI Henderson's reports called the underground market a rumour — something informants whispered about in exchange for reduced sentences. But here was a dead man with no cause of death, lying in a scorch mark that shouldn't exist, holding a tool that pointed toward a door that had no place being in a sealed Tube tunnel. She pocketed the compass and looked back down the tunnel, toward the faint glow of the crime scene lights. Whatever John Doe had been doing here, he'd known where he was going. He'd had the right tool for the right place. The question that settled in her chest, heavy and unwelcome, was what had stopped him from getting there.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.057
85.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1755
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"deliberately"
2"carefully"
3"lazily"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Henderson"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1755
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"processed"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"etch"
count1
4
word"resolve"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"standard"
count1
7
word"structure"
count1
highlights
0"processed"
1"perfect"
2"etched"
3"etch"
4"resolve"
5"weight"
6"standard"
7"structure"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences124
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences151
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1768
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.94% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1332
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn16
Camden1
Okonkwo8
Tube2
Victorian-era1
Underground1
Henderson1
John1
Doe1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Okonkwo"
2"Henderson"
3"John"
4"Doe"
places
0"Victorian-era"
globalScore0.899
windowScore1
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something close to it"
1"lines that seemed to shift when viewed from different angles"
86.88% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.131
wordCount1768
matches
0"Not unusual underground, but the timing felt pointed"
1"not north but deeper into the tunnel"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean30.48
std21.72
cv0.713
sampleLengths
065
134
27
37
444
52
628
742
885
944
104
1119
1231
134
1425
1521
1654
179
1819
1963
204
2166
225
2338
2452
2539
268
2751
286
2911
307
3111
3256
3313
3439
3522
3651
3723
3825
3917
4074
4156
4261
4315
4455
4517
4612
476
484
4921
93.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences124
matches
0"been placed"
1"was singed"
2"was scorched"
3"been opened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs211
matches
0"was already walking"
1"were making"
2"was going"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences151
ratio0.073
matches
0"His clothes were clean — a dark coat, pressed slacks, leather shoes."
1"Not blood — it was too uniform, too black."
2"Beneath, the skin wasn't charred — it was smooth, pale, and marked with a pattern of concentric rings that faded from deep red at the centre to nothing at the perimeter."
3"Within the circle, etched with impossible delicacy, was a symbol — three interlocking crescents radiating from a central point."
4"The crescent motif repeated, but variations appeared — spirals, geometric shapes that hurt the eye if she looked too long, lines that seemed to shift when viewed from different angles."
5"Not an official maintenance hatch or an emergency exit — a door set into the tunnel wall, wooden, with iron hinges that had no business existing in a Victorian-era Underground station."
6"It turned, but the door didn't open — something on the other side held it fast."
7"The gap revealed a rush of warm air and a smell she couldn't place — herbs and smoke and something metallic."
8"The frame was set flush against the brick, but the mortar around it was wrong — too new, too clean."
9"The expression was one of expectation — of someone who believed they were about to receive something."
10"DI Henderson's reports called the underground market a rumour — something informants whispered about in exchange for reduced sentences."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1324
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.027190332326283987
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.0075528700906344415
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences151
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences151
mean11.71
std8.47
cv0.724
sampleLengths
018
114
224
39
410
524
67
77
813
931
102
1128
123
1318
1421
1512
1615
1715
1812
1911
2020
215
2211
239
244
253
2611
271
284
2914
305
317
327
333
342
3512
364
3725
388
396
407
4119
429
4311
444
453
468
479
485
4914
51.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.33112582781456956
totalSentences151
uniqueOpeners50
29.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"More of the dark circle,"
ratio0.009
60.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences113
matches
0"Her flashlight carved a pale"
1"He was a broad man"
2"He led her along the"
3"She kept her torch fixed"
4"She ducked under the yellow"
5"His clothes were clean —"
6"His face was angular, sharp"
7"She leaned closer, angling her"
8"She checked his neck for"
9"He'd either lain down deliberately"
10"She turned the beam downward"
11"She crouched again and touched"
12"It came away clean."
13"He peered over her shoulder."
14"She followed the circle's edge"
15"She checked beneath the body's"
16"They turned the body carefully"
17"She photographed it from multiple"
18"She lowered herself to eye"
19"It had gone down."
ratio0.398
48.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences113
matches
0"The steel door groaned against"
1"The air turned wet and"
2"Her flashlight carved a pale"
3"Platform 4 hadn't seen a"
4"Sergeant Okonkwo met her at"
5"He was a broad man"
6"He led her along the"
7"Quinn said nothing."
8"She kept her torch fixed"
9"The tunnel mouth gaped like"
10"She ducked under the yellow"
11"The unit had set up"
12"A man lay on his"
13"His clothes were clean —"
14"His face was angular, sharp"
15"Quinn crouched beside the body."
16"The man's eyes were indeed"
17"She leaned closer, angling her"
18"She checked his neck for"
19"Quinn stood and surveyed the"
ratio0.823
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.18% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"His face was angular, sharp cheekbones, a mouth slightly parted as though he'd been mid-sentence when whatever happened took him."
1"The crescent motif repeated, but variations appeared — spirals, geometric shapes that hurt the eye if she looked too long, lines that seemed to shift when viewe…"
2"Not an official maintenance hatch or an emergency exit — a door set into the tunnel wall, wooden, with iron hinges that had no business existing in a Victorian-…"
3"Her fingers found a small brass compass, cold and heavy, its face etched with protective sigils that matched the symbols on the tunnel walls."
4"But here was a dead man with no cause of death, lying in a scorch mark that shouldn't exist, holding a tool that pointed toward a door that had no place being i…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.057
leniency0.114
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.3138%