Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFG949325EYHY6GT2K5THMC

Run Details

Duration:
2m 52s
Cost:
$0.000774
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The night pressed against the hedges, heavy and damp, and Aurora stepped onto the soft earth of the grove, the Heartstone pendant warm against her skin. She had followed the faint throb that had pulsed from the metal since sunrise, a beacon in the fog that seemed to breathe with the night. The ancient oak standing stones marked the boundary, their trunks twisted like skeletal hands, roots coiling around the soil as if grasping at something unseen. Wildflowers bloomed in shades she could not name, their petals glistening with dew that caught the moonlight in sharp, unnatural points. The air smelled of wet moss and something sweet that reminded her of old incense, a scent that settled in the back of her throat and made her throat tighten. A shiver ran up her spine as the temperature seemed to dip without a wind, and the pendant’s glow swelled, a thin scarlet pulse that throbbed in time with her heartbeat. She tightened her grip on the strap, feeling the silver chain bite into her palm. The world around her held its breath, and the silence grew thick, pressing against her ears like a weight. "I thought the path would be clear." The words broke the quiet, sharp and sudden, cutting through the stillness. A rustle slipped from the edge of her vision, a movement that could have been a branch or a creature, but it lingered longer than any wind could justify. She turned, eyes scanning the darkness, and the faint glow of the pendant illuminated a thin veil of mist that curled around the base of a stone. "The stones speak when they are called." Her voice sounded thin, swallowed by the night, yet it echoed back with a faint resonance that seemed to come from the stones themselves. A low hum rose from the ground, a vibration that matched the pulse of the pendant, and the mist thickened, swallowing the edges of the clearing. She felt the ground shift beneath her boots, the earth softening as if it were breathing. "I have been waiting for this." The phrase lingered, hanging in the air like a promise, then dissolved into the night. The shape that emerged from the mist was neither man nor beast, its outline flickering like a candle flame caught in a draft. It moved without steps, hovering just above the moss, and its presence seemed to warp the space around it, bending the light of the pendant into strange angles. "It knows you." The words came from wherever the figure stood, though no mouth moved. The voice was a whisper that seemed to rise from the earth, low and ancient, reverberating in her bones. She felt the scar on her wrist prickle, a reminder of a past accident that had once broken something fragile, now echoing with an unfamiliar call. "The Heartstone is a key, but not for doors you expect." The words were a warning, a warning that wrapped around her ribs and tightened, urging her to turn back, yet she could not move. "The portal opens when the stone sings." The pendant pulsed faster, its inner glow flaring brighter, casting crimson shadows on the stones. The standing stones seemed to rotate ever so slightly, their surfaces shimmering with an inner light that was not of this world. "I cannot leave." She realized the words were not her own; they were spoken by the ground, by the stones, by the very air that pressed against her lungs. The air grew colder, and the scent of incense turned metallic, sharp as blood on stone. The mist curled tighter, wrapping around her ankles, pulling at the hem of her coat. "You cannot escape what you have opened." The voice was now a chorus, many tones overlapping, each one a note in a dissonant chord that vibrated through her skull. She raised her hand, the pendant pressing against her palm, and the glow intensified, flooding the clearing with a soft, blood‑red light. In that light, the figure’s outline shifted, revealing eyes that were not eyes but endless voids, depthless and inviting. "How did you find me?" Her question floated into the night, raw and desperate, seeking an answer that would never come. The void answered with a sound that was not a sound, a feeling that pressed against her mind, a pressure that said, "You have always been here." The realization struck her like a cold blade, and she understood that she had never left the grove, that she had been drawn here by a force that had been waiting for her to arrive. The pendant’s glow faded, leaving only the lingering warmth on her skin, a reminder that the heat had not vanished, only hidden. She took a step back, feeling the roots beneath her feet tighten like fingers, and the standing stones seemed to lean closer, as if listening for a response. "No more turning away." The words were a command, a promise, and a threat all at once. The mist surged forward, wrapping around her like cold silk, and the ground beneath her gave way, swallowing the earth in a soft, swallowing sigh. She felt herself falling, not into darkness, but into a place where time twisted, where minutes stretched into endless loops, and the only thing she could hold onto was the pulse of the Heartstone against her heart. The last thing she heard was the whisper of the stones, a low chant that rose and fell like a tide, and then there was nothing but the endless, humming void.
created_at"2026-03-11T22:30:57.415Z" 3/11/2026, 10:30:57 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount925
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"ever so slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"ever so slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount925
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"beacon"
count1
3
word"glistening"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"resonance"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"reminder"
count2
13
word"echoing"
count1
14
word"vibrated"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"silk"
count1
17
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"throb"
1"pulsed"
2"beacon"
3"glistening"
4"pulse"
5"throbbed"
6"silence"
7"weight"
8"scanning"
9"echoed"
10"resonance"
11"whisper"
12"reminder"
13"echoing"
14"vibrated"
15"warmth"
16"silk"
17"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences38
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences38
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences48
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords925
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions3
wordCount860
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity0.23
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Heartstone2
persons
0"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"fog that seemed to breathe with the night"
1"as if grasping at something unseen"
2"resonance that seemed to come from the stones themselves"
3"whisper that seemed to rise from the earth, low and ancient, reverberating in her bones"
4"as if listening for a response"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.162
wordCount925
matches
0"neither man nor"
1"not into darkness, but into a place"
97.22% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"understood that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean26.43
std23.3
cv0.882
sampleLengths
0128
165
27
312
456
57
624
742
86
915
1051
113
1231
1326
1411
1524
167
1737
183
1926
2031
217
2222
2341
245
2516
2627
2735
2822
2928
304
3113
3225
3337
3431
86.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences38
matches
0"were spoken"
1"been drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs137
matches
0"were breathing"
83.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences48
ratio0.021
matches
0"She realized the words were not her own; they were spoken by the ground, by the stones, by the very air that pressed against her lungs."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount860
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, pressing against her"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02558139534883721
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004651162790697674
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences48
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences48
mean19.27
std8.86
cv0.46
sampleLengths
026
126
225
321
430
531
615
719
87
912
1029
1127
127
1324
1426
1516
166
1715
1823
1928
203
2112
2219
2326
2411
2524
267
2715
2822
293
3026
3116
3215
337
3422
3522
3619
375
3816
3927
4035
4122
4228
434
4413
4525
4637
4731
27.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.22916666666666666
totalSentences48
uniqueOpeners11
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.68% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences38
matches
0"She had followed the faint"
1"She tightened her grip on"
2"She turned, eyes scanning the"
3"Her voice sounded thin, swallowed"
4"She felt the ground shift"
5"It moved without steps, hovering"
6"She felt the scar on"
7"She realized the words were"
8"She raised her hand, the"
9"Her question floated into the"
10"She took a step back,"
11"She felt herself falling, not"
ratio0.316
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences38
matches
0"The night pressed against the"
1"She had followed the faint"
2"The ancient oak standing stones"
3"Wildflowers bloomed in shades she"
4"The air smelled of wet"
5"A shiver ran up her"
6"She tightened her grip on"
7"The world around her held"
8"The words broke the quiet,"
9"A rustle slipped from the"
10"She turned, eyes scanning the"
11"Her voice sounded thin, swallowed"
12"A low hum rose from"
13"She felt the ground shift"
14"The phrase lingered, hanging in"
15"The shape that emerged from"
16"It moved without steps, hovering"
17"The words came from wherever"
18"The voice was a whisper"
19"She felt the scar on"
ratio0.974
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount14
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones marked the boundary, their trunks twisted like skeletal hands, roots coiling around the soil as if grasping at something unseen."
1"Wildflowers bloomed in shades she could not name, their petals glistening with dew that caught the moonlight in sharp, unnatural points."
2"The air smelled of wet moss and something sweet that reminded her of old incense, a scent that settled in the back of her throat and made her throat tighten."
3"A shiver ran up her spine as the temperature seemed to dip without a wind, and the pendant’s glow swelled, a thin scarlet pulse that throbbed in time with her h…"
4"She turned, eyes scanning the darkness, and the faint glow of the pendant illuminated a thin veil of mist that curled around the base of a stone."
5"Her voice sounded thin, swallowed by the night, yet it echoed back with a faint resonance that seemed to come from the stones themselves."
6"A low hum rose from the ground, a vibration that matched the pulse of the pendant, and the mist thickened, swallowing the edges of the clearing."
7"She felt the ground shift beneath her boots, the earth softening as if it were breathing."
8"She felt the scar on her wrist prickle, a reminder of a past accident that had once broken something fragile, now echoing with an unfamiliar call."
9"The standing stones seemed to rotate ever so slightly, their surfaces shimmering with an inner light that was not of this world."
10"The voice was now a chorus, many tones overlapping, each one a note in a dissonant chord that vibrated through her skull."
11"In that light, the figure’s outline shifted, revealing eyes that were not eyes but endless voids, depthless and inviting."
12"The realization struck her like a cold blade, and she understood that she had never left the grove, that she had been drawn here by a force that had been waitin…"
13"She took a step back, feeling the roots beneath her feet tighten like fingers, and the standing stones seemed to lean closer, as if listening for a response."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
69.0436%