| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.091 | | leniency | 0.182 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 925 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "ever so slightly" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 925 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "throb" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "beacon" | | 3 | "glistening" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "resonance" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "reminder" | | 13 | "echoing" | | 14 | "vibrated" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "silk" | | 17 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 38 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 38 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 925 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 3 | | wordCount | 860 | | uniqueNames | 2 | | maxNameDensity | 0.23 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "fog that seemed to breathe with the night" | | 1 | "as if grasping at something unseen" | | 2 | "resonance that seemed to come from the stones themselves" | | 3 | "whisper that seemed to rise from the earth, low and ancient, reverberating in her bones" | | 4 | "as if listening for a response" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.162 | | wordCount | 925 | | matches | | 0 | "neither man nor" | | 1 | "not into darkness, but into a place" |
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| 97.22% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 26.43 | | std | 23.3 | | cv | 0.882 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 128 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 31 |
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| 86.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | | 0 | "were spoken" | | 1 | "been drawn" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | | |
| 83.33% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 48 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "She realized the words were not her own; they were spoken by the ground, by the stones, by the very air that pressed against her lungs." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 860 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thick, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.02558139534883721 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004651162790697674 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 48 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 48 | | mean | 19.27 | | std | 8.86 | | cv | 0.46 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 37 | | 47 | 31 |
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| 27.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.22916666666666666 | | totalSentences | 48 | | uniqueOpeners | 11 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 93.68% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | | 0 | "She had followed the faint" | | 1 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 2 | "She turned, eyes scanning the" | | 3 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 4 | "She felt the ground shift" | | 5 | "It moved without steps, hovering" | | 6 | "She felt the scar on" | | 7 | "She realized the words were" | | 8 | "She raised her hand, the" | | 9 | "Her question floated into the" | | 10 | "She took a step back," | | 11 | "She felt herself falling, not" |
| | ratio | 0.316 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | | 0 | "The night pressed against the" | | 1 | "She had followed the faint" | | 2 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed in shades she" | | 4 | "The air smelled of wet" | | 5 | "A shiver ran up her" | | 6 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 7 | "The world around her held" | | 8 | "The words broke the quiet," | | 9 | "A rustle slipped from the" | | 10 | "She turned, eyes scanning the" | | 11 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 12 | "A low hum rose from" | | 13 | "She felt the ground shift" | | 14 | "The phrase lingered, hanging in" | | 15 | "The shape that emerged from" | | 16 | "It moved without steps, hovering" | | 17 | "The words came from wherever" | | 18 | "The voice was a whisper" | | 19 | "She felt the scar on" |
| | ratio | 0.974 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones marked the boundary, their trunks twisted like skeletal hands, roots coiling around the soil as if grasping at something unseen." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in shades she could not name, their petals glistening with dew that caught the moonlight in sharp, unnatural points." | | 2 | "The air smelled of wet moss and something sweet that reminded her of old incense, a scent that settled in the back of her throat and made her throat tighten." | | 3 | "A shiver ran up her spine as the temperature seemed to dip without a wind, and the pendant’s glow swelled, a thin scarlet pulse that throbbed in time with her h…" | | 4 | "She turned, eyes scanning the darkness, and the faint glow of the pendant illuminated a thin veil of mist that curled around the base of a stone." | | 5 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed by the night, yet it echoed back with a faint resonance that seemed to come from the stones themselves." | | 6 | "A low hum rose from the ground, a vibration that matched the pulse of the pendant, and the mist thickened, swallowing the edges of the clearing." | | 7 | "She felt the ground shift beneath her boots, the earth softening as if it were breathing." | | 8 | "She felt the scar on her wrist prickle, a reminder of a past accident that had once broken something fragile, now echoing with an unfamiliar call." | | 9 | "The standing stones seemed to rotate ever so slightly, their surfaces shimmering with an inner light that was not of this world." | | 10 | "The voice was now a chorus, many tones overlapping, each one a note in a dissonant chord that vibrated through her skull." | | 11 | "In that light, the figure’s outline shifted, revealing eyes that were not eyes but endless voids, depthless and inviting." | | 12 | "The realization struck her like a cold blade, and she understood that she had never left the grove, that she had been drawn here by a force that had been waitin…" | | 13 | "She took a step back, feeling the roots beneath her feet tighten like fingers, and the standing stones seemed to lean closer, as if listening for a response." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.091 | | leniency | 0.182 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |