Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFG9AVNHA7WB6SMCYPW60SS

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Duration:
46.2s
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$0.000000
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Nvidia

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Lucien shoved the door wide, rain shedding from his overcoat in silver sheets. Aurora’s grip on the kettle tightened, steam curling around her wrist where the crescent scar lay hidden beneath her sleeve. “You’re dripping on the rug,” she said, voice low, eyes flicking to the puddle spreading across the worn floorboards. He stepped inside, shutting the door with a soft click that seemed too loud in the cramped flat. Water pooled at his boots, tracing dark lines toward the threadbare rug. “Forgive me,” Lucien replied, his accent a smooth blend of Marseille and London. He lifted the ivory‑handled cane, the concealed blade catching a glint of the kitchen’s halogen light. “I didn’t expect to find you here.” Aurora set the kettle down, the whistle dying mid‑note. “Eva’s out. She left a key under the mat. You could have knocked.” He glanced at the mat, then back at her, one amber eye sharp, the other black as obsidian. “I prefer announcements that cannot be ignored.” A flicker of irritation sparked behind her blue stare, but it was quickly smothered by something older—a memory of his hand brushing hers in a dim alley, the promise of safety that had shattered when he vanished without explanation. “You always did like dramatics,” she said, moving to the sink to wring out a dishcloth. The cloth hissed under the tap, water spraying in a fine mist. “What brings you to Eva’s flat at this hour?” Lucien leaned against the doorway, the charcoal of his suit absorbing the dim light. His cane rested against the thigh, the blade hidden but present. “A courier failed to deliver a packet. It was meant for you.” She froze, cloth half‑wringed, droplets falling onto the stainless steel. “For me?” “A vellum seal, crimson wax. The emblem of the Avaros court.” He paused, letting the words settle. “They’re looking for you, Aurora.” Her breath hitched, the scent of wet wool and old paper mixing in the air. “Why would they—” “Because you took something that wasn’t yours to keep.” His voice dropped, a low timbre that seemed to vibrate the floorboards. “The ledger. The one with the names of those who bargained with the wrong patrons.” She turned, wiping her hands on her jeans, the denim rough against her skin. “I gave it back. I left it at the drop point you told me about.” A muscle ticked in his jaw. “You left it with Silas. He sold it to a collector who deals in… less savory clientele.” Anger flared, hot and sudden, but she forced it down, letting the cool rationality she prized rise instead. “You should have warned me sooner.” “I did.” Lucien pushed off the frame, his steps silent on the worn wood as he crossed the room. He stopped inches from her, the heat of his body a stark contrast to the chill of the rain still clinging to his coat. “I warned you the night you left my apartment. You didn’t listen.” The memory surfaced—his fingers tracing the line of her jaw, the whispered warning about the Avaros’ reach, the way his breath had smelled of sandalwood and something darker. She had laughed it off, convinced she could outrun a debt that clung like smoke. “You left before I could answer,” she said, voice softer now, edged with something that might have been regret. He lifted his hand, not to touch her, but to brush a stray lock of black hair from her forehead. His fingertips lingered a fraction too long, the contact sending a jolt that made her stomach flip. “I needed to be sure you were safe before I could ask for anything else.” Her eyes flicked to the scar on her wrist, the pale crescent hidden beneath her sleeve. She remembered the night she’d gotten it—a fall from a bike, Eva’s panic, the way Lucien had appeared out of nowhere with a clean cloth and a steady voice that had steadied her shaking hands. “Safe is a relative term,” she murmured, pulling her arm back just enough to break the contact. “You know what they’ll do if they find me.” Lucien’s expression hardened, the amber eye flashing with something akin to fury. “They’ll use you as leverage. They’ll make you watch while they tear apart everything you’ve built.” He stepped closer, his cane tapping once against the floorboards—a rhythm that sounded like a warning. “I won’t let that happen.” The space between them crackled, a mixture of old attraction and fresh hurt. She could see the reflection of the kitchen light in his black eye, depthless and hungry. She felt the pull of his presence, the way his proximity made the air thick, each breath a shared secret. “Why now?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “Why not let me handle it myself?” He smiled, a thin, humorless curve of his lips. “Because you always think you can handle everything alone. And because I… I cannot stand the thought of you facing them without me.” The admission hung between them, raw and unguarded. Aurora’s chest tightened, a mixture of warmth and dread. She wanted to push him away, to remind him of the night he’d walked out after the ledger incident, of the promise he’d broken. Yet part of her, the part that still remembered the feel of his coat against her cheek when he’d tucked her in after a nightmare, ached to lean into him. A sudden knock at the door made both of them start. The sound was sharp, insistent. Lucien’s hand flashed to the cane, the blade sliding out with a whisper of metal. He positioned himself sideways, shielding her with his body, his eyes narrowed toward the peephole. “Stay behind me,” he ordered, tone low enough that only she could hear. She obeyed, pressing her back against the cool plaster, heart hammering against her ribs. The knock came again, louder, accompanied by a muffled voice speaking in a hurried accent she couldn’t place. Lucien pressed his eye to the peephole, then stepped back, blade retracting into the cane with a soft click. “It’s not them,” he said, relief threading through his voice. “It’s Eva.” He moved to the door, pulled it open, and Eva stood there, dripping wet, her eyes wide as she took in the scene—Lucien half‑turned, Aurora pressed against the wall, the faint glint of steel visible for a heartbeat before the cane returned to its innocuous guise. “What the hell is going on?” Eva demanded, shaking water from her hair. “I thought you were supposed to be studying for that exam.” Aurora pushed off the wall, smoothing her jeans with a nervous gesture. “We… we were just talking.” Lucien inclined his head, a gesture of apology that felt more like a promise. “My apologies for the intrusion. I will take my leave.” He turned, but before he could step onto the landing, Aurora caught his arm. The contact was brief, her fingers brushing the damp fabric of his sleeve. “Wait,” she said, voice steady despite the tumult inside her. “If you’re really here to help… tell me what I need to do.” He looked down at her, the amber eye softening, the black one unreadable. “First, you trust me enough to let me stay.” He glanced at Eva, who raised an eyebrow but said nothing. “Second, you stop pretending you can do this alone.” Aurora swallowed, the rain’s scent mixing with the faint aroma of sandalwood that seemed to cling to him. She nodded, a small, almost imperceptible movement. Eva stepped forward, wrapping a soggy towel around Lucien’s shoulders. “You two look like you’ve been through a war. Come in, dry off, and we’ll figure this out.” Lucien gave a half‑smile, the kind that hinted at gratitude and something deeper. He followed Eva into the cramped kitchen, leaving Aurora standing in the doorway, rain still pattering against the windowpane. She closed the door softly, the click echoing like a sealing of a pact. The flat smelled of wet wool, old books, and the promise of a night that would not end in solitude. She turned to face the small table, where a single candle flickered, its flame throwing shadows that danced across the walls—shadows that, for the first time in weeks, did not feel like threats but like companions waiting to see what would come next.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.475
leniency0.95
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1399
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"really"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1399
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"tracing"
count2
1
word"glint"
count2
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"eyebrow"
count1
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"glint"
2"flicker"
3"shattered"
4"stark"
5"chill"
6"stomach"
7"flicked"
8"whisper"
9"warmth"
10"unreadable"
11"eyebrow"
12"echoing"
13"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
79.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1393
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1045
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Marseille1
London1
Eva6
Lucien12
Aurora8
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Marseille"
1"London"
globalScore0.926
windowScore0.833
0.75% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"timbre that seemed to vibrate the floorboards"
1"something akin to fury"
2"sounded like a warning"
3"sandalwood that seemed to cling to him"
56.42% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.436
wordCount1393
matches
0"not to touch her, but to brush a stray lock of black hair from her forehead"
1"not feel like threats but like companions waiting to see what would come next"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean36.66
std21.3
cv0.581
sampleLengths
013
120
219
330
436
547
639
737
837
912
1022
1118
1236
1329
1423
1524
1655
1762
1852
1951
2026
2149
2249
2317
2432
2587
2630
2713
2832
29118
3024
3127
3223
3342
3425
3528
3632
3777
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs182
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences90
ratio0.067
matches
0"A flicker of irritation sparked behind her blue stare, but it was quickly smothered by something older—a memory of his hand brushing hers in a dim alley, the promise of safety that had shattered when he vanished without explanation."
1"The memory surfaced—his fingers tracing the line of her jaw, the whispered warning about the Avaros’ reach, the way his breath had smelled of sandalwood and something darker."
2"She remembered the night she’d gotten it—a fall from a bike, Eva’s panic, the way Lucien had appeared out of nowhere with a clean cloth and a steady voice that had steadied her shaking hands."
3"“They’ll use you as leverage. They’ll make you watch while they tear apart everything you’ve built.” He stepped closer, his cane tapping once against the floorboards—a rhythm that sounded like a warning."
4"“It’s Eva.” He moved to the door, pulled it open, and Eva stood there, dripping wet, her eyes wide as she took in the scene—Lucien half‑turned, Aurora pressed against the wall, the faint glint of steel visible for a heartbeat before the cane returned to its innocuous guise."
5"She turned to face the small table, where a single candle flickered, its flame throwing shadows that danced across the walls—shadows that, for the first time in weeks, did not feel like threats but like companions waiting to see what would come next."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount494
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.020242914979757085
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.004048582995951417
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean15.48
std8.18
cv0.529
sampleLengths
013
120
219
318
412
513
616
77
89
931
107
1139
1216
1312
149
1514
1611
1712
1810
192
2017
215
2215
233
2421
2515
2614
2715
286
2917
3018
316
3219
3324
3412
3528
3615
3719
3820
3917
4015
4116
4235
4317
449
4512
4632
475
4813
4916
50.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.32222222222222224
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences68
matches
0"she said, voice low, eyes"
1"He stepped inside, shutting the"
2"He lifted the ivory‑handled cane,"
3"He glanced at the mat,"
4"she said, moving to the"
5"His cane rested against the"
6"She froze, cloth half‑wringed, droplets"
7"He paused, letting the words"
8"Her breath hitched, the scent"
9"His voice dropped, a low"
10"She turned, wiping her hands"
11"He stopped inches from her,"
12"She had laughed it off,"
13"she said, voice softer now,"
14"He lifted his hand, not"
15"His fingertips lingered a fraction"
16"Her eyes flicked to the"
17"She remembered the night she’d"
18"she murmured, pulling her arm"
19"He stepped closer, his cane"
ratio0.559
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences68
matches
0"Lucien shoved the door wide,"
1"Aurora’s grip on the kettle"
2"she said, voice low, eyes"
3"He stepped inside, shutting the"
4"Water pooled at his boots,"
5"Lucien replied, his accent a"
6"He lifted the ivory‑handled cane,"
7"Aurora set the kettle down,"
8"He glanced at the mat,"
9"A flicker of irritation sparked"
10"she said, moving to the"
11"The cloth hissed under the"
12"Lucien leaned against the doorway,"
13"His cane rested against the"
14"She froze, cloth half‑wringed, droplets"
15"He paused, letting the words"
16"Her breath hitched, the scent"
17"His voice dropped, a low"
18"She turned, wiping her hands"
19"A muscle ticked in his"
ratio0.985
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"He stepped inside, shutting the door with a soft click that seemed too loud in the cramped flat."
1"A flicker of irritation sparked behind her blue stare, but it was quickly smothered by something older—a memory of his hand brushing hers in a dim alley, the pr…"
2"His fingertips lingered a fraction too long, the contact sending a jolt that made her stomach flip."
3"Lucien inclined his head, a gesture of apology that felt more like a promise."
4"Aurora swallowed, the rain’s scent mixing with the faint aroma of sandalwood that seemed to cling to him."
5"Lucien gave a half‑smile, the kind that hinted at gratitude and something deeper."
6"She turned to face the small table, where a single candle flickered, its flame throwing shadows that danced across the walls—shadows that, for the first time in…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Lucien replied, his accent a smooth blend of Marseille and London"
1"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
2"he ordered, tone low enough that only she could hear"
3"he said, relief threading through his voice"
4"she said, voice steady despite the tumult inside her"
75.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"he ordered (order)"
2"Eva demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.15
66.4821%