| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1066 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1066 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "traced" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "could feel" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "resonated" | | 9 | "firmly" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "scanning" | | 12 | "resolve" | | 13 | "throb" | | 14 | "familiar" | | 15 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1067 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 2 | | wordCount | 1067 | | uniqueNames | 2 | | maxNameDensity | 0.09 | | worstName | "Carter" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0 | | worstWindowName | (null) | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "as if listening" | | 1 | "bluebells that seemed to lean toward her as if listening" | | 2 | "as if reacting to an unseen signal" | | 3 | "tones that seemed to chant a warning" | | 4 | "depth that seemed to swallow memories, and within them she saw fragments of her own past — her father's courtroom, her mother's classroom, the ruined doorway of her childhood home" | | 5 | "sounded like distant chanting" | | 6 | "radiance that seemed to hold the darkness at bay" | | 7 | "fissure that seemed to pulse with an inner fire" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.812 | | wordCount | 1067 | | matches | | 0 | "not the wind but a deliberate scrape of something dragging across bark" | | 1 | "no longer pulsing but" | | 2 | "not from any beast she knew, but from the stone itself, resonating through the earth" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 12 | | mean | 88.92 | | std | 7.16 | | cv | 0.081 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 85 | | 2 | 82 | | 3 | 80 | | 4 | 85 | | 5 | 90 | | 6 | 90 | | 7 | 100 | | 8 | 90 | | 9 | 99 | | 10 | 77 | | 11 | 98 |
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| 98.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | |
| 82.35% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | | 0 | "were drawing" | | 1 | "was testing" | | 2 | "were reaching" |
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| 37.04% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 54 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "The time around her seemed to warp; minutes stretched into minutes that stretched longer, each heartbeat marking an elongated interval." | | 1 | "The eyes held a depth that seemed to swallow memories, and within them she saw fragments of her own past — her father's courtroom, her mother's classroom, the ruined doorway of her childhood home." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1066 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thick, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.0150093808630394 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.001876172607879925 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 54 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 64.12% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 54 | | mean | 19.76 | | std | 6.13 | | cv | 0.31 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 33.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.16666666666666666 | | totalSentences | 54 | | uniqueOpeners | 9 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 79.26% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened the strap of" | | 1 | "Its faint inner glow pulsed" | | 2 | "She recalled the scar that" | | 3 | "She paused, listening." | | 4 | "She lifted her hand, feeling" | | 5 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 6 | "She turned her head, but" | | 7 | "She whispered a name, the" | | 8 | "She pressed the pendant more" | | 9 | "She felt the night press" | | 10 | "She took a step forward," | | 11 | "She stumbled back, eyes scanning" | | 12 | "She chased the illusion, heart" | | 13 | "She realized the grove was" | | 14 | "She felt the scar on" | | 15 | "She clenched her fist, feeling" | | 16 | "She spun, eyes wide, and" | | 17 | "She felt the scar on" | | 18 | "She could feel something watching" |
| | ratio | 0.352 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped onto the" | | 1 | "The stones rose like ancient" | | 2 | "She tightened the strap of" | | 3 | "Its faint inner glow pulsed" | | 4 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 5 | "Shadows stretched long across the" | | 6 | "She recalled the scar that" | | 7 | "The memory surfaced as a" | | 8 | "The path ahead curved around" | | 9 | "A soft rustle rose from" | | 10 | "She paused, listening." | | 11 | "The rustle repeated, slower this" | | 12 | "She lifted her hand, feeling" | | 13 | "A low hum rose from" | | 14 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 15 | "A breath of wind slipped" | | 16 | "The scent lingered, making her" | | 17 | "She turned her head, but" | | 18 | "The wildflowers swayed in a" | | 19 | "She whispered a name, the" |
| | ratio | 0.944 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 22 | | matches | | 0 | "Its faint inner glow pulsed once, a soft thrum that matched the rhythm of her own heartbeat." | | 1 | "Shadows stretched long across the wildflowers that bloomed out of season, their petals glowing pale in the moonlight." | | 2 | "The path ahead curved around a clump of bluebells that seemed to lean toward her as if listening." | | 3 | "She lifted her hand, feeling the cool metal against her skin, and the pendant brightened a fraction, as if reacting to an unseen signal." | | 4 | "From the periphery, a shape flickered, a dark silhouette that dissolved as soon as her eyes tried to focus." | | 5 | "The voice did not form words, only a vibration that resonated against the scar on her wrist, making the skin prickle." | | 6 | "She pressed the pendant more firmly against her chest, feeling its warmth spread outward, as if it were drawing heat from something deeper." | | 7 | "The time around her seemed to warp; minutes stretched into minutes that stretched longer, each heartbeat marking an elongated interval." | | 8 | "A distant owl hooted, but the sound arrived too late, as if it had been swallowed by the grove before reaching her ears." | | 9 | "She took a step forward, testing the ground, and the earth beneath her feet gave way to a shallow depression that swallowed the tip of her boot, pulling it down…" | | 10 | "In the corner of her vision, a pair of eyes glimmered, twin points of amber that reflected the moonlight before disappearing." | | 11 | "The pendant’s glow flared brighter, casting a crimson halo around her head, illuminating the circle of standing stones in a wash of blood‑red light." | | 12 | "The scar seemed to glow, a faint line of light that traced the outline of her hand, as if the wound itself breathed." | | 13 | "She clenched her fist, feeling the metal of the chain bite into her palm, and the pendant responded with a surge of warmth that traveled up her arm." | | 14 | "A sudden rustle erupted behind her, a crack of twig that snapped with a precision that no natural sound should possess." | | 15 | "The heartstone pendant flared, its inner glow expanding into a blaze that cut through the night, revealing the shape of a face that was both familiar and alien." | | 16 | "The eyes held a depth that seemed to swallow memories, and within them she saw fragments of her own past — her father's courtroom, her mother's classroom, the r…" | | 17 | "She felt the scar on her wrist flare with a bright line of light, binding her wrist to the pendant as if they were one." | | 18 | "The wildflowers shivered, their petals fluttering in unison, creating a soft rustle that sounded like distant chanting." | | 19 | "She could feel something watching her from the shadows beyond the stones, an unseen presence that lingered just beyond the edge of perception." | | 20 | "The pendant’s glow steadied, no longer pulsing but maintaining a steady radiance that seemed to hold the darkness at bay." | | 21 | "Aurora felt the scar pulse in time with the crack, a surge of heat traveling down her arm as if the stone itself were reaching for her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |