Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFGAXZNA5FTFHW96RAEAX4G

Run Details

Duration:
4m 25s
Cost:
$0.002486
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stepped onto the moss‑covered path that wound between the standing stones. The stones rose like ancient sentinels, their surfaces slick with night dew. She tightened the strap of the silver chain and felt the Heartstone pendant nestled against her chest. Its faint inner glow pulsed once, a soft thrum that matched the rhythm of her own heartbeat. The air smelled of damp earth and something sweet, like crushed rosemary crushed underfoot. Shadows stretched long across the wildflowers that bloomed out of season, their petals glowing pale in the moonlight. She recalled the scar that traced a crescent on her left wrist, a souvenir from a childhood accident that had taught her to trust the thin line between safety and danger. The memory surfaced as a cold shiver ran up her spine, but she forced the thought aside. The path ahead curved around a clump of bluebells that seemed to lean toward her as if listening. A soft rustle rose from the underbrush, not the wind but a deliberate scrape of something dragging across bark. She paused, listening. The rustle repeated, slower this time, a deliberate pattern that echoed the pulse of the pendant. She lifted her hand, feeling the cool metal against her skin, and the pendant brightened a fraction, as if reacting to an unseen signal. A low hum rose from the stones, vibrating through the soles of her boots and into the marrow of her bones. She pressed her palm to the nearest oak, feeling its bark rough and alive, and the hum deepened. A breath of wind slipped through the clearing, carrying a scent of wet stone and something metallic. The scent lingered, making her throat tighten without her consent. From the periphery, a shape flickered, a dark silhouette that dissolved as soon as her eyes tried to focus. She turned her head, but the darkness remained empty, a void that swallowed the faint glow of the pendant. The wildflowers swayed in a rhythm that did not match any breeze she could feel. She whispered a name, the one she had not spoken aloud since leaving the restaurant, hoping the sound might anchor her thoughts. No echo answered, but a voice slipped through the trees, low and rough, like a leaf rubbing against stone. The voice did not form words, only a vibration that resonated against the scar on her wrist, making the skin prickle. She pressed the pendant more firmly against her chest, feeling its warmth spread outward, as if it were drawing heat from something deeper. The time around her seemed to warp; minutes stretched into minutes that stretched longer, each heartbeat marking an elongated interval. She felt the night press against her skin, heavy and expectant. A distant owl hooted, but the sound arrived too late, as if it had been swallowed by the grove before reaching her ears. She took a step forward, testing the ground, and the earth beneath her feet gave way to a shallow depression that swallowed the tip of her boot, pulling it down just enough to make her gasp. She stumbled back, eyes scanning the darkness for any hint of movement. In the corner of her vision, a pair of eyes glimmered, twin points of amber that reflected the moonlight before disappearing. She chased the illusion, heart hammering against her ribs, yet the ground stayed solid beneath her feet. The pendant’s glow flared brighter, casting a crimson halo around her head, illuminating the circle of standing stones in a wash of blood‑red light. The hum grew louder, now a chorus of low tones that seemed to chant a warning. She realized the grove was testing her, probing the edges of her resolve. The wildflowers turned their faces toward her, each blossom opening like a tiny mouth, whispering without sound. She felt the scar on her wrist throb, a dull ache that pulsed in sync with the pendant’s rhythm. The scar seemed to glow, a faint line of light that traced the outline of her hand, as if the wound itself breathed. She clenched her fist, feeling the metal of the chain bite into her palm, and the pendant responded with a surge of warmth that traveled up her arm. A sudden rustle erupted behind her, a crack of twig that snapped with a precision that no natural sound should possess. She spun, eyes wide, and caught sight of a figure crouched among the stones, its form distorted, shifting between the solid and the ethereal. The figure raised a hand, fingers elongated, nails black as obsidian, and the air around it crackled. The heartstone pendant flared, its inner glow expanding into a blaze that cut through the night, revealing the shape of a face that was both familiar and alien. The face stared back at her, eyes wide and unblinking, pupils dilated beyond human capacity. The eyes held a depth that seemed to swallow memories, and within them she saw fragments of her own past — her father's courtroom, her mother's classroom, the ruined doorway of her childhood home. The figure’s mouth opened, and a sound emerged, a mixture of sighs and static, a language she could not translate but felt within her bones. She felt the scar on her wrist flare with a bright line of light, binding her wrist to the pendant as if they were one. The air grew thick, pressing against her lungs, making each inhalation a struggle against an invisible weight. The wildflowers shivered, their petals fluttering in unison, creating a soft rustle that sounded like distant chanting. She could feel something watching her from the shadows beyond the stones, an unseen presence that lingered just beyond the edge of perception. The pendant’s glow steadied, no longer pulsing but maintaining a steady radiance that seemed to hold the darkness at bay. A low growl rose from the ground, not from any beast she knew, but from the stone itself, resonating through the earth and up her spine. The glow from the pendant flared again, this time casting a narrow beam that traced a line across the stones, pointing toward a fissure that seemed to pulse with an inner fire. The fissure widened, opening like a mouth that whispered a promise of release. Aurora felt the scar pulse in time with the crack, a surge of heat traveling down her arm as if the stone itself were reaching for her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1066
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1066
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"traced"
count3
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count2
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"resonated"
count1
9
word"firmly"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count2
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"throb"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"pulsed"
2"traced"
3"echoed"
4"pulse"
5"flickered"
6"could feel"
7"echo"
8"resonated"
9"firmly"
10"warmth"
11"scanning"
12"resolve"
13"throb"
14"familiar"
15"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences54
matches
0"a surge of warmth"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences54
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1067
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions2
wordCount1067
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity0.09
worstName"Carter"
maxWindowNameDensity0
worstWindowName(null)
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone1
persons
0"Carter"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"as if listening"
1"bluebells that seemed to lean toward her as if listening"
2"as if reacting to an unseen signal"
3"tones that seemed to chant a warning"
4"depth that seemed to swallow memories, and within them she saw fragments of her own past — her father's courtroom, her mother's classroom, the ruined doorway of her childhood home"
5"sounded like distant chanting"
6"radiance that seemed to hold the darkness at bay"
7"fissure that seemed to pulse with an inner fire"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.812
wordCount1067
matches
0"not the wind but a deliberate scrape of something dragging across bark"
1"no longer pulsing but"
2"not from any beast she knew, but from the stone itself, resonating through the earth"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
0.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs12
mean88.92
std7.16
cv0.081
sampleLengths
091
185
282
380
485
590
690
7100
890
999
1077
1198
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"been swallowed"
82.35% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs170
matches
0"were drawing"
1"was testing"
2"were reaching"
37.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences54
ratio0.037
matches
0"The time around her seemed to warp; minutes stretched into minutes that stretched longer, each heartbeat marking an elongated interval."
1"The eyes held a depth that seemed to swallow memories, and within them she saw fragments of her own past — her father's courtroom, her mother's classroom, the ruined doorway of her childhood home."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1066
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, pressing against her"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.0150093808630394
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001876172607879925
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences54
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
64.12% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences54
mean19.76
std6.13
cv0.31
sampleLengths
013
112
217
317
414
518
631
717
818
919
103
1116
1224
1321
1418
1517
1610
1719
1819
1915
2022
2119
2221
2323
2420
2511
2623
2736
2812
2921
3017
3124
3216
3313
3417
3519
3623
3728
3821
3924
4017
4128
4215
4334
4425
4525
4617
4717
4823
4920
33.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.16666666666666666
totalSentences54
uniqueOpeners9
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences54
matches
0"She tightened the strap of"
1"Its faint inner glow pulsed"
2"She recalled the scar that"
3"She paused, listening."
4"She lifted her hand, feeling"
5"She pressed her palm to"
6"She turned her head, but"
7"She whispered a name, the"
8"She pressed the pendant more"
9"She felt the night press"
10"She took a step forward,"
11"She stumbled back, eyes scanning"
12"She chased the illusion, heart"
13"She realized the grove was"
14"She felt the scar on"
15"She clenched her fist, feeling"
16"She spun, eyes wide, and"
17"She felt the scar on"
18"She could feel something watching"
ratio0.352
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences54
matches
0"Aurora Carter stepped onto the"
1"The stones rose like ancient"
2"She tightened the strap of"
3"Its faint inner glow pulsed"
4"The air smelled of damp"
5"Shadows stretched long across the"
6"She recalled the scar that"
7"The memory surfaced as a"
8"The path ahead curved around"
9"A soft rustle rose from"
10"She paused, listening."
11"The rustle repeated, slower this"
12"She lifted her hand, feeling"
13"A low hum rose from"
14"She pressed her palm to"
15"A breath of wind slipped"
16"The scent lingered, making her"
17"She turned her head, but"
18"The wildflowers swayed in a"
19"She whispered a name, the"
ratio0.944
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount22
matches
0"Its faint inner glow pulsed once, a soft thrum that matched the rhythm of her own heartbeat."
1"Shadows stretched long across the wildflowers that bloomed out of season, their petals glowing pale in the moonlight."
2"The path ahead curved around a clump of bluebells that seemed to lean toward her as if listening."
3"She lifted her hand, feeling the cool metal against her skin, and the pendant brightened a fraction, as if reacting to an unseen signal."
4"From the periphery, a shape flickered, a dark silhouette that dissolved as soon as her eyes tried to focus."
5"The voice did not form words, only a vibration that resonated against the scar on her wrist, making the skin prickle."
6"She pressed the pendant more firmly against her chest, feeling its warmth spread outward, as if it were drawing heat from something deeper."
7"The time around her seemed to warp; minutes stretched into minutes that stretched longer, each heartbeat marking an elongated interval."
8"A distant owl hooted, but the sound arrived too late, as if it had been swallowed by the grove before reaching her ears."
9"She took a step forward, testing the ground, and the earth beneath her feet gave way to a shallow depression that swallowed the tip of her boot, pulling it down…"
10"In the corner of her vision, a pair of eyes glimmered, twin points of amber that reflected the moonlight before disappearing."
11"The pendant’s glow flared brighter, casting a crimson halo around her head, illuminating the circle of standing stones in a wash of blood‑red light."
12"The scar seemed to glow, a faint line of light that traced the outline of her hand, as if the wound itself breathed."
13"She clenched her fist, feeling the metal of the chain bite into her palm, and the pendant responded with a surge of warmth that traveled up her arm."
14"A sudden rustle erupted behind her, a crack of twig that snapped with a precision that no natural sound should possess."
15"The heartstone pendant flared, its inner glow expanding into a blaze that cut through the night, revealing the shape of a face that was both familiar and alien."
16"The eyes held a depth that seemed to swallow memories, and within them she saw fragments of her own past — her father's courtroom, her mother's classroom, the r…"
17"She felt the scar on her wrist flare with a bright line of light, binding her wrist to the pendant as if they were one."
18"The wildflowers shivered, their petals fluttering in unison, creating a soft rustle that sounded like distant chanting."
19"She could feel something watching her from the shadows beyond the stones, an unseen presence that lingered just beyond the edge of perception."
20"The pendant’s glow steadied, no longer pulsing but maintaining a steady radiance that seemed to hold the darkness at bay."
21"Aurora felt the scar pulse in time with the crack, a surge of heat traveling down her arm as if the stone itself were reaching for her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
62.9621%