Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFGETH4CFA3G44CFR5GMNDS

Run Details

Duration:
1m 23s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Nvidia

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory brushed dust from the Heartstone pendant. A faint warmth pulsed against her skin. Nyx shifted, the edges of his silhouette flickering between solid and shadow. Isolde lifted her chin, her pale lavender eyes catching the thin shimmer in the air. "The veil feels thin today," Rory said. Nyx inclined his head, a whisper like wind through cracked stone. Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair brushing the grass. The distortion rippled, a heat haze over a pond of light. Rory slipped her hand through the shimmer. The world tilted. Cool amber sky stretched above, thick with the scent of ripe honey and spiced wine. Vines coiled like living rope, heavy with fruit that glowed like embers. Nyx flowed beside her, his form a ripple of darkness that clung to the ground. Isolde moved with silent grace, her boots leaving no imprint on the loamy soil. A distant laugh echoed, sharp and bright, like crystal striking crystal. Rory turned toward the sound, her eyes tracing a line of figures tending rows of sapphire berries. "Those berries taste of storm and sun," Isolde said, voice low, eyes narrowed. Nyx drifted closer, his outline hardening for a heartbeat before melting back into shadow. The vines swayed, releasing a puff of perfume that made Rory’s throat tighten. She stepped onto a path of polished stone, each slab warm underfoot. The air hummed with a low thrum, like the heartbeat of a great beast. Isolde paused, hand outstretched, fingers hovering over a cluster of golden grapes. They pulsed faintly, as if breathing. "The fruit sings," she murmured. Nyx’s form flickered, a ripple of darkness that seemed to listen. A chef appeared from behind a trellis, his apron stained with sauces of impossible hue. He lifted a ladle, steam curling upward in ribbons of cinnamon and citrus. "What do you cook here?" Rory asked, voice steady. The chef smiled, teeth gleaming like polished bone. "We feed the hungry and the curious. Taste and you will know." He dipped a spoon into a cauldron, lifted a swirl of liquid that shone like molten amber. The scent hit Rory—sweet, sharp, a hint of something metallic beneath. Isolde inhaled, eyes flickering to the violet glow of Nyx’s eyes. "It carries the taste of promise," she said. Nyx shifted, his shadow lengthening, then contracting as he drew nearer. The chef offered the spoon. Rory accepted, the metal warm against her palm. She tasted. Flavors exploded—fire, fruit, a whisper of earth long forgotten. Her vision sharpened, the vines seeming to pulse in time with her heartbeat. A ripple of unease slid through her chest, a cold thread amidst the heat. Isolde’s brow furrowed, her gaze fixed on a distant grove where trees bore fruit that resembled tiny lanterns. "Those lanterns hold more than light," she said, voice edged with curiosity. Nyx drifted toward the grove, his outline thinning until he was a wisp of shadow against the bark. The lantern fruit swayed, casting patterns that danced like living script. Rory followed, her boots silent on the soft loam. The air grew thicker, sweetness cloying at the back of her throat. A low melody rose, strings unseen vibrating with a rhythm that made the ground tremble faintly. Musicians appeared, their instruments carved from bone and shell, their faces hidden beneath hoods of woven vine. They played without mouths, the music spilling from the hollows of their forms. Isolde tilted her head, listening. "The song speaks of feast and famine," she said. Nyx’s form solidified for a moment, his eyes glowing violet. He reached out, a tendril of shadow brushing a musician’s hood. The musician did not flinch, the note shifting to a higher pitch. Rory felt a tug at her wrist, the Heartstone pendant warming against her scar. She looked down, the crescent scar catching the light. The path opened into a vast clearing, tables stretching beyond sight, laden with dishes that defied description. Plates held mountains of spiced meat that smoked with herbs that smelled of rain on stone. Bowls overflowed with liquids that shifted color—ruby to emerald to sapphire—with each breath. At the far end, a figure stood beneath a canopy of woven grapevines. His robe was of shifting shadow, eyes twin pits of amber. Isolde stepped forward, her voice a soft ripple. "Who holds court here?" The figure turned, a smile spreading like dawn over a desert. "I am the keeper of excess. Welcome, wanderers." His words hung in the air, thick as syrup. Nyx’s shadow pooled at his feet, then rose, wrapping around the keeper’s ankles like a living cloak. Rory felt the weight of the moment, the wonder and the warning tangled together. She lifted her gaze to the sky, the amber light deepening as if the world itself inhaled. The Heartstone pendant glowed brighter, its crimson core beating in time with the distant drums of unseen feasts. Isolde reached out, fingers brushing the edge of a nearby plate. The food seemed to sigh, a soft exhalation of steam and spice. She pulled her hand back, a flicker of surprise crossing her features. "It hungers," she whispered. Nyx’s form rippled, a question without sound. Rory tightened her grip on the pendant, the warmth spreading up her arm. The keeper lifted a chalice, liquid inside swirling like a storm caught in glass. He offered it to them, his voice a low rumble that seemed to come from the earth itself. "Drink, and taste the truth of indulgence." Rory stared at the chalice, the reflection of her own eyes staring back, bright blue against the amber glow. Isolde glanced at Nyx, whose eyes glowed violet, then back at the chalice. The air crackled, a promise of discovery and a hint of danger hanging between them. They stood at the threshold of the feast, the world beyond the tables waiting, silent and expectant.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount977
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount977
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"crystal"
count2
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"gleaming"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"amidst"
count1
10
word"furrowed"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"whisper"
3"echoed"
4"crystal"
5"tracing"
6"flickered"
7"gleaming"
8"pulse"
9"amidst"
10"furrowed"
11"weight"
12"flicker"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"the weight of the moment"
2"hung in the air"
93.75% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences80
matches
0"A ripple of unease"
1"felt a tug"
2"a flicker of surprise"
89.29% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords973
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount901
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Nyx12
Rory13
Isolde11
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Heartstone"
globalScore0.779
windowScore0.833
42.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if breathing"
1"darkness that seemed to listen"
2"rumble that seemed to come from the earth itself"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount973
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
99.94% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean25.61
std12.8
cv0.5
sampleLengths
041
17
268
329
428
513
627
726
818
95
1048
1120
1228
1319
1448
1532
1612
1729
1821
1933
2027
2133
2223
2346
2424
2512
2619
2726
2831
2918
3039
3120
3232
337
3419
3513
3615
3717
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
40.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences84
ratio0.036
matches
0"The scent hit Rory—sweet, sharp, a hint of something metallic beneath."
1"Flavors exploded—fire, fruit, a whisper of earth long forgotten."
2"Bowls overflowed with liquids that shifted color—ruby to emerald to sapphire—with each breath."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount905
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.01878453038674033
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0022099447513812156
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
74.19% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean11.58
std3.89
cv0.335
sampleLengths
07
17
212
315
47
511
69
711
87
93
1015
1112
1215
1314
1411
1517
1613
1714
1813
1912
2014
2112
226
235
2411
2515
2613
279
288
2912
3017
3111
3211
338
3411
355
368
372
389
3913
4014
4118
4212
4318
4411
459
4612
4716
4817
4913
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences74
matches
0"She stepped onto a path"
1"They pulsed faintly, as if"
2"He lifted a ladle, steam"
3"He dipped a spoon into"
4"Her vision sharpened, the vines"
5"she said, voice edged with"
6"They played without mouths, the"
7"He reached out, a tendril"
8"She looked down, the crescent"
9"His robe was of shifting"
10"His words hung in the"
11"She lifted her gaze to"
12"She pulled her hand back,"
13"He offered it to them,"
14"They stood at the threshold"
ratio0.203
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences74
matches
0"Rory brushed dust from the"
1"A faint warmth pulsed against"
2"Nyx shifted, the edges of"
3"Isolde lifted her chin, her"
4"Nyx inclined his head, a"
5"Isolde stepped forward, her silver"
6"The distortion rippled, a heat"
7"Rory slipped her hand through"
8"The world tilted."
9"Vines coiled like living rope,"
10"Nyx flowed beside her, his"
11"Isolde moved with silent grace,"
12"A distant laugh echoed, sharp"
13"Rory turned toward the sound,"
14"Isolde said, voice low, eyes"
15"Nyx drifted closer, his outline"
16"The vines swayed, releasing a"
17"She stepped onto a path"
18"The air hummed with a"
19"Isolde paused, hand outstretched, fingers"
ratio0.973
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.06% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Nyx flowed beside her, his form a ripple of darkness that clung to the ground."
1"Rory turned toward the sound, her eyes tracing a line of figures tending rows of sapphire berries."
2"Nyx drifted closer, his outline hardening for a heartbeat before melting back into shadow."
3"Nyx shifted, his shadow lengthening, then contracting as he drew nearer."
4"Isolde’s brow furrowed, her gaze fixed on a distant grove where trees bore fruit that resembled tiny lanterns."
5"The path opened into a vast clearing, tables stretching beyond sight, laden with dishes that defied description."
6"Bowls overflowed with liquids that shifted color—ruby to emerald to sapphire—with each breath."
7"She lifted her gaze to the sky, the amber light deepening as if the world itself inhaled."
8"He offered it to them, his voice a low rumble that seemed to come from the earth itself."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Isolde said, voice low, eyes narrowed"
1"Rory asked, voice steady"
2"she said, voice edged with curiosity"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
68.9363%