Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFGF4JZ6NKKW8TSSZZ668XN

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Duration:
55.4s
Cost:
$0.001026
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DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The night fell thick over the hidden clearing as Aurora slipped through the rusted iron gate that marked the entrance to the Fae Grove. Moonlight flickered between the ancient oak standing stones, each trunk thick as a cathedral pillar, their bark scarred with symbols she had seen only in old folklore. The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter, like honey spilled on wet stone. She inhaled, her lungs filling with cool breath that seemed to linger longer than it should, as if the very atmosphere resisted the passage of time. She had come seeking the Heartstone Pendant, the crimson artifact the unknown benefactor had left on her nightstand weeks ago. The pendant had pulsed faintly ever since she first felt its warmth against her skin, a rhythm that matched the beating of her own heart. Now it rested heavy against her throat, its inner glow barely visible through the dark fabric of her shirt. The pulse grew steadier as she moved deeper, each step echoing on the moss‑soft ground. The standing stones formed a loose circle, their edges cracked and covered in lichen that glowed faintly under the moon’s pale stare. Between them, wildflowers unfolded in impossible colors — violet petals that seemed to shift hue with every breath she took, leaves that whispered without wind. The time here moved differently; an hour inside could stretch into days outside, but she felt each second press against her ribs like a weight. A low hum rose from the stones, low and resonant, like a choir of insects singing in a language she could not understand. It vibrated through the soles of her shoes, traveled up her calves, and settled in the hollow of her throat. Aurora’s eyes scanned the perimeter, catching glints of movement at the edge of her vision. Shadows pooled near the base of a stone, shifting as if something unseen brushed past. She stopped, hand hovering over the pendant. The crimson gem pulsed with a gentle heat, as if recognizing her touch. The warmth seeped into her palm, spreading up her arm, stirring a memory of a summer night in Cardiff when she had first held a similar stone in her father’s study. The memory was sharp, clear, and for a moment she forgot the darkness that pressed in around her. "You think you can hide," she whispered, voice low but steady. The words hung in the air, reverberating off the stone and returning as a faint echo. The hum intensified, now accompanied by a soft rustle, like dry leaves skittering across the ground. Something moved in the periphery — a shape, indistinct, taller than a human, cloaked in shadows that seemed to drink the moonlight. She took a step forward, boots sinking into the spongy earth. The pendant’s glow flared brighter, casting a thin crimson line across the ground. She felt a chill crawl up her spine, not from fear but from an undeniable sense of being watched. The shadows coalesced, forming a vague figure that stood just beyond the circle of stones, its outline flickering like a candle flame caught in a gust. "It knows we are here," she said, her tone edged with resolve. The figure did not answer, but the hum grew louder, now accompanied by a faint, rhythmic tapping that sounded like a distant drumbeat. The tapping matched the pulse of the pendant, syncing with her own heartbeat. She raised her hand, fingers brushing the edge of the nearest stone. The stone’s surface was cold, yet it vibrated under her fingertips, sending a shiver up her arm. The tapping ceased as she made contact, leaving an oppressive silence that pressed against her ears. In that silence, she heard a soft, melodic voice, not spoken but felt, resonating in her mind. "We have been waiting," the voice whispered, though no lips moved. Aurora’s breath caught; she could not tell if the voice belonged to the figure or to the grove itself. The words seemed to coil around her thoughts, wrapping her in a surreal embrace. "Who are you?" she asked, voice firm, eyes narrowing as she stared into the darkness where the figure stood. The figure’s outline remained vague, but she could see a faint outline of a crown of thorns woven from vines, its edges sharp against the night. The pendant throbbed harder, its glow spreading outward, illuminating the surrounding flora with a blood‑red sheen. The hum returned, now a low chant that seemed to rise from the stones themselves. Aurora felt the chant wrap around her, pulling at memories she tried to suppress: the feel of cold metal cuffs on her wrists, the taste of bitter wine, the echo of a courtroom’s silence. She pushed those thoughts aside, focusing on the present, on the strange world that surrounded her. She took another step, the pendant’s pulse matching her stride. The flowers around her swayed without wind, their petals opening and closing in rhythmic patterns. Each bloom seemed to watch her, their centers darkening as if absorbing the light she emitted. The standing stones, ancient and patient, seemed to lean in, their trunks creaking softly, as if bearing the weight of centuries. A sudden crack snapped through the night, the sound of a branch breaking under an unseen weight. Aurora’s head snapped toward the source, her heart pounding in her ears. The figure was now closer, its presence filling the space between the stones, its form shifting, becoming more defined. Its eyes, if they could be called that, glowed a muted amber, reflecting the crimson glow of the Heartstone. She tightened her grip on the pendant, feeling its heat seep into her skin, grounding her in this otherworldly place. "What do you want?" she demanded, voice cutting through the night like a blade. The figure did not respond with words, but the air around her seemed to thicken, pressing against her chest, as if the grove itself was holding its breath. The hum rose to a crescendo, then dropped suddenly, leaving a ringing silence that seemed to vibrate in the marrow of her bones. In that silence, a single word formed in her mind, not spoken, but felt: "Return." The word echoed through the grove, reverberating off the stones, each syllable resonating with the rhythm of the pendant. Aurora’s eyes widened as the ground trembled beneath her feet. The standing stones shifted, their positions altering ever so slightly, forming a new pattern that she did not recognize. The shadows around the figure dissolved, revealing a void that seemed to swallow the light, leaving only the glow of the pendant to illuminate the space. She stepped back, her boots sinking into the soft earth, but the ground gave way beneath her, a subtle give that felt like stepping into water. The pendant’s glow flared, casting a brilliant crimson circle around her feet, the light dancing on the surrounding stones. The hum returned, now a low, steady thrum that seemed to synchronize with the beating of her heart. "Stay," the voice whispered again, this time clearer, as if spoken directly into her ear. "Do not leave." The words hung in the air, heavy with promise and threat alike. Aurora’s mind raced, trying to make sense of the message, but the sensation was overwhelming, a flood of images of past betrayals, of promises broken, of doors left ajar in a house she could no longer call home. She realized that the grove was not merely a place; it was a test, a conduit, a doorway between worlds. The Heartstone Pendant was a key, a beacon that pulsed in rhythm with the veil separating Earth and the Fae realm. The figure before her was not a monster, but a guardian, a sentinel of the threshold, demanding proof of her worthiness. She felt a surge of anger, a hot ember flaring within her chest. She raised her voice, shouting into the night, "I will not be chased away!" The words rang louder than she intended, echoing off the stones. The grove responded with a sudden gust of wind that swept through the clearing, scattering petals like fireflies, each one illuminating briefly before fading. The wind carried with it a sound — a low, guttural chant, neither wholly human nor wholly alien. It resonated through the stones, through the ground, through the very air, wrapping itself around Aurora’s bones. The chant seemed to summon something deeper, something that rose from the depths of the world and swirled around her like a vortex. She stumbled backward, tripping over a protruding root that had erupted from the earth without warning. The root was twisted, as if it had been waiting for her, coiled like a serpent. She fell to the ground, her palms scraping against the cold stone, feeling the rough texture under her skin. The pendant slipped from her neck, clattering against the stone with a soft metallic clang. In that moment, the pendant’s glow flared intensely, bathing the clearing in a blinding crimson light. The light seared the darkness, revealing every detail of the grove: the moss, the stones, the flickering shadows, the figure that now stood directly before her, its form sharpening, its eyes now fixed on hers. In its eyes, she saw reflections of countless faces, each one a memory, a warning, a promise. Aurora’s breath came in ragged bursts, each exhale forming a cloud that vanished almost instantly. She rose to her knees, clutching the pendant tightly, feeling its heat seep into her palm, its rhythm matching her own heartbeat. She could feel the pulse of the grove, the humming chords of the stones, the whisper of the wind, all converging into a single point of focus. She stared at the figure, her gaze steady, her mind clear. "What do you want from me?" she asked, voice steady, though her heart hammered in her chest. The figure’s response was not a sound but a surge of energy that pulsed through the ground, causing the standing stones to hum in perfect harmony with the pendant’s glow. The energy wrapped around Aurora, lifting her gently off the ground, as if the grove itself wanted to lift her out of the mortal coil. Yet, instead of releasing her, the energy held her suspended, the weight of the moment pressing down like a mountain. The glow from the pendant intensified, casting a halo around her, turning the entire clearing into a stage of light and shadow. In that suspended moment, Aurora felt the boundary between worlds blur. Time stretched, each second elongated, yet she could feel every heartbeat of the grove. The air seemed to thicken, each breath she took heavier than the last, as if the world itself was holding its breath, waiting for her decision. She could hear her own thoughts echoing back at her, the voice of her father, the clang of courtroom gavels, the laughter of friends long gone. But the present held her, demanding an answer. She lifted the pendant higher, feeling its warmth seep into her chest, and whispered, her voice barely audible, "I will not run." The figure’s form flickered, the amber eyes widening, and the hum transformed into a note, pure and resonant, that seemed to vibrate through every stone, every leaf, every fiber of the grove. The note rose, then fell, echoing in the night, a sound that felt both ancient and new. Aurora felt the resonance in her bones, in her very marrow, as if the grove was singing a song of ancient power. She understood, without words, that the choice lay before her: to step back into the world she knew, carrying the knowledge of this place, or to stay, to become part of the grove’s endless night. The decision hung in the air, heavy and unspoken, as the night pressed in around her, the moonlight casting silvered patterns on the ground, the crimson glow of the pendant painting the stones with a blood‑red hue. She clenched her fists, the grip tightening around the pendant, feeling the pulse of its crimson heart match her own. She felt the ancient stones vibrate, the hum of the grove intensify, the chant rise and fall, a symphony of the unseen. The horror of the night was not in blood or gore, but in the quiet certainty that the world she knew had shifted, that something beyond human comprehension lingered just beyond the veil. She opened her eyes fully, taking in the darkness, the light, the hum, the presence. She inhaled deeply, the air thick with the scent of wildflowers and earth, and whispered, "I am here." The words hung in the night, a promise, a declaration, a trigger that set the world in motion once more. The hum settled into a low, steady resonance, as if the grove itself acknowledged her resolve. The figure lowered its stance, the shadows receding slightly, revealing a clearer shape — a silhouette of a woman, draped in flowing vines, her eyes reflecting the crimson glow of the pendant. She raised a hand, palm open, as if offering something, or perhaps demanding something in return. Aurora felt the weight of the moment settle onto her shoulders, the gravity of the decision pressing down like a stone. She could feel the pulse of the Heartstone growing stronger, its warmth spreading through her veins, anchoring her to this strange place. The air around her seemed to thrum with expectation, the grove holding its breath, waiting for her next move. She lifted her hand, fingers trembling slightly, and placed the pendant on the ground before her. The crimson glow spilled onto the moss, spreading like a river of light, pooling around the standing stones, bathing the clearing in an ethereal radiance. The chant around her faded, replaced by a soft, melodic hum that seemed to sing from the stones themselves. She stood there, bathed in the glow, the night pressing close, the ancient stones standing as silent witnesses. The horror of the moment was not in terror, but in the undeniable weight of what lay ahead. She felt a calm settle over her, a clarity that cut through the fog of fear. She turned her gaze toward the opening of the grove, toward the path that led back to the world beyond. Without a word, she stepped forward, the pendant’s glow guiding her steps, each footfall deliberate, each breath measured. The night air welcomed her, the stars above twinkling through the canopy, the grove’s hidden magic humming softly around her. The journey ahead remained uncertain, the path uncharted, but she moved with purpose, the crimson heart beating in time with her own.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"the voice whispered again [again]"
1"She inhaled deeply [deeply]"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
75.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2430
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"ever so slightly"
count1
4
adverb"intensely"
count1
5
adverb"tightly"
count1
6
adverb"gently"
count1
7
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
3"ever so slightly"
4"intensely"
5"tightly"
6"gently"
7"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2430
totalAiIsms67
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"warmth"
count4
3
word"pulse"
count6
4
word"echoing"
count4
5
word"weight"
count6
6
word"vibrated"
count2
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"echo"
count2
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"sense of"
count2
11
word"resolve"
count2
12
word"rhythmic"
count2
13
word"oppressive"
count1
14
word"silence"
count5
15
word"surreal"
count1
16
word"throbbed"
count1
17
word"pounding"
count1
18
word"otherworldly"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count1
20
word"trembled"
count1
21
word"dancing"
count1
22
word"raced"
count1
23
word"beacon"
count1
24
word"sentinel"
count1
25
word"resonated"
count1
26
word"depths"
count1
27
word"could feel"
count3
28
word"whisper"
count1
29
word"perfect"
count1
30
word"resonance"
count2
31
word"unspoken"
count1
32
word"symphony"
count1
33
word"footfall"
count1
34
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"pulse"
4"echoing"
5"weight"
6"vibrated"
7"scanned"
8"echo"
9"chill"
10"sense of"
11"resolve"
12"rhythmic"
13"oppressive"
14"silence"
15"surreal"
16"throbbed"
17"pounding"
18"otherworldly"
19"echoed"
20"trembled"
21"dancing"
22"raced"
23"beacon"
24"sentinel"
25"resonated"
26"depths"
27"could feel"
28"whisper"
29"perfect"
30"resonance"
31"unspoken"
32"symphony"
33"footfall"
34"measured"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches8
maxInWindow5
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
3
label"weight of words/silence"
count2
4
label"hung in the air"
count3
highlights
0"heart hammered in her chest"
1"eyes widened"
2"clenched her fists"
3"the weight of the moment"
4"hung in the air"
97.68% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences122
matches
0"felt a chill"
1"d with resolve"
2"a surge of anger"
3"t in terror"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount17
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2434
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount2389
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.54
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Fae2
Grove1
Heartstone4
Pendant2
Cardiff1
Earth1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Cardiff"
3"Earth"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences122
glossingSentenceCount14
matches
0"breath that seemed to linger longer than it should, as if the very atmosphere resisted the passage of time"
1"petals that seemed to shift hue with every breath she took, leaves that whispered without wind"
2"as if recognizing her touch"
3"shadows that seemed to drink the moonlight"
4"sounded like a distant drumbeat"
5"chant that seemed to rise from the stones themselves"
6"as if absorbing the light she emitted"
7"as if bearing the weight of centuries"
8"silence that seemed to vibrate in the marrow of her bones"
9"void that seemed to swallow the light, leaving only the glow of the pendant to illuminate the space"
10"felt like stepping into water"
11"thrum that seemed to synchronize with the beating of her heart"
12"as if offering something, or perhaps demanding something in return"
13"hum that seemed to sing from the stones themselves"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches8
per1kWords3.287
wordCount2434
matches
0"not from fear but from an undeniable sense of being watched"
1"not spoken but felt, resonating in her mind"
2"not spoken, but felt: \"Return"
3"not a monster, but a guardian, a sentinel of the threshold, demanding proof of"
4"neither wholly human nor"
5"not a sound but a surge of energy"
6"not in blood or gore, but in the quiet certainty"
7"not in terror, but in the undeniable weight of what lay ahead"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences122
matches
0"realized that the"
1"shifted, that something"
0.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean64.05
std8.64
cv0.135
sampleLengths
092
179
272
373
469
565
669
748
862
944
1061
1165
1262
1367
1462
1557
1655
1763
1868
1962
2062
2158
2266
2368
2464
2558
2667
2751
2856
2971
3072
3175
3253
3364
3462
3560
3672
3760
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"was twisted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs380
matches
0"was holding"
1"was overwhelming"
2"was holding"
3"was singing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences122
ratio0.057
matches
0"Between them, wildflowers unfolded in impossible colors — violet petals that seemed to shift hue with every breath she took, leaves that whispered without wind."
1"The time here moved differently; an hour inside could stretch into days outside, but she felt each second press against her ribs like a weight."
2"Something moved in the periphery — a shape, indistinct, taller than a human, cloaked in shadows that seemed to drink the moonlight."
3"Aurora’s breath caught; she could not tell if the voice belonged to the figure or to the grove itself."
4"She realized that the grove was not merely a place; it was a test, a conduit, a doorway between worlds."
5"The wind carried with it a sound — a low, guttural chant, neither wholly human nor wholly alien."
6"The figure lowered its stance, the shadows receding slightly, revealing a clearer shape — a silhouette of a woman, draped in flowing vines, her eyes reflecting the crimson glow of the pendant."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2385
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount65
adverbRatio0.027253668763102725
lyAdverbCount26
lyAdverbRatio0.01090146750524109
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
69.93% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean19.95
std6.48
cv0.325
sampleLengths
024
127
215
326
420
525
619
715
822
925
1025
1123
1220
1315
1415
157
1613
1731
1818
1911
2016
2116
2222
2311
2413
2519
2626
2712
2823
2913
3012
3117
3216
3317
3411
3519
3614
3719
3826
3916
4015
4134
4216
4310
4415
4516
4621
4717
4812
4919
28.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.1885245901639344
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
ratio0
92.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences122
matches
0"She inhaled, her lungs filling"
1"She had come seeking the"
2"It vibrated through the soles"
3"She stopped, hand hovering over"
4"she whispered, voice low but"
5"She took a step forward,"
6"She felt a chill crawl"
7"she said, her tone edged"
8"She raised her hand, fingers"
9"she asked, voice firm, eyes"
10"She pushed those thoughts aside,"
11"She took another step, the"
12"Its eyes, if they could"
13"She tightened her grip on"
14"she demanded, voice cutting through"
15"She stepped back, her boots"
16"She realized that the grove"
17"She felt a surge of"
18"She raised her voice, shouting"
19"It resonated through the stones,"
ratio0.32
0.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount112
totalSentences122
matches
0"The night fell thick over"
1"Moonlight flickered between the ancient"
2"The air smelled of damp"
3"She inhaled, her lungs filling"
4"She had come seeking the"
5"The pendant had pulsed faintly"
6"The pulse grew steadier as"
7"The standing stones formed a"
8"The time here moved differently;"
9"A low hum rose from"
10"It vibrated through the soles"
11"Aurora’s eyes scanned the perimeter,"
12"Shadows pooled near the base"
13"She stopped, hand hovering over"
14"The crimson gem pulsed with"
15"The warmth seeped into her"
16"The memory was sharp, clear,"
17"she whispered, voice low but"
18"The words hung in the"
19"The hum intensified, now accompanied"
ratio0.918
81.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences122
matches
0"Now it rested heavy against"
1"Yet, instead of releasing her,"
ratio0.016
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences108
technicalSentenceCount29
matches
0"She inhaled, her lungs filling with cool breath that seemed to linger longer than it should, as if the very atmosphere resisted the passage of time."
1"The pendant had pulsed faintly ever since she first felt its warmth against her skin, a rhythm that matched the beating of her own heart."
2"The standing stones formed a loose circle, their edges cracked and covered in lichen that glowed faintly under the moon’s pale stare."
3"Between them, wildflowers unfolded in impossible colors — violet petals that seemed to shift hue with every breath she took, leaves that whispered without wind."
4"Shadows pooled near the base of a stone, shifting as if something unseen brushed past."
5"The crimson gem pulsed with a gentle heat, as if recognizing her touch."
6"The warmth seeped into her palm, spreading up her arm, stirring a memory of a summer night in Cardiff when she had first held a similar stone in her father’s st…"
7"Something moved in the periphery — a shape, indistinct, taller than a human, cloaked in shadows that seemed to drink the moonlight."
8"The shadows coalesced, forming a vague figure that stood just beyond the circle of stones, its outline flickering like a candle flame caught in a gust."
9"The pendant throbbed harder, its glow spreading outward, illuminating the surrounding flora with a blood‑red sheen."
10"She pushed those thoughts aside, focusing on the present, on the strange world that surrounded her."
11"Each bloom seemed to watch her, their centers darkening as if absorbing the light she emitted."
12"The standing stones, ancient and patient, seemed to lean in, their trunks creaking softly, as if bearing the weight of centuries."
13"The figure was now closer, its presence filling the space between the stones, its form shifting, becoming more defined."
14"She tightened her grip on the pendant, feeling its heat seep into her skin, grounding her in this otherworldly place."
15"The standing stones shifted, their positions altering ever so slightly, forming a new pattern that she did not recognize."
16"The shadows around the figure dissolved, revealing a void that seemed to swallow the light, leaving only the glow of the pendant to illuminate the space."
17"She stepped back, her boots sinking into the soft earth, but the ground gave way beneath her, a subtle give that felt like stepping into water."
18"The grove responded with a sudden gust of wind that swept through the clearing, scattering petals like fireflies, each one illuminating briefly before fading."
19"She stumbled backward, tripping over a protruding root that had erupted from the earth without warning."
20"She fell to the ground, her palms scraping against the cold stone, feeling the rough texture under her skin."
21"The light seared the darkness, revealing every detail of the grove: the moss, the stones, the flickering shadows, the figure that now stood directly before her,…"
22"She rose to her knees, clutching the pendant tightly, feeling its heat seep into her palm, its rhythm matching her own heartbeat."
23"The air seemed to thicken, each breath she took heavier than the last, as if the world itself was holding its breath, waiting for her decision."
24"Aurora felt the resonance in her bones, in her very marrow, as if the grove was singing a song of ancient power."
25"The hum settled into a low, steady resonance, as if the grove itself acknowledged her resolve."
26"The figure lowered its stance, the shadows receding slightly, revealing a clearer shape — a silhouette of a woman, draped in flowing vines, her eyes reflecting …"
27"She raised a hand, palm open, as if offering something, or perhaps demanding something in return."
28"She could feel the pulse of the Heartstone growing stronger, its warmth spreading through her veins, anchoring her to this strange place."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she whispered, voice low but steady"
1"she demanded, voice cutting through the night like a blade"
2"she asked, voice steady, though her heart hammered in her chest"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"the voice whispered (whisper)"
2"she demanded (demand)"
3"the voice whispered again (whisper)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.571
52.6674%