Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFGF4RACPGP9RNA8J98TNCV

Run Details

Duration:
19.8s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones looked wrong in the dark. Rory had seen them twice before — once in full afternoon sun, once at dusk when the park still hummed with dog walkers and joggers — and both times they'd seemed like nothing more than ancient weathered pillars. Unremarkable. Easy to dismiss. Now, alone in a clearing she shouldn't have been able to find, the oaks around her formed a ring that felt too deliberate. Too close. She stood in the centre where the wildflowers grew despite it being mid-November, their petals catching starlight in pale white clusters that shouldn't have existed at all. She checked her phone. 1:47 AM. She'd entered Richmond Park around eleven. The walk to this part of the grounds took twenty minutes, twenty-five at most. But her legs ached like she'd been moving for hours, and her throat was dry in a way that had nothing to do with the cold. The pendant rested against her sternum, warm through two layers of clothing. She touched it through her jacket — the silver chain cool against her fingers, the gemstone itself radiating a heat that had no business being there. Deep crimson, the size of a thumbnail. She'd worn it every night for three weeks since it arrived in her post box with no return address. No note. Just a small cardboard box lined with black silk. She hadn't told anyone about it. The wildflowers swayed. There was no wind. She felt it on her face — still air, sharp with frost — but the flowers moved anyway. A ripple passed through them from the centre outward, stems bending in sequence like something had brushed past their roots underground. Rory didn't move. She listened. Her own breathing. The distant hum of traffic on the A316, maybe a mile off. Then something else — a low resonance, felt more than heard, that seemed to come from the stones themselves. It vibrated in her chest, in the pendant, in the spaces behind her teeth. She turned slowly. The nearest standing stone was twelve feet away, its surface gnarled with centuries of lichen. As she watched, the lichen shifted. Not grew. Not spread. *Shifted* — rearranging itself into patterns that her eye wanted to follow but her mind refused to parse. Like trying to read a language she'd forgotten she knew. Her phone screen flickered. 1:47 AM. Still 1:47 AM. She looked at the time again. The display didn't change. The seconds didn't advance. A film of static crawled across the edges of the screen, and when she blinked it away, the wildflowers nearest to her had turned their heads toward her like faces. They were flowers. Just flowers. She knew that. The shape was wrong — her brain was making associations where none existed — but she couldn't stop seeing it. The white blooms arranged at angles that mimicked tilted heads, petals bunched like pursed lips, stems bent at what looked like joints. She forced herself to look away. The pendant pulsed. One slow throb of warmth, then another, then a steady rhythm that matched her heartbeat until she couldn't tell which was which. A sound came from behind the farthest stone. Not an animal. Not wind. It was the sound of a door closing — the soft click of a latch engaging — except there were no doors. Nothing but trees and stones and a clearing that smelled of flowers that had no business blooming. Rory's hand found the scar on her left wrist without thinking. She traced the crescent shape with her thumb, a habit she'd carried since she was nine. The edges were smooth now, but in the dark the old tissue caught on her fingerprint like a lock catching on a key. The sound came again. Closer. Then again. Closer still. Each time it came from a different stone. A door closing somewhere behind the lichen-covered surface, and each time the sound came from a different point in the ring. Moving. Going around. She stood in the centre and tracked it — left, then right, then behind her, then left again — each click sharper than the last, the latch mechanism growing louder as if whatever held it was struggling to stay shut. Or struggling to open. The flowers nearest the third stone from her left began to wilt. Not slowly. Not the gradual droop of a dying bloom. They blackened from the stem upward in a wave, petals curling inward and then crumbling to dust that hung in the air like ash. The dust didn't fall. It hovered, catching the starlight, swirling in patterns that had no draft to drive them. Rory took a step backward. Her boot pressed into soil that was too soft — too warm — like the ground itself was breathing beneath her. She pulled her foot up and saw, just for a moment, the earth close over her footprint like a mouth sealing shut. "That's not happening," she said. Her voice came out flat. Controlled. The voice she used on deliveries when the Yu-Fei's kitchen was in chaos or Silas needed someone to talk down a customer at two in the morning. The voice that made people listen. The pendant flared. A brief, fierce warmth that made her gasp, and the crimson stone blazed with its inner light — brighter than it had ever glowed, bright enough to cast her shadow against the nearest standing stone. Her shadow was wrong. Too long. The arms too thin. It didn't match her stance and it didn't move when she did. She stepped sideways. The shadow stayed. It wasn't her shadow. It was something standing behind her, using her outline to mask its own. Rory turned. Nothing. The clearing was empty. The flowers swayed without wind. The wildflowers that hadn't wilted still faced her with their pale faces, and beyond them the ring of stones circled like teeth in an open jaw. But she'd seen it. For the space of a breath — maybe less — there had been a shape at the edge of the pendant's light. Tall. Thin. Taller than any person had a right to be, the limbs folded wrong, the head tilted at an angle that made her own neck ache to look at. Her phone screen pulsed. 1:47 AM. Then 3:22 AM. Then 1:47 AM again. The static crawled across the display, and in its flicker, the screen showed something else — a camera feed, her own face caught in her phone's front lens, white-eyed and slack-jawed and looking at something directly behind her right shoulder. Rory didn't breathe. Didn't move. The pendant was burning now, the heat climbing from warm to painful, the silver chain pressing into her skin. She could feel the gemstone pulsing in time with a heartbeat that wasn't hers. Something was close enough that the Heartstone was screaming its proximity through her clothes, through her bones, through the marrow itself. Behind her, the nearest standing stone cracked. Not loudly. A hairline fracture split its surface from top to bottom, and from within the fissure, light bled out — not the warm glow of the pendant but something cold. Blue-white. The colour of deep water or the sky at the edge of the atmosphere. It pulsed once, twice, and then the crack sealed itself, the lichen flowing over the break like skin knitting over a wound. The third sound — the door closing — came from the stone directly in front of her. And this time, the latch didn't click. It didn't catch. It opened. Something on the other side exhaled. The breath was slow and deliberate, the way someone breathes when they've been holding perfectly still for a very long time. It smelled of petrichor and ozone and something underneath both that Rory couldn't name — something that made her stomach drop and the hair along her forearms stand upright. The breath moved the flowers. It pushed them flat against the ground as it rolled toward her, carrying with it a chill that found the gap between her jacket and her collar and settled against her throat. The pendant was so hot she was sure it would blister her skin through her shirt. She pressed her hand against it and felt the stone vibrate beneath her palm, its rhythm erratic now — a heartbeat skipping, stuttering, trying to keep pace with something that had no rhythm at all. Rory looked at the stone in front of her. The crack hadn't reopened. The surface was smooth and ancient and unmarked. But the breath had come from it. Through it. From whatever lay between here and wherever here led. The wildflowers on her left turned their heads again. Then the ones on her right. Then all of them, every white bloom in the clearing, swivelling on their stems with a sound like cracking knuckles to face the stone from which the breath had come. Rory stood in the centre of the ring, surrounded by flowers that watched her, beneath a sky that didn't move, holding a pendant that burned against her chest like a coal, and she understood with a clarity that cut through every layer of denial she'd built that she had not come here by accident. She had not wandered into Richmond Park and stumbled upon a pocket of Fae-touched earth by chance. Something had brought her. Something had drawn her to this clearing, to this moment, to the centre of the ring where the soil was warm and the time was wrong and the shadows didn't belong to the people who cast them. And it was still here. Somewhere between the stones. Somewhere just beyond the places she could see. Waiting. The pendant pulsed again — once, hard — and the air inside the ring went completely still. No breath. No sound. No movement. Just the waiting. And Rory, alone in its centre, not moving, not running, her hand pressed against the Heartstone as it burned and burned and refused to stop.
created_at"2026-03-11T22:32:21.526Z" 3/11/2026, 10:32:21 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1644
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"perfectly"
2"very"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1644
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"resonance"
count1
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count4
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"resonance"
2"vibrated"
3"flickered"
4"pulsed"
5"throb"
6"warmth"
7"traced"
8"flicker"
9"could feel"
10"stomach"
11"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences153
filterMatches
0"listen"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1670
ratio0.001
matches
0"Shifted"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1667
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Yu-Fei1
Silas1
Heartstone2
Rory10
Fae-touched1
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like joints"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.599
wordCount1670
matches
0"not the warm glow of the pendant but something cold"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"built that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean32.75
std24.32
cv0.743
sampleLengths
08
142
252
352
475
56
63
743
85
948
1056
116
123
1344
1450
1531
168
1744
1850
195
204
2172
224
2365
2448
2544
2660
276
2817
292
3036
3156
326
333
344
3540
3659
377
3868
3929
406
4187
4251
4339
4445
4571
4641
4718
4823
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
75.62% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs268
matches
0"was making"
1"was struggling"
2"was breathing"
3"was burning"
4"was screaming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount26
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences17
totalSentences153
ratio0.111
matches
0"Rory had seen them twice before — once in full afternoon sun, once at dusk when the park still hummed with dog walkers and joggers — and both times they'd seemed like nothing more than ancient weathered pillars."
1"She touched it through her jacket — the silver chain cool against her fingers, the gemstone itself radiating a heat that had no business being there."
2"She felt it on her face — still air, sharp with frost — but the flowers moved anyway."
3"Then something else — a low resonance, felt more than heard, that seemed to come from the stones themselves."
4"*Shifted* — rearranging itself into patterns that her eye wanted to follow but her mind refused to parse."
5"The shape was wrong — her brain was making associations where none existed — but she couldn't stop seeing it."
6"It was the sound of a door closing — the soft click of a latch engaging — except there were no doors."
7"She stood in the centre and tracked it — left, then right, then behind her, then left again — each click sharper than the last, the latch mechanism growing louder as if whatever held it was struggling to stay shut."
8"Her boot pressed into soil that was too soft — too warm — like the ground itself was breathing beneath her."
9"A brief, fierce warmth that made her gasp, and the crimson stone blazed with its inner light — brighter than it had ever glowed, bright enough to cast her shadow against the nearest standing stone."
10"For the space of a breath — maybe less — there had been a shape at the edge of the pendant's light."
11"The static crawled across the display, and in its flicker, the screen showed something else — a camera feed, her own face caught in her phone's front lens, white-eyed and slack-jawed and looking at something directly behind her right shoulder."
12"A hairline fracture split its surface from top to bottom, and from within the fissure, light bled out — not the warm glow of the pendant but something cold."
13"The third sound — the door closing — came from the stone directly in front of her."
14"It smelled of petrichor and ozone and something underneath both that Rory couldn't name — something that made her stomach drop and the hair along her forearms stand upright."
15"She pressed her hand against it and felt the stone vibrate beneath her palm, its rhythm erratic now — a heartbeat skipping, stuttering, trying to keep pace with something that had no rhythm at all."
16"The pendant pulsed again — once, hard — and the air inside the ring went completely still."
94.14% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1649
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount77
adverbRatio0.046694966646452396
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.004244996967859308
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean10.92
std10.6
cv0.971
sampleLengths
08
138
21
33
423
52
627
74
82
96
1014
1126
1212
1326
147
1519
162
179
186
193
204
2118
2221
233
242
253
2612
2719
2814
293
3015
316
322
332
3418
3510
364
372
383
396
404
414
4230
433
442
453
4620
4722
486
493
36.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.29411764705882354
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences120
matches
0"Just a small cardboard box"
1"Then something else — a"
2"Then 3:22 AM."
3"Then 1:47 AM again."
4"Then the ones on her"
5"Then all of them, every"
6"Somewhere between the stones."
7"Somewhere just beyond the places"
8"Just the waiting."
ratio0.075
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences120
matches
0"She stood in the centre"
1"She checked her phone."
2"She'd entered Richmond Park around"
3"She touched it through her"
4"She'd worn it every night"
5"She hadn't told anyone about"
6"She felt it on her"
7"Her own breathing."
8"It vibrated in her chest,"
9"She turned slowly."
10"Her phone screen flickered."
11"She looked at the time"
12"They were flowers."
13"She knew that."
14"She forced herself to look"
15"It was the sound of"
16"She traced the crescent shape"
17"She stood in the centre"
18"They blackened from the stem"
19"It hovered, catching the starlight,"
ratio0.3
89.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences120
matches
0"The standing stones looked wrong"
1"Rory had seen them twice"
2"She stood in the centre"
3"She checked her phone."
4"She'd entered Richmond Park around"
5"The walk to this part"
6"The pendant rested against her"
7"She touched it through her"
8"She'd worn it every night"
9"She hadn't told anyone about"
10"The wildflowers swayed."
11"She felt it on her"
12"A ripple passed through them"
13"Rory didn't move."
14"Her own breathing."
15"The distant hum of traffic"
16"It vibrated in her chest,"
17"She turned slowly."
18"The nearest standing stone was"
19"Her phone screen flickered."
ratio0.742
41.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"Now, alone in a clearing"
ratio0.008
7.39% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Now, alone in a clearing she shouldn't have been able to find, the oaks around her formed a ring that felt too deliberate."
1"She stood in the centre where the wildflowers grew despite it being mid-November, their petals catching starlight in pale white clusters that shouldn't have exi…"
2"She touched it through her jacket — the silver chain cool against her fingers, the gemstone itself radiating a heat that had no business being there."
3"She stood in the centre and tracked it — left, then right, then behind her, then left again — each click sharper than the last, the latch mechanism growing loud…"
4"Her boot pressed into soil that was too soft — too warm — like the ground itself was breathing beneath her."
5"A brief, fierce warmth that made her gasp, and the crimson stone blazed with its inner light — brighter than it had ever glowed, bright enough to cast her shado…"
6"The wildflowers that hadn't wilted still faced her with their pale faces, and beyond them the ring of stones circled like teeth in an open jaw."
7"It smelled of petrichor and ozone and something underneath both that Rory couldn't name — something that made her stomach drop and the hair along her forearms s…"
8"It pushed them flat against the ground as it rolled toward her, carrying with it a chill that found the gap between her jacket and her collar and settled agains…"
9"She pressed her hand against it and felt the stone vibrate beneath her palm, its rhythm erratic now — a heartbeat skipping, stuttering, trying to keep pace with…"
10"Rory stood in the centre of the ring, surrounded by flowers that watched her, beneath a sky that didn't move, holding a pendant that burned against her chest li…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.0349%