| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.79% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1644 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1644 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "resonance" | | 2 | "vibrated" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 153 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 153 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1670 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1667 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.6 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 10 | | Fae-touched | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.599 | | wordCount | 1670 | | matches | | 0 | "not the warm glow of the pendant but something cold" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 32.75 | | std | 24.32 | | cv | 0.743 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 72 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 65 | | 24 | 48 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 60 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 56 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 40 | | 36 | 59 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 68 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 87 | | 42 | 51 | | 43 | 39 | | 44 | 45 | | 45 | 71 | | 46 | 41 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.62% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 268 | | matches | | 0 | "was making" | | 1 | "was struggling" | | 2 | "was breathing" | | 3 | "was burning" | | 4 | "was screaming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 26 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 153 | | ratio | 0.111 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had seen them twice before — once in full afternoon sun, once at dusk when the park still hummed with dog walkers and joggers — and both times they'd seemed like nothing more than ancient weathered pillars." | | 1 | "She touched it through her jacket — the silver chain cool against her fingers, the gemstone itself radiating a heat that had no business being there." | | 2 | "She felt it on her face — still air, sharp with frost — but the flowers moved anyway." | | 3 | "Then something else — a low resonance, felt more than heard, that seemed to come from the stones themselves." | | 4 | "*Shifted* — rearranging itself into patterns that her eye wanted to follow but her mind refused to parse." | | 5 | "The shape was wrong — her brain was making associations where none existed — but she couldn't stop seeing it." | | 6 | "It was the sound of a door closing — the soft click of a latch engaging — except there were no doors." | | 7 | "She stood in the centre and tracked it — left, then right, then behind her, then left again — each click sharper than the last, the latch mechanism growing louder as if whatever held it was struggling to stay shut." | | 8 | "Her boot pressed into soil that was too soft — too warm — like the ground itself was breathing beneath her." | | 9 | "A brief, fierce warmth that made her gasp, and the crimson stone blazed with its inner light — brighter than it had ever glowed, bright enough to cast her shadow against the nearest standing stone." | | 10 | "For the space of a breath — maybe less — there had been a shape at the edge of the pendant's light." | | 11 | "The static crawled across the display, and in its flicker, the screen showed something else — a camera feed, her own face caught in her phone's front lens, white-eyed and slack-jawed and looking at something directly behind her right shoulder." | | 12 | "A hairline fracture split its surface from top to bottom, and from within the fissure, light bled out — not the warm glow of the pendant but something cold." | | 13 | "The third sound — the door closing — came from the stone directly in front of her." | | 14 | "It smelled of petrichor and ozone and something underneath both that Rory couldn't name — something that made her stomach drop and the hair along her forearms stand upright." | | 15 | "She pressed her hand against it and felt the stone vibrate beneath her palm, its rhythm erratic now — a heartbeat skipping, stuttering, trying to keep pace with something that had no rhythm at all." | | 16 | "The pendant pulsed again — once, hard — and the air inside the ring went completely still." |
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| 94.14% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1649 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 77 | | adverbRatio | 0.046694966646452396 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004244996967859308 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 153 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 153 | | mean | 10.92 | | std | 10.6 | | cv | 0.971 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 36.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.29411764705882354 | | totalSentences | 153 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a small cardboard box" | | 1 | "Then something else — a" | | 2 | "Then 3:22 AM." | | 3 | "Then 1:47 AM again." | | 4 | "Then the ones on her" | | 5 | "Then all of them, every" | | 6 | "Somewhere between the stones." | | 7 | "Somewhere just beyond the places" | | 8 | "Just the waiting." |
| | ratio | 0.075 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood in the centre" | | 1 | "She checked her phone." | | 2 | "She'd entered Richmond Park around" | | 3 | "She touched it through her" | | 4 | "She'd worn it every night" | | 5 | "She hadn't told anyone about" | | 6 | "She felt it on her" | | 7 | "Her own breathing." | | 8 | "It vibrated in her chest," | | 9 | "She turned slowly." | | 10 | "Her phone screen flickered." | | 11 | "She looked at the time" | | 12 | "They were flowers." | | 13 | "She knew that." | | 14 | "She forced herself to look" | | 15 | "It was the sound of" | | 16 | "She traced the crescent shape" | | 17 | "She stood in the centre" | | 18 | "They blackened from the stem" | | 19 | "It hovered, catching the starlight," |
| | ratio | 0.3 | |
| 89.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones looked wrong" | | 1 | "Rory had seen them twice" | | 2 | "She stood in the centre" | | 3 | "She checked her phone." | | 4 | "She'd entered Richmond Park around" | | 5 | "The walk to this part" | | 6 | "The pendant rested against her" | | 7 | "She touched it through her" | | 8 | "She'd worn it every night" | | 9 | "She hadn't told anyone about" | | 10 | "The wildflowers swayed." | | 11 | "She felt it on her" | | 12 | "A ripple passed through them" | | 13 | "Rory didn't move." | | 14 | "Her own breathing." | | 15 | "The distant hum of traffic" | | 16 | "It vibrated in her chest," | | 17 | "She turned slowly." | | 18 | "The nearest standing stone was" | | 19 | "Her phone screen flickered." |
| | ratio | 0.742 | |
| 41.67% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, alone in a clearing" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 7.39% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, alone in a clearing she shouldn't have been able to find, the oaks around her formed a ring that felt too deliberate." | | 1 | "She stood in the centre where the wildflowers grew despite it being mid-November, their petals catching starlight in pale white clusters that shouldn't have exi…" | | 2 | "She touched it through her jacket — the silver chain cool against her fingers, the gemstone itself radiating a heat that had no business being there." | | 3 | "She stood in the centre and tracked it — left, then right, then behind her, then left again — each click sharper than the last, the latch mechanism growing loud…" | | 4 | "Her boot pressed into soil that was too soft — too warm — like the ground itself was breathing beneath her." | | 5 | "A brief, fierce warmth that made her gasp, and the crimson stone blazed with its inner light — brighter than it had ever glowed, bright enough to cast her shado…" | | 6 | "The wildflowers that hadn't wilted still faced her with their pale faces, and beyond them the ring of stones circled like teeth in an open jaw." | | 7 | "It smelled of petrichor and ozone and something underneath both that Rory couldn't name — something that made her stomach drop and the hair along her forearms s…" | | 8 | "It pushed them flat against the ground as it rolled toward her, carrying with it a chill that found the gap between her jacket and her collar and settled agains…" | | 9 | "She pressed her hand against it and felt the stone vibrate beneath her palm, its rhythm erratic now — a heartbeat skipping, stuttering, trying to keep pace with…" | | 10 | "Rory stood in the centre of the ring, surrounded by flowers that watched her, beneath a sky that didn't move, holding a pendant that burned against her chest li…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |