Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFGH6XRSGB7B0REX6FW3H02

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came sideways, cutting through the sodium glow of Soho's streetlamps like razors. Harlow Quinn pulled her collar tight and crossed Wardour Street against the light, her worn leather watch catching the glare of a passing cab. Fourteen minutes past eleven. She'd been standing across from The Raven's Nest for two hours, nursing a coffee gone cold in a paper cup, watching the green neon sign buzz and flicker above the entrance. Then the door opened, and Tomás Herrera stepped out. He wore a dark jacket with the collar turned up, hands shoved deep into his pockets, the Saint Christopher medallion glinting against his olive skin as the neon caught it. He glanced left, then right—the furtive sweep of a man who didn't want to be followed. Quinn set the cup on the windowsill behind her and stepped into the rain. Herrera moved fast. He cut down Dean Street, boots slapping through puddles that reflected the city in shattered pieces. Quinn matched his pace, keeping thirty metres between them. She'd shadowed enough runners to know the rhythm—the slight hesitation before a corner, the way shoulders tightened when they sensed eyes on their back. Herrera had neither. He moved like a man with a destination, not like a man being chased. He didn't know she was there. Not yet. He turned onto Old Compton Street, then north toward Cambridge Circus. The crowds thinned with every block. Quinn closed the distance to twenty metres. Her lungs burned from the cold air, but her stride stayed even, measured. Military precision. Eighteen years on the force had taught her legs to keep moving long after her body begged to stop. Herrera cut through a narrow alley between two buildings, ducking under a fire escape that dripped rust-coloured water. Quinn followed, pressing her back against the brick wall as she rounded the corner. He was faster than she'd expected. The scar on his left forearm—healed from some knife attack she hadn't found in any police report—flashed pale as he pushed off a dumpster to vault a chain-link fence. "Metropolitan Police!" she shouted. Her voice cracked against the wet brick. "Stop!" He stopped. For one breathless second, he turned. Their eyes met—his warm brown, hers hard and dark. Recognition flickered across his face. He knew her. She'd visited the Nest three times in the past month, asking questions, rattling cages. Herrera had been there each time, pouring drinks behind the bar with those careful hands, pretending not to listen. Then he ran. Quinn grabbed the top of the fence and hauled herself over, her jacket snagging on a bent prong. She ripped free and hit the ground running. Herrera had thirty metres on her now, cutting through a construction site where yellow tape fluttered like prayer flags. He moved through the darkness with the ease of someone who'd memorised every obstacle, every loose board, every pit of standing water. She didn't have that advantage. Her foot plunged into a pothole hidden beneath a sheet of rain, and cold water flooded her boot. She staggered, caught herself, pushed on. Her watchband had come loose; she felt it slap against her wrist with each stride. Herrera burst out the far side of the construction site and turned north again. Camden. The name surfaced in Quinn's mind like a bubble of oil. The reports she'd read—the ones her superiors had stamped CLASSIFIED and locked in a drawer—mentioned Camden in connection with DS Morris. Her partner. Three years dead and still the case that kept her awake at three in the morning, staring at the ceiling, replaying his last phone call. The one where he'd said he was close to something. The one where his voice had gone thin and strange, like he was whispering from the bottom of a well. She pushed the memory down and ran harder. The streets narrowed. The buildings leaned in, their upper stories nearly touching overhead, turning the road into a tunnel of wet brick and flickering light. Herrera reached Camden High Street and sprinted past the closed market stalls, their metal shutters gleaming in the rain. He ducked left, down a side street, and vanished. Quinn rounded the corner and skidded to a stop. A dead end. A wall of corrugated iron, slick with rain, rose three metres high. No door, no gap, no way through. Herrera was gone. She stood there, chest heaving, rain running down her face and into her collar. Her fingers found the loose watchband and tightened it. She scanned the alley. Dumpster on the left. A tangle of electrical conduit on the right. Nothing. No fire escape, no ladder, no— Her flashlight beam caught the ground. Wet concrete, cracked and uneven. But there—fresh footprints, deeper on one side where someone had planted hard and pushed forward. And beyond them, a patch of ground that didn't match. The concrete looked older, darker, worn smooth by a thousand passing feet. And in its centre, a circular depression the size of a manhole cover. Quinn crouched. Her knees protested. She ran her fingers along the edge of the depression and felt a seam—not a maintenance hatch, but something deliberate, something that had been cut and fitted with precision. A handle, recessed into the concrete, waited for a hand to grip it. She pulled. The slab rose with a whisper of well-oiled mechanism, revealing a staircase that dropped into the earth. Warm air rushed up, carrying scents that had no business existing together—sulphur, jasmine, blood, cinnamon. The stairs were lit from below by a sickly amber glow, and the sound of voices drifted up, murmuring and strange, like a conversation heard through water. Quinn straightened. Her hand went to her radio, then stopped. She'd gone off-book tonight. No dispatcher knew her location. No backup waited around the corner. If she called this in—if she told control that a suspect had fled into what appeared to be an underground chamber beneath Camden—she'd be explaining herself to Internal Affairs for the next six months. If she went down those stairs alone, she might not come back up. The amber light pulsed. A laugh echoed from below—high and musical and wrong, the way a music box sounds when its mechanism starts to wind down. She thought of Morris. The last case file she'd read before they'd locked it away. The witness statements that described impossible things—wounds that healed in minutes, doors that opened into rooms that shouldn't exist, a market that moved with the moon. Her superiors had dismissed it as hysteria. Quinn hadn't. Herrera knew something about Morris. About all of it. And he'd just disappeared into whatever waited at the bottom of those stairs. Quinn drew her service weapon. Checked the chamber. The click of the slide echoed down the staircase, and the murmuring below went silent. She descended. The stairs spiralled. Twenty steps, then thirty. The air grew warmer, thicker, saturated with the overlapping stenches of the underground. Her boots found each tread with care, her left hand trailing along the curved wall. The plaster was damp and soft beneath her fingertips, and she pulled her hand back with a grimace. Somewhere below, a bell rang—a single, clear note that hung in the air like a held breath. The staircase opened into a platform. An abandoned Tube station, by the look of it—the old tile work, the arched ceiling, the rusted tracks disappearing into tunnels on either side. But someone had transformed it. The platform stretched wide, packed with stalls and carts and blankets spread across the concrete, all of them laden with goods that defied easy categorisation: glass jars filled with luminescent fluid, bundles of dried herbs that twitched in a draftless air, books bound in leather that looked too organic, too textured, too pale to be animal. People moved through the stalls—too many of them, too varied, pressed together in a space that should have felt cramped but didn't. Some looked human. Others didn't. A woman with eyes like polished amber examined a necklace of black teeth. Two figures wrapped in grey robes exchanged a pouch of something that clinked like bone dice. A child—or something shaped like a child—sat on the edge of the platform, swinging bare feet above the tracks, humming a tune Quinn half-recognised. She stepped off the last stair and onto the platform. Her weapon stayed low at her side, hidden beneath the hem of her jacket. No one looked at her. No one stopped. But the air changed—a subtle shift in pressure, a tightening around her ribs—as if the market itself had noted her presence and filed it away. Quinn moved through the stalls. Her eyes swept the crowd, searching for Herrera's dark jacket, his short curly hair, the flash of his medallion. She passed a stall where a man with hands like tree roots sold hourglasses filled with sand that ran upward. She sidestepped a puddle of something viscous and iridescent on the platform floor. The voices around her spoke in languages she didn't recognise—or did, but wrong, the words bent and reshaped into something that tugged at the edges of her understanding. There. Twenty metres ahead. Herrera's back, his dark jacket, the medallion catching the amber light. He moved with purpose, nodding to vendors who greeted him by name, slipping between stalls like water through fingers. He was heading for the far end of the platform, where the tunnels swallowed the light. Quinn quickened her pace. Her shoulder clipped a stall, and jars rattled. A vendor hissed at her—a sound more snake than human—and she muttered an apology without slowing. Herrera reached the tunnel mouth. He paused, glanced back one final time, and their eyes met across the crowded platform. His face showed something she hadn't expected: not fear, not anger, but pity. His lips moved, forming a word she couldn't hear over the market's roar. Then he stepped into the darkness and was gone. Quinn broke into a run. Stalls erupted in chaos around her. A tray of glass vials shattered on the ground, releasing a cloud of violet smoke that stung her eyes. Voices shouted—some in alarm, some in outrage, some in languages that sounded like breaking glass. She vaulted a crate of writhing eels, landed hard on the platform, and sprinted toward the tunnel. A hand caught her arm. She spun, weapon up, finger on the trigger. The figure facing her wore a coat stitched from mismatched scraps of fabric—silk, denim, leather, something that shimmered like fish scales. Their face was hidden behind a porcelain mask, cracked down the centre and repaired with gold lacquer. Their grip on her forearm was iron. "You don't have a token," the figure said. The voice was low, androgynous, precise. Not a question. "I'm police," Quinn said. Her chest heaved. Rain still dripped from her hair onto the platform floor. "Let go." "Police." The word tasted strange in the figure's mouth, as if they were chewing on an unfamiliar fruit. "That means nothing here. You entered without invitation. You carry iron and steel. And you do not have a token." "I don't need a—" "Every soul in this market carries a bone token. Entry requires it. You have none." The mask tilted. "How did you find the entrance?" The question hung in the air. Quinn's mind raced. The market, the bone token, the rules she didn't know—the file on Morris had mentioned all of it, in fragments, in half-legible notes scrawled in his handwriting in the margins of case reports. He'd been here. He'd known the rules. And he'd died anyway. "I followed a suspect," she said. "Ah." The figure released her arm. "The paramedic. Herrera. He comes here often. He belongs here in ways you do not." "I'm going after him." "You'll die going after him. Not in the tunnels. Not from anything that lives in them." The mask moved closer. "But this market doesn't tolerate uninvited guests. The last one who came without a token was found in three different Tube stations. On three different days. Still alive. Still screaming." The violet smoke from the shattered vials had cleared. Around them, the market had resumed its business, but Quinn felt the weight of watching eyes. Dozens of them. Some human, some not. All focused on her. The figure reached into their patchwork coat and produced something small and pale. A bone token. Not large—no bigger than a silver coin—but carved with symbols that seemed to shift when Quinn tried to focus on them. The figure held it out on an open palm. "Take it," they said. "And I'll take you to Herrera." Quinn stared at the token. It rested in the figure's palm like an eye, white and unblinking. Beyond them, the tunnel mouth yawned, dark and patient. Somewhere in its throat, Herrera was moving further away with every second she wasted. "What do you want?" Quinn asked. "Nothing you'd miss." "That's not an answer." The mask tilted again. "You want your paramedic. I want a conversation. There are things happening in your world—your surface world—that interest me. A detective with eighteen years of service. A partner who died under circumstances your reports don't explain. A woman who stands in the rain for two hours outside a bar she doesn't understand, watching for a man she only half-suspects." The cracked porcelain gleamed. "I think we can help each other." The token waited. The tunnel waited. The rain, far above, drummed on the streets of a city that knew nothing about the market beneath its feet. Quinn looked at the bone token. She looked at the tunnel. She looked at the figure in the patchwork coat, and behind the cracked mask, she sensed a smile. Her fingers closed around the token. It was warm.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.478
leniency0.957
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2323
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2323
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count3
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"fluttered"
count1
6
word"gleaming"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count2
11
word"quickened"
count1
12
word"silk"
count1
13
word"shimmered"
count1
14
word"porcelain"
count2
15
word"raced"
count1
16
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"glinting"
2"shattered"
3"measured"
4"flickered"
5"fluttered"
6"gleaming"
7"scanned"
8"whisper"
9"pulsed"
10"echoed"
11"quickened"
12"silk"
13"shimmered"
14"porcelain"
15"raced"
16"weight"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences195
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences195
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"starts to"
2"seemed to"
3"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences207
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2292
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount2079
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Quinn23
Wardour1
Street4
Raven1
Nest2
Tomás1
Herrera14
Saint1
Christopher1
Dean1
Old1
Compton1
Cambridge1
Circus1
Camden4
Morris4
High1
Internal1
Affairs1
Tube1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Wardour"
2"Street"
3"Raven"
4"Dean"
5"Old"
6"Compton"
7"Cambridge"
8"Camden"
9"High"
10"Internal"
globalScore0.947
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences122
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like breaking glass"
1"symbols that seemed to shift when Quinn tried to focus on them"
69.11% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.309
wordCount2292
matches
0"not a maintenance hatch, but something deliberate, something"
1"not fear, not anger, but pity"
2"not anger, but pity"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences207
matches
0"have that advantage"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean37.57
std25.52
cv0.679
sampleLengths
073
19
260
377
458
567
612
758
83
967
1044
1174
1230
138
1453
159
1625
1746
1861
1947
202
2159
2259
2313
2426
2550
2622
2723
282
2970
3091
3180
3257
3385
3450
3528
3655
3762
385
3953
4017
4119
4238
434
4424
4553
466
4721
484
4950
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences195
matches
0"being chased"
1"was gone"
2"were lit"
3"was gone"
4"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs371
matches
0"was whispering"
1"was heading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount30
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences24
totalSentences207
ratio0.116
matches
0"He glanced left, then right—the furtive sweep of a man who didn't want to be followed."
1"She'd shadowed enough runners to know the rhythm—the slight hesitation before a corner, the way shoulders tightened when they sensed eyes on their back."
2"The scar on his left forearm—healed from some knife attack she hadn't found in any police report—flashed pale as he pushed off a dumpster to vault a chain-link fence."
3"Their eyes met—his warm brown, hers hard and dark."
4"Her watchband had come loose; she felt it slap against her wrist with each stride."
5"The reports she'd read—the ones her superiors had stamped CLASSIFIED and locked in a drawer—mentioned Camden in connection with DS Morris."
6"No fire escape, no ladder, no—"
7"But there—fresh footprints, deeper on one side where someone had planted hard and pushed forward."
8"She ran her fingers along the edge of the depression and felt a seam—not a maintenance hatch, but something deliberate, something that had been cut and fitted with precision."
9"Warm air rushed up, carrying scents that had no business existing together—sulphur, jasmine, blood, cinnamon."
10"If she called this in—if she told control that a suspect had fled into what appeared to be an underground chamber beneath Camden—she'd be explaining herself to Internal Affairs for the next six months."
11"A laugh echoed from below—high and musical and wrong, the way a music box sounds when its mechanism starts to wind down."
12"The witness statements that described impossible things—wounds that healed in minutes, doors that opened into rooms that shouldn't exist, a market that moved with the moon."
13"Somewhere below, a bell rang—a single, clear note that hung in the air like a held breath."
14"An abandoned Tube station, by the look of it—the old tile work, the arched ceiling, the rusted tracks disappearing into tunnels on either side."
15"People moved through the stalls—too many of them, too varied, pressed together in a space that should have felt cramped but didn't."
16"A child—or something shaped like a child—sat on the edge of the platform, swinging bare feet above the tracks, humming a tune Quinn half-recognised."
17"But the air changed—a subtle shift in pressure, a tightening around her ribs—as if the market itself had noted her presence and filed it away."
18"The voices around her spoke in languages she didn't recognise—or did, but wrong, the words bent and reshaped into something that tugged at the edges of her understanding."
19"A vendor hissed at her—a sound more snake than human—and she muttered an apology without slowing."
20"Voices shouted—some in alarm, some in outrage, some in languages that sounded like breaking glass."
21"The figure facing her wore a coat stitched from mismatched scraps of fabric—silk, denim, leather, something that shimmered like fish scales."
22"The market, the bone token, the rules she didn't know—the file on Morris had mentioned all of it, in fragments, in half-legible notes scrawled in his handwriting in the margins of case reports."
23"Not large—no bigger than a silver coin—but carved with symbols that seemed to shift when Quinn tried to focus on them."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2114
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.01892147587511826
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0014191106906338694
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences207
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences207
mean11.07
std9.01
cv0.814
sampleLengths
014
124
24
331
49
530
616
714
83
916
109
1124
123
1314
146
152
1611
176
187
1913
202
2119
2218
2314
246
2529
264
277
281
292
306
319
325
333
3414
3519
363
3718
388
3919
4022
415
4218
436
4415
4514
461
4711
4821
492
41.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.2753623188405797
totalSentences207
uniqueOpeners57
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences177
matches
0"Then the door opened, and"
1"Then he ran."
2"Somewhere below, a bell rang—a"
3"Then he stepped into the"
4"All focused on her."
5"Somewhere in its throat, Herrera"
ratio0.034
93.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences177
matches
0"She'd been standing across from"
1"He wore a dark jacket"
2"He glanced left, then right—the"
3"He cut down Dean Street,"
4"She'd shadowed enough runners to"
5"He moved like a man"
6"He didn't know she was"
7"He turned onto Old Compton"
8"Her lungs burned from the"
9"He was faster than she'd"
10"Her voice cracked against the"
11"Their eyes met—his warm brown,"
12"He knew her."
13"She'd visited the Nest three"
14"She ripped free and hit"
15"He moved through the darkness"
16"She didn't have that advantage."
17"Her foot plunged into a"
18"She staggered, caught herself, pushed"
19"Her watchband had come loose;"
ratio0.316
64.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount140
totalSentences177
matches
0"The rain came sideways, cutting"
1"Harlow Quinn pulled her collar"
2"She'd been standing across from"
3"He wore a dark jacket"
4"He glanced left, then right—the"
5"Quinn set the cup on"
6"Herrera moved fast."
7"He cut down Dean Street,"
8"Quinn matched his pace, keeping"
9"She'd shadowed enough runners to"
10"Herrera had neither."
11"He moved like a man"
12"He didn't know she was"
13"He turned onto Old Compton"
14"The crowds thinned with every"
15"Quinn closed the distance to"
16"Her lungs burned from the"
17"Herrera cut through a narrow"
18"Quinn followed, pressing her back"
19"He was faster than she'd"
ratio0.791
56.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences177
matches
0"If she called this in—if"
1"If she went down those"
ratio0.011
27.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences87
technicalSentenceCount14
matches
0"He cut down Dean Street, boots slapping through puddles that reflected the city in shattered pieces."
1"Herrera cut through a narrow alley between two buildings, ducking under a fire escape that dripped rust-coloured water."
2"Three years dead and still the case that kept her awake at three in the morning, staring at the ceiling, replaying his last phone call."
3"She ran her fingers along the edge of the depression and felt a seam—not a maintenance hatch, but something deliberate, something that had been cut and fitted w…"
4"The slab rose with a whisper of well-oiled mechanism, revealing a staircase that dropped into the earth."
5"Warm air rushed up, carrying scents that had no business existing together—sulphur, jasmine, blood, cinnamon."
6"The witness statements that described impossible things—wounds that healed in minutes, doors that opened into rooms that shouldn't exist, a market that moved wi…"
7"Somewhere below, a bell rang—a single, clear note that hung in the air like a held breath."
8"The platform stretched wide, packed with stalls and carts and blankets spread across the concrete, all of them laden with goods that defied easy categorisation:…"
9"People moved through the stalls—too many of them, too varied, pressed together in a space that should have felt cramped but didn't."
10"The voices around her spoke in languages she didn't recognise—or did, but wrong, the words bent and reshaped into something that tugged at the edges of her unde…"
11"He moved with purpose, nodding to vendors who greeted him by name, slipping between stalls like water through fingers."
12"A tray of glass vials shattered on the ground, releasing a cloud of violet smoke that stung her eyes."
13"The figure facing her wore a coat stitched from mismatched scraps of fabric—silk, denim, leather, something that shimmered like fish scales."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"The word tasted, as if they were chewing on an unfamiliar fruit"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.261
leniency0.522
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.087
84.4468%