Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFGMC7XX11H4F7RARX1V3MC

Run Details

Duration:
25.1s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Nvidia

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Quinn stepped onto the damp concrete of the abandoned platform, her boots striking a hollow rhythm that bounced off the tiled walls. The air smelled of oil and rust, tinged with something sweet like burnt sugar. Flickering bulbs cast long shadows over makeshift stalls draped in black cloth, each one humming with a low, barely audible thrum. A Veil Market stall lay overturned nearby, its brass compass half buried in grit. Eva knelt beside a crumpled form, her round glasses catching the dim light as she traced a finger over a sigil etched into the victim’s forehead. She wore her worn leather satchel open, spilling onto the ground a tangle of parchment and crystal shards. Quinn crouched opposite, her sharp jaw tightening as she examined the scene. The body lay on its side, arms folded neatly across the chest, no sign of struggle. No blood pooled beneath the torso, only a thin film of dark liquid that seemed to absorb the light rather than reflect it. Around the neck hung a thin cord of black silk, knotted in a complex loop that resembled a Celtic knot but with extra twists. Eva’s voice broke the silence, soft but certain. “The markings are a binding sigil, used to seal a rift. Whoever performed this tried to keep something from crossing over.” Quinn’s eyes flicked to the Veil Compass half buried in the dirt. Its brass casing wore a patina of verdigris, the needle trembling slightly before settling toward a point on the far wall where a crack in the tile widened into a jagged seam. She reached out, gloved hand hovering over the compass, feeling a faint vibration through the metal. “Look at the cord,” she said, her tone flat, no inflection. “It’s not silk. It’s polymer, the kind used in fishing line. Someone chose it for strength, not symbolism.” Eva lifted her head, freckles catching the glow of a nearby lantern. “It could still be ritualistic. Practitioners often substitute materials when the authentic item is unavailable.” Quinn shook her head once, a quick motion that sent a few loose strands of salt‑and‑pepper hair falling over her brow. She pointed to the floor where a fine powder dusted the stones in a irregular crescent. “Salt. But it’s not the coarse grain used for protection. It’s table salt, iodized, the kind you find in a kitchen pantry. And it’s only on the left side of the body, as if someone sprinkled it in a hurry.” Eva’s brows furrowed. “Perhaps the caster was interrupted.” Quinn’s gaze moved to the stall’s overturned canopy. Beneath the torn fabric lay a crate stamped with a faded logo—a shipping company that handled imports through the Thames Dock. Inside the crate, nestled among straw, sat a set of copper vials, each sealed with wax bearing the imprint of a stylized eye. “These aren’t alchemical reagents,” Quinn said. “They’re industrial solvents, used to clean metal parts. The wax seal matches the crest of a firm that was shut down last year for illegal dumping.” Eva inhaled sharply, the scent of the solvents cutting through the sweet undertone. “So you’re saying the scene is staged?” Quinn rose, her military bearing evident in the straight line of her spine. “The body shows no trauma, no defensive wounds. The ligature is synthetic, the salt is kitchen grade, the sigil is drawn with a marker, not etched. Someone wanted it to look like a supernatural kill, but the details point to a human hand trying to mimic the occult.” She stepped closer to the crack in the wall, the Veil Compass needle now locked on the fissure, quivering as if pulled by an invisible force. “The rift isn’t here. The compass reacts to residual energy, not an active portal. Someone leaked a bit of that energy—maybe from a stolen artifact—into the market to create a false reading. Then they planted the body to divert attention.” Eva’s fingers tightened around the edge of her satchel. “Who would benefit from that?” Quinn’s eyes narrowed, the brown depths reflecting the harsh light. “Anyone who wants the market to stay hidden. If the authorities think a supernatural horror struck here, they’ll shut down the area, sweep it clean, and the real operators can move their goods without interference.” A low groan echoed from the tunnel beyond, the sound of a distant train on the active line far above, vibrating through the earth. Quinn turned her head toward the noise, listening, then faced Eva once more. “Check the shipping manifests for the dock,” she instructed. “Look for any recent consignments of rare metals or contraband that vanished after the market’s last appearance. The killer left a trail in the paperwork, not in the blood.” Eva nodded, already flipping open a notebook tucked in her satchel, her pen poised. The market’s lanterns sputtered, casting a strobe of light over the scene as the two women moved—Quinn scanning the walls for hidden seams, Eva noting every symbol, every stray fiber—each action a step toward the truth that lay beneath the pretense of magic.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount847
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount847
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"tinged"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"crystal"
count1
4
word"silk"
count2
5
word"complex"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"furrowed"
count1
9
word"synthetic"
count1
10
word"depths"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"tinged"
1"traced"
2"etched"
3"crystal"
4"silk"
5"complex"
6"silence"
7"flicked"
8"furrowed"
9"synthetic"
10"depths"
11"echoed"
12"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences33
matches(empty)
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences33
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences45
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords842
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
57.06% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount538
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.86
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Veil3
Market1
Celtic1
Compass2
Eva9
Thames1
Dock1
Quinn10
persons
0"Compass"
1"Eva"
2"Quinn"
places
0"Veil"
1"Thames"
globalScore0.571
windowScore0.667
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"liquid that seemed to absorb the light rather than reflect it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount842
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
87.61% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean44.32
std20.24
cv0.457
sampleLengths
071
144
275
329
460
529
627
777
88
952
1032
1120
1261
1366
1414
1545
1637
1738
1857
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs86
matches(empty)
15.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences45
ratio0.044
matches
0"Beneath the torn fabric lay a crate stamped with a faded logo—a shipping company that handled imports through the Thames Dock."
1"The market’s lanterns sputtered, casting a strobe of light over the scene as the two women moved—Quinn scanning the walls for hidden seams, Eva noting every symbol, every stray fiber—each action a step toward the truth that lay beneath the pretense of magic."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount541
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay overturned nearby, its"
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.025878003696857672
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.009242144177449169
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences45
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences45
mean18.71
std10.54
cv0.563
sampleLengths
022
114
221
314
426
518
612
716
823
924
108
1121
1212
1332
1416
1511
1618
1712
1815
1921
2016
2140
223
235
248
2521
2623
276
2826
2913
307
3113
3248
3326
3440
359
365
3710
3835
3924
4013
419
4229
4314
4443
77.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4666666666666667
totalSentences45
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences31
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences31
matches
0"She wore her worn leather"
1"Its brass casing wore a"
2"She reached out, gloved hand"
3"she said, her tone flat,"
4"She pointed to the floor"
5"She stepped closer to the"
ratio0.194
40.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount26
totalSentences31
matches
0"Quinn stepped onto the damp"
1"The air smelled of oil"
2"A Veil Market stall lay"
3"Eva knelt beside a crumpled"
4"She wore her worn leather"
5"Quinn crouched opposite, her sharp"
6"The body lay on its"
7"Eva’s voice broke the silence,"
8"Quinn’s eyes flicked to the"
9"Its brass casing wore a"
10"She reached out, gloved hand"
11"she said, her tone flat,"
12"Eva lifted her head, freckles"
13"Quinn shook her head once,"
14"She pointed to the floor"
15"Eva’s brows furrowed."
16"Quinn’s gaze moved to the"
17"Eva inhaled sharply, the scent"
18"Quinn rose, her military bearing"
19"She stepped closer to the"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences31
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Quinn stepped onto the damp concrete of the abandoned platform, her boots striking a hollow rhythm that bounced off the tiled walls."
1"Around the neck hung a thin cord of black silk, knotted in a complex loop that resembled a Celtic knot but with extra twists."
2"Its brass casing wore a patina of verdigris, the needle trembling slightly before settling toward a point on the far wall where a crack in the tile widened into…"
3"Quinn shook her head once, a quick motion that sent a few loose strands of salt‑and‑pepper hair falling over her brow."
4"She stepped closer to the crack in the wall, the Veil Compass needle now locked on the fissure, quivering as if pulled by an invisible force."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her tone flat, no inflection"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.8113%