Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFGRHNDJ0H5KNXXVYKDF5XM

Run Details

Duration:
22.2s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gravel path ended at the treeline, surrendering to moss and the soft, yielding earth of Richmond Park’s deeper wilds. Aurora checked her phone. 11:47 PM. The screen’s blue glow illuminated the scratch on her wrist, the crescent scar pale as bone. She put it away, plunging the world into a velvet blackness pricked by stars. The clearing was not on any map. It existed only in whispered coordinates from a man who’d paid her to deliver a sealed envelope to a bench nearby, then spoken of the standing stones with a reverence that bordered on fear. She’d come for the money. The curiosity was a side effect she couldn’t afford. The first thing she noticed was the silence. Not the quiet of a city park at night, which always hummed with distant traffic and the skittering of unseen life, but a thick, woolen silence that stuffed itself in her ears. The air, too, hung still and heavy, carrying a scent of crushed clover and something older, like damp stone in a sealed tomb. She stepped between two of the oak standing stones. Their bark was unnaturally smooth, worn by more than just weather. The Heartstone pendant, resting cool against her sternum, gave a single, faint pulse of warmth. A tiny beacon in the dark. It had never done that before. The clearing opened up before her, a rough circle of meadow grass that shimmered with a faint, pearlescent light, as if each blade were dipped in milk. Wildflowers—foxglove and moon-petal blooms that had no business being alive in October—nodded in a breeze she couldn’t feel. The air felt like held breath. She walked to the center, her boots making no sound on the grass. The silence pressed in, expectant. She was here to deliver a message, a drop for the man, but there was no dead drop, no bench, no parcel. Just this wrong, beautiful place. The pendant pulsed again, a slow, warm heartbeat against her collarbone. A sound. A faint, wet snap, like a green branch breaking underfoot. It came from the treeline to her left. Aurora froze, not daring to breathe. Her eyes, adjusted to the gloom, scanned the uniform wall of shadow between the oaks. Nothing moved. The silence rushed back, but it was different now. It was an alert silence. *An animal,* she thought, but the conviction was thin, a lie she told to keep her legs from turning to water. Animals in London parks were foxes and rats; they skittered and rustled. They didn’t step with such deliberate, heavy stillness between sounds. She turned, slowly, to face the direction of the noise. The Heartstone pulsed a third time, warmer now, almost hot. It was pulling her attention, not toward the trees, but downward, toward the grass at her feet. She looked down. In the unnatural glow of the meadow, she saw a line of darker grass, a perfect circle enclosing her, its radius maybe ten feet. It looked as if something had scorched it, but there was no ash, no smell of fire. Just a deep, velvety blackness in the blades, as if they had turned to shadow. Her stomach clenched. This was a boundary. She had stepped inside it. From the treeline, another sound. Not a break this time, but a scrape. Long, slow, and rhythmic. The sound of something heavy being dragged across bark. It moved from one tree to the next, a deliberate, testing sound. *Scrape… pause… scrape…* “Hello?” Her voice was a ghost, swallowed by the silence the instant it left her lips. No echo. The sound died in her throat. The scraping stopped. The silence that followed was absolute, a vacuum. It lasted three heartbeats. Then, from the *opposite* side of the grove, a whisper. It was the sound of dry leaves skittering across pavement, but there was no wind. It circled the outer edge of the standing stones, a slow, orbiting rustle. Aurora turned her head, tracking it, her neck muscles corded tight. The sound kept moving, always just out of sight, a presence she could hear but not confirm. The pendant’s heat was constant now, a feverish pulse. It wasn’t pulling her to a portal. It was reacting to one. The man’s words from the delivery, spoken in a hurry, came back to her. *“The Grove shifts. Be quick. Don’t stay past the third pulse.”* This was the third pulse. She was past it. She took a step backward, intending to retreat between the stones the way she’d come. Her foot met the blackened circle of grass. It felt different—not grass at all, but a slick, yielding surface, like the skin of a mushroom. A jolt, cold and sharp, shot up her leg. She snatched her foot back as if burned. The orbiting rustle stopped. A new sound began. It came from directly in front of her, from the treeline she now faced. It was a soft, wet, clicking noise. A clicking that came in a staggered rhythm, like a joint being forced to bend the wrong way, one vertebra at a time. *Click… click-click… click.* It grew louder. Something was coming out of the trees. Aurora backed away again, this time sideways, her eyes locked on the shifting darkness between two central oaks. The pearlescent glow of the clearing seemed to dim, concentrating itself around her, making the forest edge a deeper, more profound black. The clicking sound reached the threshold of the trees and stopped. For a moment, there was nothing. Then, a shape began to resolve itself in the gloom. It was long and low, and it moved with a disjointed, stuttering gait, like a marionette with tangled strings. It didn’t walk so much as unfold itself from the darkness, limb by limb. She couldn’t see features, only a silhouette that was wrong—too many angles, a suggestion of limbs that bent in places where joints shouldn’t be. It stopped at the edge of the clearing, its form half-absorbed by the trees. It was watching her. She knew it was watching her with an intensity that felt physical, a cold weight on her skin. The Heartstone pendant grew scorching hot, a brand against her chest. The thing in the trees made another sound. A low, rattling exhalation, like air escaping a cracked bellows. It was a sound of interest. Of hunger. Aurora’s mind, usually a calm grid of logic and quick assessments, was a wall of static. She needed to move. The stones. The exit. She forced her legs to obey, taking a shuffling step to her right, back toward the gap between the two oaks she’d entered. The silhouette in the trees jerked. A long, thin limb—it could have been an arm—unfurled and pointed, directly at her. The clicking sound resumed, faster now, a staccato chatter. She ran. She didn’t run toward the trees. She ran across the clearing, toward the opposite side, a wild, desperate gambit. The grass flashed beneath her boots. The air turned frigid, biting at her exposed skin. Behind her, the clicking sound exploded into a frantic, chattering roar. The sound of pursuit was not footsteps, but a series of wet, slapping impacts, as if dozens of hands were striking the ground in rapid succession. She risked a glance over her shoulder. The thing was out of the trees. It moved on all fours now, a grotesque crab-like scuttle, its many-jointed limbs blurring in the dim light. It was closing the distance, its form becoming more defined—a nightmare collage of stick-thin legs and a body that seemed to bend and twist in the middle. She reached the far edge of the clearing, the line of standing stones here more widely spaced. The Heartstone’s heat was agonizing now. It wasn’t a beacon. It was a warning. A siren. She plunged between two stones, her shoulder scraping against the ancient oak. The world didn’t shift. The grove didn’t release her. She was still inside the black circle. The slapping pursuit sounds were feet away. Desperation, cold and sharp, cut through her panic. The man had said the stones marked the boundary. The boundary between here and there. Not just in and out of the grove. She turned, faced the oncoming horror, and slammed her hand, palm out, against the stone beside her. The oak was cold, but beneath her skin, the stone vibrated with a deep, thrumming power. The Heartstone pendant flared, not with heat, but with a searing crimson light that lanced through the gloom, illuminating the clearing in a bloody wash. In that brief, hellish light, she saw it fully. It was a tangle of pale, sapling-thin limbs, gathered around a central mass that pulsed like a wet heart. There were no eyes, only a cavity in the front of the mass that opened and closed, revealing rows of needle-like teeth that clicked together in that awful rhythm. It recoiled from the pendant’s light, its limbs folding in on itself with a sound of cracking wood. The light faded. The darkness rushed back, but it was different now. Thinner. The sound of the grove—the whisper of unnatural grass, the distant, dead hum—began to warp, stretching like pulled taffy. The thing in front of her began to move again, slower this time, cautious. Aurora didn’t wait. She pushed off the stone, not toward the trees, but through the space between it and its neighbor. This time, her foot met solid, familiar earth. The scent of pine and distant exhaust filled her lungs. She stumbled onto the gravel path, gasping, the cold night air of London shocking her sweat-slick skin. She turned. Between the two oaks, the clearing was gone. There was only ordinary, moonlit parkland, the trees standing innocent and still. No pearlescent grass. No blackened circle. No monstrous thing. But the Heartstone pendant still burned against her skin, its inner glow fading slowly, like an ember dying. And from the direction of the park, carried on a breeze that suddenly felt malicious and knowing, she heard one last sound. A single, wet click.
created_at"2026-03-11T22:37:29.659Z" 3/11/2026, 10:37:29 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1682
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1682
totalAiIsms37
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"silence"
count7
2
word"pulse"
count4
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"beacon"
count2
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count3
7
word"gloom"
count3
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"echo"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count2
14
word"profound"
count1
15
word"resolve"
count1
16
word"intensity"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"footsteps"
count1
19
word"vibrated"
count1
20
word"searing"
count1
21
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"silence"
2"pulse"
3"warmth"
4"beacon"
5"shimmered"
6"pulsed"
7"gloom"
8"scanned"
9"perfect"
10"stomach"
11"rhythmic"
12"echo"
13"whisper"
14"profound"
15"resolve"
16"intensity"
17"weight"
18"footsteps"
19"vibrated"
20"searing"
21"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences160
matches(empty)
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences160
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences161
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords20
totalWords1673
ratio0.012
matches
0"An animal,"
1"Scrape… pause… scrape…"
2"opposite"
3"“The Grove shifts. Be quick. Don’t stay past the third pulse.”"
4"Click… click-click… click."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1661
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.36
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone6
October1
London2
Aurora6
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences113
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like held breath"
1"body that seemed to bend and twist in the middle"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords3.586
wordCount1673
matches
0"not toward the trees, but downward, toward the grass at her feet"
1"Not a break this time, but a scrape"
2"not grass at all, but a slick, yielding surface, like the skin of a mushroom"
3"not footsteps, but a series of wet, slapping impacts, as if dozens of hands wer"
4"not with heat, but with a searing crimson light"
5"not toward the trees, but through the space between it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences161
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean38.02
std22.78
cv0.599
sampleLengths
056
155
263
347
451
556
62
755
843
996
1012
1141
1224
1315
1466
1546
169
1757
184
1961
2051
216
2267
2347
2426
2547
2629
272
2871
297
3052
3133
3235
3331
3417
3541
369
3766
383
3943
4056
4131
4240
434
96.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences160
matches
0"were dipped"
1"being dragged"
2"being forced"
3"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs250
matches
0"was pulling"
1"wasn’t pulling"
2"was reacting"
3"was coming"
4"was watching"
5"was watching"
6"were striking"
7"was closing"
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences161
ratio0.043
matches
0"Wildflowers—foxglove and moon-petal blooms that had no business being alive in October—nodded in a breeze she couldn’t feel."
1"Animals in London parks were foxes and rats; they skittered and rustled."
2"It felt different—not grass at all, but a slick, yielding surface, like the skin of a mushroom."
3"She couldn’t see features, only a silhouette that was wrong—too many angles, a suggestion of limbs that bent in places where joints shouldn’t be."
4"A long, thin limb—it could have been an arm—unfurled and pointed, directly at her."
5"It was closing the distance, its form becoming more defined—a nightmare collage of stick-thin legs and a body that seemed to bend and twist in the middle."
6"The sound of the grove—the whisper of unnatural grass, the distant, dead hum—began to warp, stretching like pulled taffy."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1677
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"resting cool against her"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.02981514609421586
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.007751937984496124
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences161
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences161
mean10.39
std7.07
cv0.68
sampleLengths
020
14
22
316
414
57
634
75
89
98
1032
1123
129
1311
1415
156
166
1727
1818
196
2013
215
2222
235
2411
252
2610
278
286
2915
302
319
325
3321
3412
3510
3610
3710
3817
393
4024
4117
4215
433
444
455
465
478
484
499
31.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats30
diversityRatio0.21739130434782608
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners35
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences144
matches
0"Just this wrong, beautiful place."
1"Just a deep, velvety blackness"
2"Then, from the *opposite* side"
3"Then, a shape began to"
ratio0.028
64.44% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences144
matches
0"She put it away, plunging"
1"It existed only in whispered"
2"She’d come for the money."
3"She stepped between two of"
4"Their bark was unnaturally smooth,"
5"It had never done that"
6"She walked to the center,"
7"She was here to deliver"
8"It came from the treeline"
9"Her eyes, adjusted to the"
10"It was an alert silence."
11"They didn’t step with such"
12"She turned, slowly, to face"
13"It was pulling her attention,"
14"She looked down."
15"It looked as if something"
16"Her stomach clenched."
17"She had stepped inside it."
18"It moved from one tree"
19"Her voice was a ghost,"
ratio0.389
36.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences144
matches
0"The gravel path ended at"
1"Aurora checked her phone."
2"The screen’s blue glow illuminated"
3"She put it away, plunging"
4"The clearing was not on"
5"It existed only in whispered"
6"She’d come for the money."
7"The curiosity was a side"
8"The first thing she noticed"
9"The air, too, hung still"
10"She stepped between two of"
11"Their bark was unnaturally smooth,"
12"The Heartstone pendant, resting cool"
13"A tiny beacon in the"
14"It had never done that"
15"The clearing opened up before"
16"Wildflowers—foxglove and moon-petal blooms that"
17"The air felt like held"
18"She walked to the center,"
19"The silence pressed in, expectant."
ratio0.847
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"It existed only in whispered coordinates from a man who’d paid her to deliver a sealed envelope to a bench nearby, then spoken of the standing stones with a rev…"
1"The clearing opened up before her, a rough circle of meadow grass that shimmered with a faint, pearlescent light, as if each blade were dipped in milk."
2"Wildflowers—foxglove and moon-petal blooms that had no business being alive in October—nodded in a breeze she couldn’t feel."
3"She couldn’t see features, only a silhouette that was wrong—too many angles, a suggestion of limbs that bent in places where joints shouldn’t be."
4"She knew it was watching her with an intensity that felt physical, a cold weight on her skin."
5"The sound of pursuit was not footsteps, but a series of wet, slapping impacts, as if dozens of hands were striking the ground in rapid succession."
6"It was closing the distance, its form becoming more defined—a nightmare collage of stick-thin legs and a body that seemed to bend and twist in the middle."
7"The Heartstone pendant flared, not with heat, but with a searing crimson light that lanced through the gloom, illuminating the clearing in a bloody wash."
8"There were no eyes, only a cavity in the front of the mass that opened and closed, revealing rows of needle-like teeth that clicked together in that awful rhyth…"
9"It recoiled from the pendant’s light, its limbs folding in on itself with a sound of cracking wood."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
75.4677%