Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFGRME17WRND4GPJ2P69WJ8

Run Details

Duration:
41.7s
Cost:
$0.000842
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon flickered above the entrance, casting a sickly glow on the wet cobblestones. Aurora stepped off the curb, the rain seeping through the thin jacket she wore, and pushed the door open. The bell jingled, a thin metallic sigh that seemed to echo longer than its length. Inside, the bar lay dim, a low haze of smoke curling from the old copper kettle in the corner. Black‑and‑white photographs lined the walls, their faces frozen in moments that no longer existed. Maps of far‑flung territories were pinned haphazardly, edges curling like old leaves. Silas stood behind the polished wooden bar, his back hunched slightly, the limp in his left leg visible as he shifted his weight from one foot to the other. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the amber light, flashing briefly before settling back into shadow. He lifted a glass, the condensation beads sliding down its side, and placed it gently back on the counter. The glass clinked against the wood, a soft punctuation in the room's hush. Aurora's eyes swept across the room, landing on a figure that seemed both familiar and foreign. Silas turned, his hazel eyes narrowing as recognition sparked. For a moment, the world narrowed to the space between them, the distance of years compressed into a breath. "You look like you've been running through a storm," Silas said, his voice low, gravelly, the accent of old London streets lingering beneath a veneer of calm. She smiled, a thin, almost involuntary line. "I guess I have," she replied, the words tasting like ash. "I didn't expect to find anyone I used to know in a place like this." Silas chuckled, a sound that rattled his throat. He set the glass down with deliberate care, each movement measured, as if he were handling something fragile. "The Raven's Nest has a way of pulling people back," he observed, his gaze drifting to the rain as it smeared against the windowpane. "You always were drawn to places that whispered secrets." Aurora laughed softly, the sound catching at the edge of her throat. "You always liked that about me. I used to think you were just a boring old man with a boring bar." Silas' lips twitched, a faint smirk. "And you were always a child who hated waiting for the kettle to boil." A pause settled between them, heavy with the weight of unspoken stories. The clink of a glass resonated elsewhere; a patron at the far end lifted a mug, the sound traveling across the room like a distant drumbeat. "You still keep the ring," Aurora noted, gesturing toward his hand. The signet bore a crest she recognized from an old photograph on the wall—a silver raven perched on a branch. It had always been his emblem, a symbol of his old life. Silas lifted his hand, the ring catching a sliver of light. "It reminds me that I've made some choices that still haunt me," he said, his voice softening. "I left the agency, sold my soul for a glass of whiskey and a place to hide. I thought I could outrun the past, but the past is a stubborn thing." She shifted, the weight of her own history pressing against her ribs. The scar on her wrist throbbed faintly, a memory of a childhood accident that had long since healed but never faded. "I left university," she said, "because I couldn't stand the idea of being a lawyer for someone else. I took the road, delivering food, living on the edge of the city. I thought I could outrun my past, too." Silas leaned forward, his elbows resting on the bar, his fingers drumming a quiet rhythm on the wood. "You always had the instincts," he murmured. "When I was in Prague, you were the one who cracked open a vault with nothing but a paperclip and a stubborn grin. You taught me that sometimes the best plans are the ones nobody sees coming." Aurora's eyes flickered, a flash of something raw surfacing. "I thought I could be someone else, someone who never had to look back. But the past follows you, Silas. It stalks you through the streets you walk, through the places you avoid." Silas' gaze hardened, not in anger but in a sober acceptance. "I've been chasing shadows for too long. The work I did before—secret meetings, hidden rooms, whispers in darkened corners—caught up with me. I thought I could retire, that I could make a fresh start. But every night, I hear the echo of my own footsteps on the same floorboards." He gestured toward the hidden back room behind the bookshelf, the door slightly ajar. The faint outline of a safe could be seen through the crack, a reminder of all the secrets stored within those walls. "You know," he said, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper, "there were times when I thought I could protect you. When I sent you out of that abusive home, you left a part of yourself behind. I thought I was doing the right thing, but I was only protecting what I could, not what you needed." Aurora's face crumpled, the slightest wavering of her shoulders betraying the strain of memory. "I was a scared girl, Silas. You gave me a way out, but there were moments when I felt like I was abandoning something else—my mother, my sister... the part of me that still believed in justice." Silas' eyes softened, the lines on his face deepening. "I saw the scar, the one on your wrist. Their small crescent shape. I thought it was a reminder of something broken, but it became a compass for you." He reached out, his hand hovering near hers, then hesitated, pulling back. The gesture was tender, yet held back by an unspoken barrier. She lifted her cup, the amber liquid catching the light, and took a slow sip. The taste was bitter, like an old promise left to ferment. "I have spent years delivering meals to strangers, watching the world rush past on plates I carry. I have learned to keep moving, to never stay in one place long enough to feel the weight of what I left behind." She set the cup down with a soft thud. "But there are moments when the city feels too quiet, when I hear the same echo that you hear." Silas poured himself another drink, the liquid swirling lazily. He took a swallow, eyes never leaving hers. "Regret is a heavy thing to carry," he said, his tone measured. "It settles in the joints, makes the limp worse. It makes the heart thump in ways you cannot predict." He glanced at the rain, watching the droplets race down the glass of the window. "I have spent my life protecting secrets, and now the only secret I keep is the one I cannot speak aloud." Aurora's hand tightened around the edge of the bar, knuckles whitening. "I still wonder about the choices I made after I left Cardiff," she said, voice barely more than a murmur. "If I had stayed, perhaps I could have built something different. Maybe I could have saved more than just myself." Silas lifted his gaze to meet hers, his eyes reflecting both the dim light of the bar and the glimmer of something like admiration. "You built something else," he whispered. "You built yourself. Every delivery you made, every meal you brought to a hungry table, was a small rebellion against the life that tried to cage you. You turned the tables, Rory. You became the one who moves the city around, unseen and relentless." Her smile was thin again, but this time it carried a hint of something like pride. "You always saw what others missed," she said. "Even now, you see the layers beneath my surface." Silas' laugh was a short, bitter sound, almost surprised at itself. "It's funny how time reshapes everything," he mused. "I used to think I could control every angle, every outcome. Yet here I am, sitting across from a woman who once thought she could outrun her own shadow, only to find that shadows have a way of catching up." He paused, as if weighing each word. "Perhaps that's the regret I've been carrying all these years—knowing that I could have done more, could have stayed longer, could have helped you in ways beyond delivering plates." He lifted his glass, offering a tentative toast. "To old friends," he said, his voice hoarse from years of drinking in dim corners. "To the paths we chose and the roads left untraveled." She mirrored his gesture, the cup touching his with a soft clink. "To the roads we never walked," Aurora replied, her voice steady, though the tremor in her throat betrayed a lingering vulnerability. The rain outside intensified, a steady patter against the window that seemed to sync with the beat of their conversation. Patrons around them murmured, oblivious to the intensity that hung between the two figures at the bar. A distant piano played a melancholy melody, its notes lingering like the remnants of a memory. Silas leaned back, his breath steady, the limp in his leg pronounced as he shifted his weight. "You know," he said, his tone softening further, "when I first set up this place, I thought it would be just a cover. A front for gathering information, a sanctuary for those who needed a quiet drink and a listening ear. I never imagined that one day I would be sitting across from you, hearing the story of a girl who fled a broken home and found her own way through the cracks." Aurora's breath caught, the memory of that broken home surfacing in vivid detail—the cold walls, the echo of footsteps, the feeling of being trapped. Yet there was also a flicker of something else, a quiet acceptance. "I left because I had to," she said, her tone firm though tinged with melancholy. "Because staying would have meant giving away pieces of myself I couldn't afford to lose." Silas studied her for a moment, his gaze lingering on the small scar that peeked from beneath her sleeve. "I kept that scar in mind, the one on your wrist. It reminded me that even the most delicate things can hold a story beneath the surface." He tapped his own wrist where a faint line of scar tissue marred his skin—an old wound from a fight long ago, now healed but never forgotten. There was a pause, a taut silence that seemed to stretch beyond the walls of the bar, as if the room itself was listening. "I have spent years watching you from behind the bar, keeping an eye on the deliveries, tracking the pattern of your movements," Silas confessed, his voice low enough that only they could hear. "I thought I was protecting you, watching over you. But in truth, I was protecting myself from the guilt of seeing someone I cared about walk away." Aurora's eyes widened, a flash of realization crossing her features. She seemed to understand that the distance between them was not just physical but a chasm built of choices and unspoken apologies. "I thought I was protecting myself," she whispered, the words spilling out like a confession. "But maybe the only thing that kept me alive was knowing I was being watched, even if it was from afar." Silas' hand trembled ever so slightly as he set the glass down again, the sound a soft thud against the wood. He closed his eyes for a heartbeat, as if trying to capture the fleeting moment before it slipped away. "There is a certain beauty in regret," he said quietly, the words barely above a whisper. "It reminds us that we were once alive with purpose, that we cared enough to feel the weight of our decisions. It reminds us that we are human." She stared at him, the lines of his face illuminated by the amber glow of the bar lights. "Do you ever think about the roads not taken?" Aurora asked, her voice steady but tinged with an ache that seemed to come from deep within. Silas let out a small, breathy laugh. "Every single day," he replied. "The roads not taken are the ones that haunt the corridors of my mind. They are the paths where I could have been a different man, a different father, a different friend." He looked toward the hidden back room, the secret doorway that led to the unseen world he once navigated with precision. "But perhaps there is still time for something else." Aurora's smile was faint, but it hinted at a resolve that had been forged over years of delivery runs, rain-soaked streets, and endless nights in a cramped flat. "Maybe there is," she said. "Maybe the future isn't as fixed as we think." The rain began to taper off, the rhythm of the droplets slowing to a gentle drizzle. Outside, the city lights reflected on slick pavement, casting a kaleidoscope of colors onto the wet street. Inside, the bar's atmosphere seemed to shift, the hum of other conversations weaving into the background like a distant tide. Silas tapped his glass against Aurora's once more, a softer clink this time. "Then let's not waste whatever time we have left," he said, his tone resolute. "Let's make something more than just... empty meetings." Aurora raised her cup in response, the liquid catching the light one last time. "It's a start," she said, her voice steady. "It's a start." The conversation lingered in the air between them, unspooling threads of memory, regret, and perhaps a tentative hope. The scene held its breath, waiting for the next beat, the next word, the next movement—an unfinished sentence in the story of two strangers turned friends, bound by time and the unspoken weight of what they had lost and what they might yet reclaim.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.564
leniency1
rawRatio0.032
effectiveRatio0.032
84.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2329
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"lazily"
count1
4
adverb"ever so slightly"
count1
5
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"softly"
3"lazily"
4"ever so slightly"
5"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2329
totalAiIsms41
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"echo"
count4
2
word"weight"
count7
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"measured"
count2
5
word"unspoken"
count4
6
word"resonated"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count2
9
word"reminder"
count2
10
word"whisper"
count2
11
word"wavering"
count1
12
word"race"
count1
13
word"intensity"
count1
14
word"sanctuary"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count1
16
word"tinged"
count2
17
word"silence"
count1
18
word"trembled"
count1
19
word"fleeting"
count1
20
word"navigated"
count1
21
word"resolve"
count1
22
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"echo"
2"weight"
3"familiar"
4"measured"
5"unspoken"
6"resonated"
7"throbbed"
8"footsteps"
9"reminder"
10"whisper"
11"wavering"
12"race"
13"intensity"
14"sanctuary"
15"flicker"
16"tinged"
17"silence"
18"trembled"
19"fleeting"
20"navigated"
21"resolve"
22"kaleidoscope"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences91
matches
0"was bitter"
32.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2321
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1249
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
London1
Silas13
Aurora14
persons
0"Silas"
1"Aurora"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.94
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"sigh that seemed to echo longer than its length"
1"something like admiration"
2"something like pride"
3"as if weighing each word"
4"window that seemed to sync with the beat of their conversation"
5"silence that seemed to stretch beyond the walls of the bar, as if the room itself was listening"
6"as if trying to capture the fleeting moment before it slipped away"
7"ache that seemed to come from deep within"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.862
wordCount2321
matches
0"not in anger but in a sober acceptance"
1"not just physical but a chasm built of choices"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"understand that the"
63.58% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean58.03
std21.62
cv0.373
sampleLengths
094
180
244
327
433
559
633
720
838
943
1059
1172
1262
1342
1460
1593
1651
1761
1894
1984
2051
2174
2233
2395
2433
2533
2653
2790
2866
2973
3084
3168
3284
3344
3474
3542
3653
3735
3825
3962
97.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"were pinned"
1"been forged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs213
matches
0"were handling"
1"was listening"
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences120
ratio0.042
matches
0"The clink of a glass resonated elsewhere; a patron at the far end lifted a mug, the sound traveling across the room like a distant drumbeat."
1"The signet bore a crest she recognized from an old photograph on the wall—a silver raven perched on a branch."
2"Aurora's breath caught, the memory of that broken home surfacing in vivid detail—the cold walls, the echo of footsteps, the feeling of being trapped."
3"\"I kept that scar in mind, the one on your wrist. It reminded me that even the most delicate things can hold a story beneath the surface.\" He tapped his own wrist where a faint line of scar tissue marred his skin—an old wound from a fight long ago, now healed but never forgotten."
4"The scene held its breath, waiting for the next beat, the next word, the next movement—an unfinished sentence in the story of two strangers turned friends, bound by time and the unspoken weight of what they had lost and what they might yet reclaim."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1148
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.03484320557491289
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.009581881533101045
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean19.34
std12.29
cv0.636
sampleLengths
015
119
215
319
414
512
629
719
819
913
1016
119
1219
1327
147
1511
1615
178
1818
1924
209
2112
2221
236
2414
2512
2626
2711
2820
2912
3011
3117
3231
3312
3421
3539
3618
377
3837
399
4033
4111
4249
4314
4422
4557
4614
4737
489
4941
44.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.26666666666666666
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
62.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences84
matches
0"He lifted a glass, the"
1"She smiled, a thin, almost"
2"she replied, the words tasting"
3"He set the glass down"
4"he observed, his gaze drifting"
5"It had always been his"
6"he said, his voice softening"
7"She shifted, the weight of"
8"He gestured toward the hidden"
9"he said, his voice dropping"
10"He reached out, his hand"
11"She lifted her cup, the"
12"She set the cup down"
13"He took a swallow, eyes"
14"he said, his tone measured"
15"He glanced at the rain,"
16"she said, voice barely more"
17"Her smile was thin again,"
18"He paused, as if weighing"
19"He lifted his glass, offering"
ratio0.393
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences84
matches
0"The green neon flickered above"
1"Aurora stepped off the curb,"
2"The bell jingled, a thin"
3"Maps of far‑flung territories were"
4"Silas stood behind the polished"
5"The silver signet ring on"
6"He lifted a glass, the"
7"The glass clinked against the"
8"Aurora's eyes swept across the"
9"Silas turned, his hazel eyes"
10"Silas said, his voice low,"
11"She smiled, a thin, almost"
12"she replied, the words tasting"
13"Silas chuckled, a sound that"
14"He set the glass down"
15"he observed, his gaze drifting"
16"Aurora laughed softly, the sound"
17"A pause settled between them,"
18"The clink of a glass"
19"Aurora noted, gesturing toward his"
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.18% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He set the glass down with deliberate care, each movement measured, as if he were handling something fragile."
1"Silas leaned forward, his elbows resting on the bar, his fingers drumming a quiet rhythm on the wood."
2"The rain outside intensified, a steady patter against the window that seemed to sync with the beat of their conversation."
3"Silas studied her for a moment, his gaze lingering on the small scar that peeked from beneath her sleeve."
4"Aurora's smile was faint, but it hinted at a resolve that had been forged over years of delivery runs, rain-soaked streets, and endless nights in a cramped flat…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"he said, his voice softening"
1"he said, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper,"
2"He reached out, his hand hovering near hers, then hesitated, pulling back"
3"he said, his tone measured"
4"she said, voice barely more than a murmur"
5"He paused, as if weighing each word"
6"he said, his tone softening further,"
7"Silas confessed, his voice low enough that only they could hear"
8"she whispered, the words spilling out like a confession"
9"he said quietly, the words barely above a whisper"
10"he said, his tone resolute"
11"she said, her voice steady"
40.91% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags24
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"Aurora noted (note)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
4"Silas confessed (confess)"
5"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.436
leniency0.873
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.218
67.7531%