Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFGVPMKE7DZD5AHFDABMXTP

Run Details

Duration:
51.1s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Nvidia

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora’s fingers curled around the brass knob, the cool metal grounding her as she pulled the door inward. The narrow hallway of Eva’s flat smelled of spiced lentils and old paper, a faint curl of incense drifting from the kitchen where a pot simmered on the stove. Shelves bowed under the weight of leather‑bound tomes, scrolls tied with faded ribbon, and scattered notes that fluttered like startled moths whenever a draft slipped through the cracked window. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, blinked from his perch on the windowsill, his tail flicking once before he settled back into a sun‑warmed patch of rug. Aurora stepped aside, expecting perhaps Eva with a bag of groceries or a friend needing a place to crash. Instead, a figure stood on the doorstep, framed by the gloom of Brick Lane’s evening. Lucien Moreau’s presence filled the space like a tightening of air. His charcoal suit clung to his frame, the cut sharp enough to slice silence. The ivory‑handled cane tapped once against the doorframe, a soft click that seemed to echo in the cramped room. One eye glowed amber, the other swallowed black, both fixed on her with an intensity that made the hair on her arms rise. “Rory,” he said, voice low, the cadence of Marseille threading through his English. “May I come in?” She swallowed, the scar on her left wrist throbbing faintly against the pulse of her throat. The last time she had seen him, rain had lashed the rooftops of Covent Garden, and his words had been promises wrapped in half‑truths. She had walked away then, the weight of his deception settling like stone in her chest. “The door’s open,” she replied, keeping her tone even, though the heat in her cheeks betrayed her. “You know where to find the tea.” He stepped inside, the cane swinging lightly as he moved. The scent of sandalwood and something darker—maybe ozone, maybe the faint tang of sulphur—followed him, mingling with the curry aromas. He paused, letting his gaze sweep the room, lingering on the stacks of parchment, the cat’s lazy stretch, the way the light from the streetlamp outside caught the edge of her black hair. “You still live above Silas’ bar?” he asked, though his eyes never left her face. “Eva’s letting me crash here for a night,” Aurora said, moving to the small kitchenette. She lifted the kettle, its whistle a thin scream that cut through the quiet. “You look… unchanged.” A flicker of something—perhaps amusement, perhaps regret—crossed his heterochromatic stare. “And you still wear that scar like a badge.” He gestured toward her wrist with a tilt of his cane. “It suits you.” She forced a laugh, short and sharp. “It reminds me not to trust pretty promises.” He did not flinch. Instead, he leaned against the counter, the cane resting against his thigh. “I came because I need your help. There’s a lead on the Avaros sigil that surfaced in Whitechapel. If it’s what I think it is, it could pull a whole nest of those… things into the city.” Aurora’s hands stilled over the kettle. The memory of that night—of the sigil etched in blood on a warehouse wall, of Lucien’s hand gripping hers as they fled, of the way he had slipped a folded paper into her pocket before vanishing—rose sharp and bitter. She had trusted him then, believed his claim that the information was for her safety alone. The next morning, she had found the paper gone, replaced by a note that read, “Forget it. You’re better off without me.” “You think I’ll just drop everything and run after you again?” she asked, voice low, the words edged with the hurt she had kept buried. Lucien’s amber eye softened, the black one seeming to drink in the light. “I know I left you with more questions than answers. I know I made you feel… used.” He paused, choosing each word as if placing a stone on a precarious path. “What I didn’t say then was that I was afraid. Afraid that if I let you see the real danger, you’d walk into it headfirst and I wouldn’t be there to pull you back.” She turned, the kettle’s whistle rising to a piercing note. She lifted it from the burner, poured hot water into two chipped mugs, the steam curling like ghostly fingers. She set one before him, the other she cradled in both hands, feeling the heat seep into her palms. “Fear doesn’t excuse betrayal,” she said, her gaze fixed on the swirling liquid. “You walked away when I needed you most. You left me to pick up the pieces of a mess you helped create.” He reached out, his fingers brushing the rim of his mug, stopping short of touching hers. “I should have stayed. I should have trusted you to decide what to do with that information. Instead I assumed I knew better.” A silence stretched, broken only by Ptolemy’s soft purr as he hopped onto the counter, rubbing his cheek against Aurora’s wrist. She glanced down, the cat’s warm presence a small anchor amidst the storm of feelings. “You still think you can fix everything with a smile and a cane,” she murmured, voice quieter now. “But some cracks don’t heal with polish.” Lucien’s jaw tightened, the muscle at his cheek jumping. He lifted his mug, took a slow sip, the liquid burning a trail down his throat. When he set it down, his eyes met hers again, raw and unguarded. “I’m not here to fix anything,” he said. “I’m here because I need you. Not because I think you owe me, but because I trust your mind more than any other I’ve known. If we walk into that warehouse together, I want you beside me—not behind me, not ahead of me, but beside me.” The honesty in his tone struck her like a physical blow, unexpected and stark. She felt the old pull, the undeniable attraction that had first sparked in a dimly lit Marseille tavern, where his laugh had echoed off stone walls and his eyes had promised both danger and wonder. It had been there, simmering beneath arguments and accusations, never fully extinguished. She lifted her mug, the ceramic warm against her fingertips. “Why now?” she asked, the question hanging between them like a thread waiting to be cut. He hesitated, the cane tapping a soft rhythm against the floorboards. “Because the sigil isn’t just a relic. It’s a key. And I’ve heard whispers that someone plans to use it to open a gate—one that could let… things… pour into our world. I can’t stop it alone. I need someone who can think three steps ahead, who can read the dead languages etched into stone, who can… who can trust me enough to try again.” Aurora stared into the steam rising from her drink, watching it twist and fade. She thought of the nights she had spent poring over ancient texts in Eva’s flat, of the way Lucien’s voice had once guided her through a labyrinth of cryptic symbols, of the way his hand had felt steady against hers when they had ducked behind a crate as demonic sentinels prowled nearby. She set her mug down with a soft clink. “You still have that cane,” she said, nodding toward the ivory hilt. “And you still wear those suits like armor.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “And you still wear your hair straight, shoulders length, like you’re ready to cut through any nonsense that comes your way.” She let out a breath she hadn’t realized she’d been holding. The tension in her shoulders eased fractionally, replaced by a cautious curiosity. “You never answered why you left the note that night.” Lucien’s gaze dropped to his mug, then lifted again, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers with a fierce sincerity. “I was scared you’d see the truth—that I was more monster than man, that my blood would drag you into a darkness you didn’t sign up for. I thought distance would keep you safe.” The words hung in the air, raw and unvarnished. Aurora felt the old hurt flare, but beneath it lay something else—a flicker of hope, fragile as a candle flame in a drafty room. She reached out, not to touch his hand, but to brush a stray lock of hair from his forehead, her fingertips grazing the cool skin of his temple. The contact was brief, electric. “You’re not just blood,” she whispered. “You’re also the man who taught me how to read a sigil in the rain, who shared his last piece of bread when we were stranded, who… who made me feel seen.” He inhaled sharply, the breath catching in his throat. “And you’re the woman who kept me honest when I wanted to lie, who called me out when I slipped, who made me want to be better than the sum of my parts.” A small, genuine smile curved Aurora’s mouth. “Maybe we’re both trying to outrun our pasts.” Lucien’s cane tapped once more against the floor, a steady beat that seemed to sync with the thrum of her heart. “Then let’s face it together, this time.” She nodded, the decision settling like a stone placed firmly in a riverbed—solid, unyielding. “Alright. But no more secrets. No more disappearing acts. If we’re doing this, we do it openly.” He lifted his mug in a silent toast, the amber liquid catching the light. “Agreed.” Outside, the night deepened, the sounds of Brick Lane—distant traffic, a saxophone wailing from a club, the occasional shout—filtered through the thin walls. Inside Eva’s flat, the fire of old wounds began to soften, replaced by the warm glow of something tentative yet undeniable: attraction rekindled, hurt acknowledged, and a promise, fragile but real, hanging between them like the steam from their mugs, waiting to see whether it would dissolve or linger.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1664
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1664
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"fluttered"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count2
8
word"etched"
count2
9
word"amidst"
count1
10
word"stark"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"simmering"
count1
13
word"sentinels"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"electric"
count1
16
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"fluttered"
2"gloom"
3"silence"
4"echo"
5"intensity"
6"pulse"
7"flicker"
8"etched"
9"amidst"
10"stark"
11"echoed"
12"simmering"
13"sentinels"
14"tension"
15"electric"
16"firmly"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"hung in the air"
2"a flicker of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences71
matches
0"a flicker of hope"
82.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1651
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1125
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Brick2
Lane2
Moreau1
Marseille2
English1
Covent1
Garden1
Aurora8
Lucien7
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Covent"
4"Garden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"click that seemed to echo in the cramped room"
1"as if placing a stone on a precarious path"
2"beat that seemed to sync with the thrum of her heart"
18.29% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.817
wordCount1651
matches
0"not behind me, not ahead of me, but beside me"
1"not ahead of me, but beside me"
2"not to touch his hand, but to brush a stray lock of hair from his forehead, her fingert"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
90.67% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean43.45
std20.31
cv0.467
sampleLengths
076
159
267
317
456
524
663
715
832
933
1015
1153
1283
1325
1478
1548
1635
1739
1836
1925
2038
2154
2261
2326
2476
2566
2629
2729
2833
2953
3033
3171
3242
3315
3428
3531
3615
3772
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences93
ratio0.065
matches
0"The scent of sandalwood and something darker—maybe ozone, maybe the faint tang of sulphur—followed him, mingling with the curry aromas."
1"A flicker of something—perhaps amusement, perhaps regret—crossed his heterochromatic stare."
2"The memory of that night—of the sigil etched in blood on a warehouse wall, of Lucien’s hand gripping hers as they fled, of the way he had slipped a folded paper into her pocket before vanishing—rose sharp and bitter."
3"Aurora felt the old hurt flare, but beneath it lay something else—a flicker of hope, fragile as a candle flame in a drafty room."
4"She nodded, the decision settling like a stone placed firmly in a riverbed—solid, unyielding."
5"Outside, the night deepened, the sounds of Brick Lane—distant traffic, a saxophone wailing from a club, the occasional shout—filtered through the thin walls."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1135
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"ceramic warm against her"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.02907488986784141
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007929515418502203
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean17.75
std11.39
cv0.642
sampleLengths
018
129
229
325
419
515
611
714
819
923
1013
114
1216
1324
1416
1517
167
1710
1820
1933
2015
2115
2214
233
2410
2520
263
277
288
294
3012
3137
326
3339
3416
3522
3625
3713
3831
3934
4010
4119
4219
4313
4422
4516
4623
4721
4815
4918
48.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3225806451612903
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners30
96.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"Instead, a figure stood on"
1"Instead, he leaned against the"
ratio0.029
11.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences69
matches
0"His charcoal suit clung to"
1"he said, voice low, the"
2"She swallowed, the scar on"
3"She had walked away then,"
4"she replied, keeping her tone"
5"He stepped inside, the cane"
6"He paused, letting his gaze"
7"he asked, though his eyes"
8"She lifted the kettle, its"
9"He gestured toward her wrist"
10"She forced a laugh, short"
11"He did not flinch."
12"She had trusted him then,"
13"she asked, voice low, the"
14"He paused, choosing each word"
15"She turned, the kettle’s whistle"
16"She lifted it from the"
17"She set one before him,"
18"she said, her gaze fixed"
19"He reached out, his fingers"
ratio0.522
3.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences69
matches
0"Aurora’s fingers curled around the"
1"The narrow hallway of Eva’s"
2"Shelves bowed under the weight"
3"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, blinked"
4"Aurora stepped aside, expecting perhaps"
5"Lucien Moreau’s presence filled the"
6"His charcoal suit clung to"
7"The ivory‑handled cane tapped once"
8"he said, voice low, the"
9"She swallowed, the scar on"
10"The last time she had"
11"She had walked away then,"
12"she replied, keeping her tone"
13"He stepped inside, the cane"
14"The scent of sandalwood and"
15"He paused, letting his gaze"
16"he asked, though his eyes"
17"Aurora said, moving to the"
18"She lifted the kettle, its"
19"A flicker of something—perhaps amusement,"
ratio0.913
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
36.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Shelves bowed under the weight of leather‑bound tomes, scrolls tied with faded ribbon, and scattered notes that fluttered like startled moths whenever a draft s…"
1"The ivory‑handled cane tapped once against the doorframe, a soft click that seemed to echo in the cramped room."
2"One eye glowed amber, the other swallowed black, both fixed on her with an intensity that made the hair on her arms rise."
3"The memory of that night—of the sigil etched in blood on a warehouse wall, of Lucien’s hand gripping hers as they fled, of the way he had slipped a folded paper…"
4"He reached out, his fingers brushing the rim of his mug, stopping short of touching hers."
5"She felt the old pull, the undeniable attraction that had first sparked in a dimly lit Marseille tavern, where his laugh had echoed off stone walls and his eyes…"
6"Aurora stared into the steam rising from her drink, watching it twist and fade."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, voice low, the cadence of Marseille threading through his English"
1"she murmured, voice quieter now"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.611
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.111
71.0108%