| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1245 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1245 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "echo" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "yearning" | | 10 | "measured" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "searing" | | 16 | "comforting" | | 17 | "resonance" | | 18 | "beacon" | | 19 | "could feel" | | 20 | "reminder" | | 21 | "depths" | | 22 | "pounding" | | 23 | "racing" | | 24 | "fleeting" | | 25 | "resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 89.95% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1239 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1172 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.94 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Aurora | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Earth" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 20.13% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "thrum that seemed to echo in her chest" | | 1 | "sounded like her name, spoken in a voice t" | | 2 | "symbols that seemed to shift when she looked directly at them" | | 3 | "fabric that seemed to absorb the light" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.421 | | wordCount | 1239 | | matches | | 0 | "not a sound of pain, but of yearning, as if something vast" | | 1 | "neither male nor" | | 2 | "not with pain but with recognition" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.33% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 41.3 | | std | 15.64 | | cv | 0.379 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 76 | | 8 | 56 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 53 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 208 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.126 | | matches | | 0 | "The usual night chorus of crickets and owls was absent, replaced by a faint, irregular tapping—like something wooden striking stone just beyond her vision." | | 1 | "Aurora’s grip on the pendant tightened; the gemstone pulsed a deep crimson, warm against her skin." | | 2 | "No answer came, only the tapping resumed—closer this time, rhythmic, deliberate." | | 3 | "She remembered the old tales her mother used to tell—of portals that opened only when the Heartstone recognised the thrum of another world." | | 4 | "Aurora’s skin prickled; the hairs on her arms stood upright." | | 5 | "Aurora’s mouth went dry; she could taste iron on her tongue." | | 6 | "She could see now that the symbols were not mere carvings—they were veins of pulsing light, throbbing in time with her own heartbeat." | | 7 | "She realised the pressure in her chest was not fear alone; it was a resonance, a tug that matched the rhythm of the stones." | | 8 | "A figure emerged from the shadows beyond the circle—tall, draped in tattered fabric that seemed to absorb the light." | | 9 | "The night air hit her face, sharp and clear, and for a fleeting moment she thought she heard the distant toll of a bell—though no church stood nearby." | | 10 | "She ran, feet pounding the hard ground, the pendant’s glow a steady beacon against the encroaching dark, knowing that whatever lay beyond the fissure had tasted her resolve and found it wanting—for now." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1179 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.021204410517387615 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008481764206955046 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 14.24 | | std | 6.4 | | cv | 0.449 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 39.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.25287356321839083 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 66.91% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She inhaled, the scent of" | | 1 | "She paused, listening." | | 2 | "She turned her head slowly," | | 3 | "She moved forward, each step" | | 4 | "Her breath came in short" | | 5 | "It sounded like her name," | | 6 | "She lifted the pendant higher," | | 7 | "she asked, the words raw" | | 8 | "She swung her gaze to" | | 9 | "She took a step back," | | 10 | "She remembered the old tales" | | 11 | "It was not a sound" | | 12 | "She forced herself to breathe," | | 13 | "She walked toward the source" | | 14 | "It was not human." | | 15 | "It was the sound of" | | 16 | "She could see now that" | | 17 | "she whispered, though her voice" | | 18 | "She realised the pressure in" | | 19 | "She stepped forward, ignoring the" |
| | ratio | 0.383 | |
| 9.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora jerked the pendant from" | | 1 | "The stone felt warm under" | | 2 | "She inhaled, the scent of" | | 3 | "A thin mist clung to" | | 4 | "The air tasted metallic, as" | | 5 | "She paused, listening." | | 6 | "The usual night chorus of" | | 7 | "She turned her head slowly," | | 8 | "Shadows pooled between the ancient" | | 9 | "A soft rustle came from" | | 10 | "Aurora’s grip on the pendant" | | 11 | "She moved forward, each step" | | 12 | "The mist thickened, swallowing the" | | 13 | "Her breath came in short" | | 14 | "A whisper slipped through the" | | 15 | "It sounded like her name," | | 16 | "Aurora halted, heart hammering against" | | 17 | "She lifted the pendant higher," | | 18 | "she asked, the words raw" | | 19 | "She swung her gaze to" |
| | ratio | 0.901 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it burned, not with" | | 1 | "Before it could finish, the" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She remembered the old tales her mother used to tell—of portals that opened only when the Heartstone recognised the thrum of another world." | | 1 | "It was not a sound of pain, but of yearning, as if something vast and unseen strained against an invisible barrier." | | 2 | "It was the sound of something that had waited patiently, listening to the world above." | | 3 | "A cold wind brushed her cheek, carrying with it the scent of burnt sugar and rotting leaves." | | 4 | "The pendant’s warmth spread up her arm, searing yet comforting." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, though her voice shook" | | 1 | "it screamed, the sound splitting the night like glass" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "it screamed (scream)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |