Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFGZE25JHKDSWCM5QC3008H

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.001024
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shifted first. It tasted of ozone and old dust, like the moment before a thunderstorm. Aurora stopped her boots just short of the shimmering distortion. She gripped the silver chain tight against her skin. "It is thin here." Isolde Varga lifted her chin. Her lavender eyes reflected nothing behind them. "The boundary itself." "Aurora." Nyx drifted from the tall birch cluster to the left. Their form solidized, the shadows stitching themselves together into a silhouette twice the height of the seer. "Your pendant hums." Aurora turned the pendant over in her fingers. It was warm. A deep crimson stone pulsed inside the metal casing. "It feels the pull." "Then we walk or we run." Isolde stepped forward. Her boots did not touch the grass. She left the earth where she came from. "This is where we stop. We need... permission." "I don't think Hel wants permission." Nyx shifted their shape. Shadows stretched from their boots up toward the fading blue sky. "Look at the ground." Aurora crouched. The soil crunched under her weight. Roots twisted upward like veins. They glowed faintly in the fading light. "Vines from Dymas." "We are inside the Fae grove." "No, this is the Veil." Isolde spoke with a tone that rolled like thunder. "Do you not smell the spiced wine in the air?" Aurora wrinkled her nose. The scent was rich, heavy, and wrong. It overlaid the scent of decay. "The rumour is true." They moved forward. The trees parted. The air grew heavier. The ground hummed beneath Aurora’s trembling knees. "This place has not changed." "It does not change." "We should leave." "Leave?" "It is warm. It is too warm." "This is the realm." Aurora pointed to the sky. Amber clouds bled into a golden horizon. "It looks like a... banquet." "Gluttony." "Then it is not safe." "Then we survive." They walked deeper. The air filled with the smell of roasted meat and cured leather. Isolde gestured with her hand. "Look." Aurora looked at the path. Giant mushrooms capped towers of stone. They blocked the way ahead. "We must go through." The shadows pooled around Nyx. Their form was solid now, black fabric clinging to bone. "You are hiding." "I am... observing." "Why?" "Because it is alive." The moss glowed brighter as they stepped closer. It pulsed in rhythm with Aurora’s heartbeat. She felt the slow beat in the earth itself. "Isolde says it is a feast." "It is a ruin." "Then why does it sing?" "It sings to those who do not listen." Aurora watched Nyx touch a mushroom stem. The shadow hand passed through and vanished, leaving a ripple of dark static. "It is not meat." "Then what?" "It is time." Isolde did not answer. She walked between the towers. Her silver hair moved like smoke. "Your pendant is glowing." Aurora saw the jewellery burn against her wrist. The scar on her skin faded under the crimson light. "It is tracking the portal." "We are inside Dymas." "Aurora." Nyx pulled them down behind a rock formation. "The shadows." Aurora pressed her hand against the stone. It was hot. A serenity showed there. There was no space for them here. "Then we find the exit." "So they must feed." "Who?" "The ones who starve." "Tell Isolde." "She knows." Aurora looked up. Isolde stood atop a low cliff. She looked down at them. Rain began to fall. It did not wet her silver hair. "It is... raining?" "It is the tears of the damned." Nyx stood up. Their form shifted back to something more human, though the edges remained blurred. They adopted the posture of a scavenger. "We cannot stay here." "I am not staying." "I am hungry." Nyx adjusted their collar. The fabric seemed woven from the dark of the sky. "I can't eat." "Then we go somewhere else." "Then we find a place other than Dymas." "Then we leave." Aurora stood. The pendant pulsed once under her tunic. "We step out of the shadows." "Then we step into the light." Isolde spoke again. "Wait until the moonlight breaks the bounds of the sun." "Then we wait." "Then we wait." They moved toward the tunnel. It opened like a throat yawning in the dark. The air grew thick. It smelled of old spices and hot wax. "Isolde... you promised us." "You have walked this way." "We need to find the entrance." "It is already open." "Then show us." She stepped into the light. "Then we go." Aurora walked. Nyx followed. The walls shifted. They twisted into a corridor of ice. "It gets cold." "It gets fine." "Or fine." Isolde turned. Her feet touched nothing. "She follows the Veil." "She follows the Void." Nyx pointed to the back of the tunnel. The shadows gathered there. They were hungry. "Then we leave." "We leave." "Then we leave." They walked until the ground opened up beneath them. The abyss waited between the stars. It was a portal. The stone. The fading light. "We go." "We go." "We go."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.013
leniency0.025
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount834
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount834
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen17
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords834
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount524
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.67
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Varga1
Aurora14
Nyx9
Isolde8
persons
0"Varga"
1"Aurora"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
places(empty)
globalScore0.164
windowScore0.333
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed woven from the dark of the sky"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount834
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs116
mean7.19
std6.24
cv0.869
sampleLengths
017
119
24
312
43
531
620
74
86
918
108
116
1215
134
1420
153
166
175
189
1910
2017
214
223
2314
245
254
263
271
287
294
3012
315
321
335
343
3515
365
371
3816
394
4015
413
423
431
444
4524
466
474
485
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs99
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences163
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount524
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.022900763358778626
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0019083969465648854
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean5.12
std2.78
cv0.543
sampleLengths
04
113
210
39
44
55
67
73
811
917
103
118
123
139
144
156
163
177
188
198
206
214
2211
234
242
256
265
277
283
296
305
319
3210
334
347
356
364
373
383
394
407
415
424
433
441
457
464
475
487
495
41.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2147239263803681
totalSentences163
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.04% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences79
matches
0"It tasted of ozone and"
1"She gripped the silver chain"
2"Her lavender eyes reflected nothing"
3"Their form solidized, the shadows"
4"It was warm."
5"Her boots did not touch"
6"She left the earth where"
7"They glowed faintly in the"
8"It overlaid the scent of"
9"They moved forward."
10"They walked deeper."
11"They blocked the way ahead."
12"Their form was solid now,"
13"It pulsed in rhythm with"
14"She felt the slow beat"
15"She walked between the towers."
16"Her silver hair moved like"
17"It was hot."
18"She looked down at them."
19"It did not wet her"
ratio0.392
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences79
matches
0"The air shifted first."
1"It tasted of ozone and"
2"Aurora stopped her boots just"
3"She gripped the silver chain"
4"Isolde Varga lifted her chin."
5"Her lavender eyes reflected nothing"
6"Nyx drifted from the tall"
7"Their form solidized, the shadows"
8"Aurora turned the pendant over"
9"It was warm."
10"A deep crimson stone pulsed"
11"Isolde stepped forward."
12"Her boots did not touch"
13"She left the earth where"
14"Nyx shifted their shape."
15"Shadows stretched from their boots"
16"The soil crunched under her"
17"Roots twisted upward like veins."
18"They glowed faintly in the"
19"Isolde spoke with a tone"
ratio0.975
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.0021%