Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFH1VZBQSKKPQV8RC425YMN

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Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.000812
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones loomed above like skeletal fingers pressing into the sky. London rain had dried into the cobblestones outside the gate, replaced by a smell of ozone and crushed nightshade. Aurora Carter stepped across the threshold. Her black hair brushed her collarbones. The shift slammed into her ankles. Inside, the grass hummed. Vibrations crawled up her shins. It felt like standing on wet wool. Nyx drifted past her shoulder. Their form sharpened, edges hardening against the twilight air. Nyx did not touch the ground. The floor bowed beneath their weight, then snapped back to flatness. The shadow being was six feet tall. Isolde Vrarga walked ahead. She left no footprints. Her silver hair caught the flickering light from the weeping willows. The trees hung low, branches dripping silver sap instead of dark fluid. Amber dropped through the leaves. It was too light, like a dream sequence memory losing focus. Aurora tightened her grip on the silver chain. The Heartstone Pendant warmed against her skin. It pulsed. The night bends here. She turned to see Isolde stand. Pale lavender eyes glassed with reflection. Time is not a straight line. It coils inside the roots. Aurora stopped. We should keep moving. We have a target. Nyx tilted their head. The violet light faded from their eyes. They leaned against a trunk. The bark absorbed them. Then Nyx pulled free. Their shoulder retained the texture of dry skin. Isolde spoke. You will not find the gate. The gate is the way out. Aurora walked beside the Silence. Isolde, this place is dangerous. The Veil cracks. She swiped her manicured hand. The purse strap felt heavy. Golden lamified in her locker. We move past the stone river. Isolde gestured. The water flowed without sound. Aurora stopped to inspect the riverbank. Stones floated past her, though the water was still. Tiny points of light swirled beneath the surface. Deep crimson gemstones drifted like blood cells. She pointed at the pulse of the pendant. This thing got heavy again. Nyx stepped forward. The blood sings. The Heartstone indicates proximity. Isolde laughed. The sound cracked. Dust rose to meet them. They followed the path up a slope. The ground became softer, like pressed earth. Flowers bloomed with eyes in their centers. Careful. Nyx warned them. Their voice carried on a breathy wind. They open wide. Aurora looked at the petals. They blinked. A bright blue iris hid behind green leaves. The pupil narrowed. They listen. Aurora tasted the air. It tasted of iron. She touched the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. It was cold. The metal was moonsilver. A leaf-shaped dagger. She withdrew the weapon. Why bring a weapon? It cannot cut the earth? It cuts the wards. Nyxs stopped. The shadows around them pooled together. They formed a shape. A head with too many eyes. Who are you? The voice came from the mist. Nyx recognized them. It sounded like wind in hollow bone. A mimic. The mimic is me. Aurora raised the blade. She did not strike. They walked deeper into the clearing. A massive structure rose from the dirt. It was architecture from another world. Seaweed-like spirals wrapped around pillars of obsidian. The sky shimmered faintly in the distance. The Veil was visible here, a distortion line in the world's air. Aurora stopped. The weekly moon shone through the slats. Shadows danced there. Nyx phased through the stone. They reappeared on the other side. They pushed through the stone. Nyx asked. You tested it. The stone is aged. Aurora looked up. The ruin towered overhead. Smoke curled from the top. It was not fire. It is the heart. They stepped inside the structure. The air grew thick. They felt the weight of it. It pressed on their lungs. Aurora checked her phone. No signal. You forgot. I knew. Nyx stopped. The shadows around them pooled together. They formed a figure. A head with too many eyes. They speak. They ask questions. The mimic mimicked the room's heartbeat. It thumped beneath the stone floor. Aurora felt it in her wrist. The scar from her childhood accident pulsed in time with the ruin. The scar itched. The mimic opened a mouth. Is Isolde a spy? No one asked. Isolde Varga stepped forward. She did not speak. She hovered over the floor. Her feet did not touch. The room whispered. It whispered names. Names from old earth. Names from 1643. Nyx felt the pull. They felt the tether snap close. Nyx leaned. Do not listen. The walls groaned. The spirals rotated. The light turned violet. Aurora gripped the blade. Her knuckles turned white. The moonsilver hummed. She felt the wards burning away. The wards did not match the design. They rusted. Isolde did not look back. She moved deeper. The path widened. The floor pulsed like a heart. Nyx followed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount804
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount804
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"structure"
count2
6
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"weight"
2"pulsed"
3"silence"
4"pulse"
5"structure"
6"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences162
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences162
filterMatches
0"listen"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences162
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords804
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.15% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount804
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Nyx"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Vrarga1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Isolde9
Nyx13
Silence1
Veil2
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Varga1
Aurora13
You3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Vrarga"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
4"Isolde"
5"Nyx"
6"Veil"
7"Varga"
8"Aurora"
9"You"
places
0"Silence"
globalScore0.692
windowScore0.833
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like standing on wet wool"
1"sounded like wind in hollow bone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount804
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean14.62
std11.39
cv0.779
sampleLengths
049
116
238
331
416
517
64
712
811
910
1032
1114
1213
1315
146
157
1638
175
186
194
2010
2121
221
2313
2418
252
2626
2713
284
2918
303
3122
328
3345
3412
3516
365
374
3816
394
4026
412
422
4318
445
4533
469
473
4818
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences162
matches
0"being was"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs165
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences162
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount806
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.017369727047146403
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0024813895781637717
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences162
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences162
mean4.96
std2.48
cv0.5
sampleLengths
012
119
26
36
46
54
65
77
85
99
106
1111
127
134
144
1511
1612
175
1811
198
207
212
224
236
246
256
265
272
284
294
304
317
325
334
344
358
362
376
386
395
405
413
425
435
445
456
462
475
486
499
40.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.2345679012345679
totalSentences162
uniqueOpeners38
23.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences142
matches
0"Then Nyx pulled free."
ratio0.007
81.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences142
matches
0"Her black hair brushed her"
1"It felt like standing on"
2"Their form sharpened, edges hardening"
3"She left no footprints."
4"Her silver hair caught the"
5"It was too light, like"
6"She turned to see Isolde"
7"It coils inside the roots."
8"We should keep moving."
9"We have a target."
10"They leaned against a trunk."
11"Their shoulder retained the texture"
12"You will not find the"
13"She swiped her manicured hand."
14"We move past the stone"
15"She pointed at the pulse"
16"They followed the path up"
17"Their voice carried on a"
18"They open wide."
19"It tasted of iron."
ratio0.345
2.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount130
totalSentences142
matches
0"The standing stones loomed above"
1"London rain had dried into"
2"Aurora Carter stepped across the"
3"Her black hair brushed her"
4"The shift slammed into her"
5"Vibrations crawled up her shins."
6"It felt like standing on"
7"Nyx drifted past her shoulder."
8"Their form sharpened, edges hardening"
9"Nyx did not touch the"
10"The floor bowed beneath their"
11"The shadow being was six"
12"Isolde Vrarga walked ahead."
13"She left no footprints."
14"Her silver hair caught the"
15"The trees hung low, branches"
16"Amber dropped through the leaves."
17"It was too light, like"
18"Aurora tightened her grip on"
19"The Heartstone Pendant warmed against"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences8
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.7156%