Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFHBCB99ZF9A5S93ACFBJBF

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Duration:
1m 50s
Cost:
$0.011096
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
I wrenched the third deadbolt free, palm flat on the scuffed oak door ready to yank it open and grab the lamb kebab Eva had texted she’d hauled up from the ground floor curry house. The smell of spiced rice and garlic had seeped up the stairwell three minutes prior, and I’d been counting down the seconds until I could sink my teeth into it. I pulled the door wide, and the first whiff of burnt sandalwood and clove hit me, a scent I’d tried and failed to scrub from the hoodie I’d left at Lucien’s flat three weeks prior. He stood on the landing, tailored charcoal suit fitting sharp across his shoulders, slicked back platinum blond hair catching the faint glow of the single working hall light. His heterochromatic eyes, one molten amber, one pitch black, locked onto mine, and he planted the ivory tip of his cane just over the threshold, like he’d already braced for me to slam the door in his face. “You’ve got five seconds to get off my landing before I upend the bucket of water I keep for religious door knockers over your head.” “That’s hardly a warm welcome for someone who crossed three boroughs at three in the morning to warn you your ex didn’t stay in Cardiff.” I froze, my knuckles white around the door edge. Evan, the abusive ex I’d fled Cardiff to escape, was supposed to have given up looking for me. Eva had etched a ward into the doorframe of her cramped Brick Lane flat that was supposed to hide me from anyone who meant me harm, to keep them from even noticing the flat existed. I stepped back, and Lucien crossed the threshold before I could change my mind. I slammed the door shut, sliding all three deadbolts home one after another, the heavy metal clunks echoing through the flat. Every surface in the space was stacked with leather bound grimoires, crumpled research notes, and half-empty mugs of cold jasmine tea. Ptolemy, Eva’s plump tabby cat, wound around Lucien’s ankles, purring so loud it cut through the distant hum of weekend traffic. The cat hated every stranger who stepped foot in the flat, had hissed at a delivery driver last month so hard the man dropped his parcel and ran. The fact that he rubbed up against Lucien like he was a long-lost friend said more than any apology could about the soft core I’d spotted in the half-demon before our fight had blown everything apart. I leaned against the door, crossing my arms over my chest, my straight shoulder-length black hair falling over one bright blue eye. “How did Evan find me? Eva’s ward was unbreakable.” “Wards only hold if no one pays to unweave them. Evan dropped five grand on a Croydon hedge witch to tear your veil down. I heard the deal go down in a Shoreditch underworld bar last night, and I knew I had to get to you before he did.” He tapped his cane on the threadbare carpet, his posture tight, like he was ready to fight at a second’s notice. “I didn’t come here to rehash the fight. I came here to get you out, Rory. He hired two thugs and a low-level demon to drag you back to Cardiff. They’re less than an hour out, maybe less.” I pushed off the door, walking to the kitchen counter to wrap my hand around the kitchen knife I kept tucked behind the toaster. My thumb brushed the small crescent scar on my left wrist, a nervous tick I’d never been able to shake, from the childhood bike crash that left the mark. “Funny you think you get to play hero now. Last time we saw each other, you called me reckless, said I’d get anyone dumb enough to stick around me killed. You stormed out of my flat above Silas’ bar and never contacted me again. I thought you were done with me.” His jaw tightened, the only tell that my words cut him. He crossed the three feet between us, the cane tapping soft on the floor, and I could see the dark circles under his eyes, the way his hands were clenched at his sides like he was fighting the urge to touch me. “I didn’t call because I thought you needed space. I thought if I left you alone, you’d stop acting like you had to carry every bad thing in your life by yourself. I spent every night for three weeks checking every CCTV feed within a mile of this flat, every snitch I have on the underworld payroll, just to make sure you were okay. That’s not the behavior of someone who’s done with you.” My breath caught. I’d spent the three weeks since our fight convincing myself he’d gone back to his life as an information broker, forgotten all about the part-time delivery driver for the Golden Empress who’d stumbled into his path last year, when I’d dropped an order of pork dumplings on his custom leather boots. We’d spent months dancing around each other, stealing moments whenever he came to the restaurant to pick up takeout, lingering outside my flat after group nights out, that one night we’d almost kissed outside the Whitechapel tube station, before the fight about the demon relic I’d hidden from him blew everything apart. I’d hidden it to help Eva lift a curse on her little sister, and Lucien had thought I was playing a game I couldn’t win, that the coven who’d lost the relic would hunt me down and kill me. We’d screamed at each other until he’d stormed out, and I’d thought that was the end of us before we’d even really started. Lucien lifted a hand, brushing a strand of hair off my face, his thumb brushing the edge of my jaw, and I didn’t pull away. “I was scared. If anything happened to you because I wasn’t there to protect you, I’d never forgive myself. I didn’t care about the coven that wanted the relic back. I only cared that you didn’t get yourself killed trying to play hero alone. I would’ve helped you. All you had to do was ask.” I opened my mouth to tell him I’d been scared too, scared that if I let anyone get close, Evan would hurt them, that I’d drag Lucien into the mess of my life, when three loud, heavy bangs shook the front door. A rough, familiar Cardiff accent boomed through the wood, loud enough to make the stack of grimoires on the coffee table teeter. “Rory! I know you’re in there. Open the fucking door before I break it down.” My blood ran cold. That was Evan, early. Lucien shoved me behind him in one sharp movement, his hand wrapping around the ivory handle of his cane, and with a soft click, the thin sharp blade hidden inside slid free, glinting in the light of the overhead lamp. Before I could grab the kitchen knife from the counter, we heard the first deadbolt wrench open, metal screaming as it was bent apart from the outside, the second deadbolt starting to turn right on its heels.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1201
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1201
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"echoing"
2"dancing"
3"familiar"
4"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences32
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences32
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences40
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen74
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1201
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount860
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Lucien8
Cardiff2
Brick1
Lane1
Golden1
Empress1
Whitechapel1
Evan3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Whitechapel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences29
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1201
matches(empty)
83.33% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences40
matches
0"win, that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean80.07
std41.5
cv0.518
sampleLengths
0100
166
225
325
497
5106
631
7108
8104
9127
10168
1180
1264
1315
1485
50.44% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences32
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was supposed"
2"was stacked"
3"were clenched"
4"been scared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs141
matches
0"was fighting"
1"was playing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount865
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.021965317919075144
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003468208092485549
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences40
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences40
mean30.03
std16.41
cv0.547
sampleLengths
035
130
235
328
438
525
625
79
818
935
1014
1121
1221
1321
1428
1536
1622
179
1870
1938
2024
2129
2251
2311
2442
2574
263
2751
2852
2939
3023
3125
3255
3342
3422
3515
364
374
3840
3937
69.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.475
totalSentences40
uniqueOpeners19
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences32
matches
0"I wrenched the third deadbolt"
1"I pulled the door wide,"
2"He stood on the landing,"
3"His heterochromatic eyes, one molten"
4"I froze, my knuckles white"
5"I stepped back, and Lucien"
6"I slammed the door shut,"
7"I leaned against the door,"
8"He tapped his cane on"
9"I pushed off the door,"
10"My thumb brushed the small"
11"His jaw tightened, the only"
12"He crossed the three feet"
13"My breath caught."
14"I’d spent the three weeks"
15"We’d spent months dancing around"
16"I’d hidden it to help"
17"We’d screamed at each other"
18"I opened my mouth to"
19"My blood ran cold."
ratio0.625
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount31
totalSentences32
matches
0"I wrenched the third deadbolt"
1"The smell of spiced rice"
2"I pulled the door wide,"
3"He stood on the landing,"
4"His heterochromatic eyes, one molten"
5"I froze, my knuckles white"
6"Evan, the abusive ex I’d"
7"Eva had etched a ward"
8"I stepped back, and Lucien"
9"I slammed the door shut,"
10"Every surface in the space"
11"Ptolemy, Eva’s plump tabby cat,"
12"The cat hated every stranger"
13"The fact that he rubbed"
14"I leaned against the door,"
15"He tapped his cane on"
16"I pushed off the door,"
17"My thumb brushed the small"
18"His jaw tightened, the only"
19"He crossed the three feet"
ratio0.969
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences32
matches
0"Before I could grab the"
ratio0.031
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Eva had etched a ward into the doorframe of her cramped Brick Lane flat that was supposed to hide me from anyone who meant me harm, to keep them from even notic…"
1"My thumb brushed the small crescent scar on my left wrist, a nervous tick I’d never been able to shake, from the childhood bike crash that left the mark."
2"I’d spent the three weeks since our fight convincing myself he’d gone back to his life as an information broker, forgotten all about the part-time delivery driv…"
3"Lucien lifted a hand, brushing a strand of hair off my face, his thumb brushing the edge of my jaw, and I didn’t pull away."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.8332%