| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1041 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 3.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1041 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "measured" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "glinting" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "pang" | | 7 | "tenderness" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "carried the weight" | | 13 | "echo" | | 14 | "porcelain" | | 15 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "a pang of tenderness" | | 1 | "y with regret" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tended to" | | 2 | "tried to" | | 3 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1041 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 1041 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 0.48 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "You" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 5 | | Lucien | 2 | | You | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "suit that seemed to cut the dim light, the ivory handle of his cane catching the faint glow" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to carry the weight of unsaid apologies" | | 2 | "confession that seemed to echo in the cramped space" | | 3 | "felt like a quiet promise" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.961 | | wordCount | 1041 | | matches | | 0 | "no longer a barrier but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 31.55 | | std | 25.75 | | cv | 0.816 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 102 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 63 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 84 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 58 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 63 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 195 | | matches | | 0 | "was just waiting" | | 1 | "was just waiting" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1042 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.02399232245681382 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0028790786948176585 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 13.7 | | std | 6.47 | | cv | 0.472 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 25.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 24 | | diversityRatio | 0.19736842105263158 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 45.66% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he traced the air" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned, hand instinctively reaching" | | 1 | "He wore a charcoal suit" | | 2 | "His eyes, one amber, one" | | 3 | "He spoke, voice low and" | | 4 | "She swallowed, feeling the weight" | | 5 | "He stepped forward, the cane" | | 6 | "He placed his hand on" | | 7 | "She looked at his hand" | | 8 | "She remembered the night she" | | 9 | "She answered, words cutting through" | | 10 | "I wondered why the city" | | 11 | "He tilted his head, the" | | 12 | "His amber eye flickered, his" | | 13 | "He lifted the cane, the" | | 14 | "He opened it, revealing a" | | 15 | "You left a trail, Aurora." | | 16 | "You left a map of" | | 17 | "He let the pen rest" | | 18 | "He turned the page, revealing" | | 19 | "He placed the photograph on" |
| | ratio | 0.699 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The key turned in the" | | 1 | "Aurora felt the cool draft" | | 2 | "She turned, hand instinctively reaching" | | 3 | "The cat lifted its head," | | 4 | "A figure stepped through the" | | 5 | "He wore a charcoal suit" | | 6 | "His eyes, one amber, one" | | 7 | "He spoke, voice low and" | | 8 | "The word hung in the" | | 9 | "Aurora felt a pulse in" | | 10 | "She swallowed, feeling the weight" | | 11 | "He stepped forward, the cane" | | 12 | "He placed his hand on" | | 13 | "The gesture was deliberate, a" | | 14 | "She looked at his hand" | | 15 | "She remembered the night she" | | 16 | "She answered, words cutting through" | | 17 | "I wondered why the city" | | 18 | "He tilted his head, the" | | 19 | "His amber eye flickered, his" |
| | ratio | 0.973 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "His eyes, one amber, one black, locked onto hers with a steady gaze that held more than curiosity." | | 1 | "He placed his hand on the back of a chair, fingers brushing the spines of her books, lingering on a volume bound in leather." | | 2 | "The cat leapt from the table, landing on the floor with a soft thud, its paws scattering a few loose pages." | | 3 | "Aurora watched the animal, feeling a pang of tenderness for the creature that had watched her through many sleepless nights." | | 4 | "She reached out, her hand brushing the cat's fur, feeling the warmth of its body against her skin." | | 5 | "He observed the movement, his gaze following her hand, his own hand hovering near his cane." | | 6 | "She met his gaze, the bright blue of her eyes reflecting the lamplight, the scar on her wrist catching the light." | | 7 | "The lamplight flickered, casting shadows that danced across Lucien's tailored suit, accentuating the sharp lines of his shoulders." | | 8 | "He moved closer, the cane now no longer a barrier but a bridge, his palm resting on the back of her chair, fingers tracing the edge of the wood." | | 9 | "Aurora felt the old ache rise, a mixture of anger and longing, her heart beating a rhythm that matched the ticking of the old clock on the mantel." | | 10 | "He nodded, his gaze dropping to the scar on her wrist, his fingers almost touching it, but he stopped short." | | 11 | "I carried the weight of my father's name, the expectations of a realm that demanded loyalty above all." | | 12 | "He lifted the cup, his thumb brushing the porcelain, his fingers lingering on the rim." | | 13 | "The cat curled at their feet, its purr a soft hum that blended with the distant city sounds." | | 14 | "The scene lingered, the two figures standing close, the city humming beyond the cracked window, the past a thick veil that began to loosen." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |