Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFHNS9081QAWYNMR2F9VJTY

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Duration:
26.2s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Nvidia

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora shoved the door of The Raven’s Nest open, the green neon humming above the threshold like a tired insect. The smell of stale whiskey and polished wood hit her nostrils, familiar yet distant. She paused just inside, letting the dim light swallow her silhouette. Silas looked up from the glass he was polishing, the rag moving in slow circles over the crystal. His hazel eyes flicked to the doorway, then narrowed as they took in the figure silhouetted against the streetlight. "You’re not the girl who used to sit on the stool with her legs swinging," he said, voice low, the rasp of old tobacco lingering. Aurora pushed a strand of straight black hair behind her ear, the movement revealing a small silver stud tucked into her lobe. She wore a fitted leather jacket, its shoulders worn soft at the seams, and a thin silver chain glinted at her throat. "It’s been a while," she replied, her tone flat, eyes scanning the rows of bottles behind the bar. Silas set the glass down, the clink sharp in the quiet. He pushed himself up, the slight limp in his left leg evident as he shifted his weight. "Three years, maybe four. I thought you’d vanished with the wind." Aurora’s gaze fell to the scar on her left wrist, the crescent shape catching the low light. She rubbed it absently, the gesture a habit she hadn’t broken. "I needed to get away. Cardiff felt… too small." Silas leaned against the bar, the wood creaking under his weight. He tilted his head, studying the lines that had etched themselves around her mouth. "You look like you’ve carried a lot." Aurora let out a short laugh, devoid of mirth. "Carried? I’ve been dragging. Worked deliveries for the Golden Empress, slept above this place, tried to forget the taste of fear." Silas’s fingers curled around the base of his signet ring, the silver catching the glow. "Fear doesn’t just vanish when you walk out a door." She stepped closer, the heel of her boot tapping against the worn floorboards. "I thought if I kept moving, the past would stay behind me. Turns out it just changes shape." Silas nodded, his eyes dropping to the map of Prague pinned near the ceiling, a relic from his own past. "I know that feeling. The operation there left more than a limp. It left a habit of looking over my shoulder." Aurora’s jaw tightened, the memory of Evan’s voice flashing behind her eyes—sharp, cruel, a sound she had tried to outrun. "I left because I couldn’t stay and watch him destroy everything. I thought running would make me stronger." Silas pushed off the bar, his movement deliberate. "Strength isn’t measured in distance traveled. It’s in the weight you choose to bear." She crossed her arms, the leather creaking. "I bore enough. I carried the guilt of leaving friends, the shame of not being able to fix what was broken." Silas’s gaze softened, though his voice remained firm. "You think fixing means staying? Sometimes fixing means letting go long enough to heal." Aurora’s eyes flicked to the neon sign outside, its green glow flickering as a car passed. "Healing feels like a luxury I can’t afford." He tapped the bar twice, a steady rhythm. "Luxury is a word we use when we forget we’re still breathing." A silence settled between them, thick with the unspoken words that had hovered for years—Aurora’s regret for abandoning the safety net Silas had offered, Silas’s regret for not being able to shield her from the storm that chased her out of Cardiff. The weight of time pressed on their shoulders, not as a burden but as a quiet acknowledgment of what had been lost and what remained. Aurora finally spoke, her voice barely above the hum of the refrigerator. "I don’t know if I can stay." Silas reached for a fresh glass, his hand steady. "You don’t have to decide now. The stool’s still there." She stared at the empty seat beside him, the wood worn smooth by countless evenings. The decision hung in the air, not as a plea but as a possibility, fragile and waiting. Aurora pulled out the chair, the scrape of its legs against the floor echoing softly. She sat, the leather of her jacket creaking as she settled, and looked at Silas across the bar, the space between them filled with the echo of years and the quiet promise of a conversation that had only just begun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount752
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount752
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count2
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"weight"
count4
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"crystal"
2"flicked"
3"scanning"
4"weight"
5"etched"
6"measured"
7"silence"
8"unspoken"
9"echoing"
10"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences33
matches(empty)
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences33
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences48
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords750
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.23% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount530
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora9
Silas11
Prague1
Evan1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places
0"Prague"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.462
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.667
wordCount750
matches
0"not as a burden but as a quiet acknowledgment of what had been lost"
1"not as a plea but as a possibility, fragile"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
62.66% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean32.61
std12.04
cv0.369
sampleLengths
045
137
225
344
418
539
637
732
830
925
1031
1141
1238
1322
1428
1522
1624
1720
1867
1919
2019
2132
2255
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences33
matches
0"been lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs81
matches
0"was polishing"
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences48
ratio0.042
matches
0"Aurora’s jaw tightened, the memory of Evan’s voice flashing behind her eyes—sharp, cruel, a sound she had tried to outrun."
1"A silence settled between them, thick with the unspoken words that had hovered for years—Aurora’s regret for abandoning the safety net Silas had offered, Silas’s regret for not being able to shield her from the storm that chased her out of Cardiff."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount532
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.020676691729323307
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.009398496240601503
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences48
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences48
mean15.63
std7.26
cv0.465
sampleLengths
020
114
211
318
419
525
622
722
818
911
1017
1111
1217
1311
149
1511
1614
177
189
1921
2015
2110
2213
2318
2420
2521
2620
2718
288
2914
307
3121
328
3314
3416
358
368
3712
3842
3925
4012
417
429
4310
4415
4517
4615
4740
55.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences48
uniqueOpeners16
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
62.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences33
matches
0"She paused just inside, letting"
1"His hazel eyes flicked to"
2"he said, voice low, the"
3"She wore a fitted leather"
4"she replied, her tone flat,"
5"He pushed himself up, the"
6"She rubbed it absently, the"
7"He tilted his head, studying"
8"She stepped closer, the heel"
9"She crossed her arms, the"
10"He tapped the bar twice,"
11"She stared at the empty"
12"She sat, the leather of"
ratio0.394
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences33
matches
0"Aurora shoved the door of"
1"The smell of stale whiskey"
2"She paused just inside, letting"
3"Silas looked up from the"
4"His hazel eyes flicked to"
5"he said, voice low, the"
6"Aurora pushed a strand of"
7"She wore a fitted leather"
8"she replied, her tone flat,"
9"Silas set the glass down,"
10"He pushed himself up, the"
11"Aurora’s gaze fell to the"
12"She rubbed it absently, the"
13"Silas leaned against the bar,"
14"He tilted his head, studying"
15"Aurora let out a short"
16"Silas’s fingers curled around the"
17"She stepped closer, the heel"
18"Silas nodded, his eyes dropping"
19"Aurora’s jaw tightened, the memory"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He tilted his head, studying the lines that had etched themselves around her mouth."
1"A silence settled between them, thick with the unspoken words that had hovered for years—Aurora’s regret for abandoning the safety net Silas had offered, Silas’…"
2"She sat, the leather of her jacket creaking as she settled, and looked at Silas across the bar, the space between them filled with the echo of years and the qui…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, voice low, the rasp of old tobacco lingering"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
69.8544%