Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFHP3DPB32F9GV6H9V8YFH9

Run Details

Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.000810
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Night swallowed the edges of the Fae Grove first. Darkness dragged its heavy fingers through the canopy until the leaves rang with a silence that felt too solid. Aurora stepped past the ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary. Her boots crunched on moss that smelled of wet iron and old blood. She adjusted the silver chain resting against her collarbone. The Heartstone pendant lay heavy against her skin when she stopped to breathe. The crimson gem inside swallowed the dim moonlight before exhaling it in a rhythm matched to her pulse. No starlight escaped the canopy here. Only deep violet shadows stretched across the path. Rory kept her blue eyes fixed on the dark gap to her left. Shadows shifted. A patch of something moved closer to her. She didn't turn. Knowing it would feed the hunger, not reveal the source. One hour here meant ten seconds outside. Maybe more. A cell phone buzzed in her pocket, then slept. No signal didn't mean nothing had happened. It meant the wrong things had happened. The phone was quiet because the dead had forgotten how to make noise. Aurora pulled the air from her lungs. She didn't blink. The wildflowers next to her path glowed slightly white in the gloom. They should be dormant. In Richmond Park, time stayed. Here, time split. She looked at the pendant. It hummed. A vibration that rattled the fillings in her teeth. The jewel turned toward the silence where she knew the air should be crisp but tasted like wet wool. The scar on her left wrist pulled tight as she raised her arm to check the glasses face in her pocket. The glass faced cracked in her pocket. Time didn't matter when the heartbeat stopped. Rory heard the breathing again. Not hers. Not mine. It came from the trees. Not the tall ones, but the scrub near the ground. The sound was wet. Like a swallowed voice. She walked. Boots making no sound on the ground. The stones in front of her weren't where they had been when she entered the portal found in the pocket of time. They had shifted. Not an inch. Enough. The gray shapes leaned inward now. The grass hollowed out around her legs. "Show me," Rory said. "Stop that." The voice didn't come from the trees. It vibrated in the air. She jumped. Breath hitched. Her blue eyes darted around the clearing. She didn't see them. The wind stopped. "Don't hide what I see." She touched her pocket. The pendant pulsed. Rory turned back. The flowers bent like they were pointing at something that stood behind her. No shadow. A white flower plucked from her pocket tumbled out. It fell without making sound. She didn't react. She held her breath. The necklace warmed against her skin. The silence stretched. A twig snapped near her left foot. The movement was too slow. Like a man booting through thick mud. Rory spun. Nothing there. Just the mist. She felt the heat of the stone pendant burn through her shirt. It was hot. Too hot. Closer to a living thing than a gemstone. The cold wind howled from the corner of her mind. It sat behind her again but stood between her legs now. Rory stepped closer to the edge of the clearing. The boundary markers. She looked at the trees. They weren't shadows. They were silhouettes of things. Long limbs. "You know I'm smart," Rory said. She could hear the heartbeat. The pendant hit her skin. She raised her hand. Morning came. It wasn't the sun. The violet turned dawn red. The nightmare tore away like old paper. Aurora threw up her arms. A leaf fell. She could hear the trees. The pathway back to the waiting car existed. Four doors ran parallel. The sun glinted off the headlights. The silence held the tension. She opened the cold wind like a letter. The tree stood near the car park. The lights from the window caught the reflection in the glass. The engine turned over. The vibration rattled the window glass. The car sat there. She reached for the handle. She didn't move. The leaves stopped falling. She stepped back. The car door locked. She turned her head. The engine died. Rory closed her eyes. The pendant burned. She opened them. The Grove was empty. The stones stood straight. The grass was still. The wildflowers had stopped glowing. She walked forward. The car waited. So did the silence.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount746
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount746
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"silence"
count5
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulse"
2"gloom"
3"vibrated"
4"pulsed"
5"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences123
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords746
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount733
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove2
Heartstone1
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora3
Rory8
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.954
windowScore0.833
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like wet wool"
65.95% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.34
wordCount746
matches
0"Not the tall ones, but the scrub near the ground"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean17.76
std21.65
cv1.219
sampleLengths
092
150
245
397
416
532
642
74
814
918
1012
1132
1213
133
1421
155
1625
1733
1815
196
205
215
2222
235
243
255
2623
2740
285
293
304
313
324
334
343
354
363
373
3817
393
403
414
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs142
matches
0"were pointing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences123
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount733
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay heavy against her"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.021828103683492497
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002728512960436562
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean6.07
std4.08
cv0.673
sampleLengths
09
119
211
313
49
513
618
76
88
913
102
118
123
1310
147
152
169
177
187
1913
207
213
2212
234
245
253
265
272
289
2919
3021
317
327
335
342
352
365
3710
384
394
402
417
4222
433
443
451
466
477
484
499
35.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.2926829268292683
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners36
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"Only deep violet shadows stretched"
1"Just the mist."
ratio0.019
95.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences106
matches
0"Her boots crunched on moss"
1"She adjusted the silver chain"
2"She didn't turn."
3"It meant the wrong things"
4"She didn't blink."
5"They should be dormant."
6"She looked at the pendant."
7"It came from the trees."
8"They had shifted."
9"It vibrated in the air."
10"Her blue eyes darted around"
11"She didn't see them."
12"She touched her pocket"
13"It fell without making sound."
14"She didn't react."
15"She held her breath."
16"She felt the heat of"
17"It was hot."
18"It sat behind her again"
19"She looked at the trees."
ratio0.311
26.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences106
matches
0"Night swallowed the edges of"
1"Darkness dragged its heavy fingers"
2"Aurora stepped past the ancient"
3"Her boots crunched on moss"
4"She adjusted the silver chain"
5"The Heartstone pendant lay heavy"
6"The crimson gem inside swallowed"
7"Rory kept her blue eyes"
8"A patch of something moved"
9"She didn't turn."
10"A cell phone buzzed in"
11"It meant the wrong things"
12"The phone was quiet because"
13"Aurora pulled the air from"
14"She didn't blink."
15"The wildflowers next to her"
16"They should be dormant."
17"Here, time split."
18"She looked at the pendant."
19"A vibration that rattled the"
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The flowers bent like they were pointing at something that stood behind her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.2415%